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I wanted to write it more but as per frnds request I m posting it now'leave it to be continued in next part'..)
vikram goes to doctor to ask about the proper condition of priya'enter's the cabin of Dr aditiya where he meets the nurse , she says sir is in operation will meet u after that.
Vikram comes out and waits for operation to end'
Ram sits with a sad face and neha tries to console him..
Ak calls sudhir'
Sudhir ' hello amar ji , kaise h aap?
Amar ' sudhir ab toh samdhi ji kaho'not amar ji'
Sudhir ' yeh toh apne sahi kaha'.muje bahut khushi ho rahi h yeh kehte hue ki nuts hamare ghar ki bahon banegi'
Amar - muje toh es baat ki khushi h ki muje apni beti ke liye susral nahiek dursa mayaka milegamuje pta h aap kitna pyar karenge use. muje bahut khushi h meri nuts apke yaah ja rahi h'.
Sudhir ' main yakin dilata hu apko ki hum use apni beti ki tarah rakhenge'
Ak ' 10bje thik rahe program'aa jaye?
Sudhir ' yeh bhi koi puchne ki baat h'apka apna ghar h'ab marji aa jaye..
Ak - thik phir milte hai'.finish the call and calls ram, kk, nuts '.10 baje jana h sudhir ji ke yaah 'tyar ho jao'ok'roka ka jo shaman le jana h vo dekh lo'.krishna ji'
kk- maine kal hi sari tyari karli thi'. All gets ready and ram heart was beating fast 'he wores black shirt and grey suit and black tie'looking utmost handsome'hairs combed back'and goes to Sharma house'.
Sharma house '
sudhir calls and tells shipra amar ji 10 baje aa rahe h family ke sath toh priya ko keh de aaj der se chali jaye'sab aayenge toh acha ni lagega na..ghar ki badi beti ghar par na ho'.shipra tell priya and tell her to get ready'after hearing whole family name her heart starts beating fast'she has get ready so that she should look nice'as ram was coming official first time at home'.
Priya wore white color saree (hope u remember priya wore white saree in balh,,,,looking gorgeous'many pics of her'in that saree..)
Sudhir opens the door'hello amar ji,'.kk..
Ak ' kk ' hello ji'kaise h aap sudhir ji'.
Shipra ' hello ji..kaise h aap'kaise ho ram beta'
Ram ' ram bends down and took blessings of sudhir and shipra saying in his heart'.damad ko jaldi se ashirwad do papa'.both blessed and ram'
Karthik took blessing from ak and kk'
Nuts entered at last 'shipra took her hand and said ' kitni pyari h meri hone wali bahu'.god bless u beta'
The priya comes'.ak and kk was shocked to see priya their'( they didn't knew that she was daughter of sudhir')
Ak ' beta aap yaha'.
Priya ' Namaste uncle and aunty'.hanji'main kyun ese kyun keh rahe h aap..?
sudhir - hanji amar ji yeh meri badi beti h...dr priya...in city hospital...
Ak ' kk'we really didn't knew ki tum sudhir ji ki beti ho'.nice to meet u once again'ak and kk share a happy eye lock'.and prayed from inside'wants her to be in life of ram'.
sudhir - matlab ...once again...???
amar - ji sudhir ji hum priya se phele bhi mil chuke h...infact she took gud care of me when i was sick...she was my doctor there...
priya - uncle it was my responsilbity ...(thinking ab aap ram ke papa ho toh mere bhi toh papa hue na...kaise kahu,,,,)
Ram ' says hello dr priya..kaisi h aap?
Priya - main thik hu mr.kapoor'aap kaise h'(.she has to call ram as mr.kapoor bcz as this was official meeting with their families'where she can't call him ram')( she was smiling in some where as he was looking so..so'handsome, she was not able to see anybody else ram')
Ram was looking silently from the core of his eyes'not directly'not able to concentrate there as she was looking simple and beautiful as he likes her the most'.
Priya meets nuts and hugs her'and says to karthik muje naaz h teri choice par'.nuts hegs her'.
Ak- toh sudhir ji roka kar le..
Sudhir - amar ji muje toh sirf beti chaiye aur kuch ni'priya se bhi jada pyar karenge hum ese'.
