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shweta_14

@shweta_14

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Posted: 11 years ago

Read d story from start to finish in one go..!! And wat a marvellous piece of work.. Im speechless..u hav defined each moment so very beautifully.. superrrb... you have a nack of portraying virika so beautifully that no other person has.. wish cvs take a leaf out of ur stories..

Viren is such a caring n loving husband..wish todays guys had these qualities..! Jeevika is so very sweet...the most adorable one is Gia.. Wow wat a lovely name and an angel..!

Gr8 reading it once again...n thanks for the surprise :P wud luv to read more though!

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little.angel56

@little.angel56

Goldie

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Posted: 11 years ago

You are doing lots of good work these days

And aly is so happy because of karinaa

How i wish i could force you to continue this beautiful story of yours <3

Aww, gia is another jeevika, shy and sweet, her fathers little princess like mum

Jeevika is expecting omg, you have too good ideas stored in you

Loved the context when you showed that viren would not let her walk or go around except till washroom,

And viren seeing his two princess and angels. His life, this was cute,

And the best line was the ending, omg, how many times will i drool over this update

Stop doing this to me you kayss

How i wish i can watch this on showww, love you for this surprise, a big teddyy onee

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ashna1406

@ashna1406

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

omg u continued it :D :D

it was my all time favourite at the start but now all ur stories confuse me about which one is the best :P

i really wished u continue this or a sequal on this one too :P

coz all ur stories always require sequals :D

it was marvellous..wonderful..super duper awesome..fabulous

EVERTHING!too good to ignore :D

thanks for pm <3

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Shicksha

@romanticgurl070

Goldie

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Posted: 11 years ago

wow u updated forever n ever

awesome update

loved it

can't help :( but i want more n more parts of this FF :)

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 11 years ago

oh my god how beautiful was that thankyou

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Jennifer

@jenna_p

Goldie

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Posted: 11 years ago

Indeed a big surprise and I loved it...😊

Beautifully written...

It cant get more blissful than this the morning scene was beautifully written...

Gia is shy...seems more like her mom...

Thanks for the PM...

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Marzii

@Marzii

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 11 years ago

awee Karina this is the best surprise ever

i never expected that u would actually give us another update of this amazing story hehe

me sooo happy cuuz i started reading Virika stories after reading some parts of this awesome storyy

the update wasss sooo cute and sweet

loved the lil family <3 love how Viren is so protective to Jeevs and Gia

another baby for Virika

Gia is too adorable like her mommy

thanks so much for this

i was actually surprised and happy

wish u could continue this amazing story :P

-marziah

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Nishtha Relan

@Nishtha.Relan

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

Wow what a nice surprise... Thanks KAYS... lve uuu and thanks for the PM again

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swasti tiwari

@sanjana_cool

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

awww
so cute!!
a lovely update
gia is such a sweetheart
shy like her mother
another entry
thats great!
tthanks karina!!
loved ur surprise!

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MrsCrosby87

@MrsCrosby87

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

that was soo good!! Read the entire story in one day! Please please write a sequel!

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