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hey guys me back with another ss but this one is deaicated tomy friend Kaveri2008

 
 

Chapter 1

Sir ji haan we brought her here  to sanjeevni  she is hurt jaldi aao says shree

Damn rathore ki ne bol usko super woman bane chotu shree usko sanjeevni leke gaye hai  chalo  says arjun

Riya wakes up

Ri thank god tum theek ho says chotu

Haan ri hum ne app ki mom aur dad ko bhi call kare  aate hi honge  says shree

Kya  mom aur dad ko pagal  hoge ho kya damn ab kya says riya

Arrey par tum tho khush hona na says chotu

Nahi yaar problem hai actually but before she could finish

Her parents came in

Haye meri shona yeh kaise hua says her mom

Haan riyu beti kaise feel kare ho ab says her dad

Im fine choti se choot hai I'll be fine says Riya

Riya beti yeh sab choro itna hone ki baad tera pati kahan hai says her mom

Pati say shree and chotu

Haan pati arre tum sab tho uski  shaadi chup ke se kar main help kin a says the  father

Riya looks at them

Haan woh tho hai hum ko pata nahi than a ki riya aap

Ko bole shaadi ki bare main said shree

Riyu  bolo na tera pati  kahan hai tum hurt ho aur woh tho tere koi fikar hai nai  says her dad

Papa actually but before she can finish

Uncle aate honge says chotu

Shree and riya give him the shut up look

Suddenly the room door opens and Rathore and Arjun run inside

Riya tum theek ho na asks Rathore

She nods

Arjun on the other hand is like

Haad hoti hai Riya  yeh kya immaturity hai huh ? who told you to go to

Gupta's alone without back up yells arjun

Dehka tum itne choot hai on the head , your ankle ,agar tum kuch hogaya hota tho ? yells Arjun

Rawte abhi usko yell karne ki koi zuraat  nahi hai , bichari ko

dehko says Rathore

bachari nahi she thinks she is super woman na says arjun  

Riya beta tum yeh kya job karti hoo  choro do yeh faltoo job says her mom

Arjun turns and looks at her

Excuse me kya kaha aapne Faltoo ?

This is a job filled with pride and we as officer are proud of are duty to protect the people of our country . kaise  soch hai aap ki chi digusting you should be proud of your daughter says arjun

Tum ko kis se iszaat se baat kar na nahi aata kya kum

Sa kum age ko dehko main aap  ki mom ki age ki  hoge says her mom

Wha hi tho aur aap ki soch itna faltoo hai says arjun

Rawte enough  im sorry for his behavior aunty says Rathore

 

 Suddenly  

Riya   in dono main tere pati kaun hai ? asks her mom

Both Rathore and arjun are shocked

Im sure beta ki hai na jo itna  respectful hai na says her dad  looking at Rathore

Nahi ji  im sure humare Riya yeh baatameze se hi shaadi ki  uska hoga pati tho yeh hi hai says her mom

Actually papa who baat hai ki she jerks her self up suddenly and she is in pain

 Ahh ouch she says arjun  goes to her

Kya Riya  Careful let me help you sit up he puts a pillow  behind her

 

Dehka ji yeh hi humare damaad rude hai laken kaam sa kaam riya ki fikar tho hai  says her mom

Before any one can say a word

 Riya 's dad hugs arjun im sure mere tum mere beti ko khush rak the ho

God bless  you both says her dad

Suno ji pasaa nikalo jaldi her dad gives the money

The mom takes it and does nazaar

Haye nazar na lage  yeh Jodi ko says her mom

Everyone is shocked and arjun is annoyed

Arjun goes to say something when riya holds his hand to stop him


Precap: ab  yeh sab baatein choro tum appne biwi ko ghar le ke jaa sak the ho says her dad

Arjun is very upset

Haan haan  kyun nahi ghar ja ke baat kar the hai BIWI says arjun

Riya is scared at arjun's gussa

While the team seems amused  

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Edited by Fiza28 - 01 May 2013 at 6:14am

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Posted: 01 November 2012 at 3:50am | IP Logged

ch 1 pg 1
ch 2 pg 7
 
ch 3 pg 10

ch4 pg 13
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3267197&TPN=13&#70964199

Ch 5 Pg 16
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3267197&PID=76344283&#76344283

ch6 pg 19
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3267197&TPN=19&#77286832

CH 7 PG 21

CH 8 AN B PG 23
CH 9 PG 26


Edited by Fiza28 - 01 May 2013 at 6:17am

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GOOD PLEASE CONTINUE

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awww so funy and awsome update dear loved ittt so much huggieee waiting for nxt prt

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hey loved it
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Posted: 01 November 2012 at 4:12am | IP Logged
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Finally you posted this... omg di I love it... Embarrassed
 
Awww.. Arjun's so caring directly usse Riya ka pati bana diya hayeeeDay Dreaming
 
btw I wish I could send you another buddy reqROFL
 
Love you and this story line pls update soon nahi Toh I'll be gussa definitelyTongueROFL
 
 


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hey i loved it a lot
plz pm me when u update

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