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Posted: 03 November 2012 at 10:55am | IP Logged
Plz pm me too:)

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Posted: 03 November 2012 at 10:59am | IP Logged
Hey.. Amazing concept.. loved the four Characters.. Update soon.. could u please please please pm me.. i'm sending u a buddy request.. bcz.. I can't afford to miss this FF!! I'm sure it'll be interesting!

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awesome awesome Hug

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its awesome sree.Clap.. rly it is... luvd it Hug... plz updae yaar... Embarrassed  waiting 4 first kiss Embarrassed
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Posted: 03 November 2012 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
so guys here goes the first part.thanks for all ur support.this time no speech from me before update LOL

PART 1
'taani wake up...wake up taani...uff ye ladki bi naaD'oh'
taani:kya maa subha subha neendh karab kiyaOuch
maa:subhaWacko?taani it's 8.30 now...it's ur first day in ur new colg remember?
taani:(jumping from the bed)Shocked8.30???oh no kya krishnaji aapne ye kya kiya???
maa:ab tum krishnaji ko gaali  de rahi ho?Shocked
taani:kya maa baad me baat karengi aapse.let me have a shoverD'ohthen i've to take my...(she started saying this and that to herselfLOL)
maa:u have changed completely in this 4 years taaniD'ohnow stop talking to urself and come fast for the lunch and please don't wear those clothes u were wearing in the villageDead
taani: those r cute dresses maaaEmbarrassed
maa:cuteShockednot at allDeadplease don't wear those kind of cloths.rags r better than themDead
taani:Angryok ok wateverD'oh
...


in the st louis colg

rey:so guys ready for the colg day?lets have some fun and dance
swayam:ha rey lets have some fun.
whole gang:ya lets have some fun(and winks each other ,other than reyam...something is cooking in their mindsWink)
swayam:did anyone see sharon today?
gang:ooo itni bejainiLOL
swayam:guysAngry
rey:chod naa.yaar swayam she will come soon.so chill .she said she is going to meet her some old frnd.
swayam:oh ok then.
...
nil:vikky startWink
vikky:Winkyes
vikky:rey u r our good friend naa?
rey:kyu?nahi hai kya?
nil:as u r our best friend u'll do wat we say naa?
rey:well it depends
vikky:wat u won't do anything for usShocked
rey:i din't say like that Confused
nil:bas rey,we can understandOuchthat's all  ur frndshipD'ohu r not going to do anything for ur friendsOuch(making filmy dialogues to flat rey LOL)
rey:uff u guysAngrytell me wat u all wan't
nil:first promise that u'll do as we say .
rey looks at swayam
swayam:wat's all this about guys?why this promise and all?
bharat:baad me pata chalega sabko Wink
nil:rey promise us
rey:ConfusedConfusedConfusedhmmConfusedok.i promiseConfusednow wat?
nil:yaay he said ok.vikky ,bharat  lets get to workWink
reyam:wat's going on guysConfusedShocked?
vikky,bharat,nil:wait u'll know  that soon  LOL
reyam:Confusedok

10min later
rey :wat the hell is this guysAngryAngryAngrywat have u guys posted in the colg site?Angryhave u guys lost it?u wan't me to do that?Angry
gang:yesBig smileremember u promised usWink
now swayam comes rushing from somewhere
swayam:wat's all these?wat is this rey?u posted that in the site?
rey:hell no swayamAngryit's their stupid work
swayam:guys wat's all this?why did u guys posted that in the site.omg wat will happen now?
gang:something good will happenBig smile
rey:Angrywat good?i'm not going to do thatAngryis that clearAngry
gang:u can't say no rey Winku've promised
rey:uff damn my promiseAngrycome on guys i can't do that?it's kind of stupid?and why the hell did u guys asked the girls to poll on that?Angry
gang:oh ya poll...we forgot that.lets see the responseBig smile
nil:woh 99.99%yes LOL
rey:watShockedShockedShocked
swayam:really?Shockedoh all accept sharon would have voted i supposeConfusedwell i bet she din't have seen this post,or else she would have finished off u guys by nowD'oh
rey:i wish she was here to save me D'oh
gang:u can't say no now .promise is a promiseWink
rey:i don't understand why u guys r doing thisShocked
gang:because u being single is making us single tooDeadall r behind u only Deadso we wan't u to be with someoneBig smile
rey:u guys r soAngry...but doing all this won't make any change .there isn't anyone in this colg whom i'll fall for.so ur work is a waste.and why should i love the girl who'll come under the spot light after the music?uff u guys really wan't me to kiss the girl who will be under the spot light after the music?i can't believe that all girls accepted ur stupid ideaShockedoh man this won't be good.
gang:come on rey wat if u'll fall for her?Big smile
rey: impossible.i said u that there isn't anyone unique in this colg whom i'll fall for.i know all...all r alikeD'oh.my princess will be waiting for me somewhere Day Dreamingone day i'll find my princess.no need of ur stupid ideas...Dead
gang:but u can't say no to this now.it's fixed Wink.so rey's first kiss today.let's see who is that lucky girl in our colg.
nil:oh no we should take our gf's out of this music wala idea or we will regret
vicky:ya seriously
swayam:hadh hai yaar.ab bas bi karo
gang:haan tik hai.so be ready for rey's first kissWink
rey:uffAngryjo bhi hoga bas dekha jaegaD'ohConfused


sorry guys i'm ending it here now.it turned lengthier than i imagined.so i'm ending the 1st part here and will make the next part tomorrow itself.i'm so sorry for that.and please tell me how it is.i don't know how it turned.i'm having a bad head ache.made this part  now as i said i'll update today.sorry if it turned to be a crap.tell me should i continue or not.and sorry if there r any mistakes i din't check if there is any



Edited by sreelu094 - 04 November 2012 at 1:12am

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Posted: 03 November 2012 at 1:05pm | IP Logged
wow its amazing. . . .
the girl will be taani. . . . .
cant wait for taarey kiss. . . .
plz update next soon. . . .

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Posted: 03 November 2012 at 1:11pm | IP Logged
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Omg i unresed soo l8t ... Sorry 4got   Tongue ... Cumin to ur ff... Sreelu i loved it loadzz... Awww every girl dyin 4 rey... Hayeee Wink n the kiss ufff... Cnt wait... Jaldi jaldi update karna xx Hug

Edited by XTaaReyVirManX - 17 November 2012 at 6:30am

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Posted: 03 November 2012 at 1:18pm | IP Logged
omg this is so so so good srikkyLOL...it's so interesting...omg the boys are actually impossible loved reyaam and omg taarey firts kissBlushing...waiting for the update

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