Originally posted by M00NA
''Forbidden Desire'' awesome title
ok start ki kuch lines...conversation mujhy laga arjun aur us k friend ki hai
(n thnk Mahi wo un ki nahi thi
Arjun+Painter= more and more romance...intense romance...
waise romance ka R to hai hi arjun k name mai
ok frankly speaking mujhy ootty ka nahi pata tha
MEHFIL+HUSAN hehehe mujhy laga tumhare is OS mai arohi us mehfil ki jaan hogi...ufff
mera filmy mind
As a gentleman bt a desire awoke in his heart;to gt atleast a glimpse of owner of such beautiful voice.
...jahan desire ho wahn gentle nahi hota
Her tone suddenly so deep:husan buht khtrnak bhi ho sktaaa hai
...mujhy ye arohi kuch theek nahi lag rahi
tumhari bnaun?His desire just slipped from his mouth.
...hahaha Arjun control
was just going to paint a woman 1st time
...dangerous but xciting
MAHI for me this story is new...i hv never read anything like this b4...
so m expecting sooo much from this stroy...
i liked this concept...
arjun ka new avatar
n arohi ka well i dont know
...but i liked d way u described her
plz in next update do write about arohi ka hale dil
and next update main OS PLSHHH complete karna...dont want tto read this os in parts
over alll mast re entry with mast
shukriyaa..glad u lyk
shuru ka convo tha cxnfuse kerne k lywe
nhi nhi mera arjun itna chichora nhi
wah jii ye to haii..to arohi k naam men bhi to hai
tujhew age bhi avhi lgii
lolx..mene bhi raaz 1 men dekhga..acha lga tha wo place
arey wah acha idea hai..next os men try krengfe
buht kuch lgii gi..wait @watch
thank u for beautifulll comment..muaah
will try my best yaar