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Posted: 27 December 2012 at 10:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by alkaparmart

Achiever it is beautiful chap.Nidhi is much serious about her honeymoon than her career.Ashutosh is much serious in her career than the wedding.what a maturity?
--LOLit really seems funny the way u put it..kya jodi hai!LOL
 
So their marriage prponed.Glad to read.I  can feel Nidhi's lighten eyes,when she was talking about the patient of Jeevan Sandhya .If i am not wrong,he must be baba.
 
--no he aint baba.. bt thr mite b a connection..Tongue.. baba will soon come in picture..Embarrassed
 
Armaan tru friend.When he was advising,i was just remembering Serial's mallika.She repetedly said Ashutosh," Nidhi,chhoti hai blah.Blah.But Armaan with good intention. good chap again.
 
--lolz.. kya baat hai.. everybody is rmbring KTLK mallu..kya kare bhul hi nahi sakte..LOL
 
Waiting for the next chap.Really treat to read your chapters.
 
thnk u soo much..Tongue 

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Posted: 27 December 2012 at 10:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ariyadasa

Superb Embarrassed oh my god i never got such a big time to read a ff but forced me to me to read as it was really interesting (20 pages applied in word doc)
 
--oh.. wow.. really v all r running out of time.. i wonder h btow i ended up writing this 400 pg FF..D'ohbt thnk u sooo much..Embarrassed..
 
Oh no don't let your pen to write a separation track as we are loyal ASNI fans we had already suffered by seeing horrible separation track please don' t repeat it . but if you are willing to write it please don't make it so  long Embarrassed
 
--k.. wat abt a positive seperation track..Tongue.. will c in nxt chapter wat i m hinting to..Embarrassed
I like the way you have Describe Mr and Mrs Ashuthosh  , But not much interesting on Rangu chap (this my perception)
 
--yup.. Rangu-Angie track is a bit cliched bt i cudnt elborate on it much focus is on Ashni plus again tht time constraint.. and i really dont want to stretch this FF more..Embarrassed
 
But please yarr do some thing for Mallika as i cant digest this name 
 
--LOL i thot i chngd perception of mallika thru my FF.. she is essentially a chngd characterEmbarrassed bt let me c wat i can do for  her..EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
LAST chap superb you have pick up a nice concept
 
--yup i tried to focus on a diffrnt concept.. it gives us more insight into these charctrs...Embarrassed
 
Waiting for the next up date 
thnk u sooo much..Embarrassed
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Posted: 27 December 2012 at 11:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Anjani9

Sorry, am on vacation and not accessing the internet, review after 30 Dec...
njoy ur vacations...Tongue Goa kya?
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Posted: 27 December 2012 at 11:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by swati62

Nice chapter. Thank god u couldn't write a separation track it would have been unbearable.  The fights are ok but no separation pls.
okay.. noted.. bt thrs sort of difrnt type of seperation.. a positive one..Embarrassed  wait for nxt chapter..
 
and and bt i m planning a lot more romance b4 tht..Embarrassed

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Posted: 27 December 2012 at 6:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by wizardofoz

Cry Just kidding LOL. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
dont worry.. i m sure.. u will welcome it with both hands...LOL trust me!Embarrassed
have guest at home.. otherwise u wud've gotten an update today.. let me see if i can still manage tht.. have completed only half of the chapter..Embarrassed
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Posted: 28 December 2012 at 4:44am | IP Logged
Hey sweety..Tongue
Am so so so sorry...i dont know how i missed this...Confused
I wait for this FF like anything...was a little busy thats y i guess missed it...Ouch
Khair better late thn never...Big smile
 
The first sceneTongue...THE DECLARATION made ashni so happy...Loved it..Clap
Anji-Ranga issue...Thats hilariousLOL...Ashni having opposite reactions as expected...very well written..Clap
Mallika sharing such thing with ashu...that must have been awkward...so describe the natural reactions so so well...AWESOME..Clap
The Library scene was one of my favourite...u excel at writing naughty n teasing stufff..i enjoy it sooo much...LOLLOL
THE KISSEmbarrassed...what a way to make nidhi understand ashu's point of view...LOL
Hmmm so honeymoon is an issue now...lets c how u make ashni handle this...it would be fun to read...Big smile
I love the way ashu's anger just melts away when nidhi cries...Awww they are adorable...Embarrassed
THE BIG DAY for ashu...WOW...he is surely a GREAT surgeon..Clap
But felt so bad for him...he coudnt enjoy THE MOMENT of his carrier coz nidhi wasnt there..Ouch
Then the WOW scene in cabin post surgeryClap...OMG u wrote it so so well...each dialogue...each emotion..each reaction was so so natural n so wonderfully explainedClap...One of my favourite scenes till date..StarStarStarStarStarStarStar
I was so touched...coundt stop my tears at ashu's hurt...Cry
BUT nidhi...OMG she has a heart of GOLDBig smile...I loved the whole part alot...ClapClap
Their patchup was SUPERB...EmbarrassedClap
 
 
All in all an OUTSTANDING update..Clap
Am literally mesmerized by the quality of ur work...Embarrassed
U ROCK...Big smile
Tooo good...Clap
When are we getting the next part????Day Dreaming

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Posted: 28 December 2012 at 7:23am | IP Logged
When are you giving next chapter ...waiting Day Dreaming

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