Posted: 04 November 2012 at 8:54pm | IP Logged
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sorry but next part i will post after 3-4 days..due to some work...plz enjoy the story...and leave ur lovely comments...
precap - Ram ' main ghar ja kar nuts ke liye baat karke tumhe bta dunga'ok
Priya- thik h'I 'will wait for ur'call'
Both goes to home'.
Flash back continues..
Priya reached home, saw karthik..hugges him'.said'hi'kaisa h?
K ' di main thik hu'aap kaise ho?
P ' main toh thik hu'ha ab muje tu uska naam batayega ya ni'kab milva raha h'jaldi bata..
k- di..vo papa ke frnd h na amaranth uncle ki beti', ram kapoor ki sister h'.natasha ..(in excitement')
p ' kya baat h'karthik'aur vase yeh sab tu muje aaj bta raha h'apni di ko etna praya kar diya'
k- are ni di'muje na dar lag raha tha'means vo bahut bade log h'toh..maine socha aap kya kahoge..
' ak uncle ka treatment abhi kuch din phele maine hi kiya h'he is so
kind hearted person and ram kapoor se bhi mile'he is nice
person'.ok'papa se baat ki'?
k- ni di..aap karoge na'
p - acha ji'jab pyar kiya tab di ki yaad ni aayi..ab shadi ki baat di kare'h..?
k ' missed u lot'di'sorry'muje apko phele hi btana chaiye tha'.and hugged her'
' acha bas'I will talk'ok'muje papa aur ma..ka pta karke bta de..ki kab
aa rahe h..vase bhi kitne din se dhand se baat bhi nahi ki'.main ja kar
fresh hoti hu'tu kaka ko keh de ki dinner aa sab ek sath karenge'ok
k -thik h'di'main dekh leta hu'.
Ram goes ak's room'papa muje apse jaruri baat karni h nuts ke bare me'
Ak ' ha bolo ram..kya hua'
Ram ' ma kaha h'muje ap dono se baat karni..main ma ko bula kar lata hu'
goes and calls her ma'.says'ma maine nuts ke liye ek ladka dekha h'he
is very nice boy'sincere bhi h', hardworking'means acha ladka h'
Ak nd kk ' ram phele teri shaadi toh ho jaye fir nuts ke bare me sochenge na'
' are ma'fir se shuru mat ho..muje jab koi pasand aayegi na 'I will
tell u..abhi phele nuts ke liye jo keh raha hu'vo to suno'
Ak , kk ' acha bolo'
' papa vo Sharma uncle ha na..unka beta karthik hamari nuts se pyar
karta h aur nuts bhi..toh main chahta hu aap unse baat karo rishte ki'
, kk ' are karthik'kya choice h'he is really a nice boy'muje toh vo
bahut pasand h'main kal hi baat karta hu..sudhir se'thik h'date fix kar
Ram ' thanks papa and ma'wents'
Ak,and kk - nuts
kaha h'etna sab kuch ho gya'sirf apne bhai ko batati yeh ladki'es ke
liye hum toh kuch ha hi ni'bas bhai ek elava ese koi najar hi ni
aata'are Krishna ji'muh toh mitha karo'apki beti ke liye rishte ki baat
ho rahi h'hanji'abi lati hu'
Ak ' are 2 min ruko muje kuch kehna h'
Ak said to kk - Krishna muje ram ke liye ek ladki bahut achi lagi h'agar ram man jaye na toh kitna acha hoga'
kk- kya aa bhi vahi soch rahe h jo main soch rahi'
both said together'dr priya'.and looked to each other'
kk- sachi 'apko bhi vo pasand aayi'muje bhi'
ha sachi me en do dino us ne mera etna kyal rakha esa lag hi nahi raha
tha koi dr kar rahi h'.esa laga jaise beti yeh sab kar rahi h'.
kk- sach me uski caring nature dekh kar muje bahut acha laga'.agar vo ram ki life me aa jaye toh ram will be lucky'na'
ak ' par ram se baat kaun karege'vo toh shaadi ke naam se bhi chid jata h'.
kk ' yeh toh aap sahi keh rahe h'.i think hame wait karna chaiye'kuch ni kar sakte abhi..
phone was ringing 6th time'no response..she come out from washroom'.and
checks the cell'said'oh no'5 miss call'ram muje ni chodenge'.calls
Ram ' hello'kaha thi'kab se call kar raha hu'
Priya ' sorry vo main washroom me thi'toh suna ni'
Ram ' acha'toh'ghar me baat ki'
Priya ' abhi papa aayenge tab karungi'apne?
