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Posted: 01 December 2012 at 8:46am | IP Logged
its satrdy n8
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Posted: 01 December 2012 at 9:42pm | IP Logged
plzzz update fastt yaaar cant wait...

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offo going to update 2day LOL
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Posted: 02 December 2012 at 4:46am | IP Logged
jaldi updat do

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sree update warna ,,,,,,,,,u knw naEvil Smile

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Posted: 02 December 2012 at 6:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by patie

sree update warna ,,,,,,,,,u knw naEvil Smile
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Posted: 02 December 2012 at 7:54am | IP Logged
finally!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOLi'm here with my update.i'm so sorry guys Ouchi know it was a long wait,but i was busy with my colg works.so kindly forgive me guys...thanks a lot to all my ff readers.love u all for liking my ff.Huglove u all so so so muchHugthanks a lot for ur cmnts,it means a lot for meEmbarrassed.love ya Hughere goes the updateSmile

part 3

sharey:i don't think so
gang:???
sharon:rey hw could u do that to a girl?that too with my best friend?
rey stood mump there.he felt ashamed of himself...
nil:ur best frnd?i thought she is new here and sharon wat's the problem in kissing a girl?
sharon:Angryshut up nilAngryAngrythere is no problem in kissing a girl,if she is ready for that!or it is same as killing her...
swayam:she is ur frnd sharon?we din't knew
sharon:Angryso wat?u guys have any justification for all this?y am i asking u all.only rey is responsible to ans...Angry
swayam:i think the whole gang isConfused
then he narrated the whole incident to sharon
now she is fuming
sharon:Angryhow could u guys be so cheap.i din't expect these kind of behaviour from u all...rey and swayam i thought u guys were sensible.but u all r senseless and uselessAngry.
sharon:pata nahi taani kaha chali hogi...
rey who was sitting mump all the while said 
rey:i should say sorry to her...
sharon:i don't think it will make any change...
rey:Ouchlet me find her
gang :we too will search for her
sharon:oh please don't.jo kiya wahi kaafi haiAngry
rey:sharon i think only i should go...
sharon:well i'm not sure hw will she react to u...but call me if there is any problem
rey :ok
...
after a long search he saw her in the fire escape crying hard...he felt like someone pierced his heart with something.he felt the same pain in her eyes.he felt like killing him for making her cry like this...finally he somehow gained the courage to speak to her.(he know her name is taani as sharon said her name)
rey:t a a n i...his voice was shaking
taani who was sitting in a corner of the step looked up and saw rey near her.she felt hurt and just kept looking at his eyes as if trying to find a place inside his eyes to hide...
                                it was clear from her eyes that she was hurt.rey din't know wat to say and how to console her.he too stared at her.after a long stare he again started...
rey:t..taa..nii i'm so sorry for wat i did.i din't mean to hurt u.my frnds forced me to do so.but i sware i wouldn't have kissed if it wasn't u.pata nahi muje kya hogaya tha.i wasn't able to control myself from kissing u.i felt something strange seeing u,which i haven't felt before...
taani stared at him and said with teary eyes
taani:sorry...that's the only word u can say.but that word doesn't heal the wound u caused me...
rey:taani muje pata hai jo bhi maine kiya vo galat tha ,par...
taani:par kya?i don't even know u and wat do u expect me to do for ur behaviour?whom ever u r ,i don't wan't to see ur face.please mujhe akela chod dijiye...
rey :taani please forgive me i'm really sorry...
taani:i said leave...Angry
rey had tears in his eyes.he left fire escape and called sharon and said taani is in fire escape...
rey to himself "u brought tears in her eyes rey,now it's ur duty to bring a bright smile in her face.i know it's hard,but i'll bring that smile in her face"
precap -   rey:i found my princess
i know it's a short update.will try to make a big update nxt time.again i'm sorry because this is a boring update i knowOuch



Edited by sreelu094 - 02 December 2012 at 7:54am

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Posted: 02 December 2012 at 8:14am | IP Logged
its tooo small bt nice...Heart bt plzzz update fast cant wait plzzz ad thanks for PM lov u...bt update fastt plzzz



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