Mr.& Mrs. RAWTE ch9 pg26 5/1 - Page 7

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Awesome yaar... i'm luvn this one... continue soon...

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wow...really owsm...
ohh Outstanding,mindblowing...
Love the fight between ASR & RK...
ohh its too good..love it dear..update it soon...
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wow RK and Arjun in war field...
yaar this is so unfair i love rk so much and made him villain..
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RK and his call biwi reminds me of my fav serial...and I love that RK too much...
i am caught in a fix now...Arjun and RK are my fav heroes...who will i support yaar???

anyways. amazing twist in the tale...loved it!! 
Interesting very interesting...waiting to see what will happen nw??
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Omg...what did i just read...i m still in a trance...this was completrly unexpected...but m luvin it..update soon
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A very well written update... Please do continue x
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super!!!!

ye rk kaha se tapak gya🤣

dono attitude walo k bich jung🤣

bas ho gya rk...ye kya kya bol rahe ho tum😡

bittuji k pas jake soo jao🤣

huh!!!it was rude and mannerless rk!!!

chalo kamse kum..arjun protective toh hua!!!

nobody is conc..at the case now😆

Update soon
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Chapter 4

At rk house

Riya is in his arms

 He takes her in the room

Arjun runs in his house with etf team, biito ji  was

Abiut say something when rathore outs gun in mouth to shut up

Up in room she still in hi arms he bends his head and bites her neck hard she yells

Ahhh rkkk

The team run up

Kya kare ho pagal ho huh? Says riya in pain

Biwi ho mere pyaar kara tha bas he says

They men run in

Riya quickly moves her hair  to hide the mark

Put her done now choro usko samhje ya samajao says arjun

Riya you screamed kya hau yeh rk kya kara  bolo says arjun

Leave riya right now  yeh kya thareeka hai yells rathore

No I  will not biwi hai mere I can hold her in my arms koi crime nahi hai says rk

Riya arjun kuch poocha why did you yell kya hau baatao says rathore

  Kuch nahi sir she says

Kuch tho hai warna you wouldn't yell kya hua bolo says arjun

  Um woh actually  .. but before she can say a word

Biwi  aisa baatein nahi bolthe ….pati patni ki beech ki baat hai  sab ko kyun bol na am I right ?

She is quite

Am I right he says and pushes her closer to him in his arms

she nods

good biwi 

now tell your etf team to get lost ….kya hai aaj tum pe boat pyaar are raha hai  trailer tho tum bhi thode dare phele dehke picture baaki hai jaane e maan  says rk

her eyes pop she looks scared

the team is shocked arjun blood is boiling

he goes to kiss her

itna dil hai kiss kare ne tho yeh kiss kar he says   

arjun takes his gun puts it to his lips put her down now samhje ya samajao

he pushes the gun away

oh my scared … mommy bachao he mocks …

theek hai  kya bole put her down fine he lets go and she fallsto the floor hurting her ankle  and elbow

ouchhh

shree, chotu , rathore go to her

   rk teri tho he grabs his collar and punches him

ri tu theek ho na says shree

haan she says

arjun is beating him rk too is fighting back

riya limps toward arjun

leave him she yells

   he looks at her noo I will not

kya kare tum usko haan?.

And you droped her ?  he is beating him

She is my wife kuch bhi karoon tum se matlab yells rk

Sir leave him please

Arjun not listening

Rathore sir , shree , chotu stop him na please

They don't

Fine nahi karo I will stop arjun sir

She grabs the pillows on the bed and throws it at arjun

Tum ko lak tha hai ill reaaly stop riya says arjun

Shree and chotu laugh

Yeh ri tho pagal hoge hai pillows smiles shree

Arre agar arjun sir ko control mein lana hai tho ek smile kaafi thi na says chotu

Suddenly a pillow hits rathore

Riya kya kare ho yells rathore

Finally she grabs a pillow and is hitting him

Choro na please

He doesn't he takes pillo while still holding rk's collar and throws  it on the floor

a magazine rolls it up  and hits arjun

the team is comical

rathore had enough of this drama he goes and trys to pull him off rk

but arjun not moving

chor arjun bas  

no rathore I wont bol kya kare riya ko huh she woukd yell for no reason bol

says arjun

yeh mere aur mere biwi ki beech ki baat hai don't interfere … fake biwi ki itne fikar kyun huh ? says rk

arjun goes to sock him when riya takes the water jug on the table and throws it on arjun

but along with arjun rathore gets splashed

he stops and lets go of rk

good biwi apni fake hubby ko kaho outtt yells rk


pagal hoge jo kya riya  iss kilye you did this  tum bache ke jaise behave kare ho says arjun

you were not listening and don't interfere in this she says

she is going to walk away he pulls her and she hits his chest

there is a eye lock its as if there eyes are talking (think of rabba ve moment)

arjuns eyes intese and worried while riya is upset and anoyed

 rk is fuming

BIWIII YELLS RK

I will interfere iwont tolerate any man treating awoman this way samhje ya samhjao?

She is annoyed and  is going to walk away

Leave my hand sir and pulls it away  while doing that her hair hits his face

Arjun lost ( think of a raaba ve moment )

Mere biwi ko ghoor na band karo acp yells rk   

arjun  notice a mark on her neck they all do

Yeh kya hai arjun goes to touch it ..

 Ahh …Ouch she moves kuch nahi

Morning main my flat iron burnt my neck while doing my hair bas she lies

Jhoot  he did this na … flat iron dont have teeth riya

I will kill you rk yells arjun

rk grabs riya BIWI TELL THEM TO LEAVE WAR NA

KYA KAROGE YELLS ARJUN HUH WARNA KYA ?

YEH HE GRABS HER AND PULLS HER BY THE HAIR

AHH RK LEAVE ME PLEASE ILL TELL THEM TO LEAVE 

HE leaves her very harshly her head hits   the wall  

chotugrabed him

rathore rushes to riya while arjun is beating rk 

Chotu take him iwant him in my iterogating room now 

And riya tum mere saath chal re ho samhje y samjhao


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wow arjun hitting rk
rk is hurting riya
continue soon
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awesome update di!!!
modern mahabharata se bhi zyda hai ye toh🤣
rk bite riya😕..she hides it...but doesnt she knew..ASR se kuch ni chipta😉
woww...wat a fight rk and arjun fighting..rathore shouting..chotu and shree after riya😲
pillow fight😛..sorry riya target practising karo..nishana chook gya😆
Rk was behaving like this with riya😔she is leading a dangrous life!!
lol..arjun ni mana toh watr fight🤣poor rathore watr ka nishana bhi banna pada😆
Rk pulled riya's hair...huhh!!!!
ariyaa eyelockmaking rk jealous😛
but rk is right kyun arjun uski biwi par itna hakk😉😳
rk in interogation room!!!
update soon
Edited by priya00147 - 11 years ago