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Posted: 18 December 2012 at 3:13am | IP Logged
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Part 15

Pratigya was lying down on her bed lost in her thoughts, she had, had her dinner, and was just relaxing with gudiya sleeping next to her on the bed, Pratigya was patting the little one on the chest putting her to sleep. Her focus was some what not there, she had a worried feeling about Nitin what was he up to? Pratigya looked at gudiya she was slowly falling a sleep.

Samar came by the room he looked at her.

 

 

but she was lost in her thoughts. 


He came a little closer, Pratigya saw him. 


 

Pratigya: Aree waha kyu kade ho beta? Pratigya sat up.

Pratigya:  aaja, aaja maa ke pass. Samar came to her and sat in front of her and the baby.

Samar: Hamari behen sogaye?

Pratigya: Haan abhi thode der pehle sogaye.

Samar: humko khel na hai unke saath.

Pratigya: Abhi beta yeh bahut choti, jab thode badi hojaye tab tum dher sara khelna she said sqeezing his face.

Samar: Theek hai maa, maa aap mere saath khelege?

Pratigya: Abhi hum bahut thakh chuke hai beta. Samar frowned at her answer and Pratigya felt bad.

Pratigya: Accha theek hai thode time khel te hai, phir tumhari amma tumko suladegi.

Samar: Haa ek game khel sakte hai, saap siri, he took the board out from under is arm and set it on the bed.

Pratigya: Theek hai tum set up karo mein tumhari behen ko palne mein sula kar ati hoon,

Samar: theek hai maa.  He started to set the counters and dice. Pratigya put the baby down in the palna, she came back to play with Samar. A few seconds later the baby began to cry.

Pratigya: Ek minute beta. Pratigya got off the bed and picked the baby out of the palna.

Pratigya: Kya hua papa ki laadi ko hmm? She hugged her daughter and carried her back to the bed, she then held her in her arms and cradled her., Pratigya was engrossed in her daughter that she forgot about Samar's game. 



Samar: Maa aap accha nai khel rahi hai. 


Pratigya: Sorry beta, tumhari behen ko haar waqt mera time chaiye na, kyunki bahut choti hai, tumare jaisa woh sab kuch akele nai karsakte na beta isliye. Jab tum chote the to maa tumhari bhi esa hi dheek bhaal karte.

Samar: Sach maa? Now Samar was smiling.

Pratigya: Haa beta, abhi yeh itni choti hai to eska bhi khayal rakhna chaiye na?

Samar: Haa maa..  Kesar came in the room.

Kesar: Lalla tumo kaha the?   Partigya ko araam karne ki jaroorat hai eliye ee tumri saath game ne khel sakte, to tum kahe meri baat dal kar eeya par agaye?

Pratigya: ko baat ne didi.

Kesar: Tumri Partigya maa kitni acchi hai, tumre saath thode der khela, ab tumo humri saath chalo, tumra sone ka waqt hai chalo aur eeka arram karne do.

Samar: Haa Amma. He held her hand.

Kesar: Partigya sab kuch thek haina?

Pratigya: Haa didi theek hai, bas yeh jaag gai to sulare hoon.  Kesar and Samar said goodnight to her and left her room.

Pratigya: Nini nai aree?, koi baat nai maa sulade hai.. she put the baby over her shoulder and patted her back gently, and rocked her back and fourth.  She had thought about calling Krishna but thought it was best to speak to him when he got home.

Pratigya took her mobile and decided to call home.

Profressior: Hello.

Pratigya: Hello papa

Professior: Hello beta kesi ho? Aur humari naati kese hai?

Pratigya: hum dono theek hai papa.

Professior: Beta ghar par sab theek haina?

Pratigya: Haa papa bas ese hi kiya aap sab ki yaad are thi.

Professior: Accha beta, yaha hum sab bhi tumko yaad kare hai.

Pratigya: Papa Arushi aye hai waha?

Professior: Nai beta aaj woh sasuraal mein hai, woh aur Shailesh dono kal aye the.

