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nice update,,,Smile pics in d update made it more intrestingWink

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Posted: 03 November 2012 at 10:32am | IP Logged
Superb..lubalub ur writing estyle...ClapClap
Waitinf for next installment

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HugSooo wel written contuine soon 

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Originally posted by Khushi96

<font color="#990066">Ok in my os Pratigya will be going home soon not just yet..i am giving fans the option do you want her to go maike or straight to tnEmbarrassed

A) Maike


Beehoodi y this question maika mine ans big no LOL
Straight towards TN kriya room Embarrassed
Btw awsome sooo lovely romantic update I thoroughly enjoyed kriya hug tooo beautiful dear Heart Day Dreaming
And rajkumari done susu on his papa    LOL LOL
Do update next bt do take rest too Hug




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Lovely OS KroopaBig smileBig smile...loved reading itTongue feels so gud 2 read KriYa tender moments after 2 arrival of their angelTongue..plz continue soonTongue

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plz send Pratigya 2 Tn onliLOLLOL...infact dis time make her feel like goin 2 tn rather than 2 gh...wud luv 2 c dis side of hersWink

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Kriya ki prem ki nishani pt2

Part 3



SS: Suna beta ee bachan sambhalna ka, ee sab aurat ke kam hote hai.

Kesar and Pesiya came from the kitchen after hearing the uproar from the hall.

Krishna: wah bahut badhya suno ee ka bol re..  

Amma: Ha baba tumre bauji egdam sahi bol re hai.. Krishna just walked off.



Kriya's room

Krishna came into the room stumbled upon boxes and baby accessories,

he started toget frustrated pacing around the room.

Kesar: Ee Kisna baba tum jon partigya ke khatir kare ho woh bahut sahi  hai.

Krishna: Lekhen bojayi Bauji ne mann bo.

Kesar: Tum kono chinta ne karo tum bas jane ki tayari karo, waha Partigya tumra intejhar kare ho, aur oo ko bahut thakan be hori hogi to tum jaldi jao baba.

Krishna: tumo theek kare ho hum abhi nikalte hai.  Kesar smiled and left Krishna to it.


He gathered his clothes for the night; no one was going to stop him being there for his wife and baby tonight.  Krishna came out of the room with a bag.

SS: Baba pagala gaye ho..ruk.

Krishna: Nei bauji esa hai humri biwi oo akele nai ma bane hai aur hum unke madat karne jare hai bus.

Ghantilal: Lekhen baba..

Amma: Baba..

SS: Jaidyo jaidyo, apne manane karega saala behooda

Krishna stormed out of TN listening to no one but his own voice.




Pratigya was in deep sleep.. her baby started to cry, Pratigya heard her daughter and immediately, picked her out of the nursery bed, and comforted her by leaning her on her shoulder and rubbing her back.


Pratgiya: Kya huwa humari beti, ko hmm? She spoke softly.

Pratgiya: Aur Krishna abhi kyu nai aye.. she reached for her mobile. She saw that her baby had calmed down a little, she put her on her lap.

Pratigya: chal tumhare papa ko call karte hai..hmm.. she smiled at her daughter.

and called Krishna. Then her daughter started to cry again, Pratigya cut the phone and attended to her.

Pratigya: Accha to bhukh lagi hai humari rajkumari ko? She said as she saw her baby sucking her thumb.

Pratigya looked around the room, then the door opened it.

Pratigya: Krishna kaha the tum? Their baby started to crying again she was very hungry.

Krishna: Babu kucho nei. They were interrupted.  the nurse came in the room.

Accha Pratigya baby ka pehla feed hai chalo mere saath tum dono.

Pratigya: Haa Krishna tum yaha ruko hum esi feed kar ke ate hai.

Nurse: Waha sab ke pati unke saath hai, ab chahe to Krishna bhi askte hai.

Krishna: Sab ke pati ka matlaab, ka babu oo sab aur ke samne ee sab..

Pratigya: Haan yeh humse nai hoga sab ke samne..

Krishna: Ne ee hum kabo nai hone denge.

Pratigya: Ek minute Krishna

Nurse: Nai Pratigya tum waha apne bache ke saath alag kamre mein honge.  

The baby started crying bringing all to attention..

Pratigya: Accha chalo 'she told her baby in a cute voice.

Krishna: Chalo babu. They both followed the nurse in the other area, there we some woman who had already fed their baby, and Pratigya gave them a friendly smile, one woman was sitting there with her baby looking rather tired.

Nurse: Ek minute.. mein ati hoon tum dono behtho. Krishna and Pratigya both sat down.

Krishna: Babu hume gudiya do.. hum eki saath kheel na chati hai.

Pratigya: Nai Krishna abhi nai baad mein.

Krishna: Nai babu..

Pratigya: Dekho woh bahut rore hai, abhi sirf usi bhuk lagi hain. She said showing their crying daughter in her arms.

Krishna: theek hai babu, baad mein khelenge. He said sqeezing his baby's cheeks.

Woman: Tum bahut luckily ho ke tumhari pati tumhare saath he is waqt, iske papa to 2 din hui aur ek baar isko dekhen nahi aye. She said referring to her son, then quickly walked off.  Pratgiya and Krishna felt bad for her, she leant her head on Krishna's shoulder.

Nurse: Achha room ready hai said the nurse guiding them to it. Pratigya was wondering about that woman but her mind came to focused on her daughter, Krishna walked in the room with Krishna's support as she still felt weak.

Pratigya gave the baby to the nurse as she sat down, Krishna stood watching quietly.

Nurse: Ek baar mein tujhe bata do ke baby ko kese feed karte hai.

Pratigya: Haa theek hai.

 Nurse: Acha abb apne do button khol do, mein isi tere goud mein de te aur.

Pratigya:Ek,ek minute,um Krishna tum kamre mein jao mein thodi der mein isi le kar ati hoon. She felt shy on exposing herself at this moment to her husband.

Krishna: nei babu hum tumri madat karte hai na.

Pratigya: Krishna tum kese madat karo ge, nai nai tum jao.

Krishna: Accha tumri maazri.

He came closer and took his baby from the nurse.

Krishna: Acha humri rajkumari, ache se maa ga doodh pena hmm, oo kya kete hai strong, ha strong ho jao,  ka sahi bolre hain na? Pratigya shoot Krishna an stern look.

Krishna: Ka?

Nurse was laughing to herself.

Pratigya: Accha thakur sab tum jao hum ate hai. She sweetly smiled so he would leave the room.

Krishna: Haa babu, eelo humri betiya.

he kissed her head.

 He gave her to Pratigya.

Pratigya smiled at him as he left, she felt a little bad, but she knows Krishna he will keep distracting her, by funny comments and right now she needed to concentrate so she could nurse her baby right.

Pratigya opened her top buttons of the maxi and the nurse assisted her so it would be easy for her baby to latch on. Her baby was hungry and Pratigya was a natural her daughter started to drink her mother's milk.

Pratigya watched as her baby feed, a smile adorned her face.

This moment was so special. She never experienced anything like it, it felt a bit sore but seeing the content look on her daughter's face made it all that worth while, Pratigya really felt she has become a mother.

Pratigya: Bahut bhook lagena haina mere gudiya ko, she placed a kiss on her head.

And watched her baby and caressed her little cheek.

Nurse: Accha hum abhi ate hai.

Pratigya: Haan theek hai..

The nurse left the room.. a strange man looked  from a distance at the room Pratigya was in.. who was he?



Edited by Khushi96 - 05 November 2012 at 7:32pm

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Wow..Khushi...You are a damn good writer...

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