Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain


Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain
Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

virika's love journey part 22(end) (Page 76)

ashna1406 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 03 August 2012
Posts: 2886

Posted: 03 March 2013 at 5:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by candyVirika


the starting of this part was great nd shocking virika shaadi surprise ...Big smileShockedShocked

then then virika back hug nd their sweet nd cute scene *eye lock* bt virman interruption AngryAngryAngry

then their meeting at night ..lol babies disturbance "especially at bed" LMAOOO...viren wink Wink ..badmash viren...WinkWinkWink he is dam cutee nd whn viren said to jeevika keh "tum ho hi intni sexy" Embarrassed ahhh .. wow

then their ramance before wedding bt vanshika ma interruption ..WTH ??? ...Angry ..

then finally shaaaddii  ..the ring scene .. jeevika won ...jeevika the BOSS ... Clap lol ..

nd their wedding nighttt ...eeekkksss [email protected] ... Embarrassed that was hot HOT hot HOT hot nd superblyyy amazinggg.. i was getting goosebumps while reading tht part ...i was seriously like Embarrassed ... lo000ooved tht partt ..tum ne tou mujhey maar dala Tongue u described everything so clearlyyy Smile ..this was my favorite part of this ff ...Wink  i wish keh kaash tum EHMMBH ki writer hoti Day Dreaming

then 9 months laterrr...the baby girl .. awww ..cuteeeiieee.. i can actually imagine the face of the baby gurl ...TongueTongueTongue...baby girl with jeevikas EYES  nd viren million dollar SMILE ...

it was a ZABARDAST ... MIND BLOWING .. SUPER SE BHI UPER WALA ff LOLLOL ..i loved ittt frm the bottom of my heart SmileSmile(seriously i mean ittt)Clap
everything was explained to clearly nd naturallyi can actually imagine each and every scene of each nd every part ..!!!Clap
superbbb job ASHNA JI  .. u are a great and awesome writerrr ..(NOT saying this coz u are my buddy bt really i mean it literally) this was greattt ..!!Clap 

BUT u ended itCryCry
i am gonna kill uooo  Dead bt its okk ..can understand yr prob bt now meri jaan  u now have to come up with a new FF .. Wink 

& yes the ending part...i was smiling .. the way u ended it with the name of your FF "virika's love journey ' virens  love jeevika with little Aashima"...ahhhaaa Big smile ..tht was a cool ending line ..good job LOLLOL 

above all " I LOVE YOU AND YOUR FF" Clap and i cannot wait fr the new one ...Wink


awww thank u for this lonnnggg comment zainab Big smile
loved each n every part of the commment Wink
new one??there's a lot of time before that Confused
haha me the writer of hum bum?? lmaoo ROFL ROFL

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.Sumi. IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 16 December 2011
Posts: 31127

Posted: 03 March 2013 at 9:21pm | IP Logged
Lovely updt dear...thnx for d PM

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komal9871 Newbie

Joined: 02 March 2013
Posts: 34

Posted: 04 March 2013 at 11:30am | IP Logged
Awsome story... Smile

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anjaliipkknd IF-Dazzler

Joined: 30 May 2012
Posts: 4048

Posted: 04 March 2013 at 11:59am | IP Logged

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NikShaikh Senior Member

Joined: 08 June 2012
Posts: 630

Posted: 05 March 2013 at 7:38am | IP Logged

woowww superb ending

all in onee 

thanks fr pm

plsss write more n virika

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-Deeps- IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 01 May 2012
Posts: 14055

Posted: 05 March 2013 at 10:21am | IP Logged
WOW! What an update. It was update as usual. Really lovely. All the romace. Especially, end maun. Blushing Day Dreaming
Loved it. Perfect ending. <3

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Nishtha.Relan Goldie

Joined: 13 July 2012
Posts: 2266

Posted: 06 March 2013 at 4:42am | IP Logged
wow such a romantic, awesome, cute, baby, no words to describe how this story was... it was sad that it was the end of the story but thanks for the time and effort you made this story to let us read... and it was ur 1st story and truly it was mind-blowing... every time i read ur stories i just think that the scene's are in my mind.. thanks for such a story i will really miss this... but every story need to end but i wish it could be a little longer... but anyways thanks a lot... really appreciated... waiting for your second story to launch on IF waiting eagerly... 

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ashna1406 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 03 August 2012
Posts: 2886

Posted: 06 March 2013 at 9:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kays94




yours was the first virika story i ever commented on and now you ended it, this makes me sooo damn sad i can't even express! I loved the freshness to this story. i could totally envision virika by your awsome story and it was one of the sweetest ones ive read. i really hope you continue this and not end it because ive literally read this story from the beginning many times! and that stupid ashy mashy trashy didn't deserve an awesome dedication like what you gave hahahahaha LOL But i will dearly miss as i always waited for you to update it and now that you did, you ended it LOL its okay though i miss miss it dearly and thanks for the pm Heart

awww kariinaaa!!this makes me Confused Confused
i should not have ended it Ouch
thank u for these appreciation Embarrassed
hahahah i knw she doesnt deserve it but Sleepy
u knw the reason y i did so na? LOL

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