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Hey shrishti... Hyiieee. woaaahhh FF yaar.. ieee Kya starting hai... Lalallaa.. Priya is docter... bt priya ram kapoor jyada suit krta hai... Heart Awsm yaar.. cntinue soon... n hey Pm me plzzz..weneva u cntinue

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part 2

awesome update yaar what an idea sirji loved it completly... RaYa soon gonna have baby... n RaYa's love story is also abt to take off.. but use pehle hi checking aa gayi no prob but it really feeling so gud even cute... i love that Ram's sleeping part n Priya runs her fingers in Ram's hair even that rain one too... just like perfect as RaYaliuciouse n cuteness filled loving the story plz connt... n hope Priya ' their babies will ok at the end... do update next soon... waiting... n PM me if u can next time...

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Awwwiiieee.. pArt-2 Is also amazing... raya parents banne wale hai.. woaaahhh.. yiippiiiee.. hey bt priya is in critical state na.Unhappy Flashback is amazing..Dono k dil m ek Hi baat** Dil ye bekaraar kyu hai** haaayyeee amazing yaar

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sorry dear frnds ...electricity ki problem ho gyi thi...sorry for delay...

Part 3..

Ram reached US at nuts place'nuts opens the door'.said'bhai'.in full excitement'.and hugged ram'ram was shocked with his behavior'he was not able to understand..what was going'.he asked'.choti'what's this'

Ram - Tum toh thik ho'pta h main kitna dar gya tha'meri jaan nikal gyi thi aur tu has rahi'now tell me'kya hua'

Nuts- ok'sorry bhai..par baat hi esi thi ki'kya karti'

Ram ' are hua kya,

Nuts closed her eyes and said 'bhai I m in love'.

Ram ' sachi'.?

Nuts- open her eyes and so'excitement in his eyes'ya'sachi'

Ram ' acha jaldi bta kaun h wo?

Nuts ' bhai aap use jante h ache se..

Ram- plz jaldi bta'mujse ab control ni ho raha h..

Nuts- kartik..sharma uncle ka beta'

Ram ' r u crazy nuts?

Nuts- plz naraz mat ho..dekho main us se bahut aur vo  mujse bahut pyar karta h'plz bhai aap papa se aur uncle se baat karoge na'? bolo na bhai'

Ram- looking her with full confusion'thinks'priya this is destiny'says..

Are tuje aur koi ni milta tha kya'

Nuts 'thik h bhai main apse baat ni karti jao..

Ram- are main toh majak kar raha tha'look at me'dekh..na'I think kartik se acha ladka toh main ni dund pata tere liye'main khud tera rista lekar jaunga..ok'now give me tight wali hug'

Nuts became happy and hugged him'tightly'

After some time nuts called kartik to meet ram'

Door bell rings'nuts open the door'

Nuts- hi'kaise ho'?

Karthik ' hi'main thik hu'sir aa gaye'muje bahut dar lag raha h..nuts..kuch hoga toh ni na'.

Nuts ' are yeh toh muje propose karne se phele sochna tha.. na?...ab bhai ke aage kya ho gya'.

Karthik ' tumhe to main handle kar sakta hu'par sir ke samne to meri bolti hi band ho jati h'office tak toh thik tha'

Nuts -  acha chalo..main hu na'

Karthik went inside'and meets ram..

Ram ' hello karthik'kaise ho?

Karthik ' sir thik hu'wo..sab etni jaldi ho gya ki'I m sorry sir'

Ram ' are sorry kyun bol rahe ho'lagta h tum nuts se pyar ni karte?

Karthik ' ni sir I mean bahut pyar karta hu aur I promise main use hamesha khush rakhunga'kabhi uski ankhen me aasu ni aane dungaa'

Ram ' yeh hui na baat'I m so happy ki nuts ne tumhe chuna'agar yeh na pasand na karti toh main khud tum se baat kar leta'aur yeh sir sir..kya laga rakha h'call me bhai..nuts bhi bahi kehti h'thinks..(waise  toh  jiju kehna chahiye par abhi ke liye bhai se kam chala')

Karthik'thank u bhaiya ..but ek problem h'meri di..toh muje mar delengi'

Ram ' kyun?

