SS:Saans(The last breath) Chap9 Pg50 29th JAN - Page 32

Kash humTum Bhi Ajnabi Hote
Jis Tarah Or Log Hote Hain
Be-taaruf Se La-taaluq Se
Na Tasaadum Na Bandishain Hoti
Dil Main Chahat Na Khwahishain
Hoti
Na Wafaon Ke Silsile Hote
Na Mohabbat Ke Fasle Hote
Phir Na Hoti Shikayatain Tum Se
Youn Na Milti Aziatain Tum Se
Be-qarari Na Be-kali Hoti
Youn Shikista Na Zindagi Hoti
Choor Hota Na Aina Dil Ka
Koi Lamha Na Hota Mushkil Ka
Hum Na Milte Teri Nigaon Se
Na Youn Do Char Hote Aahon Se
Kar Ke Tujh Se Wafa Mila Kya Hai?
Too Ne Ghum K Siwa Dia Kya Hai?
Mujh Ko Un Lamhon Ki Yaad Jo
Ayee Hai
Mar Dala Teri Judayee Nai
Awesome shru just loved loved it.
Update was just fab
loved arjun roshni n rathore convo.
Finally there is smth abt saans
Is abhi n ria related somehow
Sorry dear meine aapko bht tang kia update k liye
u r d best
love u so much Edited by samiya.059 - 11 years ago

Awesum blossom shru dear..
loved d poems..!

huuu!!! i am sooo happy for rathod 🥳 🥳  he married roshini!! n a baby is own its way!! ... to tell the truth... 1st time i am this happy reading this ff... rathod ko happy ending mil gaya...

kash riya bhi hoti.. n arjun usse shaadi bhi karthi!! in this ff she is no more na?? 😭 update soon!!

arjun was imagining himself in place of rohan and
riya as panchi...
wow yaar shru kya poem tha
i loved it👏
diary part was amazing
arjun asked rathod by holding his coller 😆
kya bonding tha unn 3 ke beech
loved it
continue soon shru
and i am really really sory for late editing
Edited by shrutisweety - 11 years ago

Beautiful update Loved it... So happy for Rathore he gt his Love... bt wat abt Arjun??? update soon...

Shru ...Boss maan gaye apko Edited by tani23 - 11 years ago

Awww Sameer & Roshni married. And Riya is Abhi's sis.. 

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shru ki bacchi ruk teri khair nehi😡 mera pm kahan hai???

chal jaane de update was mindblowing toh chodh rahi hoon.

WHAT??? i am in huge shock😲 rathod and roshni got married??😲 toh fir riya ka kya hua??😲 kya twist daala👏

why abhi is behaving so indifferent?? is he in love with panchi?? okay lots of question.

but most beautiful thing was as always and ofcourse your mindblowing  poems..koi bhi shabd kam hai un sab ke liye👏👏

its a great experience to go through such a brilliant new tear treat..lovely

happy new year..love you🤗🤗
Edited by -sree13- - 11 years ago

aaaiiieee... **screaming**

awesome update :) loved it