Ram ' hanji maine kar li h'kal papa uncle se baat kar lenge aur ayenge..'acha muje add toh de do..fir milne bi toh aana h na..
Priya ' ok'likho'.address'Sharma house..bunglow no'34 Hill Road, Bandra West, Mumabi...
Ram ' aur tumhara room kaha 'gf aur ff?
Priya ' gf..(ground floor..) par aap yeh sab kyun puch rahe h'?
Ram ' are idea ho jayega na kaha h'abhi ane ka mann kar toh..es liye'.
Ram - naha kar aayi ho?
Priya ' hanji'
Ram ' kaisi lag rahi ho?
Priya ' muje ni pta''saying this she lied on the bed wearing a bathroom robe'wet'hairs'just looking hot'
Ram- are batao na 'mann kar raha h'tumhe dekhne ka'tumhare pass ane ka'.for some moments priya's heart started beating fast'.
Priya ' acha ji'esa kya kiya h maine'
Ram ' ab es baat ko toh main practically samja sakta hu na'agar samne hoti toh btata'
Priya ' kisne roka h..fir aa jao'she said this non intentionally'
Ram ' sachi'dekhlo ..agar aa gya toh jo kahuga vo karna padega'samji'
Priya - are aa kar toh dekho'fir dekh ti hu'.
Suddenly there was'a knock on the door'priya said'kaun h?
K ' di'papa muma aa gya h..aap aao jao'khana tyar h..
P ' 15 min me aati hu'.
Priya said to ram ' ram abhi jati hu'baad me call karti hu'.papa se baat bhi karni h na'
Ram ' thik h'see u soon bye.luv u'
Priya- luv u2'
Ram came back to reality'.went to ask drs about priya'
Ram ' priya kaisi h'plz kuch toh bataiye'
sir, dr priya ki stage critical h'operation chal raha h'hamare best
doctors treatment kar rahe h'we r trying our best''plz calm down'
Ram went to kk..ma..mera dil bahut ghabra raha h'.papa kab tak ayenge'
kk- papa aate hi honge'subah hi vo pune se chal pade the'priya ki tabiyat ke bare me pta chala toh'
ram ' priya ke gharwale sab kaha h?...
kk- vo sab USA se nikal chuke h'kal raat hi phone aaya tha'sham tak aayenge'
suddenly'ram..kk..rishab heard a cry of baby'crying inside'.ram was looking kk and says'ma ..meri peehu aa gayi'.
Ram ' ma yeh naam priya ne socha tha'muje pura yakin h'peehu hi h,,,kyun ki'muje peehu pehle chaiye thi'.
kk- ram tum etne yakin se kaise keh sakte ho?
Ram ' bas yehi feeling ho rahi h..par ma jab tak priya thik ni hogi'tab tak main peehu ko dekhunga bhi ni'.
And sits on the chair'.and thinks'
Priya wore a pink color gown and went for dinner'.looking stunning'
Went to meet papa and ma'said 'hi'papa'.hi'ma'
Sudhir - are kaise ho beta..howz ur hospital going?..
P ' sab thik chal raha h papa'.apse aur ma se ek baat karni thi'.
Sudhir and shipra ' both said together.. tuje koi pasand aa gya kya 'jaldi bta'we will talk '
' are ni ma'main toh karthik ke liye baat kar rahi hu'samje'karthik is
in love'papa vo apke frnd h na amarnath uncle'unki beti Natasha se pyar
karta h 'karthik'toh kal vo log aayenge'baat karne'
Sudhir ' karthik yeh sach h'?
K ' ha papa'
Shipra ' yeh kab se chal raha h,'.?