Karthik'actually aaj tak unse maine kabhi koi baat ni chupayi'life ki sab se badi baat unhe ni btai'vo bahut gussa karengi..i know her..i know ki un se jada khush aur koi ni hoga 'but muje toh sach me dar lag raha h'main kya karu kuch samaj me nahi aa raha h'

Ram 'ok tum kuch mat socho'tumhari di ko manane ki jimedari meri'ok'

Ab khush'aur kuch'gharwalo se main baat karlunga'bas papa jaldi se thik ho jaye'fir karta hu'

Nuts- bhai papa ko kya hua'vo thik toh h na?

Ram  -kuch ni bas ab thik h..thoda problem ho gya tha..as sab thik h'ab wapis jane ka program decide karo'jaldi'

Nuts ' bhai  can u wait for 2 days'thoda kam baki h..fir main aur karthik bhi apke sath challenge'plz bhai'

Ram  - 2 days more?...thinking..priya toh ab sach me muje mar dalegi'ek toh bina bataye aa gaya'.upar se 2 din'

nuts shakes his hand'says'bhai ' kaha kho gye' are kuch ni..ha..2 din baad..ok..but 2 din se jada ni..samje'muje kuch imp pending kam h'jo vaha ja kar pura karna h'

Nuts ' ok..bhai..hum abhi'ja rahe h..thoda shopping karne..ap rest karlo'

Ram ' ok..jao'

 

Ram sitting on bed'thinking 'priya..ab toh hamara rishta aur bhi pakka ho jayega'.meri pyari si nuts tumhare ghar aayegi'I m really happy'fir tum bhi mere ghar aa jaogi'yr..yeh bechani toh badti ja rahi h'aab kya karu'na toh baat kar sakta hu'aur upar se yeh 2 din'pta ni kaise katenge'

'.

Priya in evening return home and said to kaka'ek coffee bana di jiye..bahut thak gayi hu aaj'plz'go to her room and freshens up'and sits on the bed'

Opens her diary'starts writing something'wrote full page'and kisses her diary'and smiles'then coffee comes'sips the coffee and says  " ab toh coffee me bhi maza ni aa raha h 'ram apke bina'kash aap samne hote aur apko dekh dekh kar coffee piti'toh jada maza aata'closes her eyes'missing u soo'much'kab aaoge'wapis'bas ek baar apko dekhne ka maan kar raha 'plz jaldi aa jao'.

Ram came back to reality'

He was sweating badly'he goes to operation theater 'his heart is beating very fast'.but no ans is coming from any doctors..'

He goes to priya's cabin'to feel her presence 'so that he can relax for some moments'

As he enters the cabin his eyes falls on the pic on her table'pic of ram and priya'hugging each other'he took it in hand'touched her photo with fingers..says'I love so..much..sab thik ho jayega'god can see our love each other..'vo tumhe kuch ni hone denge priya'es din ka hum dono ko besabri se entejar tha'I know tum bahut strong ho'tum fight kar logi'aur hamri dream ko pura karogi'I love u soo much'and I know u also love me 'so'much'

Then he turns and see's the wall'thinks'

Flashback..

After 2 days..as ram landed airport..he says nuts..muje jana h'kam h..tum ghar jao'main vahi aa kar baat karunga'

Ram reaches the hospital'silently runs to the her cabin'.and sees that she is not there..yeh kaha gyi'?

Entered her cabin and switch's off the light'only night lamp was on'and stood behind the door'.and starts watching priya'as this was lunch break..she came  alone'she stood in front of her cabin and think'maine toh light on chodi thi par yeh band kaise ho gyi'

As soon she opens the door, suddenly she was dragged inside'.ram hold her tightly from behind putting one hand on her mouth so that she shall not scream'and her other hand with on her waist..pulled her 'towards him'.his back facing the wall and her back'rested on his chest'his hands on her mouth'he came near her ears'she could feel his breath'could smell his perfume..same with him'

Ram ' priya'I missed u soo..much'these 4 days were very long  for me'priya was lost in his words..she felt like her heartbeats were stopped for  a while'.her body was shivering with his  touch and this feeling was new for her' she was not able to come back to her senses'.with this he turned her and looked into her eyes'but his hand was on her mouth..pulled her towards'from the waist'.said- "thanks for coming in my life"  puts his hand down'.she hugged him tighly'.ram also hugged her'both were lost in each other'.after some time priya broke the hug'said'bta ke nahi ja sakte the'pta h ..mere halat bhi apke jaisi thi'yeh 4 din 4 sadiyo ki tarah gujare'khatam hi hone me nahi aa rahe the... 

