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Posted: 03 November 2012 at 10:55am | IP Logged

Plz pm me too:)

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Hey.. Amazing concept.. loved the four Characters.. Update soon.. could u please please please pm me.. i'm sending u a buddy request.. bcz.. I can't afford to miss this FF!! I'm sure it'll be interesting!

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Posted: 03 November 2012 at 11:19am | IP Logged

awesome awesome Hug

Edited by raj-guria-kriti - 03 November 2012 at 11:20am

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its awesome sree. Clap

.. rly it is... luvd it Hug

... plz updae yaar... Embarrassed

waiting 4 first kiss Embarrassed

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so guys here goes the first part.thanks for all ur support.this time no speech from me before update LOL

PART 1

'taani wake up...wake up taani...uff ye ladki bi naa'

taani:kya maa subha subha neendh karab kiya

maa:subha?taani it's 8.30 now...it's ur first day in ur new colg remember?

taani:(jumping from the bed)8.30???oh no kya krishnaji aapne ye kya kiya???

maa:ab tum krishnaji ko gaali de rahi ho?

taani:kya maa baad me baat karengi aapse.let me have a shoverthen i've to take my...(she started saying this and that to herself)

maa:u have changed completely in this 4 years taaninow stop talking to urself and come fast for the lunch and please don't wear those clothes u were wearing in the village

taani: those r cute dresses maaa

maa:cutenot at allplease don't wear those kind of cloths.rags r better than them

taani:ok ok watever

...

in the st louis colg

rey:so guys ready for the colg day?lets have some fun and dance

swayam:ha rey lets have some fun.

whole gang:ya lets have some fun(and winks each other ,other than reyam...something is cooking in their minds)

swayam:did anyone see sharon today?

gang:ooo itni bejaini

swayam:guys

rey:chod naa.yaar swayam she will come soon.so chill .she said she is going to meet her some old frnd.

swayam:oh ok then.

...

nil:vikky start

vikky:yes

vikky:rey u r our good friend naa?

rey:kyu?nahi hai kya?

nil:as u r our best friend u'll do wat we say naa?

rey:well it depends

vikky:wat u won't do anything for us

rey:i din't say like that

nil:bas rey,we can understandthat's all ur frndshipu r not going to do anything for ur friends(making filmy dialogues to flat rey )

rey:uff u guystell me wat u all wan't

nil:first promise that u'll do as we say .

rey looks at swayam

swayam:wat's all this about guys?why this promise and all?

bharat:baad me pata chalega sabko

nil:rey promise us

rey:hmmok.i promisenow wat?

nil:yaay he said ok.vikky ,bharat lets get to work

reyam:wat's going on guys?

vikky,bharat,nil:wait u'll know that soon

reyam:ok

10min later

rey :wat the hell is this guyswat have u guys posted in the colg site?have u guys lost it?u wan't me to do that?

gang:yesremember u promised us

now swayam comes rushing from somewhere

swayam:wat's all these?wat is this rey?u posted that in the site?

rey:hell no swayamit's their stupid work

swayam:guys wat's all this?why did u guys posted that in the site.omg wat will happen now?

gang:something good will happen

rey:wat good?i'm not going to do thatis that clear

gang:u can't say no rey u've promised

rey:uff damn my promisecome on guys i can't do that?it's kind of stupid?and why the hell did u guys asked the girls to poll on that?

gang:oh ya poll...we forgot that.lets see the response

nil:woh 99.99%yes

rey:wat

swayam:really?oh all accept sharon would have voted i supposewell i bet she din't have seen this post,or else she would have finished off u guys by now

rey:i wish she was here to save me

gang:u can't say no now .promise is a promise

rey:i don't understand why u guys r doing this

gang:because u being single is making us single tooall r behind u only so we wan't u to be with someone

rey:u guys r so...but doing all this won't make any change .there isn't anyone in this colg whom i'll fall for.so ur work is a waste.and why should i love the girl who'll come under the spot light after the music?uff u guys really wan't me to kiss the girl who will be under the spot light after the music?i can't believe that all girls accepted ur stupid ideaoh man this won't be good.

gang:come on rey wat if u'll fall for her?

rey: impossible.i said u that there isn't anyone unique in this colg whom i'll fall for.i know all...all r alike.my princess will be waiting for me somewhere one day i'll find my princess.no need of ur stupid ideas...

gang:but u can't say no to this now.it's fixed .so rey's first kiss today.let's see who is that lucky girl in our colg.

nil:oh no we should take our gf's out of this music wala idea or we will regret

vicky:ya seriously

swayam:hadh hai yaar.ab bas bi karo

gang:haan tik hai.so be ready for rey's first kiss

rey:uffjo bhi hoga bas dekha jaega

sorry guys i'm ending it here now.it turned lengthier than i imagined.so i'm ending the 1st part here and will make the next part tomorrow itself.i'm so sorry for that.and please tell me how it is.i don't know how it turned.i'm having a bad head ache.made this part now as i said i'll update today.sorry if it turned to be a crap.tell me should i continue or not.and sorry if there r any mistakes i din't check if there is any

Edited by sreelu094 - 04 November 2012 at 1:12am

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Posted: 03 November 2012 at 1:05pm | IP Logged

wow its amazing. . . .
the girl will be taani. . . . .
cant wait for taarey kiss. . . .
plz update next soon. . . .

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XTaaReyVirManX

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Posted: 03 November 2012 at 1:11pm | IP Logged

UnRes...

Omg i unresed soo l8t ... Sorry 4got Tongue

... Cumin to ur ff... Sreelu i loved it loadzz... Awww every girl dyin 4 rey... Hayeee Wink

n the kiss ufff... Cnt wait... Jaldi jaldi update karna xx Hug

Edited by XTaaReyVirManX - 17 November 2012 at 6:30am

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Posted: 03 November 2012 at 1:18pm | IP Logged

omg this is so so so good srikky

...it's so interesting...omg the boys are actually impossible loved reyaam and omg taarey firts kiss

...waiting for the update

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