Ak ' thank u sudhir ji'agar es se koi galti ho jaye toh mere se kehne ki jarurat ni h'ap khud es ke papa bann kar ese samja dena'.
Sudhir ' ap bilkul chinta mat kariye'
All completes the roka rasam'and hugs each other'when all were busy ram silently went near priya stood near him'she feels his presence'both share a cute eye lock'ram silenly says with lip moment'missing u soo much'.
Priya says'.me 2..
Then ram thoughts something'msgs her'looking into her eyes'.priya bahut sudhar lag rahi ho'.mann toh kar raha h'abhi ek kiss kar du'kya karu majbur hu'par yaha se free hoke muje jarur milunga'.
Priya ' ram thodi toh sharam ki jiye sab h'.kya sochenge'. ?
Ram ' tumhe sab ki padi h'meri parawah ni h '
Priya- maine esa kab kaha'ha'aaj aap bhi bahut handsome lag rahe ho'black color suits ,'.
After some time ram slowly moves closer to priya'sudhir was watching that "priya was looking perfect with ram'he feels like agar enki bhi Jodi ban jaye toh ache lagenge'."
Kapoor and Sharma family decides to go for shopping'so..when together..but priya was in her house' she has taken half day..off'
Outside ram said to ak ' papa muje kuch kam h..toh main baad me aata hu''. 'she went to her room'.ram saw going everybody from their house'then climbed the wall'.went near her window'knocked it'.
Priya was removing her accessories'.she went near the window'took a deep breath and opened the window'said'ram aap fir se?
Ram ' tum na har time shuru kyun ho jati ho'muje pta h'ghar me koi nahi h'es liye aaya hu'kaha tha na milna h tumse'comes inside her room'.
Priya ' ram aap na sach me muje kisi din mar vayenge'.
Ram- are tum tension kyun leti ho'main hu na'now jaldi se muje ek kiss do'fir main chala jaunga'.
Priya ' was looking her blankly'what?????
Ram ' ek kiss aur kya'ese mat dekho yr'mujse control ni ho rha ek toh etni achi lag rahi ho aur upar yeh looks'.muje abhi marne ka koi shok ni h'muje tumahre sath jina h,'samje'moves closer to her'she get stop when her back touches the wall'both shares a cute eye lock'.
Moves more closer'.she closes her eyes'.ram 'kissed her cheeks'said ankhen kholo na'muje toh bas etn ni si dose chaiye thi'.
She smiles at him'she also kisses on him cheeks and says aap bahut sweet ho'so..cute ram kapoor'.love u'.
Ram 'love u 2 jaan'hugs her'there is knocks on the door'
Priya ' kaun h?
Kaka says'priya beta khana tyar h'aa kar kha lena'priya ' ji kaka thodi der me aati hu'.
Ram 's phone rang'.ram smiles seeing the number'.says hi mallika'kaisi ho?
Kab aa rahi ho? Priya was looking her confused look's'
m- are ek baar me sare sab kuch puchoge kya'sans toh le lo'main thik hu'kal aa rahi hu'yaha Australia ka kam khatam ho gya h'.
ram ' gud'.ok'but 'sorry muje kuch jaruri kam h'toh airport ni aa sakta tumhe lene'.
M - koi baat ni..i will handle 'bye'rakhti hu'.
Ram ' see u tomorrow'
Priya ' who is she?
Ram- are main toh tumhe btana hi bhul gya yeh meri business partner cum dost h'
Priya ' ok'gud ..saying this she makes her grip tight around his neck'giving hitler looks'.agar es se jada kuch aur hui na'toh main mar dalungi''samje ji'
Ram ' muje???
Priya ' nahi'use'ap toh meri jaan hona,'apko kaise mar sakti hu'..
Ram - are meri sherni'kitni achi lag rahi h'.