Ram bend down on his knees, took a rose attached with two small rose buds from his coat  and said ' "I love u priya' would u  to like to become Dr. Priya Ram Kapoor'and mother of my twins."'he gave rose to her "priya u are my rose and these two rose buds are our twins"'.priya was not able believe on her eyes and ears...

she was smiling with tears'.and said '..ram apko twins chaiye?

...ram- ha'ek tumare jaisi pari aur ek mere jaise rajkumar'.priya took the rose and kissed the rose buds'.said'

Priya ' 'I will love to become mother of our twins'

He holds her hand and kissed her gently'.

Both shared a lovely eye lock'bg music..

(Pyar hai jo ehsaash kissi ko najar nahi'aye..

Chori..chori'chupke..chupke'dil ke kamre me aa jaye'

Bade ache lagte hai'yeh baatein'mulakate'yeh yaadein aur tum'

Main gum ho jau tujme aur aur tum mujme kho jao'main ban jau'sargam 'apne .hooton se muje gaa..bade ache lagte hai'.yeh dharti'yeh naddiya'yeh raina'aur tum'..'.)

After some time 'both came to reality'ram this is hospital'aab aap jao..we will talk later'muje abhi patients ko attend karna h'plz..

Ram ' priya tumhara dil ka mareez toh yehi khada h'aur patients se phele is ka elaj toh kardo'.are koi medicine toh do na'

Priya- ram kyun majak kar rahe h'plz abhi jao'came close to his ear'apko medicine sham ko milegi'samje janab'abhi aap jaye..

Ram ' made a pubby face..priya looks him..ram kyun kids ki tarah behave kar rahe h'acha only one'she came close kissed him on his cheeks'.

Ram ' dr priya'etni si dose se apke es patient ka kuch ni hoga'heavy dose chaiye sham ko'samje..memsab'

Priya was blushing'with his words..and went to..on the lights'look him..ram give ur number'he gave his number'and went'

After 10mins ram called her'

Priya.  ' hello'ab kya hua'?

Ram ' tumhari yaad aa rahi h'.

Priya ' abhi main busy hu'plz sham ko baat kare'lunch time over ho chukka 'samja karo na'.

Ram  - ok..thik h'tum etne pyar se samjaogi toh kaise ni samjhunga'.sham ko kab free ho jayegi aap?

Priya ' I will call u'

Ram ' I will wait for ur call'love u bye'

Priya ' love u 2'abhi rakho'.muje kam h'round par jaana'h..bye

Ram ' bye'

After 2 hours'priya's phone rings'she picks up call without seeing hoping ram ka call hoga'.

Priya- without listen to voice'said bolo ab kya h?

Person ' are kya hua di'kisi aur ko expect kar rahe the kya?

Priya- sorry karthik  vo maine  dekha ni'aur suna kab aa raha h'missing u so much'.

Karthik ' missing u 2 di'vase apko main bta du ki main ghar par hi hu..abhi aaya hu'.

Priya- sach keh raha h'.main abhi jaldi se kam khatam kar ke 'aa rahi hu'

Karthik- di'jaldi aao muje apse kuch share karna h'.bahut jaruri h'

Priya ' esa kya h..hint toh na'plz ..ab mujse control ni hoga'

Karthik- phele promise karo aa gusa ni hoge'.

Priya- are esa kya kiya h tune jo main gusa hone lagu'bta na plz'

Karthik- vo di'vo..di'

Priya ' vo vo kya kar raha h'tell me'

Karthik- closing his eyes and said ' di maine apne liye ladki pasand kar li h'and I love her a lot'

Priya ' gets lot excited but some how thoda gussa bhi aata h..- acha ji to tune ladki pasand bhi karli aur muje tu aab pta raha h'koi baat ni'ghar ane de..fir dekhti hu tuje'

Karthik ' di..plz gusaa mat hona'main btana chahta tha apko phele par dar lag raha tha'

Priya ' vase kab se janta h'

Karthik ' 4 years se'vo mere sath me US me rehti thi ..she is top fashion designer..bahut sweet h..apko pasand aayegi'

Priya ' vo toh dekh hi pta chalega na'sham ko ghar aati hu'details muje tab btana'.ok'bye'.now'

Karthik ' see u at home'.

 

After finishing work ' she called ram ..

Ram ' hello ..

