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Ok guys as I told u that I'm gonna write a story on virika so here it goseSmile But there willl be some characters from Kasuti Zindagi Ki. Hope u like itSmile


The Basu's

Jeevika Basu:She is a sweet simple girl. She is very understanding, caring and loving. She is very close to her family especially her sisters she can do anything for their happiness.She is very rich.

Prena Basu: Jeevika's Mom.

Anurag Basu: Jeevika's Dad.

Sneha Agarwal: Jeevika's sister and Sarad's wife.

Sarad Agarwal: Sneha's husband (he is very nice in my story)

Manvi Basu: Jeevika's sister

The Vadhera's

Viren Vadhera: He is a lawyer. He is very handsome, intelligent and rich. He loves his family alot. Share a great bonding with Virat his brother.

Virat Vadhera: Viren's brother.(Same as in ehmmbh)

The Vadhera family is the same as in serial.


Vadhera's and the Basu's are family friends and Viren and Jeevika are about to get engaged.

Hope you like it. Do commentSmile


Part 1: page 1
Part 2: page 2
part 3: page 4

Part 4: page 5

Part 5: page 6

Part 6: page 8

Part 7: page 10

Part 8: page 12

Part 9: page 15

Part 10: Page 17

Edited by Virika11 - 23 February 2013 at 11:24am

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Posted: 05 November 2012 at 4:53am | IP Logged
nice concept...
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sounds nice... continue soon n pm me...

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Posted: 05 November 2012 at 6:36am | IP Logged
Nice ! Continue soon

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Posted: 05 November 2012 at 6:43am | IP Logged
It was very nice...loved the introduction...
Please start soon!
I really wanna read further..
thAnks for the PM!

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Ok so guys here goes the First update 

Part 1

The night before the engagement:

Virat: Arrey bhai app itni tension mein kiun ho?

Viren: Kuch nahi Virat bass wo jab se meri aur Jeevika ki engagement ki date fix hui hai na tab se Jeevika se na hi baat hui hai aur na hi mulaqat.

Virat: Itni choti se baat bhai. When Virat is here not to fear

Viren: Kia matlab?

Virat: Arrey bhai mein abhi uss Bandryian matlab Manvi ko call karta hu aur app aur bhabhi ki mulakat ka koi plan banata hu.

 Viren: Nahi Virat kisi ko pata chal giya na tu phir u know,nahi mein Jeevika ko kal hi mil lu ga.

Virat: Arrey bhai app kiun daar rahe ho kuch nahi ho ga aur waise bhi piyar kia tu darna kia.

Viren: Waise Virat baat tu teri sahi hai to chal call kar Manvi ko.

Virat: Arrey yeh hui na baat. Abhi call karta hu.

Virat calls Manvi and sets everything up.


Viren and Virat reach Jeevika's house. Manvi told Virat to bring Viren from the window of Jeevika's room she'll open it.

Viren goes to Jeevika's room through the window.

Jeevika was looking for something in her closet when Viren came in. Viren hugged Jeevika from behind and whispered in her ear "I missed you". Jeevika was shocked to hear Viren's voice. She quickly turned around and saw Viren in front of her and her jaw drop down.

Jeevika: Virenji app yaha! iss waqt. Kaise? Kiun? Kab?

Viren: Bas Bas Bas Itnye sawal. 

Jeevika: Per app yaha kia ker rahye hai?

Viren: Kia ker rahe hai kia matlab? Tum se milne ayea hu.

Jeevika: Mujse milne iss waqt? Kiun?

Viren: Kiun kia matlab? I was missing u thats why.

Jeevika: U were missing me aur app chalye aye? Kissi ne dekhe liya tu kia hoga?

Viren: I don't care about anyone.

Jeevika: Virenji yeh kia bachpana hai?

Virenji: Bachpana! acha tu tumye mera piyar ab bachpana lag raha hai? Mein itni muskil se yaha puncha aur tum mujse hi lar rahi ho. Ek dafa bhi koi baat piyar se ki. Thek hai mein chala jata hu.

Jeevika: Mera voh matlab nahi tha.

Viren: Bas Jeevika bohat hogya 

Thats it for know 

Do comment and like plzzz

and for pms add me in your buddy list and I'll pm you guys 

Thank youSmile

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plz continue and pm me next timeBig smile

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Posted: 05 November 2012 at 8:15am | IP Logged
Great update Wink Awwh Viren is soo cute! Day Dreaming Can't wait for the next update... continue soon and thanks for the pm. Smile

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