Priya - moves more closed'both falls on the bed'ram holds her from waist 'she feels on ram'.ram view was blocked by her hairs'he tugged her hairs around his ears'..holds her face'both shares a cute eye lock'just lovingly looking into each others eyes'..slowly slowly ram touches her from waist to upwards'.she was feeling new sentations in her body'.she was loving his touch'.his strong arms'.as she was wearing low back blouse'when his hands touched her bare skin'she was shivering from inside'.ram was looking her deeply 'enjoying her face expressions'.her each moments'.he slowly slowly started giving her more sentations '..her heart beat was not in control'.she was not in condition to control'.now'.ram was smiling '.he started giving sensation on her arms'with finger on her neck'.then turned her down'.came on her side'her back was facing him..holding his finger within his own finger''he bend towards her neck'.gave gentle kisses'.priya was totally lost with his actions'..then went near her ear'.she was feeling his warm breath'.his kissed her ear lobe'gently'she was loving the way as he was loving'.
Suddenly priya's phone rang'..both came back'to senses'.priya was breathing hard'she was not in state to respond the call but as it was from hospital she received it'.controlling her breath said'.hello'
Dr rajat ' hii'kaise ho? Kab aa rahi ho'.?
Priya ' remember it rajat'.main thik hu'..tum kab aaye?
Rajat- rajat sensed her voice was not normal ' priya tum thik toh ho na'.muje ese kyun lag raha h'tumari tabiyat thik ni h'.
Priya ' ni rajat esi koi baat ni h..i m fine'
Rajat ' main toh dar gya tha,'ha'aaj hi aaya hu'pta chala yaha ake ki madam toh gayab h'.socha tumhe phone kar lo'
Priya ' bas thodi der me aa rahi hu'.ok'see u there'
Rajat see u soon'.bye'
Priya saw ram looking deep into her eyes'priya softly placed a kiss on his lips 'said ram ab aap jao'muje bhi jana h'
Ram ' ok'thik h,'kal ki chutti pakki h na'kal muje koi disturbance ni chaiye samje g'
Priya- hanji maine mail kar di thi'.leave confirm ho gyi h'
Ram ' vase yeh rajat kaun h?
Priya ' he is my childhood frnd'bahut acha h'.my best frnd also'.
Ram ' gud jab next time jayenge na hospital muje bhi milwana'thik..h'priya kal ka program sun lo'.subah 6 am nikalenge'main road ki end par wait karunga'.
Priya ' 6am'etni jaldi'
Ram ' are will enjoy whole day'na'.
Priya ' ok..baba ab jao'.
Ram ' kisses her and goes out of window'.priya smiled '. Looking at his actions'
Next day (ram had told her he is going to pune for some project'.and priya had told her parents that she has taken off due to some work in orphan age'last night')
Ram was waiting for her in car as decided'wearing black t-shirt 'collors upward'.and black jeans'with gel in his hairs'combed back'looking utmost handsome'..
Priya came and seats in car'.(wearing yellow kurta with dark blue jeans with high ponital)'.(hope u remember her dress whe wore on the day of peehu admission in balh'she was looking stunning as always'..)
Ram ' hi'.
Priya ' hi'kaha chalna h?
Ram ' jaan it's a surprise for u'.ok'
Priya - gets excited'.ok'fir bhi kuch idea toh do..na'
Ram - surprise means surpises'.samje'
Ram took her to beach were sun has started rising as he remembers she said want to go to beach'..on their proposal day'.
Priya ' are yeh yaha'.apko yaad tha'
Ram ' main yeh kaise bhul sakta hu'jaan'
Both came out from the car'.ram hold her hand'took near her'the waves'. cool wind was blowing'.both holded there hands together'little rays of sun'.priya was very happy seeing rising sun'.both were lookingand feeling the nature'.both were enjoying nature's beauty'.holding each other'.
Ram ' acha laga?
Priya - bahut bahut acha h'.
Ram ' pta h priya main es beach par kafi bar aaya hu'par etna relaxed , happy kabhi mehsus ni kiya'.
