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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update😳,,,,emotional ,,,,liked itπŸ‘πŸΌ
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wowww i,m loving it dear soo touchy β€οΈ
Update next soon plzz πŸ€—
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Posted: 11 years ago
simply just luv it...
Why Pratigya is hiding it from krishna...if she get opportunity than why not she told him everything  about Nitin...
i think Krishna is so caring that he has not shown but he sense it that something is there which is troubling his Babu...
i m so curious to know what will happen next...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 18

Outside TN

It was around 3pm and Krishna was going work late today as he didn't really need to be there for too long.  She told Krishna she urgently needed to go court for some paper work at 3:30pm, they were both leaving the house.

Krishna: Babu pate ne humra phone kaha gum hogava, ee spare ka phone tum jo diyo ee number hai tumri paas?

Pratigya: Haa Krishna hai, tum chinta maat karo tumhara phone yehe kahe ghar pe hoga. She felt bad that she had to hide his phone but she couldn't risk him getting calls from Nitin and making the matter worse as she wanted to end it today once and for all.

Krishna: Acha babu tumo court zaroori kam ke liye jana hai aliye jaane dere tumka, abhi tumo jalde jabo phir ghar abo aur tumo arram karlo.  

Pratigya: Hum bilkul theek hai tum parishan maat ho, bas hum baachi didi aur pesiya ke saath chod re hai pehli baar na , pata nai mann nai lagra use chod ke.

Krishna: Haa babu mann humra bhi ne lagra.

Pratigya: Par didi aur pesiya accha khyal rakhegi to parishani ki koi sawal bhi nai uthta.  Even though it was for only a few hours Pratigya had become attach to her baby, leaving her for a few hours  felt difficult.

Krishna: Haa babu, esa karte hai hum tumo co-urt chod ate hai hmm. Pratigya panicked she didn't need to even go court it was a white lie.

Pratigya: Nai Krishna theek hai hum chale jayenge.   Pratigya gave him a quick hug then waved him bye as she went towards  her car.

Krishna: tumri marzi, humo to humra babu hamesha humri paas hi chaye bas. he caught her by surprise as he spinned her around and hugged her.


Pratigya giggled and hugged her husband back, she shut her eyes as she rested her head on his shoulder for a few seconds.

Pratigya: Pata hai Krishna tumhari baho mein rahat mil.. she opened her eyes and saw the house guards staring at them. She felt embarrassed and quickly let Krishna go.

Pratigya: tumko der nai hore?

Krishna: Ka bhava babu tumo humka? She hinted to them that they weren't alone. He wasn't getting it.

Krishna: Ka?


Pratigya: ghar ke watchmen sab hai. She whispered to him.

Krishna: to ka babu ghar wale to sab hai.. he came closer to her.

Pratigya: deht she moved away.

Krishna: Acha ghar pe milte hai.  He winked embarrassing her.

Pratigya: Haa Krishna bye.. she quickly went into the car, and he went on his bike.

Pratigya was driving for a while, the place Nitin wanted to meet her was secluded and away from the public eye.

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Pratigya had been stuck in traffic for almost 2 hrs, she finally came to where she needed. Pratigya came out out of the car and shut the door as she saw Nitin, she walked up to him, but kept a fair distance.

Pratigya: Bolo kyu milna hai humse?  She asked him directly

Nitin:  To tum ahi gai

Pratigya: Ana to pada, koi aur raasta to nai choda tumne. 

Nitin: Ha woh to hai. He laughed. Pratigya's  anger was slowly kicking in.

Pratigya: Dekho hum sirf esliye aye taki tumko baata de hume phone karna , khat bhejna aur humari pati ke phone par voice message ,video yeh sab band kardo  She said angrily.

Nitin: Mein esa kyu karu?

Pratigya: Kyu? kyu ka kya matlab? tumne to kaha tha ke hum  milne ayenge to tum..

Nitin: Haa esa kuch kaha tha, lekhen tum mujhe baar baar ese chori chupke milne ati reheti ho to.

Pratigya: Kya hogaya tumse Nitin, tum bahut sharif the,ache the.

