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Posted: 17 January 2013 at 12:43pm | IP Logged
ok all after a break i am back writing this os i didn't know many people read it and are quite interested that inspires me to go on your kind words thank you and here is part 17.

 

PART 17

KRIYA ROOM

Pratigya was so confused about Nitin, Pratigya took her phone and dialled Krishna's number.

Pratigya: Hello Krishna mere baat dhyan se suno. Ha tum ghar ate pehle kamre mein ajao.

Krishna: Ka babu tum humka kamre mein ane ko ke re.. ka bhava?, romantic mood mein hogaye he smiled.

Pratigya: Krishna har waqt mazak?

Krishna: Theek hai babu hum ghar aa ke tumse milenge, hall mein to jana pade ga.

Pratigya: Nai Krishna pehle humse milo phir baad mein ghar walo, kuch zaroori kaam hai Krishna please.

Krishna: Theek hai babu hum pehle tumka baatyange, ab kus?

Pratigya: Haa yeh theek rahega.  She smiled.

Krishna: ok babu

Pratigya: Thanks Krishna, hosake to jaldi ana.

Krishna: Haan babu. They ended the call and Pratigya looked at her sms from Nitin she didn't know what to reply she was ever so confused.  Time flew quite quickly.


TN HALL

SS: Ee baba ka bhava tumo restarunt see jaldi aa bo? Sajjan was sitting at the dinner table with other members of the family.

Amma: Accha kiya aah humo tumri liye khanna lagate hai aa baba betho.

Krishna: Amma abhi ne hum na babu ko mil ke ate hai.. Krishna walked by the hall they left him to it they knew Krishna was crazy when it came to his babu so they were use to the treatment of coming second. Krishna went to the direction of his and Pratigya's room.

Pratigya came out of the room as she saw his shadow.

Pratigya: Krishna tum jaldi aage?

Krishna Haa babu tumo..

Shakti: Aree baba humka tumka kucho kas baat karne hai, chalo bo upar chath pe batyate hai.. he put his arm around his brother trying to lure him away.

Pratigya: Aree Krishna.


Krishn:  Shatki bhai ka karbo tum, hum babu ke baat pehle sune phir tumre saath batayange.



Kesar came by where they were all.

Kesar: Tum eeya ka kare ho samar ke papa, tumra khaana lagaya hai thanda hojayega. Krishna went to Pratigya.

Shakti: Haa haa ate abhi..  he rolled his eyes.

Krishna: Haa babu ka bhava? 

Pratigya: Yaha nai, kamre mein chalo waha baat karte hai.

Shatki shot Pratigya a stern look Pratigya just ignored him and shut the door behind.

Krishna: Hum kaam se agaye kono zaroori baat tum bolre thi.. He put his phone on the table.

Pratigya: Haa Krishna woh.. Pratigya's phone beeped it was a sms. Her eyes went straight to Krishna's phone, then back at her own.

Krishna: Eee humri gudiya jag rai hai..


 he picked her up from the bed and cradled her.

Krishna was engrossed looked at his daughter, Pratigya picked up his phone. She came near Krishna who now was with their baby sitting on the bed, she took his phone and hid it under the cover discretly, and Krishna looked up at her.

Krishna: Ka bhava babu, tumo waha kya karbo, eeya avo humri aur humri rajkumari ke paas. Pratigya immedeatly sat next to Krishna and leaned her head on his shoulder. She watched daddy and his girl and smiled they were the perfect picture, then she remembered and rose her head. She caressed her daughter's angelic face then held her little arm.


 

 then pushed her Krishna's hair back as she spoke to him.

Pratigya: Krishna tum fresh ho kar avo, phir hum baat karte hai.. huh?

Krishna: Theek hai babu, he said suttely.

Pratigya: Yeh sogaye, mein palne mein suladeti hoon, lao.

Krishna: Ne kono baat ne humo karte hai

 Krishna got up with his daughter, Pratigya too followed his lead, he laid her down in  her palna.

Pratigya: Accha tum fresh ho kar ajao, phir bhook bhi lagi hoge. She said trying to get him to hurry up.

Krishna: Haa,haa abhi ate hai. He went in the bathroom and shut the door.

Pratigya took her phone and reviewed the message again it said

SMS:Krishna ka phone check kiya? Pratigya took her husband's phone it said new voice message. She quickly played it,at the same time kept her eye on the bathroom door. She heard the message: 'Tumri biwi dhokebaaz hai, Itna bharosa maat karo Pratigya par, raat ko.. Pratigya eyes widened in shock and digust. She heard the door click. She quickly shut the phone and hid it in inbetween her saris..

Krishna: Babu tumo waha ka karbo?

Pratigya: Kuch kuch nai Krishna woh. Krishna came towards her.

Krishna: tumo kuch pareshan lagre ho.

Pratigya: Huh?  Pratigya went towards the bed and sat down trying to collect her thoughts.. 

Pratigya: Krishna nai esa kuch nai hum bas thode thaak gaye aur.. she trailed off. Krishna went to her and sat in front of her, he cupped her face.


Krishna: Babu tum to sherne ho, humra badhoor babu.. she didn't say anything.

 

she didn't say a word further she just took comfort in him. Krishna held her close, he was now worried since when did Pratgiya cry so easily.


Krishna: Babu ka bhava tumo rore jare ho, ka ghar walo ne kuch kaha ka?, zaroor Shatki bhai kuch kaha hoga..

Pratigya:Nai Krishna ghar walo ne kuch nai kaha, bas hum.. she hugged him and her tears came out more. Krishna was confused.

Krishna: Ne babu tumo ro maat tumka ese dhek ke humka ghabrat hore, tumri tabyat to theek hai? She felt her forehead.

