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main ek ss likhne wali hu. hopes you enjoyed it too. sorry guys me issi ss ka title change kar rahi hun. i m sorry for this.

Index : 

Introduction : Page no: 1
Chapter 1 : Page no :1


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Introduction :  
Rishi Diwan : Architect hain. Diwan khandan ka dusra varasdar. Apne papa ko aur Bhai ko Office mein madad karta hain.

Sameer Diwan : Elder brother of Rishi Diwan.

Indira Sharma : A cute, bubbly girl hain. 

Other characters :
Uday Diwan : Rishi's & Sameer's Dad. & owner of the Diwan Builders

Simmi Diwan : Rishi's & Sameer's Mom. 

Inder Sharma : Indira's Dad. 

Kutumb Sharma : Indira's Mom

Sunaina Sharma : Indira's Bhabhi

Ishan Sharma : Indira's nephew

Seher Sharma : Indira's niece






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gr8 new ss. All d very best Thumbs Up
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chapter 1
At Diwan's office :
 Uday Diwan :(to rishi)  Well done beta. aaj tere vajaise humko itni bahot badi assignment mili hain.  Mujhe yakeen tha mera dusra beta jarur mere kam mera sath dega. main abhi ghar pe call kar ke bata deta hun Simmi ko. Wo bhi bahot khush hogi.

Rishi Diwan : Dad, mana ki ye assignment humari company ke liye bahot mayne rakhti hain. lekin iss success ke liye sirf main hi jimmedar nahin hun na.
Sam bhi to utna hi haqdar hain iss khushi ka.

Actually mein Sameer ek bahot bada ghamandi aur ghussel larka hain. Lekin Rishi humesha apne bare bhai ka sanman karta hain. Par Sam humesha Rishi ko pani me hi dekhta hain. Wo manta hain ki Riashi ke aane ke bad Uday aur Simmi ka pyar usse kam hua hain. Aur iske vajaise wo Rishi se achchi bat nahi karta hain.

Sameer room ke bahar khada reheke ye sari batein sunta hain. 

Sameer : (Room mein aakar) Thank you Mr. Rishi Diwan mujhe itna sanman dene ke liye. Lekin agar Papa nahi chahte mujhe iss khushi mein shamil karna to waise hi sahi. Tum kaun hote ho humare beech mein aanewale?

Uday : Are Sam beta, actually mein Rishi ki tarif isiliye kar raha tha kyunki isne peheli bar aise bade project mein kam kiya hain. Aur wo successful hua hain. Aur mijhe malum hain ki tumne bhi iss me mehenat ki hui hain.

Sameer (angrily) : Bas kijiye Dad. Mujhe malum hain aapko to sirf Rishi ki khushiyonki hi pari reheti hain. 

Rishi : Aisa nahin hain bhai. Aap galat samajh rahe hain.

Sameer : Will you please shut up. (pionting to Rishi)

Uday Rishi ko roomse janeki order dete hain.

Rishi unhappily vahase niklata hain


agar starting achchi hui ho to batana. agar kuch characters mein changes chahiye to plz batana. 





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Promising start.
Get going.
No need to change anything.
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Nice start.  Waiting for next update.

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