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Blinding darkness.

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Posted: 04 November 2012 at 11:49pm | IP Logged
 
Enchanting smiles, futile fears..
epic laughs, endless tears..
gloomy days, shiny nights..
scared of dark, afraid of light..
that's the irony of my life..
empty heart, empty soul..
million dreams, yet no goal..
day after day passes by..
i long for love and yearn to fly..
i look at the sky and reach for the stars..
but all of them seem so far..
deep inside i feel so small..
at every step i stumble and fall..
with nowhere to go and nowhere to hide..
i look around but there is no one by my side..
i feel the numbness taking over me..
i'm bound in chains, cant break free..
painful memories pierce my heart..
crushing it, it tears me apart..
no zeal to live, i have no desire..
no power to fight, my world's hay-wire..
wishing it gets better someday..
when happiness lights my life and sadness drifts away.
 
 

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Posted: 05 November 2012 at 1:17am | IP Logged
wonderful poem...!!
If you are really feeling the way your words have described,then
your name  itself signifies what you can do..
There is "daman" as well as "jeet"..Smile
and if it was just a poem then ignore my analogy...
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Posted: 05 November 2012 at 4:05am | IP Logged
It's the way how everyone feels at some point in their lives.. :)
But i am glad that you found my poem worth reading.. Thankyou! :)

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Posted: 05 November 2012 at 4:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Damanjitkaur

It's the way how everyone feels at some point in their lives.. :)
But i am glad that you found my poem worth reading.. Thankyou! :)
Its worth "praising" endlessly dear..
Kudos to you!!!
Keep writing such gems,,,Smile
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Posted: 05 November 2012 at 4:58am | IP Logged
Haha yes i will! :) thanks so much! :)

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Posted: 05 November 2012 at 5:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Damanjitkaur

Haha yes i will! :) thanks so much! :)
will be waiting eagerly...Tongue
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Posted: 21 November 2012 at 2:26am | IP Logged
very well written in a few words.. !
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Posted: 21 November 2012 at 11:27am | IP Logged
Thankyou! :)
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