K ' 4 yrs se'ma'when I got settled in USA'tab se'
, gud'beta nice choice'amar ji se main khud baat karunga'yeh to hamare
liye garv ki baat hogi ki hamara rista unke sath jude'.both hugged
karthik 'and blessed him'
Priya ' thanks papa .. n'ma...ab khush h na tu karthik'.
K ' thanks di'apne toh sab thik kar diya'.love u soo much'
P ' chal ab maska lagana band kar'main sone ja rahi hu'ok'sun'muje nuts se kab mil va raha h'vase'?
K ' kal hi di'pakka'gudnite'
P ' gudnite..ma..papa'gn 'karthik..
comes to her room..and removes the upper gown , she was wearing
strapless gown'short gown'.and lies on the bed' opens her purse and took
out the rose'and kissed it..wow'ram kitna ache se propose kiya'nice
style'.vase u r so'romantic'.ram kapoor'.dekh kar lagta ni h'par ho
Opens her diary and pastes the rose 'and writes'.
arrow towards rose'writes -"ram and priya r one"'like this rose'gives
it name "RAYA"'and writes raya on rose'Wrote "peehu ' our pari"'on one
rose bud'and "ansh ' our rajkumar"..on another rose bud
the diary near her heart,,,,suddenly a voice came from her window..it
was none other than ram's voice'.he was calling out'priya'khidki
kholo'knocking at window'it was sliding window'
Priya ' was not able to belive that ram was here'.she was not in state to say anything'.
She went to the window'and opened it'ram was smiling at him'are hath toh do'..
Priya ' ram aap?
Ram ' are hath toh do..fir btata hu'she pulled him inside'and went to bolt the door of her room'.
Priya ' ram aap yaha kya kar rahe h'es waqt'it 11'
Ram ' was lost in her looks she was looking so'hot'that he was not listening to priya'at all'..
Priya -ram boloenge 'ab'shakes her hand'
-ha..h'kya keh rahi thi tum'vo main jara kho gya tha'with this priya
realized that what was wearing'.said oh..no'.said ram plz muh udar
kijiye'.plz'ram obeyed her'.
Priya wored the upper gown'said hanji aab kahe..
Ram - tumne hi toh kaha tha aa jao'toh main aa gya'.
Priya ' ram main majak kar rahi thi'.ap toh sach me serious ho gye'.
Ram ' ab practical experience ke liye toh aana pad na'ni toh tumhe kaise dekhata'
Priya- aap sach me jante h'apne kya kiya h'es time koi ladki ke room me aata h kya'.
' main apni lover ke pass aaya hu'samje'aur maine kaha tha na'muje
lovers ke sare experience karne h'toh'this is one of them'.
Priya smiled at him'and made him sit on the bed'.vase ram aap'en t-shirt me jada hamdome lag rahe h'un suits se'.
Ram was wearing a white t-shirt and dark blue'jeans'looking so'cute and handsome'
- priya vase tum bhi kuch kam ni lag rahi ho'.aur yeh gown kyun
pehna'ase jada achi lag rahi thi'.priya was blushing with his
comment'.ram aap bhi na'kuch bhi kehte h'ram's eyes went on the
diary..he bent on the bed and took the diary'saw the rose pasted in
it'.priya yeh kya h'priya smiled and bite her lower lip'.and said kuch
ni'ram read'the words'.indicated to rose ' "ram and priya are one '
Ram -are yeh raya ka kya matlab hua..?
Priya ' ram aur priya is one "ra" for "ram"'"ya" for "priya"..
Ram - And peehu and ansh'.are yeh toh mere twins ke naam ha na priya ?
' bahut sweet h'I promise main yehi naam rakhunga'.par muje phele
peehu chaiye'samje'jaise tumne name select kiya na..vase 'muje peehu
pehele'aur ansh baad me'samje'g'.
Priya - ram kya keh rahe h'.ab yeh sab toh mere hath me ni h'samje g'
came close to priya and looked into her eyes'and said'muje kuch ni
pta'jaan 'phele meri pari aayegi'gently kissed on her cheeks'
closed her eyes'and ram was looking him so'sweetly'wanted to kiss him
more..but'somewhere he was feeling hungry'said..priya'
She opened her eyes - hanji'
Ram ' ek baat kahu'
Ram ' I m hungry'.muje na bahut jor se bhuk lagi h'.
