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Mr.& Mrs. RAWTE ch9 pg26 5/1 (Page 10)

elle.. Goldie

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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 6:42pm | IP Logged
Omg...what did i just read...i m still in a trance...this was completrly unexpected...but m luvin it..update soon

Geeta.R Senior Member

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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 4:47am | IP Logged
A very well written update... Please do continue x
Sneha113 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 02 December 2012 at 2:28pm | IP Logged

ye rk kaha se tapak gyaROFL

dono attitude walo k bich jungROFL

bas ho gya kya kya bol rahe ho tumAngry

bittuji k pas jake soo jaoROFL

huh!!!it was rude and mannerless rk!!!

chalo kamse kum..arjun protective toh hua!!!

nobody is the case nowLOL

Update soon
Fiza28 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 05 December 2012 at 1:22am | IP Logged

Chapter 4

At rk house

Riya is in his arms

 He takes her in the room

Arjun runs in his house with etf team, biito ji  was

Abiut say something when rathore outs gun in mouth to shut up

Up in room she still in hi arms he bends his head and bites her neck hard she yells

Ahhh rkkk

The team run up

Kya kare ho pagal ho huh? Says riya in pain

Biwi ho mere pyaar kara tha bas he says

They men run in

Riya quickly moves her hair  to hide the mark

Put her done now choro usko samhje ya samajao says arjun

Riya you screamed kya hau yeh rk kya kara  bolo says arjun

Leave riya right now  yeh kya thareeka hai yells rathore

No I  will not biwi hai mere I can hold her in my arms koi crime nahi hai says rk

Riya arjun kuch poocha why did you yell kya hau baatao says rathore

  Kuch nahi sir she says

Kuch tho hai warna you wouldn't yell kya hua bolo says arjun

  Um woh actually  .. but before she can say a word

Biwi  aisa baatein nahi bolthe ….pati patni ki beech ki baat hai  sab ko kyun bol na am I right ?

She is quite

Am I right he says and pushes her closer to him in his arms

she nods

good biwi 

now tell your etf team to get lost ….kya hai aaj tum pe boat pyaar are raha hai  trailer tho tum bhi thode dare phele dehke picture baaki hai jaane e maan  says rk

her eyes pop she looks scared

the team is shocked arjun blood is boiling

he goes to kiss her

itna dil hai kiss kare ne tho yeh kiss kar he says   

arjun takes his gun puts it to his lips put her down now samhje ya samajao

he pushes the gun away

oh my scared … mommy bachao he mocks …

theek hai  kya bole put her down fine he lets go and she fallsto the floor hurting her ankle  and elbow


shree, chotu , rathore go to her

   rk teri tho he grabs his collar and punches him

ri tu theek ho na says shree

haan she says

arjun is beating him rk too is fighting back

riya limps toward arjun

leave him she yells

   he looks at her noo I will not

kya kare tum usko haan?.

And you droped her ?  he is beating him

She is my wife kuch bhi karoon tum se matlab yells rk

Sir leave him please

Arjun not listening

Rathore sir , shree , chotu stop him na please

They don't

Fine nahi karo I will stop arjun sir

She grabs the pillows on the bed and throws it at arjun

Tum ko lak tha hai ill reaaly stop riya says arjun

Shree and chotu laugh

Yeh ri tho pagal hoge hai pillows smiles shree

Arre agar arjun sir ko control mein lana hai tho ek smile kaafi thi na says chotu

Suddenly a pillow hits rathore

Riya kya kare ho yells rathore

Finally she grabs a pillow and is hitting him

Choro na please

He doesn't he takes pillo while still holding rk's collar and throws  it on the floor

a magazine rolls it up  and hits arjun

the team is comical

rathore had enough of this drama he goes and trys to pull him off rk

but arjun not moving

chor arjun bas  

no rathore I wont bol kya kare riya ko huh she woukd yell for no reason bol

says arjun

yeh mere aur mere biwi ki beech ki baat hai don't interfere … fake biwi ki itne fikar kyun huh ? says rk

arjun goes to sock him when riya takes the water jug on the table and throws it on arjun

but along with arjun rathore gets splashed

he stops and lets go of rk

good biwi apni fake hubby ko kaho outtt yells rk

pagal hoge jo kya riya  iss kilye you did this  tum bache ke jaise behave kare ho says arjun

you were not listening and don't interfere in this she says

she is going to walk away he pulls her and she hits his chest

there is a eye lock its as if there eyes are talking (think of rabba ve moment)

arjuns eyes intese and worried while riya is upset and anoyed

 rk is fuming


I will interfere iwont tolerate any man treating awoman this way samhje ya samhjao?

She is annoyed and  is going to walk away

Leave my hand sir and pulls it away  while doing that her hair hits his face

Arjun lost ( think of a raaba ve moment )

Mere biwi ko ghoor na band karo acp yells rk   

arjun  notice a mark on her neck they all do

Yeh kya hai arjun goes to touch it ..

 Ahh …Ouch she moves kuch nahi

Morning main my flat iron burnt my neck while doing my hair bas she lies

Jhoot  he did this na … flat iron dont have teeth riya

I will kill you rk yells arjun





HE leaves her very harshly her head hits   the wall  

chotugrabed him

rathore rushes to riya while arjun is beating rk 

Chotu take him iwant him in my iterogating room now 

And riya tum mere saath chal re ho samhje y samjhao

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shrutisweety IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 05 December 2012 at 1:42am | IP Logged
wow arjun hitting rk
rk is hurting riya
continue soon
send me pm
Sneha113 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 14138

Posted: 05 December 2012 at 1:56am | IP Logged
awesome update di!!!
modern mahabharata se bhi zyda hai ye tohROFL
rk bite riyaConfused..she hides it...but doesnt she knew..ASR se kuch ni chiptaWink
woww...wat a fight rk and arjun fighting..rathore shouting..chotu and shree after riyaShocked
pillow fightTongue..sorry riya target practising karo..nishana chook gyaLOL
Rk was behaving like this with riyaUnhappyshe is leading a dangrous life!!
lol..arjun ni mana toh watr fightROFLpoor rathore watr ka nishana bhi banna padaLOL
Rk pulled riya's hair...huhh!!!!
ariyaa eyelockDay DreamingDay Dreamingmaking rk jealousTongue
but rk is right kyun arjun uski biwi par itna hakkWinkEmbarrassed
rk in interogation room!!!
update soon

Edited by priya00147 - 05 December 2012 at 2:32am
funkylicious IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 05 December 2012 at 2:15am | IP Logged
res... wow kya timing h di I jst came ol and u updatedWink

sry sry sry kaan pakad k sry Di...

btw ye Arjun itna gussa Kyuu ho raha h Di...kahi usss love shove toh nahi hogayaROFL

Edited by funkylicious - 17 February 2013 at 6:07am
vidya.anand IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 05 December 2012 at 2:25am | IP Logged
Riya throwing pillows at Arjun and Rathod was so funny...i am laughing out visualizing it...
serious yet funny awesome update...

actually, i cant imagine RK as a villain because like Arjun, he is a fav of mine too...anyways lovely update...

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