Krishna: Ke kono dard he, baachi ko peda karne ke baad peht mein, hum doctor ko phone karte hai. He got up

Pratigya: Nai Krishna hume koi dard nai hai, hum swast hai, tum behtho.

Krishna: Acha.. he was confused. Pratigya sniffed and wiped he wiped her tears.



Krisha: To babu ka bhava humo conphused hai, humka laga humre  baachi ke baad tumo har waqt tumri chrere pe muski hoge, phir..she put a finger to Krishna's lips, he was jumping to all sorts of conclusions. Pratatigya cupped his face.

Pratigya: Nai Krishna humari baachi ke baad hum bahut kush hai, yeh to humari duniya ban gai hai aur, suno Krishna hum humari baachi aur unke papa se bahut bahut bahut Pyar karte hai! I love you Krishna her eyes began to well up.

Pratigya: Bas tum hamari saath ho to humko koi tafliff nai hosakte, aur Krishna Shakti bhai ya koi aur tumko humare khilaf bharkane ya kuch bura bole to humsewada karo Krishna ke tum uski baato mein kabhi nai aao ge.  Krishna was very confused by her behaviour.

Krishna: Babu ee tum ka bol..

Pratigya: Wada karo Krishna humse, ke tum hamesha humra vishwas karoge kabhi tut ne nai doge, chahe kuch bhi hojaye humara pyar humesha utal hoga.

Krishna: Haa theek hai babu, hum wada karte hai, aur karte a ree hai ke hum tumra saath kabo ne chodenge, jon kucho bhi hojaye hum humri babu ka saath humesa honge aur vishwas tut ne ka to sawal he ne hai.  Pratigya felt a sight of relief from his words they shared an eye look and then he took her into his arms. She felt warm, safe and secure in his arms like she could face anything with his constant support.

Krishna: I love you babu

Pratigya: I love you Krishna, Krishna placed a kiss on her temple.

Krishna: Accha babu humo bahut he bhook lage hai..

Pratigya: Haa Krishna aree tum to, sorry ha tum khanna khane jao.

Krishna: kono sorry kehne ki kono zaroorat ne humra babu pehle baad mein khana. Pratigya smiled.

(KRIYA Theme begins to play, Hai,hai hai)

Krishna: ka sahi bole? 


Pratigya: Krishna..  she got shy.

 

Krishna: Accha babu humra  mu to meetha karbo..

Pratigya: tum khana khane jao... She looked down shy.

Krishna: Ne babu abhi, he lifted her chin up with his finger and kissed her lips. Pratigya cheeks went a little red'

Pratigya: Ach,accha hogaya na mu meetha ab tum jao..  she playfully pushed him away from her.


Krishna: haan, haan jare he smirked. Pratigya looked to see if the view was clear once it was she got up and shut the door gently, then took out Krishna's phone out and deleted the voicemessage. Pratigya took her own phone and began to dial.

Pratigya: Krishna ke mobile par gande aur ghatya messages bhejna baad karo!

Nitin: Kardunga Pratigyaji tum mujhe kal milne ajao to.

Pratigya: Yeh kabhi nai hoga.  Pratigya cut the line.


 Pratigya put her phone down on anger. She then checked on her baby, she was fast asleep, Pratigya admiring her daughter moment got interrupted.

Pratigya: Ab kya she said in frustration. She opened Krishna's phone and saw a video message, she just deleted it, and then dialled a number from her phone, was frustrated and needed to sort this Nitin problem out once and for all.

Pratigya: Kaha milna hai?.. hum aajange. She was not in a mood and wanted to find out what Nitin was up to. 


Pre-cap

Pratigya and Nitin ka amna samna.

Tbc






Edited by Khushi96 - 17 January 2013 at 12:39pm

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superbbb jaanu...dis is sooo well written...everything as it wud happen in real mkap world...n d way u've written all dis...just fantaaabulousss...n thank u sooo much fr continuinggg...mwaaahz my jaan...love u...i hope dis nitin thingie egets sirted out quickly n derz nt much misundrstndin btw kriya...n yea...i wanna see more eduited pxicx

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bole to lallantop...totallly mkap ishtyle...
AB love his babu...but what & why pratigya is hiding from Krishna...and what kind of sms,video nitin send to krishna's mobile...and why Pratigya is so terrified...omg...did i miss any of yr previous update...pls give all the updated pg no. on yr OS's 1st page...plsss...

but i hope Krishna understand pratigya and don't trust his family,nitin if they try to put any blame on Prats...

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sure simmi i will put on first pageSmile
don't worry kriya are strong Tongue


Originally posted by simmi.friends03

bole to lallantop...totallly mkap ishtyle...
AB love his babu...but what & why pratigya is hiding from Krishna...and what kind of sms,video nitin send to krishna's mobile...and why Pratigya is so terrified...omg...did i miss any of yr previous update...pls give all the updated pg no. on yr OS's 1st page...plsss...

but i hope Krishna understand pratigya and don't trust his family,nitin if they try to put any blame on Prats...

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Posted: 18 January 2013 at 6:45am | IP Logged

Hug
will do more edit pix Smile

jaanu i love kriya so i cant split them don't worry LOL

Originally posted by ArjaAddict

superbbb jaanu...dis is sooo well written...everything as it wud happen in real mkap world...n d way u've written all dis...just fantaaabulousss...n thank u sooo much fr continuinggg...mwaaahz my jaan...love u...i hope dis nitin thingie egets sirted out quickly n derz nt much misundrstndin btw kriya...n yea...i wanna see more eduited pxicx

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thank you Smile

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Wow very nice updateSmileso touchyDay Dreamingloved itTonguecontinue...

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