Pratigya: Sach mein papa Shailesh bahut accha ladka Arushi ko bahut pyar karta hai.

Professior: Haan beta Tanmay ke baad bhagwan ne accha socha humari Arushi ke liye, humari dono beti ke liye. Krishna kesa hai?

Pratigya: Krishna iss waqt kam par hai, hum dono ka bahut accha khyal rakta hai.

Professior: Bahut accha hai Krishna, haan beta aaj hum kisi ko mile the

Pratigya: Kaun papa?

Professior: Beta baad mein bataunga, abhi abhi Komal aur Kartik aye hai to beta baad mein phone karunga theek hai beta?

Pratigya: Haa papa mein phone rakti hoon. Pratigya cut the call.

Krishna: Babu , babu humri betiyaa kese hai?.. he walked straight to them.

Pratigya: Krishna tum kab aye? aur..

Krishna: Hum abhi aye aur humri gudiya kese hai, Krishna was excited to see his laadi Pratigya gave her to him.

Pratigya: Krishna hume tumse kuch zaroori baat karne hai.

Krishna: Ee sab hum baad mein sunege, amma ne abhi khanna lagaya hai aur hume bahute bhookh lagi hai babu.

Pratigya: theek hai lekhen ese kaha lejare ho?

Krishna: Amma aur ghantilal ke pass oo sab humri rajkumari ko goudi mein lena chahte hai.

Pratigya: Haa lejavo aur phir khanna kha kar mujhe tumse kuch baat karne hai.

Krishna: Haan babu humo jalde aree hai.  Pratigya had decided to tell him about Nitin she didn't want to hide anything incase something happened.

 

TN HALL

 Krishna: Ee re tumri potti amma. He gave her to his mum.

Amma: Haa lavo aur tum beta khanna khalo tumri bauji aur Shaktiya ke saath.

Krishna: theek hai Amma. Krishna sat down next to his brother.

Ghantilal: Sajjanbahu eeka eeya le avo she said excitedly.

Amma: Haa ati hoon, humri baba ki laadi hai ee. She sat next to dadi on the sofa

Ghantilal: Sajjan ne bataya ke guru maa ka phone aya tha, aur baba ki beti ke name karan mein oo aye gi. Amma gave gudiya to dadi to hold.

Amma: Haa bahute accha kiya guruma ayege aur humre baba ki betiya ka arshiwaad de gi, bahuriyaa ko kono ne bataya?

Ghantilal: oo sajjan ne batane ki mana kiyo.

Amma: Accha oo baad mein batange, ee partigya jesi bhi lagre hai.

Ghantilal: Haa Kisnabahu jesi gori gori hai ee. Both amma and ghantilal bonded with gudiya.

Two hours just flew by Krishna was sitting with the family and they were all talking about gudiya. Kesar was already asleep with Samar and Shakti had left the hall 10 minutes ago.

Krishna: Ee sogaye amma tumri goudi mein?

Amma: Haa baba tumna eeko sulade. Krishna got up went towards Amma and she gave the baby to him.

Krishna: theek hai amma, bauji kaha ge?

Amma: Sone hum sab bacchii ke saath khel re hai to ooka jalen hori. She laughed.

Krishna: Accha bauji ko baata  do ke teen din baad ee humri betiyaa ka goudi mein lekar khel sakte hai.  Amma smiled

Krishna: Accha ab humo bhi sone jare hai.

Ghantilal: Haa der hogaye tum sab apne apne kamre mein jao, hum bhi jare hai she got up and started walking towards her room.

Krishna took gudiya towards the room, he saw Pratigya she had fallen asleep.

Krishna: Tumri Amma to humo baat tak ne hui ee sogaye, kono baat ne kal bataya lenge... he took gudiya towards the palna and laid her down. He saw Pratigya sleeping face he smiled at her then placed a kiss on her cheek



and went into deep slumber next to her.


Precap: SS: Humri potti ka naam karan do din mein ha sab kuch acche se hojana chahe thakurainyan.          

Pesiya: kono khat aya hai. Pesiya cames into the hall.