Nitin: kaun accha bana chahta hai? acha bane se kuch nai milta. He turned away from her.

Pratigya: Dekho Nitin tum yeh sab kyu kare ho mere samaj mein kucch bhi nai ara hai, aur.

Nitin: Kyu, ka kya matlab, are panch saal pehle shaadi hone wali thi humari, aur tum woh.. Krishna, woh thakur ke pyar mein pad gai, masak banaya hamare pyar ka tum dono ne.

Pratigya: Dekho Nitin esa kuch..

Nitin: Kyu kiya esa, meine to hum dono ke saath saath hone ki sapne dekhe.. aur tum woh gunda ke pyar mein andhi hogaye, sab ka, khud ka parivaar ka mazak bana diya.

Pratigya: Mere baat suno, pehle esa kuch nai tha Nitin! Hum Krishna se pyar nahi karte the..  Nitin face turned to confusion.

Nitin: Matlab kya?, tum yeh sab kyu bolre ho? Pratigya looked down.

Nitin: sab malum hai, itne asani se hum yeh baat nai jana denge.

Pratigya:  Tum sach jana chahte ho? She crossed her arms 'to suno, Krishna aur mere beech mein esa kuch nai tha, shaadi to mere papa ne tumhare saath he te ki thi, aur mein tyaar bhi hogaye thi, lekhen shayad niyati ko yeh sab manzoor nai thi, aur mere shaadi zabarzasti Krishna ke saat hogaye.

Nitin: To tum Krishna ke saath kush nai ho? Now Pratigya just realised how what she said sounded like,like  she wasn't' happen with Krishna at present.

Nitin: Mujhe pata tha esa hi kuch hoga he came closer to her, she took a step back.

Pratigya: Nai tum galat matlab nikal re ho. She put her hand out in front to stop him in his tracks.

Nitin: Koi esa Krishna jese gunde ke pyar mein kaun bhala pad sakte hai.

Pratigya: Hum! hum pad sakte hai! aur pad chuke hai! Nitin shot Pratigya a look of disbelief

Pratigya: Haa Nitin, pehle meine Krishna ko pyar nahi kiya, yeh sach hai!  Lekhen humari beech mein pyar jesa kuch bhi nai tha, meine tum se pyar kabhi nai kiya! Haa kiya hai to sirf Krishna se woh he hai, humara sab kuch hai, humari jaan hai woh, humara sab kuch hai woh, mein Krishna se bahut pyar karte hoon. Nitin became silent.

Nitin: Lekhen woh beech mein nahi ate to hum dono..

Pratigya: Esa soch ne se kuch nai hoga, mere taraf se to nai, mera dil Krishna se jur chukka  hai, aur hamesha ke liye hum unke rehenge, aur tum yeh sab bhool jao.Hume bhool jao.

Nitin: Bhool jao? Pratigya mein tumko bhool nai sakta, aur tum aur Krishna ka dhaga itna mazboot hai to bata kyu nai dete, ese chori chupke milne kyu ati? Kyuki Krishna ke chache kaan hai, ek bar to nikal diya tha? Pratigya looked up at him.

Pratigya: yeh sab..



Nitin: kese pata hai hume?, yeh bho pata hai woh Meneka, shakti ki dusri aurat ne sab ko beghar kar diya aur  tumhara aur woh thakur ke bacche ka pehla bacha abhi panch saal baad aya koi parishani?.. Aur Krishna ne tumhara bhai ka khoon kar diya, tumari saasu ma ne Krishna ki dusri shaadi..  Haa Pratigya humko sab kuch malum hai! Pratigya was shocked how did Nitin know everything about her life till now. 

Pratigya: Nitin panch saal beet chuke aur tumhare pass ek biwi Prena aur baccha bhi hai. Nitin didn't make any eye contact and Pratigya sensed nothing seemed to be getting through only hard hitting facts were the way.  

Pratigya: Aur jo tum chahte ho woh kabhi nai hoga! Krishna ne kisi ka khoon nai kiya yeh sab galata hai, aur tum hume ese roz parishan karte renge to tum sirf humari taraf se nafrat he pao ge! Pratigya sirf Krishna ki hai! Esliye tum yeh sab chodo, kyunki mere mann mein tumhare liye esa kuch nai tha aur na kabhi hoga, samjhe tum.  Nitin didn't say a word he was silent, it was an awkward silence, and Pratigya was looking around, then she looked at  her phone then up at him again, hoping he would say something sensible.

