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FF:Kriya ki prem ki nishani part 49 pg77 - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago
just caught last 2 parts u r really fabulous writer👏 all the parts r so lovely pls update soon N who the hell is that mysterious guy jsine Pratigya Krishna Singh ko pareshan kar diya hai😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update...
wow u did gr8 editing in kriya's pic...add kriya's baby in it...fantastic......
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Posted: 11 years ago

Promo:

Krishna:Babu hume bahut hi khush hai tumo maike ne gai. Pratigya smiles and they hug.

Voice Over: Lekhen yeh khushi kab tak rahegi.

next shot: Pratigya walking in a dark blue sari somewhere outside not near tn she has gudiya in her arms. Its daylight.

Next shot someone walking behind her. fade in

End of promo.

 

Edited by Khushi96 - 11 years ago
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Wowww lovely suspense mix promo waiting for update 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
suspense promo,,,,,smthng going 2 b wrong🤔😕
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Thanks for commenting those who are reading it inspires me to continue😊 i hope all are liking the fanart i'm trying to show Kriya and baby as real as i can


Part 9

Kriya room

Krishna: Haan chandva..hum abhi poach te hai.. he cut the call.

Pratigya comes out of the bathroom after giving gudiya a bath she looked at Krishna as she saw him looking puzzled.

Pratigya: kiska phone tha? 


She said laying gudiya on the bed and begin to get diaper from the bag.   

Pratgiya: eek minute babu humre pass avo ..  he said pulling her towards him.

Pratigya:Aree bacchi ko tyaar karna hai kya kare ho. 


(This is my imagination of Kriya bedroom after baby born makeover of room 😛)



Krishna: Haan sun bo humo.. Pratigya's mobile rings.  

Pratigya: eek minute Krishna. Hello.. hmm' Pratigya started putting diaper on the baby... Krishna came on the bed and sat next to her.. he squeeze gudiya's face gently and she smiled at him. Pratigya smiled at him it was a cute moment, even though she was on the phone she was watching papa and beti bonding, she too caressed the baby's hand and shared a smile with Krishna.

Pratigya: Kitne baje?.. haan hum aajange. She then cut the call. Then held gudiya's little arms and kissed them.

Krishna: Babu kono phone tha?.. he said picking up gudiya.

Pratigya: Eek muinute Krishna use kapde pene do.. varna thadh lagjayegi, phir tum khelo unke saath.  She said taking her back.

Pratigya: doctor ka phone tha, bacchi ka regular check up aaj, baara baje hai.

Krishna: Babu aaj tumo akele jabo ka?  Pratgiya finished dressing gudiya up and handed her to Krishna.

Pratigya: Kyu Krishna.? She got up and began to put baby's lotion and other accessories away.

Pratigya: abhi to tum kere the ke tum malik ho aur baar baar restaurant jane ki koi zaroorat nai hai!

Krishna: Babu.. he put gudiya on the bed again and began  following her,

 

 Pratigya went towards the bed she adjusted the sheets ignoring him on purpose.

Krishna: Ee sab chodo aur humri baat suno Hum ana chate hai, lekhen aaj restaurant mein..


Pratigya: Hume kuch nai suna chahte hai, hum akele jare hai..

Krishna: Aree ka babu humri baat to sun bo aaj restaurant ka uu ka kete inspection hai, aur chandwa kere the uu logan humo milna chahte hai, aur waha mumbai mein Abhishekwa baatyare waha bhi inspection chalra hai.

Pratigya: Sahi bole Chandu bhaiya restarunt jana important hai, aur hamare dono restaurant ache chalre hai yaha tum aur waha Abhishek sambhal re hai. Bas aadat hoge tumhare saath har waqt rene ki.


Krishna: Aree babu humo haar waqt to tumri saath hamesha honge, hum jald restaurant chal jate hai aur baad mein tume lekar jaate doctor ke pass.

Pratigya: Nai Krishna koi baat nai hum chale jayenge.

