Pratigya

FF:Kriya ki prem ki nishani part 49 pg77 - Page 23

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parked car and fell a sleep and btw i put a guide on first page as you requested so you can see if you have read all parts or missed any, they can be found here 😊

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nice update...

but i didn't like the nitin-prats convo...who is he to whom prats giving justification of her love & realtionship with her husband krishna...
Nitin himself broke the marrige with prats than prats whether willingly or not marry krishna is nobody's matter...is her life what she want to do...Prats is not doing right...afterall we hv seen that Krishna has now grown up enough to understand what Prats wants...So she should told  everything to krishna & nitin's wife...before its too late...

in middle of the road...how can any woman just slept...how she can be so careless,clumpsy...this is not the nature of Pratigya...

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True but without P's bashan it wouldn't  be her  😉
and true she don't need to give anyone a long explanation to anybody about her love for Krishna but Nitin can't understand unless he hear's it all from her, he is a lose canon so that's why  i made pratigya explain to him so he get's through his thick skull .

she parked the car then fell asleep, not middle of the road exactly, since her baby's been born, she is much more exhausted hence fell asleep in her car.
my pov 😛

and long drive, whilst baby at home, family,is it her nature to put herself before anyone 😊


long drive.


 
 well if she could fall asleep unmindful of the baby at home , she could definitely go for a long drive with her husband she loves so much ...as u said she puts her husband n kid before herself 😃
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parked car and fell a sleep and btw i put a guide on first page as you requested so you can see if you have read all parts or missed any, they can be found here 😊


thanks...i just checked that i hvn't missed any part..but becx of that guide i again read all the part again...thankooo...😃
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caught some previous parts this nitin behooda 😡 finally closed his chapter other wise baba closed his chapter in his style 😊 now waiting for romantic long drive 😳
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Part 19

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Krishna: Babu ab tak ne aye?.. he thought it had been 3 hrs since he had gotten  home and Pratigya wasn' home nor was she answering her phone, he couldn't eat dinner without knowing where she was. Kesar was looking after his daughter in their room whilsts waiting for Pratigya.

Shakti: eh Baba ka bhava? Said his brother sitting right across him. Krishna looked up

Krishna: Kuch ne tumo khanna kavo. He didn't bother telling Shakti he knows he will not understand and make her absence something else. Shakti couldn't be bothered and left his brother to his thoughts.  Amma came to the table and noticed her younger son not eating his dinner.

Samar: Chachu maa kaha hai?

Krishna: Abhi aajayege tumo khana kao. Amma came by to give more roti.

Amma: eh baba tum khanna kao, aur Partigya kaha hai, just then Krishna's phone rang.  He got up before answering it.

Krishna: Aree babu tum kaha par ho yaar, pata hai kitne baje?

Pratigya: Krishna humari gaadi raaste mein kharab hoge esliye der hogaye aur..

Krishna: kono baat ne babu humo abhi poach re hai tumo tensionavo maat, kaha par ho?

Pratigya: woh raasta court ke peeche wali, jaldi ana Krishna.

Krishna: Abhi nikal te hai babu.  Then he hung up.  Ghantilal was sitting on the sofa observing her grandson's face.

Ghantilala:  Baba khanna thanda hojaye, tumo kaha jare ho? She asked as she saw him heading towards the front door.

Krishna: Ghantilal humo babu ko lene jare, abhi ate hai, bhaujaye ko batado humri gudiya ka khayal rakhe humo bas abhi ate hai.

Amma: Aree baba said Amma but Krishna was out of the house like the speed of light.

Amma: Kaha jara hai? She asked to Ghantilal.

Ghantilal, bolra tha partigya ko lene. They exchanged confused looks.

(SS theme plays)

SS: Sab rasam tod re hai ee kisnabahu, humne mana kiya tha baba ko ke kisnabahu ko baar jane ki kono zaroorat nena, lekhen oo saala apne meraroor ke palu mein chipka rete hai behooda. He sighed. Then got up from the table and went over to women of the house.

SS: Thakuraniya, chodo ee sab, suno kal babuwa ka bitya ka naam karan hai aur professior ke parivaar sab ayenge aur humo gurumaa ko bhi bulaya hai, lekhen kisnabahu ko kene ki kono zaroraat ne hai, samjho ki ne?


NEAR COURT ROAD

Pratigya looked at her watch it had been half an hour since she had rang Krishna and it was already dark outside. She tried to start the car again, but it was no use a few minutes later she saw a siloutte on a motor cyle, she could make out it was Krishna, she was relieved when she saw him park up as it was dark and many strange people had walked passed her car giving her a weird look luckily no one tried to make conversation.  She opened the car door and came out of the car she was happy to see her husband, he came towards her.

