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Virmaan-OS : story in 3 parts completed.

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Posted: 03 November 2012 at 10:34am | IP Logged
Guys its just for weekend ...
No more storys and updates so...
I m bored without virmaan so i try it...
Forgive mistakes...
It in in three parts...
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:
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PART # 1
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JAHA EPISODE KHATM HUA THA VAHI SE...
:
dadaji se baat karne k baad virat kamre me aata hai... Virat maanvi ko bed pr vrat k sagun k sath dekhta hai... Maanvi sad hai aur virat ki presence ko ignore karti hai... Virat maanvi paas ja kar uske paas Bethta hai... He takes her hand...
V- kya hua? Ab tak sad ho?
Maanvi not looked him... Pulled her hand away...
V- maanvi ye kya bachcho jesi jid hai? Meine kaha na tum agale saal vrat rakhlena... Kya fark padta hai...?
Maanvi look at him... Put sagun on side..
M- yahi to virat kya fark padta hai? Me karlungi.. Abhi navratri k vrat kiye the na kuch hua? Nahi na aur wo bhi nou din k..
V- haa pr tab tum vrat ka khana aur fruit kha sakti thi... Yaha to pura din bina kuch khaye pia rahena hai... Yaad hai pichli baar kya hua tha? Tab to thik thi aur abhi tumhari medicine chal rahi hai...
M- pr virat... Mein karna chahti hu.. I promis me kuch jyada kam nahi karungi ... To kuch nahi hoga... Aur medicines mein raat ko le lungi... Plz Sab ko samjao ...
V- nahi maanvi...
Maanvi make cut face...
M- please ...
Virat cupped her face...
V- maanvi plz tum samjo na.. Aur sab nahi bhi kahete tab bhi mein tumhe ye vrat nahi rakhne deta... Maanvi tumhari health jyada jaruri hai...
Maanvi removed his hand and walked towards kitchen...
V- maanvi...
Virat shooked his head...
In kitchen ...
Maanvi entered in kitchen and help tarun in kitchen ...
T- maanvi mem wo kal subah k liye Jo banana hai uske bare...
Maanvi put plate on table loudly ...
M- tarun aap ye sab buaji se puch lijiye... Mein khana table pr laga dungi...
Tarun left kitchen...
M- maanvi kya control... Koi ni tere mood khrab krnese kisi ko kya farak padta hai...
Maanvi set dinner table...
At 8 every on came and start eating ... Virat looked at maanvi who still not in her mood ... Maanvi eat food slowly ...
M- mera ho gaya ...
J- mannu itni jaldi?
M- haa Di wo mein aaj hi lambe safar aai hu to thoda tired feel kar rahu ho to bas isi liye...
Virat looked at her... He know that this is not reason ...
Vanshika - beta to tum apne room mein ja kar aaram karlo..
M- ji maa...
Maanvi left the plase...
After dinner...
Virat entered in room...
Maanvi lying on bed ...he go to washroom and came after change...
V- kya baat hai? Aaj madam ko bahot jald nind aa rahi hai?...
He try to change her mood...and take her his arm...
Maanvi looked at him..and lying on her side...
M - virat pls mera mood nahi hai...plz mujhe nind aa rahi hai...
Virat turned her side in lying position ... And plase his head in air with support of his hand... And turner maanvi toward him...
M- virat...
V- mujhe pata hai ki tumhara mood kyu nahi hai.. Pr maanvi is taraha apna mood khrab karne ka kya matlab hai? Aur wo bhi ek vrat k liye? Abhi nou din ka kiya tha..aur mein janta hu ki mere liye karna chahti ho pr... Agar tum mere liye kuch karna hi hai to apna khyal rakho.. Apne chahre se wo magical smile kabhi dur karna... Tumhara mere sath hona hi meri umrah badha dega...
Maanvi smile... Virat looked at her and gave big smile...
Maanvi hugged him... Virat hugged her back...
They fall in sleep...

Edited by Niaksharma - 04 April 2013 at 1:17pm

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Posted: 03 November 2012 at 10:39am | IP Logged
awee
wish will get this
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Nice :) 
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nice
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Posted: 03 November 2012 at 10:49am | IP Logged
hey when r u gonna conti AFTER MARRIAGE yaar...u finished still 75...i m waiting...plzzz do conti it fast...and i loved this

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Posted: 03 November 2012 at 11:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by virumanu

hey when r u gonna conti AFTER MARRIAGE yaar...u finished still 75...i m waiting...plzzz do conti it fast...and i loved this


thanks... I also want to continue but i want some different track... Not smiler with other ones... Something interesting ...

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nice.
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Posted: 03 November 2012 at 11:34am | IP Logged
Really weekend is so boring.plz update soon it is really too gd.

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