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qt123 Newbie
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Posted: 04 November 2012 at 12:21am | IP Logged
Thank you for the update in such a short time.
What Khushi was going through is so realistic, she portrayed such raw emotions. When Aryan says that Miss Teacher is on his side, it was very warming. It's good that Arnav isn't running away from the fact that he is in love with Khushi; he accepts it. Unconsciously as well his mind takes him to her place. I just love how Arnav sees and accepts Khushi for who she is. Khushi breakdown is heartbreaking. Though Arnav is there for her, this is going to be very hard for Khushi because its constantly going to remind her that Arnav is the one providing Aryan the happiness when it should have been her. It's just going to be very hard for her, more so when she finds out about his feelings.
It's really hard to sympathize with only one  of the characters in this story. Both are such strong individuals with equally strong past history or reasons that make them for who they are today.
Cant wait for more!

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madhumi Senior Member
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Posted: 04 November 2012 at 12:24am | IP Logged
lovely update dEaR...

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Posted: 04 November 2012 at 12:54am | IP Logged
wow! Your words were continous flow of emotions...
I cant take sides between Arnav and Kushi as they deal with their own hell...
Loving your story...

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Posted: 04 November 2012 at 1:01am | IP Logged
Superb

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Posted: 04 November 2012 at 1:03am | IP Logged
hey shiza...(u have a unique name...Big smile)
 
i am just stunned after reading this update...firstly i luvv d tittle of this story...second i luvv the thought u put up in the beggining of each update...so apt..and thought provoking it is...!!
 
the update was amazing...i could feel khushi's pain completely...it is so difficult to realise and accept what choices u make and to further deal with them...!!!  u have picked up an amazing subject(apart 4m arshi...which i guess the love story is central 4 alot of readers on this forum)  and have justified it with ur writings...!!
u have written khushi's part in this update beautifully...very impactful...!! don't have the right words to describe even...Smile superb...!!!
 
would b looking 4wrd 4 the next update...Big smileBig smile
 
noor...:))

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Posted: 04 November 2012 at 1:05am | IP Logged
CONGRATS ON NEW THREAD  OFF TO READ THE UPDATE

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Posted: 04 November 2012 at 1:16am | IP Logged
surely surprised me with update..
Loved it thoroughly..from family moment to him comforting her..loved their inner thoughts..the turmoil...very very well written..

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Posted: 04 November 2012 at 1:29am | IP Logged
u write beautifully...

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