Pratigya: Krishna tum. She managed to hold his hand, glad to see him she wanted to express how glad she was by giving him a hug  but Krishna was so focused on getting the car fixed, he brushed her off unknowingly.

Krishna: Ne babu tumo gaadi mein raho, humo dhekhte hai ke ka bhava, tumo thak gaye hogi,

Pratigya: Aree.

Krishna:  Ne babu wapas gaadi humo chalenge, tum phikar maat karo. he opened the car door to the passenger's side and sat her down, shut the door, then opended the car bonnet.

Pratigya: theek hai. She said to herself, she observed him as he was fixing the car he had the expression of seriousness mixed with confusion at the same time, she found him cute when he was like that, a smile adorned her face as she looked at mr handle man at work. Fiftee minutes had passed and Krishna was still fixing the car, Pratigya was losing her patience, twice she tried to get his attention but he waved her off that he was busy. Finally she came out of the car, Krishna's head was still in the car bonnet.

Krishna: Accha aur ee yaha.. ab hogava, he smiled at the satifaction of fixing the car, Just as he was finishing off he felt nice soft  hands wrap around his waist, and resting on his tummy.

Krishna: Babu?


Pratigya: Hmm?

Krishina: Tumo ee ka karbo?, tumo humka ese chu ti ho to humka shareer mein garami ajati hai. Pratigya smiled at his answer.

Pratigya: Accha she whispered, then arched her head and nuzzled his nape and then kissed him.

Pratigya:  Ab kya hota hai?  She whispered.

Krishna: Babu. Babu, yaha kono dheklega.

Pratigya: sunsaan jagya hai, koi nai ayega.

Krishna: Eko kaam karte hai, gaadi mein chalo.

Pratigya: haa, they let go off each other, and made their way into the car and shut the door, then shared a eye lock.

Krishna:   Ek minute hum gaadi check karte hai. Pratigya nodded in agreement.

Krishna put the key in the car ignition.

Krishna: Shabash beta. They both smiled relieved that they had a lift home now. Then Krishna took the key out, and looked over at his babu.  He put his hand on hers.

Krishna: Babu chalo long drive par chalte hai.

Pratigya: Abhi Krishna? 




Krishna: Haan kyu ne?

Pratigya: Aaj nai Krishna

Krishna: Kyu ne?

Pratgiya: Aree Krishna aath baje ne wale hai aur ghar wale sab pata haina kese hai, tumri laadi ko dodh bhi pelana hai, kal ki tayri bhi karni hai,hum koi aur waqt chalenge.

Krishna: Tum bhi na babu, waha bahar humka chu ke, tumri nazdik bulre the, aur yaha sherni bili ban gaye?, hum bahar he acche the.. Pratigya just smiled shly looking down..


Krishna thought had they just stayed outside then Pratigya would still be in a romantic mood now she is all in serious mode again.

Krishna: Kono baat ne, hum humra badla le kar he rahenge. He shot her a naughty look.

Pratigya: Theek hai thakur saab hume manzoor hai, ab chale?

Krishna: Hmm aur kar bhi ka sakte.  She felt bad but in a funny way she held his hand as they drove off the road.   

Within 1hr  45 mins later they reached tn, Krishna parked the car, they both came out of it and walked towards the haveli.

Pratigya: Aree Krisha tumhari bike to waha par regaye.

Krishna: Kono baat ne hum abhi chandwa ko kete hai woh le ayege subha.

Pratigya: theek hai.

They both entered tn, Sajjan, amma and ghantilal were sitting there discussing.

SS: Kal aree hai guruma, sab tyare acche se karbo thakurainya. Pratigya didn't look impress upon hearing that.

SS: Eh baba tumo khana kao bina chalbo, aur kisnababu ka par thi pura din nikal gaye  humri poti akele ghar par aur tumri biwi ghum re thi?! Pratigya and Krishna looked at each other and then back at SS.

Pratigya: Gurumaa are hai?

SS: Haa, woh sab chodo pehle ee baato tum pura din kaha thi kisnabahu?

Krishna: Ka bauji,court par thi, aur phir gaadi kharab hogaye to hum lene gaye bas.

Pratigya: Maaf karna bauji lekhen hum nai chahte ke gurumaa humari bacchii ka naam karan mein shamil ho!

SS: baba, baba samjao apne mehraroor ko!.. Pratigya didn't meet his eyes she looked down.

SS: bado ke saath zaban lada rahi hai ee!

Krishna: To isme galat ka bolre hai. SS shot Krishna a stern look.

Pratigya: Hum apka apmaan nahi kare hai bauji, apki haar baat sunte aye hai, Samar ke sagi ma to nai hai tab ap ne bahut sunaya hume, lekhen humri beti ki baat ati hai to bauji hume jo galat lagta hai use virrudh hum bolenge.

