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blayde

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Posted: 03 November 2012 at 5:34pm | IP Logged

Hey IPKKND & Rabba Ve Fans!

I'm back with the completed rendition of Spellbound! If you haven't already read the preview, then check it out below!

The full story is ADULT in content and is intended for MATURE readers (18+) only. Here is a PG preview:

Spellbound

"Sambhaliye..."

"Hamesha sambhaltha rahoon ga..."

Khushi couldn't control her breathing. She saw his lips coming closer to her as she teetered in his tight hold. Sometimes she swore her husband was not a business man, but a magician. She was entranced by him, by the feelings he evoked within her. Letting herself get lost in the magic he'd ensconced over her, she closed her eyes as he leaned even closer. She just couldn't resist him anymore, fully under his spell. Her chest was heavily rising and falling as she felt his hands tighten around her waist. But the kiss she anticipated never came. She slowly drifted her eyes open to find her husband staring intently at her. "Arnavji?" her voice had come out in a broken whisper.

He carefully took the pooja thaali out of her hand and placed it on the table before righting her in his hold. The confusion in her searching eyes both endeared him and set him on fire. Leaning in close to her, letting her rapid breaths puff onto his jaw, he placed his lips on the soft, perfect pink roundness of her cheek. Letting his lips linger, he spoke to ebb her confusion. "Khushi, I can't kiss you."

"Kya?" she tried to pull back but he held her steadily in his tight hold.

He leaned in close to her ear, letting the coolness from the silver zanjeer of her earring brush his lips as he whispered "If I kiss you now, I won't be able to stop." He felt her freeze in his hands for a moment before she melted into his body even more. He slightly pulled his face back to look at her. "Besides, you haven't let me break your fast yet and I need you well fed..." He saw her blink almost in slow motion before he continued, a deep baritone taking over his voice "...you're going to need the energy later."...

Intrigued? Want to know what happens next?? Click the link below to read the rest of the story! Please don't forget to let me know if you liked it ( ) or hated it ( ). Comment, comment, comment! I always appreciate the feedback! And of course add or PM me if you'd like further updates!

Due to recent rule changes on IF, I can not post the link to the rest of the story. Please PM me for my blog site if you do not know it already. Sorry for the inconvenience.

Much Love & Happy Readings,
Blayde

If you liked this story and would like to read more, here's a link to my index:

Iss Bliss Ko Kya Naam Doon? (OS Index)

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Edited by blayde - 21 March 2013 at 6:08am

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glamourbird

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Posted: 03 November 2012 at 5:39pm | IP Logged

aawww...dat was so cute yet so naughty!!!

Wish some thing like this actually happens on the show on mon!! well a girl can always dream, right??

but it was very well written like always!!

keep writing..i love reading ur works!!

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blayde

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Posted: 03 November 2012 at 5:44pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by glamourbird

aawww...dat was so cute yet so naughty!!! Embarrassed

Wish some thing like this actually happens on the show on mon!! well a girl can always dream, right?? Wink

but it was very well written like always!! Clap

keep writing..i love reading ur works!! Big smile

This was pretty tame in comparison to what I usually write. Do let me know if you think I should finish what they started. Wink

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Posted: 03 November 2012 at 6:01pm | IP Logged

OMG u have to continue :D luv yah writing Hun <3 xoxo

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Posted: 03 November 2012 at 6:02pm | IP Logged

cute n naughty
loved it

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Posted: 03 November 2012 at 6:08pm | IP Logged

Awesome start and I was looking for the blog link so that I can read the whole story but couldn't find it so read the story again and then found out u haven't finished it... Can't wait to read the rest of it so plz continue with it soon.

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blayde

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Posted: 03 November 2012 at 6:10pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by farheen75

Awesome start and I was looking for the blog link so that I can read the whole story but couldn't find it so read the story again and then found out u haven't finished it... Can't wait to read the rest of it so plz continue with it soon.

Farheen! Thank you for being so diligent and looking for my blog's link! Heart

Yes you are right, I haven't written the rest yet. Truth be told, it takes me time to write the love scenes. If I can get enough commentary and people telling me they would like to read it, then I will invest the time to foster it! Just looking for more inspiration!

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Posted: 03 November 2012 at 6:11pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by blayde

Hey IPKKND & Rabba Ve Fans!

I was so mesmerized by today's Rabba Ve that I couldn't resist writing something impromptu! Please check it out and leave me some comments and feedback!

Spellbound

"Sambhaliye..."

"Hamesha sambhaltha rahoon ga..."

Khushi couldn't control her breathing. She saw his lips coming closer to her as she teetered in his tight hold. Sometimes she swore her husband was not a business man, but a magician. She was entranced by him, by the feelings he evoked within her. Letting herself get lost in the magic he'd ensconced over her, she closed her eyes as he leaned even closer. She just couldn't resist him anymore, fully under his spell. Her chest was heavily rising and falling as she felt his hands tighten around her waist. But the kiss she anticipated never came. She slowly drifted her eyes open to find her husband staring intently at her. "Arnavji?" her voice had come out in a broken whisper.

He carefully took the pooja thaali out of her hand and placed it on the table before righting her in his hold. The confusion in her searching eyes both endeared him and set him on fire. Leaning in close to her, letting her rapid breaths puff onto his jaw, he placed his lips on the soft, perfect pink roundness of her cheek. Letting his lips linger, he spoke to ebb her confusion. "Khushi, I can't kiss you."

"Kya?" she tried to pull back but he held her steadily in his tight hold.

He leaned in close to her ear, letting the coolness from the silver zanjeer of her earring brush his lips as he whispered "If I kiss you now, I won't be able to stop." He felt her freeze in his hands for a moment before she melted into his body even more. He slightly pulled his face back to look at her. "Besides, you haven't let me break your fast yet and I need you well fed..." He saw her blink almost in slow motion before he continued, a deep baritone taking over his voice "...you're going to need the energy later."

Author's Note: Usually I don't write in conjunction with what is going on in the show. But today's scene was just pure magic, and I couldn't resist conjuring something! If I get enough feedback, it might inspire me to continue. So please do let me know if I should go on with this scene, into more bliss! If you'd like me to continue on, you know what to do - COMMENT COMMENT COMMENT! Heart

(Please don't just hit the like button. Let me know what you actually liked about it!)

Much Love & Happy Readings,
Blayde

If you liked this story and would like to read more, here's a link to my index:

Iss Bliss Ko Kya Naam Doon? (OS Index)

Disclaimer: Writing posted by me is my original work. It is not to be copied, reproduced or plagiarized in any way. All my writings have been copyright protected.

Hamesha sambhalta raha hun not rahon ga

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