SS:Saans(The last breath) Chap9 Pg50 29th JAN - Page 6

Originally posted by: purecure

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yipeee...me first one...

i guess dis will b first tym i'll b responding so srsly...n confusingly to any  story...!!!😊

i'm srsly confused...wo major kaun hai?? n whr is ariya kab aayenge??..n omg...u wer IF national poet...bt aftr reading dis...u r suspense queen from now on!!!😆

aftr evry story i hav my own guessess...bt for dis im not able to make any...😔

is it dat major riya's or arjun's ke papa???🤔

or is dat major arjun itself ...n dat dairy belongs to her wife riya...or soemthing???🤔

 

i guess major ki age mil jaati to madad ho jaati...guessing mein lolxx... !!!!🤣

n yea aftr reading dis part ...i dunno wats d further story... bt evn thn wen i read dis...i start humming only one song...
"do pal ka khabo ka karwa aur hum chal diye tum kaha hum kaha..."

awesome update...it was much better than wat i thot n  how i thot...!!!

plss jaldi update karna...mein wallah intezaar kar rahii hoon...

n yea hazaar taliyaan tere liye...!!!! 👏

IF national poet AND now what? SUSPENSE QUEEN😲

Originally posted by: funkylicious

 

OMG... ye kaisa comment tha..? totally unusual...I LOVED IT😃😆

 

Yes you are seriously confused, I hope tere quries would be solved soon... and LET me tell you that MAJOR is definitely not Riya's or Arjun's papa!!!😆

 

hahaha ageee...lolxxx

 

awww... I love that song.. and movie Veer Zaara❤️

 

thanks glad you liked it😳

 

hazaar taliya😛 thnk u thanku 😛

 

 

IF national poet AND now what? SUSPENSE QUEEN😲

 

you crack me up neelu... loved the comment thank you for your precious comment😳

Originally posted by: purecure

tnx for liking it...

 

bt yea u responded to my "papa's" query...n not to major being arjun itself??

hmmm...!!!🤔

can dat b some pointer or hint??!!!🤔

 

no probz...nahii batana mat batao...

 

tehkikat karna to mera kaam hai...Arjun ki Deewani jo hoon...so let it b!!!

 

raaz tu apne aap khol hi degii!!! ikrare jurm kinds!!

ikrare jurm

Originally posted by: vidya.anand

Interesting...super duper story...

well u really are an expert in building up suspense...loved the style and the poetry!!!

the whole plot sounds poetic!!!

my guesswork points that Arjun is the major but he being called hitler sounds really funny...lol

Rohan and Abhi are very cute!!! loved them!

Originally posted by: KiSha13

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shru you are brilliant as a poet dear,I seriously mean it 👏 👏
the update created so much suspence,wondering who the major is..didnot leave a single clue even writer madam 😉 😆
name of the cadets are cool, Rohan & Abhi the hottis of SOTY 😳 😆
whos diary was that??
OMG so many questions are roaming around my head 😲
so update soon(I know you will as you promised to finish it before 12th 😛 )
love you Shru 🤗🤗

Originally posted by: samiya.059

Firstly i am listening to the song
'har sawal ka jawab nahi mil sakta'
n ur update is full of sawals
>who is the girl to whom diary belongs
>who is the major
>is major arjun
>is major rathore
>where are riya n arjun
>is major young n smart or oldie
>why major wants dat diary
>is it out of curiosity or woh us diary ko pehchanta hai
boht sawal aur ek jawab aapka agla update isliye yeh aise sawal nai hain jin ka jawab nai mil sakta so if u dont want me to write foolish comments den update soon
Sami kitni chalak ho gayi hai apna nikalna ata hai

Originally posted by: M.V.Kohli007

Hey Funky really nyc update dear..

 

 

I ws waiting 4 1st chapter , its ossam.

 

Greedy to know abt dairy & Major..

 

 

Plz update soon..

 

 

love ADI  😊meri Pankhi😆😆😆

Originally posted by: sweetdoc

Loovve u funnkyyys.
U included ro nd abhi...soty
Varun dhawan <3
Intresssting...updatw soon