SS was furious at Pratigya, before he could say anything, Kesar came into the hall with a crying gudiya in her arms.

Kesar: Partigya jaldi avo tumri betiyaa ka bahute bhookh lagi hai.

Krishna: Babu tumo gudiya ka doodh pila do humo kuch karte hai.  She nodded to Krishna then left from the area.

Pratigya took her baby in her arms.

Pratigya: ne ne beta, dekho mummy agaye, na abhi jaldi doo doo dete hai she said as she carried her to their room.

Amma:   ee sab baad mein baat karlo, abhi baba ne kuch khaya nahi.

SS: Ee thankurainya, beech mein maat pado, baba ko samjado kisnabahu ke mann mani nahi chalnedenge hum beta! nai chalnedenge.

Krishna:  Theek hai to humri baat be suno hum bhi ne chahe ke gurumaa aye, ka karbo?

SS: Aree baba ka bolre tum, gurumaa ne kya kya nai kiya ess parivaar ke liye, sab ke naam karan mein aye thi, apan shakti, komaliya aur tumra.

Krishna: Hum ne chahte hai bas, aur kya accha kiya gurumaa ne?, partigya ko kitni thakhalif jal ne padi bacchii ke liye, oo guruji ayethe ka bol ke gaye tumo bhool gaye? Bol kar gaye ke humri kono santan ne hogi, aur humri betiyaa to ahe gai, , sab andvishwas hai aur kuch ne, aur hum nai chahte ke humri laadi ke saath kuch bura hojaye, eeliye tumo gurumaa ko mana karbo bas.

SS: Ka bolre abe, tumri betiyaa humka kuch nai lagti?

Krishna: Poti hai,aur tum unke zindagi mein shamil ho sirf Partigya ke waja se, tumo to sab bhool gay ke ka dhajya udai thi humri biwi  ka court mein, lekhen Pratigya ne tumka maaf kardiya eeliye hum eeya hai, nai kiya tha to humo yaha se kab tak bahut dor chale jati aur tumri potti ka mu tak nai dikha te.

Ghantilal: Baba, ese bolra hai tum apan baap ke saath!

SS: Theek to bolra hai baba, hume kisnabahu ke saath galat kiya tha, aur baba humka ee baat kabhi bholne ne denge.

Amma: Kal accha din hai, tum sab jagarna chod do, suno Pratigya nai chate to gurumaa ko mana kardo. 

SS: Ka bakwas bol re jare behoodi.

Krishna: Dekho esa hai, khushi khushi rehena hai to sab ki baat sune padegi. SS exchanged a glance with his wife, after a few minutes he opened his mouth.

SS: Theek hai kal gurumaa naam karan ke liye nai ayegi, phir bhi beta ee ghar ke malik hum hai aur gurumaa humre dwaar par ane ki ijaazat hume kisi ni nai chaiye, kal ke liye bas nai ayege.

SS walked off took the phone and sat back down. Krishna was relieved, atleast gurumaa will not be coming and him and Pratigya can have a peaceful naming ceremony without view clash.

Amma: Chalo baba khanna lagate hai tumra.

Krishna: Hum Partigya ko dekh ke ate.

Kesar: Baba tumo khalo Partigya bachi ka doodh pelare hai aur unka khanna humne Pesiya ke saath bejwa diya, tumo khalo phir unke pas jao.

Krishna: Accha khale te hai, Krishna sat down to eat but he wanted to tell Pratigya gurumaa isn't coming so she doesn't worry about it.

Pratigya finished eating her dinner, then attended to gudiya again who was hungry for more milk. Pratigya took her and placed her on her lap and began feeding her.


TN HALL

Amma: accha baba ee batao tumri gaadi theek hogaye?

Krishna: Haa amma, humo fix kar ke aye, aur ha bhool gaye abhi chandwa ka phone karna hai,humri phat phatya to waha he re gai. he took his phone out of his pocket and dialled his number.

Amma: Accha baba.

Ghantilal: Sarjanbahu kal ke liye sab tyari hogava, kuch re ne gaya?

Amma went over to ghantilal and they spoke about what preparations were done and what had to be done, shortly Pesiya and Kesar joined them.


KRIYA ROOM

Pratigya: Sorry beta aaj mummy ko der ho gaye aur humrari gudiya ko zor se bhookh lagi thi naa?  She kissed her on the forehead. "Ab peht bhar gaya? to ab nini nai karne hai?" hmm? She smiled at her baby. Aur kal pata hai kya hai, tumhara naam karan, haa aur kal sab tumko milne ayenge, papa, komal bua, Arushi masi, dadi sab log, kyunki sab tumko bahut pyar karte hai.  The baby made an expression like  she understood



Pratigya smiled at her daughter's cutie expressions, then kissed her cheek.