Priya ' ram maine bhi'.pta h'.jab yaha lovers ko ek sath ghumte hue dekti thi na toh ek akelapan mehsus hota tha...par aaj toh etna acha mehsus ho raha h'yeh feeling ke liye kab se taras rahi thi..ram'
Ram ' main bhi esa hi feel karta tha priya'.luv'.hum hamesha aya karenge'ok'
Priya - ya sure'
(tujhe dekh dekh sona - 2
tujhe dekh kar hain jagna
maine yeh zindagani
sang tere bitaani
tujhmein basi hain meri jaan haai
(jiya dhadak dhadak - 3
jaayen) - 2
tujhe dekh dekh sona
tujhe dekh kar hain jagna
maine yeh zindagani
sang tere bitaani
tujhmein basi hain meri jaan haai
jiya dhadak dhadak - 3
kabse hai dil mein mere armaan kai ankahe - 2
inko tu sunle aaja chaahat ke rang chadha jaa - 2
kehna kabhi to mera maan haai
(jiya dhadak dhadak - 3
jaayen) - 2
lagta hain yeh kyu mujhe sadiyon se chaahu tujhe - 2
mere sapno mein aake apna mujhko banake - 2
mujhpe tu kar ehsaan haai
(jiya dhadak dhadak - 3
jaayen) ' 2) both looking deep into each others eyes,'.yeh pal yahi ruk jaye'tham jay,''both were enjoying each others love'
Priya - ram vo dekho'nariyal pani?
Ram ' tumhe pasand h..?
Priya ' hanji'bahut'.
Ram ' chalo fir'.both went and shared the nariyal pani'with single straw'looking deeply into each eyes'.both were enjoying 'and for them nobody was there'
Ram ' ab kaha chale'priya muje bhuk lag rahi'?
Priya ' ha'ram'muje hi'ok'yaha pass me ek achi jagah'.waha chale..muje vaha ka khana bahut pasand h'bahut ache parathe milte h ..vaha'.
Ram ' are parathe'toh chalo'.got excited'.
Both went to the dabba'name ' "pyar bahara nastha'"'
Ram ' priya hum yaha khaenge?
Priya ' kyun ram kya hua'I means manti hu apke standard ki nahi h jagah'but khana bahut acha h'.
Ram ' jaan mere matlab vo ni tha'I mean ki'tum doctor ho tumhe yaha se khana thik lagta h?
Priya ' main dr hu to kya'main jina chodu'ram life ki sahi enjoyment choti choti chizo me hoti h'.chalo'holds his hand and took him'
Ram and priya ' waiter kya kya h nashte me?
Waiter ' aloo aur gobhi ke parathe'.
Ram ' main toh aloo ke lunga'priya what about u?
Priya ' we will share the same thing'.
Ram ' are wah'.2 plate lao'do..to waiter'.2 parathe -2 karke parathe lana..ok
Priya ' ram 2 se jada ni khayenge'bahut heavy hota h..pratha..mere liye toh ek hi kafi h'.
Ram ' are tum aane toh fir dekhata hu'kaun kitne kahata h'
Waiter came with parathas'it was huge and large like family pizza'.
Ram - got excited 'priya was looking his expression and enjoying '.and smiling,'
Ram pour lot of butter..on it like(extra butter)'.priya stopped him'ram plz etna nhi..kam khayina'
Ram obeyed her'.ok..jaan'took first bite and his expression changed as it was delicious'.are wah priya yeh toh bahut swad h'.its out the world priya'
Priya said 'thank god'pasand aaye,'ni toh pta ni kya hota'.said'ram maine kaha than a 'bahut sawd hote h'..
Ram ' yeh priya u were'right'.called waiter 1 aur lana'.priya tum aur logi'
Priya ' nahi ram mer bas ho gya'.aap le li jiye'.
Ram ' thik 1 le ao'.ram fully enjoyed the breakfast'priya jab hum next date par niklenge na..toh yaha jaurur aayenge'thik h'.
Priya ' thik h ji'.
Both washed there hands and sat in car'..ram asked ab kaha chale'.priya said'ram yaha pass me bahut sundar madir h'vaha chale'.
Ram ' gud'tum muje batao'vaha ka rasta..
Ram stopped the car at mandir'both went inside'ram said priya yaha toh koi havan chal raha h'.
Priya ' hanji'muje bhi yehi lag raha h'.chalo puja kar lete h'
Ram ' chalo'.both went inside'there was a beautiful murti of shiv aur parvati'.
