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i jst hope ki she gets normal soon n my prayers are with her n thanx to u for conveying this news to us these disgusting people for their inhuman behaviour must get severe punishment

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Awesome yaar... tooo Good

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Wow too good yar Clap pm me nxt update i just love it

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PART 8

Flash back ''

After few hours sam started crying'.priya woke up immedtialy and took sam in her arms'.try to comfort her'.she then checked the feeder  which was empty'after hearing the crying of sam 'ram also woke up'asked priya kya hua'kyun roh raha h'..priya 'ram ap ese sambhaliye'main dud lati hu'khatam ho gya h'.priya left'..then ram took sam in his arms'as he was crying ram took him near his heart'he suddenly stopped crying listen to his heart beat'ram places a kiss on his forhead,'said rokte hi 'sam toh papa ka raja beta h na'.ha'na sam'.trying to convert his mind from crying'he was feeling hungry'..so he started crying again'then ram took him in his arms and started rooming in the room'.carrying in his arms '.talking to him'.in meanwhile priya came'then ram took sam to the bed'.placed him in priya's lap'.she puts the bottle in his mouth'wiped his tears'.said 'are me bachha etna kyun roya'kal se muma sam ke liye dud room me hi rakhegi'..thik'.rote ne '.then sam started sucking the milk'.ram was looking him'.kissed his fingers'.and gave priya the morning kiss..(hope u remember guys..)'.after some time ram said priya now I m going '.main vik ke ghar ja raha hu,'maine use keh diya tha'.

Priya ' ram aap etni subah subah kaha jayenge'.i mean vik ke ghar'.vo bhi etni jaldi'.(pointing to the clock it was 3 clock'.)

Ram ' maine use kaha tha ki main aaunga 'toh us ne apne ghar par guard ko keh rakha h,'thik h'.he kissed her forhead and said 'aaj sham ko milne aaunga'din me office jana h'thik h'(are kya karu ab tumhare samne raha toh tumhe varat ka pta chal jayega na'..thinking to himself'.tumhe surprise jo dena h na jaan'.)

Priya ' touches his cheeks and said  - jao'sham ko jarur aana'ok'sam aur main apka wait karenge'..

Ram ' kissed sam's cheeks and said ' muma ko tang ni karna ok'sam is gud boy na'no crying'muma h apke pass , nanu h, nani h'.mera raja beta royega toh ni na'.sam smiled at him'.touching ram's cheeks'with small fingers'.while drinking milk')

Ram moved towards the window'once saw sam and priya 'priya gave him flying kiss'..then he left'.

Around 4 am'

Priya got the knock at door'.shipra was there,'.

Priya settled sam in center of the bed'.then went to the door'and opened it'said aaye ma'.

Shipra ' gave her the sargi which was yesterday send by kk '.she said tumhe yeh sham ko phena h'.then yeh kha lo'ok'

Priya took it and said ma.. ma ni aayi'.(asking  for kk)??

Shipra - vo abhi thodi der me aati hongi'.tu tyar ho ja'nuts bhi aane wali h'.ok'aur mera sam kya kar raha h'.main eske  rone ki aawaz suni??

Priya ' use bhukh lagi thi toh rone laga tha'ab thik h'dekho ab khel raha h'.

Shipra ' priya aaj main tujhe eski massage karna aur nahlana bhi bta dungi'es 8 tak massage karke , nahlan denge'thik'muje bula lena'priya said  -thik h ma'

Shipra went towards sam'.kissed his forhead'.and left'

Priya goes near sam..he was on the bed'bending towards him...'.picked and showed him the sari send by kk'.said "dekho sam muma aaj sham ko yeh pahengi'achi h na"'.sam smiled while her muma was talking to him'.acha g'mere sam ko pasand aayi'.sam pta h apke papa na bahut sweet h'after lisening to papa's name sam started touching priya's cheeks'priya said ' "papa ka naam toh sunate hi ap toh aur bhi smile karne lage'." Touching his small fingers'

Took him in her lap'.she checked sameer 'he was totally wet 'his all clothes were wet'.she checked the bedsheet was also wet'..she said beta apne toh sab gila kar rakha h'aur aap roye bhi ni '.ruko muma abhi change karti h'.she picked new dress from the bag, his pajami, new under garments, and piece of cloth she made yesterday instead of using dipper'.

