Originally posted by Cherishh
Awww...that was such a sweet, cute and revealing
As always, fallen in love with ur writing style and the FF more and more.
--aww.. thnk u soo much.. wiping happy tears.. u r sweetheart! (Ashu wud've said.. drama drama!!)
Finally, Armaan is back that too with a bang...he really makes Ashu's life colorful and interesting with his liveliness, masti and caring nature...he is just too adorable friend one could have. The way he teased him and his accusations of not welcoming his wife ritually was so very funny and cool to read and his demand to be welcomed by the Lady of the House was just so perfect, which again adding a point more for Ashu regarding Dadi Bua
...lucky Ashu everyone is directly and indirectly making him happy and feel blessed
--oh very colorful! with his very nature.. he brings a dash of happiness in his life.. which Ashu hadnt been appreciate as much as he shud've been in those 5 yrs at least.. bt thnks to Nidhi.. he is able to c it and realize..and upcoming chapters will deal with tht thng... his f'ship with Armu and Mallu! And i luved the way he ordered Ashu to welcome his wife.. so typical of Armu!
Adding a pnt to Dadi Bua yes.. par yahaan pe DB aur Ashu ke bich ek invisible jung chid chuki hai in terms of Nidhi and this mrg.. bt its sweet.. and i will project this whole Ashu-DB relation in a new light! Its a war betn two ideologies..essentially and not two ppl! I like tht.. nxt chapter will shed more light on it..
and V can c a clear demarcation of 3 generatiosn.. one belongs to DB.. the other belongs to Ashu-mallu-armu and the third belongs to Nidhi-angie-Rohan... CV and HK fit somewer betn DB and Ashu's generations.. and essentially thr role serves as a bridge.. if i get time, i will protray it.. bt for now its how i want these relations to grow!
Armu's love story was indeed very filmy
..but awesome should say, loved this plot Manisha
...he is too fast, poor Ashu wish he could too
--its totally filmy i purposefully mentioned SRK.. i liked this diametrically opposite pair of Trupti-Armu.. thr was more to it.. highlighting thr apparent differences.. bt i had to cut it short!
oh woww...Nidhi-Armu..they are indeed a difficult pain to handle
. Just love their tit for tat put out in a pleasant way...with both of them around..u defo crazy laughing out I guess.
--Oh.. i luv thm... thy have essentially developed a sort of brother-sister rship.. both r naughty and if anything, Armaan is more thn Nidhi.. Ashu will have to keep thm apart to stop his bad influence on NIdhi!!! May b Trupti can hellp!
The way u described Nidhi dressed up in Saree and Ashu drooling was so cute
...he really is getting desperate day by day and falling in love more and more with her pure inner and outer self.
-- the scene aftr tht.. i mean.. the wedding decoration wala wud've been very interesting read owing to his such drooling.. it all was stepping up to tht.. with Ashu drooling this way and Nidhi taking tht tiny winy bold step.. thr dynamics wud've been really interesting to read.. bt kya kare.. this chapter had already become so lengthy.. so i deferred for nxt cahpter!
I luved the way he is slowly noticing little details on Nidhi.. tho poor he, he doesnt know wat is tht tht is thr on her nose tht is making her look very.. very appealing.. His dumbness in these matters is sooo cute!
-- tht was a supertwist.. it wasnt jst Ashu who was jealous after all!!! both men r clueless y these 3 ladies r so charmed by the other so much... thts very cute.. i can almost imagine Ashu-Rohan looking at each other scornfully for tht.. such jealousy!
RoMali (I just can't stop myself laughing with this name) falling in luv was real unexpected, but me all thinking "chalo jaan chutti
". Now with this in picture, I am happy for RoMali and their love also should blossom with blessing and wishes of all...but as Ashu said its not gonna be so easy...me waiting for that track.
--I luv tht name.. seriously!!! It makes me laugh hard ! yeah.. chalo.. baal baal bach gaye.. bt rgrding rohan-mallu i dont know.. i dont think so such rltion is even feasible.. i know its pretty discriminatory.. bt somehow i cannot accept this relation.. lets c how it goes for thm.. I thnk Ashu's apprehensions r rite and very real!
Liked the bond between Nidhi, Mallika, Rohan and Anji...but I guess there always gonna be a thin line between Nidhi-Mallika in regard to Ashu's love, guess time will change this too...and happy to see Ashu getting his friend back...luking forward for the story ahead and of course want Ashu's Baba's entry too, which gonna make the already blissful relationships just beyond perfect.
--yeah...however grt friends thy become.. thr wud always b tht fine line seperating thm.. Nidhi-Mallu cannot stay unaffected by each other's presence or words infront of Ashu.. it wud make things a bit awkward and uncomfortable.. bt i guess.. thy will need time to get used to it.. its hard for Nidhi to not feel jealous for Ashu! Ashu's baba's entry is planned at rite time!
Loved the friends lunch and family dinner and the ride back of AshNi...but...but...what d hell..u r so cruel..how could u stop at that...erggghhh
...wishing u could update sooner than u might have planned...as I am very impatient to read next
...do update sooonnn..
--As i have commented..i wanted to end at wer thy stepped into his bedroom aftr decorating the wedding bed!! Bt lucky u guys.. i cudnt get tht cruel evn wen i had wished!!!
Last, but not least...Happy Diwali to you and your family...enjoy the day of lights...God bless.