Priya smiled and said'ram u r impossible'.boliye kya kahana h'?
Ram ' kuch bhi le aao..bas 5 mins se jada ni..samje' es se jada der tumhare bina ni reh sakta'.
Priya- ram 5 min me kya banega a...ap hi btato'main bana dungi'
Ram ' thought for a while ' Maggie'.2 min me'.
nice option'abhi lati hu..ok'but ap darwaza ander se band kar lena'I
hope sab so chuke h'koi kitchen me bhi ni hoga toh main jaldi lati hu'ok
Ram - ok'but not more than 5 mins'
Priya ' ok baba'.
bolted the door'ram went to window'and took a packet from outside'as
priya's room was on ground floor'he bought some chocolates and
pastries.. and candle for there "first candle light dinner"'
went to the table and decorated it with 'candle'in center a big one'open
the box of pastries'lighted a small candle in it and placed a dairy
milk silk chocolate near it...and some small candles in the whole
room'room was lighting only with candles'.he switches off the light'and
went near the door'.opened it'when priya came'he hold her tells her plz
close ur eyes no ques'
Took her inside'said jaan open ur eyes'.closes the door..
Priya opened her eyes'.saw'room is lighted with small candles'and table was looking'awesome'.she said'ram yeh 'thank u so'much'
Ram 'bend on his kness ..would u like to have our first date with me'?
Priya was looking him with lots of love'says'yes'jaan..
Ram ' kya kaha apne?...
Ram - now u will only call me jaan'.samje g'chale'
Both went to table'ram hold the bowl of Maggie'.and put it on table'
Ram said'jaan aaj hamari 'proposal day h'so'wanted to celebrate it with u'and
Now'yeh pastry cum'cake kate'.kya h na vo'es time cake khate ho jada ho jata'es liye pastry lekar aaya hu'.
ram love u lot'.chalo cut kare'priya hold his hand and both blew the
candle together'on pastry and cut it 'priya feed ram'and ram feed
priya'with lots of love'
Ram ' yeh chocolate laya hu'tumhare liye'yeh meri fav h'.socha apni pasand tumhe bhi taste karva du'.
the chocolate'.and took one bite..and and feed ram with same block of
chocolate'adhi ' adhi khane se pyar badta h' .
Priya - ram yeh Maggie thandi ho jayegi'kha liye ji '.
Ram - hum sath sath me khayehnge'.adhi - adhi'
Priya - chalo'both sat on chairs'.
Ram - tum apne hath se khilao na'jada tasty lagegi'.
Priya'..yeh lo'took some Maggie in fork'and feed ram'
Ram ' then ram did the same'
' (naughty mood)..took some Maggie'as she was about to giving him'ate
herself'and ram was looking her with mouth open'she teased him with the
Ab aaya maza'ram?
Ram ' ram also came in naughty
mood'priya abhi btata hu'he moved from his chair'took one block of
chocolate..and took half in his mouth went near priya'she was not able
to move from the chair'he hold her hands'and moves closed to her
face'both can feel the breath of each other'ram was looking passionately
in her eyes'priya also moved closer to him..ram took her in his arms
from the chair'.laid her on the bed'both were sharing intense eye
lock..both wanted to come close'ram one hand under her head'.and by
another he..hold her waist..she felt like'shivering'her one hand resting
on ram's chest'.and other on ram's neck'.ram bend himself down'.