Nitin: Nafrat to nai chahta, tumko parishan nai karenge,


he took his phone and walked pass her, Pratigya was confused by his behaviour, but didn't say anything. She saw his car drive off, she didn't know what it meant but hoped this was the end of Nitin chapter. Pratigya got into the car and shut the door, she drove a little then parked her and pondered on her thoughts.

Pratigya: Kya hum ye sab baat Krishna ko baata de?, nai unka gussa , woh gussa ho ke Nitin ko kuch karna behte, phir sal akho ke peeche, aur humari baache , nai nai pratigya Krishna ko kuch maat batana, Nitin to abhi chala gaya to abhi ke ne se kya fayda hoga, Pratigya's mind was going into overdrive, she began to shut her eyes and fell asleep in a deep slumber. Theee hrs passed and  Pratigya yawned, then rubbed her eyes,she looked outside her car window it was almost dark.

Pratigya: Aree, mere aankh lagaye, kitne baje, she took her phone out to see.

Pratigya: Aree itne deer ke liye hum sogaye?, she adjusted her hair in the mirror. Mein jalde nikal ti hoon, baachi ka feed aur ghar walo... she put the key in the ignition but it didn't start.  First of all she was late and now the car won't start.


Pre-cap

Krishna: Babu chalo long drive par chalte hai.

Pratigya: Abhi Krishna?

Krishna: Haan kyu ne?

TBC


so should pratigya go on long drive with krishna πŸ˜‰ or they should go home now they are parents. Should pratigya tell Krishna about Nitin?




Edited by Khushi96 - 11 years ago
Snehal21 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow nice partπŸ‘πŸΌ
did nitin's chp ended hereπŸ˜• ,,,,,,,precap seems interesting😳
do update nxt part soon!!πŸ˜›
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update
Y P should tell K her conversation with N
For happy married life Communication is d best policy.
Wait for Jaldi update.πŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update...
but i didn't like the nitin-prats convo...who is he to whom prats giving justification of her love & realtionship with her husband krishna...
Nitin himself broke the marrige with prats than prats whether willingly or not marry krishna is nobody's matter...is her life what she want to do...Prats is not doing right...afterall we hv seen that Krishna has now grown up enough to understand what Prats wants...So she should told  everything to krishna & nitin's wife...before its too late...

in middle of the road...how can any woman just slept...how she can be so careless,clumpsy...this is not the nature of Pratigya...
Edited by simmi.friends03 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hmmm    nice update ...barring 2 points

                  firstly i don't think Pratigya would ever give such a long explanation to anybody about her love to Krishna ...  n Pratigya, falling asleep in the middle of the road is even more difficult to digest πŸ˜•

                          just my POV 😳  

              waiting for KriYa long drive πŸ˜ƒ
Edited by dhakarn - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hmmm nice update 😊
And they shld go on long drive and in that pratigya shld tell to krish everything πŸ‘πŸΌ
Waiting for next dear πŸ˜›
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Posted: 11 years ago

True but without P's bashan it wouldn't  be her  πŸ˜‰
and true she don't need to give anyone a long explanation to anybody about her love for Krishna but Nitin can't understand unless he hear's it all from her, he is a lose canon so that's why  i made pratigya explain to him so he get's through his thick skull .

she parked the car then fell asleep, not middle of the road exactly, since her baby's been born, she is much more exhausted hence fell asleep in her car.
my pov πŸ˜›

and long drive, whilst baby at home, family,is it her nature to put herself before anyone 😊


long drive.


Originally posted by: dhakarn

hmmm    nice update ...barring 2 points

                  firstly i don't think Pratigya would ever give such a long explanation to anybody about her love to Krishna ...  n Pratigya, falling asleep in the middle of the road is even more difficult to digest πŸ˜•

                          just my POV 😳  

              waiting for KriYa long drive πŸ˜ƒ