Krishna: Ee ka chalra hai maa beti ke beech humo bhi dekhte hai.  Pratigya smiled when she saw Krishna.

Pratigya: Tumne khanna khaya?

Krishna: Haa khaya, aur babu tumo gurumaa ki ane ki chinta chodo, woh abhi ne are hai aur. A knock came at the door.

Krishna went to open it,

Krishna: Amma  kucho bhava?

Amma: Nai baba, hum Partigya ko mile ne aye. As Pratigya heard she  got up from the bed with gudiya in her arms.

Pratigya: Amma sab kuch theek hai? bahar kyu ho avo na andar.

Amma: Haa theek hai, bas hum tumko yeh dene aye, tumri liye kapde aur humri potti ke liye bhi, she placed it on the bed.

Pratigya: Krishna ese lo. Pratigya sat down on the bed with Amma and looked through the clothes.

Pratigya: Aree yeh kitna pyara hai. She smiled picking up alittle red outfit.  

Amma: Haa komaliya ka hai, hum chahte hai ke esi kal humri potti pene.

Pratigya: Haa kyu nai, dekho Krisha yeh kitna pyara hai. She showed him.

Krishna: Bahut accha hai amma, kal isme gajhab lagegi humri laadli.

Amma: 'Haa' amma smiled, 'Aur bahuriya yeh tumri liye'.  Pratigya looked at it.

Amma: Kal tum ese pehno gi, yeh na baba ke naam karan mein hume pehna tha.

Pratigya: Bahut sundoor hai, aur bhari bhi, Pratigya looked at the outfit in detail.

Krishna: Babu tumo ee pehno gi to thakuraiyan lago gi. Amma and Pratigya exchanged smiles.

Pratigya: Accha hum kal pehnege.

Amma: Aur yeh zevar bhi eske saath lo. Pratigya took it from her and placed it on one side of the bed.  Accha ab tum duno jalde se sojao, kal jaldi uthna hai. She walked over to Krishna and he gave her gudiya.

Amma: Haa jaldi uthna hai kyuki kal tumra naam karan hai.. ha aur tumri sundar sundar kapde pena hai. Gudiya smiled and in her happiness her parents smiled, Pratigya and Krishna exchanged a smile at each other.

Amma: Accha ab hum sone jare, aur tumo tumri amma & bauji ko sone do. She said to her granddaughter then kissed her and gave her back to Pratigya.

Pratigya: Accha amma severe milte hai.

Krishna: bauji theek hai na ee sab.

Amma: Haa tum chinta ne karo baba. she smiled and left their room   Krishna shut the door.  He turned around and saw Pratigya admiring their baby she  looked up from her daughter to her husband and met his eyes.

Pratigya: Aao Krishna thodi der hum humari pyari se duniya ke saath waqt betate hai.

Krishna: Haa babu, Krisha came and sat next to her and she learned her head on his shoulder.

Pratigya: Dekho kitni pyari hai humari pyar ki nishani


Krishna: Humri choti Pratigya, ee to jagre hai.

Pratigya: Haa nend nai are, Accha Krishna gurumaa ke baat bauji sach mein theek hai?

Krishna: Haa babu, humne samjha diya ke tumri baat bhi maine rakhte hai aur phir samaj mein agava ke hum aur tum ne chahte ke gurumaa aye.

Pratigya: Thank you Krishna

Krishna: Aree babu tumo ke liye humo kuch bhi karsakte hai, aur humka bhi ne chaiye ke gurumaa aye, ee sab bhavala mein ne pad na chahte okre saath, she looked up and smiled at her husband, Pratigya shut her eyes in delight as she felt his lips upon her temple, Krishna can be so affectionate it  was a great feeling to feel number on his list , always put first, cared for loved, Krishna was everything one would want in a companion.  

Pratigya: dekho ise nend are hai, abhi sojayegi.  She leaned her head more on Krishna and relaxed. Krishna felt happy at this present moment he had his babu in his arms and their beautiful baby life couldn't any better and tomorrow the whole family were going to celebrate her name ceremony.

Pre-cap

Naming ceremony.

Pratigya: Panditji humne naam chuna hai iska.

Krishna: Haa aur rashi mein bhi hai.

Panditji: Haa kya naam hai is kaniya ka?

 

 Tbc

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great read... enjoyed thoroughly... thanx khushi dear... the work u did with the snaps n creations... all great... hats off!!!!!!!!👏
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It,s beautiful dear and enjoyed the update much much 😛
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