made her grip on his neck'.looking each other'lovingly'ram came close
to her lips'pressed the chocolate on her lips...she took the chocolate
in her mouth both'kissed each other and shared the chocolate'after
chocolate finished'both kissed passionately'for few moments..priya's
hand in ram's hair'ram's hand on priya's waist'both were enjoying there
first kiss..'boths heart were beating fast'.and both were breathing
fast'then ram moved back after sometime..'saw priya's eyes closed'.said
'jaan'I love u'very much'.par abhi ke liye etna hi kafi h'.priya opened
her eyes and saw a sweet pleasure in his eyes'and somewhere she thanks
god'for sending a person like ram in her life'.he is so'caring and good
natured'she hugs him tighly'ram hugged her back'
For atleast half
an hour'they hugged each other and sweet silence b/w them was there'and
sometimes words are not needed'only our actions says everything'both
were feeling same'..after some time both slept in each others
arms'.around 5.30am priya opened her eyes'she was smiling'with a new
feeling as first time in her life she was sleeping with her lover'her
life'.and then'.woke up'and saw ram sleeping in her arms'she kissed his
forehead'made ram sleep properly'as he was wearing shores'she opened his
shoes'and covered him with duvet'she cleaned the room'she was
remembering the moment they shared with each other'and smiling'
one hour..she went near ram..kissed his forehead'.ram subah ho gyi h
..uth jaiye'ghar bhi jana h na'apko'.ram wake up with her touch'saw her
smiling face'and said'hamari har subah ese hi hogi na'shaadi ke baad'
priya..hanji..ram'jaurur hogi..but abhi aap utho'agar kisi ne dekh liya na sab garbad ho jayegi'
Ram ' acha yeh toh main bhul hi gya ki main tumhare ghar me hu'sorry'.are mere jute kisne utare'.
Priya.- bhoot aaya tha'.
Ram ' bhoot ni'bhootni..and laughs'
' gave her hitler looks first time'ram was shocked with her looks and
said bhootni nahi.. hitler..ya fir ' sherni' aayi thi'samji'.and wore
his shoes quickly,'.acha suno kal ki chuti le lena we will spend some
time together'be ready for our 2nd date jaan'
Priya ' acha
thik..h'I call tell u'abhi jao'slides the window'ram'gets out of it'and
she was looking ki koi aa na jaye'as she knw her papa goes for a walk in
morning around 7 am'.
Ram climbs the outside wall and sits in the car..and calls her'priya I m ok'tum jao'
Priya took a deep breath'..
Flash back ends'
Dr came and said 'sir gud news h'.mubarak ho'.beti hui h'.
Ram , kk, risha rushed towards the operation therater'ram - priya kaisi h'.
' sir abhi kuch ni keh sakte,blood loss kafi hua h'.and abhi toh ek
baby par condition etni kharab h'we can't say anything'sir apko baby
abhi ni mil sakti she is only 2 kgshe is very weak and hume use under
observation rakhna hoga...
ram - ma maine kaha tha na ...peehu hi h...muje pta tha..
ram was happy with news but
'somewhere his heart was beating so'fast'because his love was not
fine'.said ' priya'tumhare bina mat nahi reh paunga'.aur peehu aur ansh
ko hum milkar pyar karenge'yeh hamara vaada tha'main unhe tab tak ni
dekhunga jab tak main tumhe na dekhlu'meri liye tumhare se bad kar peehu
aur ansh bhi ni h'.priya'.
Ram's phone rang'vik's call'
sorry yr tera trip khraab ho gya'hamari vajah se(full family had gone
for spain trip'as priya's delivery was after 2 weeks..so they went'for
Vik- ram tu pagal ho gya h ..kya'priya se jada imp kuch ni h hamare liye bhi'jaldi bta kaisi h'.?
Ram ' yr meri jaan nikili ja rahi'plz jaldi aa ja'.i not able to handle the situation'
Neha- tooks the phone'ram hum 10 min me pahuch rahe h'tum chinta mat karo'priya will be fine'kuch ni hoga'tum himmat mat haro'
Ram ' neha'muje kuch samaj me nahi aa raha h'.muje bahut dar lag raha h'
Neha ' just calm down we are coming '
After 10 mins'both reaches the hospital
Vik and neha hugs ram ' ram was in tears'.neha'wipped his tears'said'ram ese ni rote'priya ko pta chalega toh kya java doge'use'
Ram - hugged vik more tightly'he comforted him'.
Vik - ram tu shant ho ja'main drs se baat karta hu,'
To be continued'.
Ak calls sudir'decides to meet'.
Ram and priya spend full day together'.
Edited by srishtigupta - 04 November 2012 at 9:06pm
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