Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

Journey of Love part 10 on pg 17 Discontinued - Page 12

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Posted: 11 years ago
excellent job 
plz PM me πŸ˜›πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago
Guys I'm updating after a long time, so I am very sorry for the late update. And the credit of this update goes to Amrita as she reminded me that I have to update this FF. :P So here you go guys.
Precap: Karan enters in Virika's life.

Part  10
Everyone was sitting in the living room.
Dadaji: Anurag hum chatye hai ke Jeevika jald se jald apne ghar ki bahu bana chatye hai.
Viren wink at Jeevika and she started blushing.
Anurag: Mein bhi appse isi silsilye mein baat karna chata tha.
Dadaji: Humnye ajj hi apnye panditji se baat ki hai. Aur unhone ne kahan hai ke 15 din ke baad ek bohat hi acha muhrat hai. Toh agar tum kaho toh.
Anurag: Jaisa appko thek lagye.
Dadaji: Toh phir thek hai Jeeika aur Viren ki shadi ajjse thek 15 din baad hogi.
Everyone started congraluating each other. While eveyone was busy celebrating, Viren holds Jeevika's hand and took her to the terrace.
Jeevika: Viren hum yahan kiya kar rahye hai? Sab humye nichye doond raye hongay.
Viren hugs her from the back and rest his chin on her shoulder: Doondney do.
Jeevika: Kiya hua?
Viren: Tumhye nahi pata?
Jeevika smiles
Viren: Ajj se thek 15 din baad tum Miss Jeevika Basu se Mrs Jeevika Viren Vadhera ban jao gi.
Jeevika looks down. Viren turns her around and make her look up into his eyes. They have an eyelock.
Viren: Waise kab se mein hi bloye ja raha hu, tum kuvh nahi bola gi?
Jeevika move towards the railing of the the terrace.
Jeevika sadly: Viren mein kiya bolu? Mujse toh kisi nein poocha hi nahi. Na restye ke waqt aur nahi date fix key time. (she was teasing Viren)
Viren hugs Jeevika from behind: Acha so basically tum iss shadi se kuch nahi ho.
Jeevika: Bilkul bhi nahi
Viren turns her around: Abb toh bohat der ho chuki hai ab toh tumhye mujhse shadi karni hi parye gi.
Jeevika: Kiun koi zardasti hai kiya?
Viren: Haan hai toh?
Both of them smile and hug each other.
After sometime they broke the hug.
Jeevika: Ab hum nichye chalye.
Viren: Janye ka maan nahi kar raha.
Jeevika: Per janna parye ga. Chalo.
Both of them went down.
Sarad: lo honye walye dulha aur dulan bhi agaye.
Sneha wen tto them and whispered: Waise achye se baat kar li na?
Jeevika: Sneha
Both of them started blushing.
Karan went to them.
Karan with smrik: Congraulation guys.
Virika: Thank You
Karan in his mind: Mein bhi dekhta hu Mr Viren Singh Vadhera ke tum kaise Jeevika ko apna banatye ho. Jeevika meri thi hai aur hamesha rahye gi.
Precap: Wedding preprations.

Okay guys enough for now. I hope it was long enough. And the people who'll be commenting on this ff they'll be getting the pms. So guys start liking and commenting. Guys I won't be able to update for 2 weeks as my papers are starting from Tueday. Thats why I'll be updateing all my stories today.
I'll be update the next part after at least 5 pgs.
People who want pms please add me in your buddy list.


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Posted: 11 years ago
#UNRES#

Waah! Finally, shaadi hogi unki. 😳
Aahh! Terrace pe romance. Adorableness! 😳
Karan ki toh.. 🀬
But,loved the update as usual. πŸ‘πŸΌEdited by -Deeps- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely updateπŸ‘
Hope Karan's plans fail and Virika get married soon...
cant wait for the next update...

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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG...
I read it all in one go...
Superb one...
Such a cute update...
Love the way she was teasing him...
15 days left...
wowie...
And KARAN... you can never separate them..😑

Page 22... we are coming... :D.

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Posted: 11 years ago
wowπŸ‘
such a great updateπŸ˜ƒ
continue soon πŸ˜ƒ
thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
resπŸ˜ƒ


karan...😑
u can never separate them
no matter how much u try?πŸ˜†
hope virika get married soon!
excellent update
thanks for the pm
ALL THE BEST for ur exam
will wait for ur nxt update!

Edited by sanjana_cool - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
another superb one
aww...virika conv n their back hug
already started hating karan
thanx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ahhh finally u update Haju.
I thought u hav forgotten abt this one,so thanku for updating.

Awesome update.
Wow finally after 15 days virika's marriage ,so excited.

Karan let him go to hell ,he cant do anything wrong wth virika bcos they r made for each other.

Hahaha luvd the teasing talk of virika.

Continue as soon as possible.

Edited by Virika-luv - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice updateee! :)))))))))))