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Part - 2
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next day morning ...
Maanvi first early wake up and go out from house...
At breakfast...
All are present... Only maanvi is missing ...
V- bhabhi maanvi kaha hai?
J- virat mannu tumhare sath nahi hai...
V- nahi bhabhi wo morning se room me nahi hai... Mujhe laga aap k saath kitchen me hogi...
J- nahi virat mannu subah se mujhe nahi milii ...
Dadaji- maanvi ghar pr nahi hai... Wo kisi kam se bahar gai hai... Subah hum se permission le kr gai hai...
V- kya? Pr kaha?
D- wo to Hume pata nahi...
Virat thought abt maanvi...
J- virat tum breakfast suru karo...
V- nahi bhabhi... Woh actually kal maanvi bahot apcet thi... Vrat ko lekar to meine shocha ki agar maanvi nahi to uski jagah mein hi... Aur vese bhi bhai ne vrat rakha hai...
All laghed ...
After some time...
Maanvi entered in her room...
V- maanvi kaha gai thi tum? Mujhe bataya kyu nahi? Aur mujhe jaga deti mein bhi chalta...
M- relax virat bas mandir gai thi... Ab vrat to rakh nahi sakti to shocha subah ki arti me hi chali jau...
Virat pulled her towards him...
V- achcha? Ye achank mandir ... Kyu?
M- meine kaha to sahi...
V- okey.. Pr tumne breakfast miss kardiya ... Mein tarun se abhi...
Virat try to leave... Maanvi stop him..
M- virat... Rahenedo na... Vese bhi mujhe abhi bhook nahi hai... Aur tarun bhi sham ki taiyario me buzzy hai... Dadaji ne bada sa function Jo arrange kiya hai...
V- haa pr..
M- pr war ko maro goli aur ye lo prasad lo..
Maanvi just to feed him..suddenly Virat stop her...
V- nahi... Mein nahi kha sakta...
M- kyu? Tumne vrat rakha hai kya... Chalo ab lelo..
Maanvi rolled her eyes and looked at him who gave asure looked ...
Virat nodded negatively ...maanvi looked him and then realized...
She was shocked..
M - virat... Tum ne vr...
Virat nodded...
M- pr kyu... Matlab... Iski jarurat nahi thi...
Virat covered her waist...
V- relax ... Tum karo ya mein ek hi baat hai...
Gave smile...
Maanvi smile and hugged him...
At lunch time...
On dinning table...
Maanvi served to every one...
Jeevika told her to eat but she refused and told that she eat after some time... Jeevika realized maanvis behavior... She also ignore her breakfast and.. Now...
Every one complete their lunch they leave the table...only j and swamini bua is present with maanvi...
Vanshika set in hall with virat... Swamini bua just leave the table..
J- chal mannu ye le meine teri plate laga Di hai.. Tu khale..
Jeevika set her on chair... Maanvi looked at food...
J- kya hua suru kar na..
M- haa Di mein kha lungi aap jaiye aap ko sham ki taiyari karni hogi..
J- wo sab ho chuka hai... Tu suru kar..
M- ha... Bas khana thanda to ho..
Maanvi looked down ...
J- mannu khana thanda hi hai... Ab sach bata tune vrat rakha hai na?
Maanvi looked at her... And then SB...
SB- humne mana mana kiya tha phir bhi?
Maanvi looked down... Like precap...
Vanshika and virat came after hearing that...
Vanshika - kya hua DiDi?
V- bua kiya hua...
SB- maanvi ne vrat rakha hai...
V- what? Maanvi..
Maanvi stood up and looked at everyone...
M- i am sorry pr mein ... Mein ye karna chahti thi...
V- pr..
J- mannu hum tujhe sirf teri bhalai k liye rok rahe the...
M- mein janti hu Di...
Maanvi looked at SB and go toward her...
M- bua ji aap hi kahete ho ki mujhe ek jimmedar bahu aur biwi banna chahiye... To mein vahi karna chahti hu... Plz mujhe karne dijiye... Aur vese bhi adha din to ho hi gaya hai...plz ...
SB- thik hai... Pr tum apna khyal rakhogi ...
Swamini smile...and left..
Maanvi looked at j and vanshika they also smile and left...
Maanvi looked at virat who left angrily...in room
Maanvi followed him..
Grabbed his hand..
M- virat... Virat.. Virat... Plz..
Virat turned ... Angrily ...
V- kya plz... Tum ne mujse zut bola? Aur ye vrat ...
Maanvi try to came close to him...
M- i am sorry... Mein tumse zut nahi bolna chahti thi... Pr janti thi tum mujhe mana kar doge.. Aur vese bhi tum mere liye kar sakte ho to mein kyu nahi?
Virat removed her hand and turned ...
V- maanvi ... Mujhe samj nahi aa raha mein kya kahu tumse... Tum samj kyu nahi ho?
Maanvi turned him...
M- virat.. Kaha na sorry... Aur kuch nahi hoga... Adha din to ho hi gaya hai.. Plz... Gussa chod do..
V- mein gussa nahi hu... Mujhe bas tumhari fikr hai..
M- i know pr mein konsa ladai ladne ja rahi hu.. Bas niche Di ki help karungi bas...
Maanvi smile... Virat also smiled...
Virat hugged her...
V- tum janti ho mujhe kese patana hai...
Maanvi smile ...
M- achcha chalo ab mujhe niche jana hai.. Tum aram karo... Aur ha gane ki rehsal abhi mat karna gla jaldi sukh jayega ... Bas room mein hi rahena... Aur kuch tv ya kuch aur karte rahena time paas ho jayega...
Virat cut her..
V- maanvi bas.. Tumhara gala sukh jayega...
And both laughed...

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omg i m loving itROFL

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Posted: 03 November 2012 at 12:22pm | IP Logged
i hope aisa kuch ho
awsum

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Posted: 03 November 2012 at 12:39pm | IP Logged
cute...luvd the part whr manvi wz trying topacify angry virat...
hope v gt to c sumthing like dis in the show too...but no hope on cvs...
will wait n watch...
plz do cum up wid more!!!! Smile

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nice...

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be nice  if something like this happens
continue soon

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Nice

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Awesome dear
Lovely update
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