Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain


Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain
Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

virika's love journey part 22(end) (Page 8)

jenna_p Goldie

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Posted: 06 November 2012 at 10:34am | IP Logged
Loved it!!!
Cute UpdateSmile

Cant wait for the next update
Thanks for the PM!!!!

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ashna1406 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 06 November 2012 at 10:49am | IP Logged
part 5

when manvi came back she heard jeevika crying in the washing room

manvi:dii darwaza khol na..aap kyun ro rahe ho
jeevika:manvi plz go from here n leave me alone!
jeevika:manvi plz!!

manvi went outside n phoed virat
manvi:virat..dii wash room mein ro rahi hai..wo darwaza nahi khol rahi hai..mujhe bohut tension ho rahi hai
virat:manvi wo..
manvi:virat batao na..kya hua hai
virat:manvi actually baat ye hai ki bhai aur jeevika ka fight ho gaya
manvi:whta??lekin kaise?
virat:ye to mujhe nahi patta..bhai mujhe batana nahhi chahta tha
manvi:acha theek hai..lekin un dono ko milana hoga aur tension ko end karna hoga
virat:yea u r ryt...
manvi told virat her plan

scene change
virat rushed to viren's room
virat:bhaii!!!jeevika bohut bimaar hai
viren:to mein kya karoon?
then he realised bohut
virat mein jeevika ko milne jaa raha hoon
virat:ok bhai mein bhi aa raha hoon
viren:theek hai jalo

scene change
vadhera bros meet manvi at the entrance and manvi sent viren to the room
viren:jeevika darwaza kholo
jeevika thought it was manvi who was immitating viren's voice as she was very good at immitating voices
jeevika:manvi tum apne acting ban karo aur jaa yahan se
viren:manvi?jeeika mein viren hoon..ur love//ur bf
jeevika:yea i knw manvi u can go now
viren:jeevika im going to break the door now..i want to see u ryt now baby
jeevika realised its viren so she quickly got up and was going to open the door when viren broke the door and crashed on jeevika
they both fell down with viren on jeevika

viren:im sorry
jeevika:im sorry too..i should not have made u jealous..but wht can i do i like to see u craving for me(she said all this without stoppinG)
viren just kissed her to shut her mouth
after some time they broke apart
viren:i like the strawberry flavour of ur lipstick
jeevika blushed

they got up n went in the room
viren hugged jeevika and did not want to leave her
he was kissing her neck when virman opened the door n was shocked to see them

virat:ahem ahem
they broke apart really quickly
viren:are virat knock karne ke baad andar aana chahiye na
manvi:are viren knock to meine kia hai aur waise bhi ye mera kamra hai to mujhe knock karne ki kya zarurat hai?

viren and jeevika both blushed
virat:bhai aap kabse blush karne lage ho?
viren :jab se jeevika se mila hoon sab impossible possible hone laga hai
by saying this he wrapped her waist with his right hand and pulled he near him
jeevika's hand was on his chest and she was looking in his eyes

manvi:are virat di ko dekho na..wo kaise viren ki aakhon mein dekh rahi hai
viren:to dekne do na...aur waise bhi usse mujhe compensate karna hai...she stayed far from me for so many hours..to tum dono thodi der baad humein disturb karein?
virat:bhai apni compensation kal le lena abhi humein ghar jaana hai..bohut der ho gayi

at this time viren recallled that virat told him that jeevika was ill
viren:jeevika ab tum kaise ho?
jeevika:mujhe kya hua hai?
viren:tum bohut bimaar thi na?
jeevika saw manvi telling her something and she understood that they did all these to bring her n viren closer
jeevika:haan abh bilkul theek hoon..tum ho na mere paas ..mujhe isse ziada kuch nahi chahiye
manvi:aur mujhe bhi nahi chahiye?
jeevika:are aisi baat nahi hai
virat:manvi mein hoon na tumhare lie

all 4 went outside as vadhera bros were leaving..but the car was not starting...viren said to virat
viren:virat humein aaj gari mein hi sona parega
viren:gari kharab hai

manvi:to kya hua hamare saath chalo na..
jeevika:haan humare ghar mein so jana

ok that's it...i want to write more but my hand is paining 
so let me give u a precap this time
precap:viren-jeevika in a room
virat-manvi in a room
so i wont tell u more than this..start thinking what may happen Smile
i know im naughty but that's virika journey Tongue

press the like butoons and plz comment!!i gets encouraged by all ur comment LOL

Edited by ashna1406 - 06 November 2012 at 10:55am

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hey it was goood babe pm me when u updatenxt

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Posted: 06 November 2012 at 12:08pm | IP Logged
This update was very good..Smile
thanks for the PM...
Continue soon..

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Posted: 06 November 2012 at 4:56pm | IP Logged
absolutely awesome pure brilliance please pm me when you update next thanks

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Good job...loved it...thnx for d PM Smile

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Posted: 06 November 2012 at 9:02pm | IP Logged
awww such a lovely update dear... eagerly waiting for the next part... thanx for the PM...:)

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