Ram ' are priya yeh toh bahut sundar'h'yeh dono kitne ache lag rahe'h'
Priya ' ram yeh shiv aur parvati ji h'.pati patni h dono' enka pyar to bahut amar tha'duniya ke liye missal h 'enki love story'
Ram ' don't worry jaan hamara pyar bhi esa hi hoga'.took blessing from pandit ji'.
Pandit - eshwar tum dono ki Jodi salamat rakhe'beta aaj ka din bahut subah h'bagwan tum dono ko sansar ki sari khushiya de'.
Ram ' priya were looking each other'
After all went from mandir'ram saw the havan kund'as it was still some fire left..he thought something'hold priya hand moved forward'.she asked ram kya kar rahe h'ram told her from his eyes to look to havan'she understood his intension'.
Ram took her hand started moving around it'looking into each other eyes'.saying'
Ram - priya main vada karta hu'main tumhara sath kabhi ni chodunga'.priya said'ram main vada karti hu'main apka har kadam par sath dungi'
ram ' priya I promise u..yeh pyar hal ane vale pal me sirf sur sirf badega'priya- ram main es pyar ko kabhi kam hone dungi'
ram ' priya main tumhe har khushi dunga'tum meri pyar ..meri jindagi ban kar rahogi'priya ' ram meri har saas sirf apse shuru hokar aap par hi khatam hogi'
ram ' priya main hamesha tumhe har kadam par sath dunga..'kabhi bhi tumhe apne alag ni samjhunga'..priya ' ram aap meri liye meri jindagi ho..aur hamesha rahoge..
ram ' priya main kabhi bhi tumse bina puche koi faisla nhi lunga'tumhara sath mere har failse me shamil hoga'.priya ' ram meri jindagi par apse jada haq mera khud ka bhi nahi hoga'..
ram ' priya main vada karta hu'apne har vade ko pura karunga'.priya ' ram main apke har vada pura karne me apka sath dungi'.
Ram ' priya u r my life, I will only luv u till my last breath'.priya ' ram u r my soul, I will only u love u till my last breath'.both said I love together'to each other in last round'
(back ground music'
"Tere Mere Saath Ki Ghadiyaan, Jeevan Mein Sabse Badi Hain..
Tum Haste Ho Toh Lagta Haii-
Saamne Khushiyaan Khadi Hain.. "
Bade Achhe Lagte Hain- ? Tera Hasna, Yun Milna, Apnapan aur Tum')
Ram ' priya phere toh ho gye ab bas sindhoor aur mangalsutar ki der h'vo jab ghar walo se baat karlenge'vo bhi pehna dunga'priya was looking his intense love for her in his eyes'.how his each word is really means a lot '.
Priya ' ram u r my life'.luv u sooo'.much'.today u gave me the best gift of life ram'.
Ram ' luv u 2 jaan'.
Priya - ram ab chale ab main apko "pyar ke mandir" me le kar jana chahti hu'.
Ram ' matlab main kuch samja ni'.
Priya ' chaliye toh fir samaj jayenge'.
Ram ' as u wish'
Priya drove the car to orphane age (she used to spend her Sundays her'will teaching 'painting and dancing')
Ram ' yeh hum kaha aaye h priya '
Priya ' ram chaliye'she hold his hand both went inside '
A small girl came near her'around of 5-6 yrs..priya bends down'she kissed priya said'di'aap aa gyi'kaise ho aap?
Priya ' kissed her back'.she took her in her arms'said dekho main kis ko sath aayi hu'.facing towards ram 'she said yeh kaun h di'?
Priya ' yeh apke hone wale jiju h'.say hello'to'ram took her his arms from priya'kissed her'says'main apki di'se shadi karlu?
Girl ' ha'karlo'.par promise karo'aap di ko bahut pyar karoge'meri papa ki tarah unhe danto de toh nahi na'?
Ram was shocked listening to her ' making her comfortable he said main apki di ko sabse jada pyar karunga'.
Ram singed priya asking her why she asked him?..priya blinked her eyes'said wait karo'fir btati hu'.after some she went'
To be continued''
I wanted to write it more but as my frnds request I m posting it now'leave it to be continued in next part'..)
Next part ' (thoda dard ke sath hoga'.be ready for it'..)
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