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arshiasushma

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Posted: 06 December 2012 at 9:31pm | IP Logged

The whole story is beautiful ya you written a very good story thanks for updating and the end is superb ya

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Posted: 06 December 2012 at 11:50pm | IP Logged
didnot feel like reading it coz it was the last part but finally read it now
and it was the best part <3
ohh loved these line :

jeevika - "I love you"

viren - "I love you too"

jeevika - "I actually have a surprise for you too" she said hesitantly 

Viren smiled at her. 

viren - "I already know what your surprise is"

jeevika - "WAIT! What do you know?"

Viren kneeled down again and kissed Jeevika's stomach. 

jeevika - "Virenji, how did you know?"

viren - "I found you pregnancy test in the bathroom"

Viren got up again and kissed her again. He just couldn't get enough of her. Actually the both of them couldn't get enough of each other. They just embraced each other imagining their coming future together. Viren, Jeevika, Gia, and baby number 2!!!!!


u r an amazing writer..
now eager waiting for the first part of ur new story Smile

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Saaraa.

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 2:57am | IP Logged
I'm really sorry for not commenting on your previous updates sweety, my eams are going on but as it's a weekend i'm posting everything here, i am so sad that it's an end to this story, i was so addicted to it <3 this is so far the one which stands out on this forum. you are a mind blowing writer, i like the way you express things, be it reactions, emotins or anything.
 
Did this have to end? :(
well no worries you have started a new one <3 but i'll miss this one, first of all uhh gia <3 so cutely u have expressed the charachter and the loving parents, the bond between them , the way the story ended was mindblowing, you took it slowly , quite smoothly though.
 
All good things have to end someday , that is what i think after reading the last update, thankyou for pming me all the time, although i never commented , you still kept me updated with your amazing work.
 
we have very few writers on this forum who write on virika, and we all are proud to have you, you're words and the way you phrased each and every update was perfect , not kiddish at all.
 
Don't know why i am saying this but i am already missing your story .
Keep up the good work and the spirit . hats off to you for writing this amazing story
Thankyou
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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 6:15am | IP Logged
supeb,awsum no words to describe sorry 4r late commenting but it was amazingSmile

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 6:51am | IP Logged
Amazing story. Luved it. As it was last part so thax for beautiful story.

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sajanfan004

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 8:35am | IP Logged
Hi!
Perfect!
This could not have a better ending!
Virika perfect time and the fabulous news which closed the story...
Firstly,I'm really sorry for the late reply, but I was sous these days that I just couldn't get time... I read five parts together... Five brilliant parts by a brilliant writer... And I appreciate each one of them... The Disneyland was amazing.. And I loved the way you showed the few small details which actually give shape to a story... 
Thanks a lot for updating so regularly, and keeping the story so interesting... Thanks for all the PMs you gave me... 
Great work..
And. Well read your new FF also... And. Will surely comment on it... 
Than you once again for presenting this forum, especially the virika fans with such great ideas and concepts. 
Thank you!

--sajanfan004

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Posted: 22 December 2012 at 9:56pm | IP Logged
Awesum luved it.. Wonderful Story...Clap

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Posted: 08 January 2013 at 12:38am | IP Logged
i m too late to comment 
sorry fr dat
awesome, mindblowing, amazing, brilliant...
hats off 
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