Krishna: Ne ne babu hum tumo le kar jayenge, humri bacchii ka pehla appaintment hai to hum ayenge, he picked gudiya kissed her cheek and gave her to Pratigya.  

Pratigya: Theek hai Krishna hum tumhara interzaar karenge. She smiled.  Krishna kissed her cheek.

Pratigya: Krishna baachi jagre hai thoda to lehas karo..

Krishna: Krishna Singh Thakur ki bacchi hai, eeka pata hai unke baap apne matari se kitna pyar karte hai, esliye ee uu tharaf dekhe re hai. Pratigya laughed.

Pratigya: Krishna tum bhi na, use ye sab kese pata chalega kitni chotti hai abhi.


 

Krishna: Ka theek to kare hai hum, eeka dekho humre taraf ne dekhre hai, unko pata hai unke amma aur papa ka distub ne karna chahye... he said pulling her by the waist close to him. Pratigya pulled away.

Pratgiya: aree tumko der nai hore hai?.. tum ab jao baad mein milte hai.

Krishna: Haan jalde nikal te hai..tumo tyaar rena humo jald ate hai tume lene

Pratigya: Theek hai Krishna..  Krishna took jacket and his phone kissed gudiya goodbye and gave his wife a quick hug and exited the room.

Pratigya stood holding gudiya.

Pratigya: Tumhare papa bilkul pagal hai' she smiled to herself

lekhen tumhare maa ise bahut bahut bahut pyar karte hai, aur tum to ho humare prem ki nishani .. she said hugging her, aree yeh so gay ise palne mein sulate hai. She gently laid gudiya in the palna. Gudiya stirred a little Pratigya began to rock the palna gently gudiya fell asleep she looked at her baby closely she looked like Krishna when she slept that same expression she smiled to herself.

Pratigya: Bilkul Krishna jaise lagte hai, Kisi ki nazar na lage humari rajkumari ko.  She wiped a little of her eye liner and pressed her finger on gudiya's cheek.


Kesar entered the room.

Kesar: Ee lo Partigya tumra kahna. She came in with a tray.  Pratigya got up from the floor and walked towards the bed. 

Pratigya: Thanks didi, marf kijeye hum tumhare madat kitchen mein abhi nai kar sakte.

Kesar: Kono baat nai, tumo abhi aaram karo bas she smiled and so did Pratigya Kesar was being really helpful.

Pratigya: Didi ek baat pooche?

Kesar: Haan kono parisani hain ka?

Pratigya: um Samar ke janam ke baad tum.. mera matlab dard.tum poori tara se theek kab hui?

Kesar: char hafte, eko maine ki baad kyu?

Pratigya: bas hum..kuch nai bas esi he. Kesar saw her get shy.

Kesar: tumo baba ko tumri nasdeek abhi ne ane de..  red. 

Pratigya: kyu?

Kesar: abhi tumo ane degi to tumo thoda dard hoga aur maza bilkul ne ayega.
Pratigya went a little red Kesar was being really open.

Pratigya: acch-a theek.. theek hai.. Pratigya blushed.

Kesar: Leken Partigya char hafte babe ke liye zyada same hoga.

Pratigy: Didi bas.. she said shyly looking down , and Kesar laughed.

Tbc😊

 

 

Will Krishna come on time?

Will Pratigya go to check up of gudiya alone without him?

Who is that stranger you will find out in the next part.



so did you all like this part and Kriya's room makeover after baby born? 😛

Edited by Khushi96 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
WoW, fanart was too gud n very real... Great going darls... Thank u for ur precious tym n work... Muahs❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
its wnderful dear..splyy editing with pics,,👏everything looks soo reall...👏
pls give us dalily dose f it,,cud be small update plss😳

nd thanks fr cheering us up,,😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow awesome,,,,👏 
liked d makeover of d room,,,u did a fantastic job👍🏼 editing d pic,,just great yar,,,⭐️🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks all glad you like it :)