Originally posted by GoldenDew
Originally posted by AnjanaYYZ
Her J of JG...doesn't work
Not J Anj.. u know its like a realization of her own hidden khwahish.. till now she never had a chance to think about experiencing motherhood.. maybe phooli's pregnancy could have triggered those thoughts in her but at that time her good for nothing hubby was busy two timing her/abandoning her.. so it could be a good plot no??
Her getting the pang from G just doesn't work for me... not even realization... let me know if u think of something else... and in the OS she already realizes that its something she wants someday... so, to take it from there. See for me to write I need multiple elements to sync... that's why it takes me time...
I just can't write - I need plot, emotion, consistency with character... most OS/SS/FF writers don't give any thots to that kinda stuffs! Which is why i read only a few peeps on the forum. Its tantamount to character butchering for me... I feel guilty enough playing with someone else's creative product to go too far from character.
Edited by AnjanaYYZ - 10 November 2012 at 11:10am