OS:Forbidden Desire-Pt.2-pg.12-25NOV - Page 5

Aweesum start mahi...ur fab!!
Nice start..i thought wo convo arjun ke baare mein hai..thank u ki aisanhi tha...:D
pata nhi sabko ye arohi bhoot lag rahi hai...par mujhe thodi creepy lagi par bhoot nahi...😆 lagta hai subah padh rahi hu is liye...raat ko padhti to shayad mujhe bhi darr lagta..:D

ab to 6 pgs ho gye comments ke...ab to update kar do..intezar ni ho raha..agey padhne ke liye..

Aww Mahi darling, nice theme... Kya thinking he, kya dimag paya he re,.. Muje to ese idea aate hi nhi, btw aru in white saree , chham.. Chham.. Ghunghru,.. Haha kmh2 rain scene ki yaad aati he, yeh !! i m waiting 4 next part,

beautiful starting

Originally posted by: cherry227

awesome one maahi!!! 

it had a eerie feeling to it yet a certain kind of mysterious sensuality... makes one feel that arohi is a spirit or a figment of arjuns imagination... i love this painter with poetic words... 

"husn meri kamzori hai..." wow  

there is a certain kind of forthright honesty in arjun... he felt like painting her and he immediately expressed it... arohi utnihi ek paheli lagti hai! as if shes a closed book and hes an eager boy who's dying of curiosity to read it ☺️

fabulous writing 👏 miss you so much maahi 🤗 next part jaldi update karo

aise hi likhti raho... 4 months kab nikal jaayenge humey pata bhi nai chalega  

Originally posted by: cool_SK

Hey mahiii...
Iike always...this is us just so fab yaar...
The start was great...two boys general discussion n arjun consudering himself lucky...
Haha...but his luck caught him and he fell for the charms of the girl...
Woap, arohi discription itself was seductive yaar...luved the way u described...
So arjun is now off to make her pic...n aru agreed...
Fab...i need 2nd part soon janab...

Bw...why do i feel that aru is a bhoot here...hehe...like she said husan khatarnak bhi ho sakta hai...

Conr soon...

Luv ya
Ana

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i wonder tum har baar itni unique n awesome concept lati kahan se ho????????

Originally posted by: cooljaya11

Omg ye arohi kahi bhoottt to nahi
Anyway
White sari n arohi , it's always butterfly in me so bicharaaa painter arjun kese Bach Sakta he
Oh meri Cham Cham mahi now update next n I inform me first huh

Originally posted by: sreya19roy

Awesome awesome awesome start Mahi...I'm absolutely loving the whole scary n mystery feel that this OS is giving...this bhootiya angle is really very interesting to read n I'm super excited to read it 😃

Bt I wonder Arjun ka kya hoga last mein if Arohi actually turns out to be a ghost...as of now she seems to a nice-nice wala bhoot (if she is even a bhoot at all). This is really funny to imagine u know, Arohi n bhoot 😆

Continue soon Mahi n thanx for the pm 😊

Originally posted by: M00NA

''Forbidden Desire'' awesome title 👍🏼❤️❤️

ok start ki kuch lines...conversation mujhy laga arjun aur us k friend ki hai😆(n thnk Mahi wo un ki nahi thi )

Arjun+Painter= more and more  romance...intense romance...waise romance ka R to hai hi arjun k name mai 😳...

Age 24 🤪

ok frankly speaking mujhy ootty ka nahi pata tha...google kiya 🤣😳...

MEHFIL+HUSAN hehehe mujhy laga tumhare is OS mai arohi us mehfil ki jaan hogi...ufffmera filmy mind 😆😳...

As a gentleman bt a desire awoke in his heart;to gt atleast a glimpse of owner of such beautiful voice....jahan desire ho wahn gentle nahi hota 😛😉

Her tone suddenly so deep:husan buht khtrnak bhi ho sktaaa hai...mujhy ye arohi kuch theek nahi lag rahi 

tumhari bnaun?His desire just slipped from his mouth....hahaha Arjun control🤣

was just going to paint a woman 1st time...dangerous but xciting 😉

MAHI for me this story is new...i hv never read anything like this b4...

so m expecting sooo much from this stroy...

i liked this concept...❤️

arjun ka new avatar

n arohi ka well i dont know😆 ...but i liked d way u described her...pure soul...

plz in next update do write about arohi ka hale dil ...

and next update main OS PLSHHH complete karna...dont want tto read this os in parts...

over alll mast re entry with mast ⭐️OS...

thnx MAHI 🤗...❤️ u