Shakti: Ka kono prem patra.

Amma: kono ke liye?

Pesiya: Amma Kisnabahu ka hai Pratigya saw this from the corner of the hall.

Amma looked suspicious.


Tbc



Edited by Khushi96 - 18 December 2012 at 11:12am

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Posted: 18 December 2012 at 11:51am | IP Logged
hey khushi  nice oneBig smile
samar-pratigya scene was good,,,,hvnt expctd u will write for thr sceneTongue ,,,i liked itEmbarrassed

tumne toh arushi ki 3 shaadi karwa di heheheLOL,,,,btw give some intro of her new husband,,,,LOLLOL

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Shailesh-The next victimROFLWell writtenTongueNice updateBig smilePrecap is interestingGeekUpdate soon plzEmbarrassed

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Originally posted by Snigdhakhanam

Shailesh-The next victimROFLWell writtenTongueNice updateBig smilePrecap is interestingGeekUpdate soon plzEmbarrassed


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nice update kroopa...

arushi's chain marriages...ROFL  still going on...LOL

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Part 16

RESTAURANT

It was 10am Krishna had gone to restaurant early as it was Wednesday it was busy today than usual, Wednesday, Friday was weekend was the most busy.


Chandu: Bhaiya ee sahi ne hai humne abhi tumri beti ka abhi dekha ne, aur hum to acche dost hai yaar. Tunna saw Krishna and Chandu talking in the kitchen and counter area.


Tunna: Haa sahi bola Chandwa

Krishna: Tumo tensiono maat, sirf tumo ne sab logan ne humri betiyaa ne dekhi eeliye bura maat mano. Bauji ka ee rasam hai pandra din baad ee ka hum le ke ayenge Pratigya ke saath restaurant, tab milo.

Chandu: theek hai bhaiya.

Tunna: Tab dhekenge choti Partigya.

Krishna: Accha to ee baat to hogaye , ab humre par merbani karke tum dono waqt maat bigado aur kam karo, dekho restaurant kitna busy hai, chalo chalo tumo dono oo waha tume bolare hai jao.. They both went to attend tables and Krishna went over to answer the phone.


KRIYA ROOM

Pratigya turned to her side she put her hand out to hold Krishna around the waist, she felt nothing but the cold bed, she got up and looked around.

Pratigya: Krishna kaha hai?.. she got out of the bed and went towards the bathroom and knocked on the door as it was shut.

 Pratigya: Krishna kya tum undar ho? She opened the door but Krishna wasn't there.

Pratigya: Kaha gaya, shayad restaurant gaya hoga. She took her phone she checked on her baby she was fast asleep. Pratigya thought it was best to let her sleep a little.

Pratigya: Ese sone do thode der, ab tumhari papa ko call karti hoon. Aree papa ne sms bhejha hai, kya likha hai? She was talking with her baby she found it comforting.

Pratigya: Sorry babu aaj jalde jana pada humra restaurant bahute busy hai, tumo apna khyal rakho aur humri bachi ka bhi, I love you Krishna. Pratigya smiled reading his message.

Pratigya: Kal to Krishna ke saath waqt he nai mila, hum call karte hai, she rang Krishna's phone, it rang and rang.  

Pratigya: Lagta tumhare papa bahut busy hai, thode deer baad try karti hoon. Pratigya got up from the bed, quickly went to the bathroom had a super fast bath and then attended to gudiya who had woken up right after her mummy had come out of the bathroom, Pratigya saw Krishna's jeans on the chair she took them on the bed to fold.

Pratigya: Tumhari papa ke kapade haar waqt yaha chair pe, kabhi cupat mein nai rakhte.

Gudiya began to cry, Pratigya put Krishna's clothes away and picked up her baby and took her in the bathroom for a bath. After that she gave her, her feed. Kesar came by the room with a plate she placed it on the table.

Kesar: Partigya hum tumhra nashta eeya rakre hai, doodh pelane ke baad tum ee khalo.

Pratigya: Thank you didi. Kesar smiled then left Pratigya to it.