Priya- kya kar rahe h'aap?

Ram- tumhare phone ka wait'.

Priya ' kyun aur koi kam ni h kya apko'

Ram ' ab apke siwa kuch najar hi ni aata '

Priya ' acha ji'

Ram ' hanji'.acha tell me kaha milna h

 

Priya ' yehi btane ke liye phone kiya tha ki aaj possible ni hoga'vo karthik vapis aaya h'aur muje ghar jana hoga'

Ram ' are par mera kya'main 5 hrs se wait jo kar raha hu tumhari..this is not fair'

Priya -  mann toh mera bhi bahut h'.par

Ram ' par var kuch ni'only for half hour..muje bhi tumhe kuch btana h'bahut jaruri h'.

Priya ' ok'kaha jaldi bolo beach  par  chale'

Ram ' aaj ni'coffee pite h'main hospital ke pass hi hu'.kuch kam that toh aya aay hu'canteen tak chalo'coming within 5mins'ok

Priya ' thik h'going now'.

After 10 mins both meet at canteen '

Ram ' hi'

Priya ' hi..muje apko gus news deni h'full excitement'

Ram ' ok..jaldi bolo'

 

Priya ' karthik is in love'.wow. na'

Ram -  muje pta h'.

Priya 'looking him confusingly'- apko kaise pta'

Ram ' usne tumhe btaya'ki vo ladki kaun h?

Priya -  ni jada ni btaya'bas kaha ki'vo top fasion designer h'4yrs se janta h'aur 'she is sweet'

Ram ' (looking straight into her eyes'.. )  acha etna kuch kaha'naam ni btaya'ok..main btata hu'she is NATASHA KAPOORmy younger sister

Priya was in shock..and was not able to react'

Ram saw heractionsputs his hand on hers'and blinks his eyes'looking her with love

Priya ' was smiling'and small tears on the core of her eyes'

Ram ' priya maine kaha than a its destiny'

Priya- muje bhi lagne laga h ram '

Ram ' in naughty mood ' vase abhi canteen me koi nahi h'.u can have me my heavy dose'.ni toh raat ko neend ni aayegi'na'

Priya- was looking down and didn't  understood what to say'

Ram ' are upar toh dekho na'esa kya keh diya maine'sirf heavy dose hi toh mangi h'.

Ram took her hand softly and went towards window'opened it'said ' priya yeh jagah muje hamesha yaad rahegi'maine yaha apni life ka first practical experience sikha h'moved backwards..and hold her from waist with her hands in his hands' and rest'his head on her shoulders..priya'main apni sari life apke sath bitana chahta hu'..priya closed her eyes'and loves the moments'and ram was enjoying this new feeling'

Priya ' ram muje kuch kehna h apse'If u don't mind'

Ram ' plz yeh permission mat liya karo'.bolo'

Priya- ram main hamare relation to thoda waqt dena chahti'apko jaana chahti hu'samajna chahti hu'apke sath waqt bitana chahti'means ki muje en moments ko enjoy karna h'I think aap samaj rahe ho na'

Ram ' priya main bhi tumse yehi kehna chahta h'tum ne to mere dil ki baat kehdi'muje koi jaldi ni..h'vase bhi lovers ki tarah life ko enjoy karna chahta hu tumhare sath'.yeh awesome experience jina chahta hu'.thanks priya for understanding our relation'.jab tumhe thik lagega we will talk about ur relation in our house'.thik h'moves closer to her'kisses softly on her cheeks'priya was lost in his touch'.said ab chale'

For a moment priya doesn't want to go'but she controlled herself..and kissed gently on his cheeks'.chalo'

Ram ' main ghar ja kar nuts ke liye baat karke tumhe bta dunga'ok

Priya- thik h'I 'will wait for ur'call'

Both goes to home'.

 to be continued'..

note- sorry dear frnds English jada achi toh ni h'par trying my best'.so forgive me agar koi galti ho jaye'.thanks for ur support'



Edited by srishtigupta - 03 November 2012 at 8:56am

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hey  really  loved it ..  

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Read all parts.. loved it..

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Hey very nice nd thanx for pm

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it ws a fab update dear.. luved the way he proposed
' "I love u priya'would to like to become Dr. Priya Ram Kapoor'and mother of my twins.
priya u are my rose and these two rose buds are our twins
awww... that ws the best part.. nw plz continue sooon.SmileSmileSmile


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