TN HALL

It had passed 20 minutes all had finished having breakfast, and resided to the hall area, Amma was picking out grains from the rice with dadi. Kesar was in the kitchen.

SS: Humri potti ka naam karan do din mein ha sab kuch acche se hojana chahe thakurainyan. She looked up at him.

Amma: Suno komal ke bauji tumo Partigya ko gurumaa ane ki khabar kahe ne baataye.

SS: Kono jharoorat ne abhi kuch batane ki samjho ki ne.

 

KRIYA ROOM

Pratigya was reading one of her law books as her baby had gone to sleep,  her phone beeped, she took her phone and read the sms.

Pratigya: Post aya hai? Kya? Pratigya didn't get what it meant.. Then she got it and immediately left the room.

   

Pesiya: kono khat aya hai. Pesiya cames into the hall.

Shakti: Ka kono prem patra hai ka?


Bauji and Shakti were sitting on the sofa. Far from each other.

Bauji: ee bhel budhi kucho kam vam ne hai, sasura roz eeya behat kar waqt begare te ho. Sala kuta. Chup!

Amma: kono ke liye?  She asked Pesiya.

Pesiya: Amma hume lagra hai Kisnabahu ka hai Pratigya saw this from the corner of the hall.

Amma looked suspiciously at her.


Pratigya quickly came out and took the letter from Pesiya.  All eyes were on Pratigya.


SS: Kono khat aye hai kisnabahu.  Pratigya was lost what to say, dadi, Bauji and Amma eyes were all on her waiting for an answer.


Pratigya: Haa court se kuch aya hai, abhi hume phone aya tha. Everyone bought that story and went back to what they were doing. Shakti got up smirking Pratigya saw him, he came towards her.

Shakti: Court ka kagaz sab ko bandal mare ho, ee kono court ka kagaz ne hai. 

Pratigya: Shakti bhai saaf saaf bolo ap kehna kya chate hai? Pratigya was always direct said it how it was instead of beating around the bush.

Shakti: hum pade lekhe ne hai, lekhen court ka khat aur ee ka love letter mein pharak jaroor jante hai, kono court ka kagaz par ee ka ha-rt ka chitra ne hota.


Pratigya: Esa kuch nai hai, apko koi galat femi hui hai. She walked away from him and went towards her room and shut the door lock.

Pratigya opened the envelope.

Pratigya: Hum tumhe apne saath lejana chahte hai, tum meri zindagi ho Pratigya, tumhare Nitin.

The scrunched up the letter and threw it in the bin.

Pratigya: Shakti bhai to yeh baat kuch aur he bana diya mujhe abhi Krishna ko puri baat batadene chaiye, warna shakti bhai kuch bhi bol sakte hai aur Krishna ke mann mein mere liye' she was thinking what she should do.

Pratigya: Lekhen Nitin akher esa kar kyu raha? She questioned herself.


Her phone beeped in anger she took it.

It said

'Ese khat to hum roz bhej sakte hai.'.

Pratigya smsed him back.  'Akher tum chahte kya ho?  she got her reply she read it.

Nitin's sms read : tum


Promo:

voice over: Kal dhekiye


voice over: kya hoga jab

car comes and stops.

Voice over: Pratigya

1st shot:Pratigya comes out of a car.

Voice over: Aur Nitin

2nd shot: Nitin face.  

3rd shot close up of Pratigya in pink sari.

voice over :Ka

Pratigya: Hum sirf esliye aye taki tumko baata de hume phone karna , khat bhejna baad kijiye! She said angrily.

4th shot close up of  Nitin

Nitin: Mein  esa kyu karu?

5th shot close up of  Pratigya

Praitgya: Tum bahut sharif the,ache the.

6th shot: Nitin looks up then at her.

Nitin: kaun accha bana chahta hai, Krishna?

7th shot:Pratigya looks worried.

voice over: Amna samna.

8th shot: Pratigya & Nitin standing face to face. fade to black.

end of promo


Tbc


Edited by Khushi96 - 18 December 2012 at 6:16pm

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