She closed the door'and switched on the warmer'to keep the room temperature down'.as the this was rainy reason'..then went near sam'took him in her lap..removed his all clothes'.there was smell in his body due to wet clothes'she decided to give him wet spounge with hot wet towel'.she immendiately wraped him in big towel. Took him in her arms and went to the bathroom , brought warm water, then dipped a small towel in warm water check it with it her hands and then spounge sam with the towel'.she saw his rashes were recovered a little..she puts the onintment on that'.he started crying'.again'.she took him her lap'to conmfort him'saying'no baby roti ni'bas ho gaya'.abhi dekho 'hum yeh new dress pehenega na'..(red color..) dekho papa sam ke liye kitni sunder dress laye h'.she then started dressing him'.then there was knock on the door'.

Priya ' kaun h?

Kk ' and nuts ' kya hum ander aa sakte hai?

Priya ' aaye na ma'yeh bhi koi puchne ki baat h'.aaoo nuts'.dekho sam dadi aur bua aaye h'(pointing towards them)

Kk and nuts came in 'kk and nuts said oye hamara raj kumar roh kyun raha h'.hamara'priya kya hua'.

Priya ' ma sare kapde gile kar rakhe the toh change kar rahi hu'.while wearing his t shirt'.nayi sam rote ni'.

Kk ' took him from priya's lap'.comforted him'.are mera sam kyun roya'etne sare aasu'.priya showed ma the rashes'and said ma'.yeh dawai lagane ke baad kal bhi ese hi roya tha'.kk said ' koi baat ni priya'ab dadi apne sam ko pajami pehnaegi'.ha na sam'.she helped priya in wearing his rest of the clothes'.then kk handover sam to priya 'priya feed him'he stopped crying'.she wiped his tears'

Nuts ' are yeh baby toh aaj bahut handsome lag raha h'.talking to sam'.holding his small fingers'.kissing him'

Kk - Priya abhi ese muje do..tum tyar ho jao'.phir sargi khilati hu'

Priya ' ha ma bas abhi 'yeh bedsheet change karu'.sara gila h na'ap couch par beh jaye,,'.then changed the sheets'.

Priya got ready'meanwhile sam slept in nuts arms'while playing'.with her'

Priya took sam made him sleep properly'.and covered him with duvet'.kk gave sargi to priya'she took blessing from kk'.shirpra gave sargi to nuts'she also took blessings from her'.both ate the sargi'and priya slept with sam for sometime'.nuts also slept with priya'kk was with shipra'

Shipra came knocked the door'.priya and nuts woke up and said ha ma'kahiye'

She said sam ko massage dena h na'toh Krishna ji bhi wait kar rahi h'.priya said ha ma 'ma ko keh dijiye aa jaye'.nuts took all his clothes and oil'.collected all the imp things at one place'

kk- aao priya I will give u training now'.priya smiled, with all the voices sam also woke up'..priya took him in her lap'.krishna ji and shipra were guiding priya'she removed his clothes'.and took the baby massage oil'..and started massaging him'all were enjoying sam's cute gestures'he was playing with his legs moving them up and down'.priya was enjoying her new mother hood'.she was massaging him as told by both'she then wrapped him in the cloth'.nuts picked him'then kk told priya to give him bath soap'guiding her'how to give him bath'.

She gave bath to sam'.sam started crying when she poured water on him'she then slowly slowly used the soap while kk and nuts were holding him'.priya poured the water on him'wrapped him in a towel nuts took him to the bed'then wored new clothes'.(purple color)..priya took sam and feed him again 'he slept after some time'.

Kk, shipra were enjoying there grand mother hood'.they were very happy'then nuts went back '.to km'.kk guided priya to give him proper liquid crushed  dal soup'in smallintervals'.also with milk'.then she also came back to km'.

 

Priya took her diary and wrote her each and every thing in diary'.her each moments spent with ram and sam till now'which cant be expressed by teeling so she worte in that'..

She was enjoying every bit'she was very happy from heart'..some times while wirting small tears were there in her eyes of happiness'.because she can't express her happiness in words'.she closed the diary and call dr rajat'.rajat picks the call'

Priya ' hii rajat'.kaise ho?

Rajat  - hi priya, kya baat h yr aaj kal dekhti hi nahi ho?...hospital se chutti bhi le rakhi h'na phone, na kuch'.kuch to batao na'

Priya ' actually rajat sab etni jaldi hua ki kya kahu,,,,vo'main , I mean I m in love'

Rajat ' sachi priya'.wow'that's a great news'.kab milva rahi ho apne unse..tabi mani kahu tumhe apne dost ki yaad kyun nahi aa rahi h etne dino se'.?

Priya ' plz rajat donot tease me now'acha I also have something more to tell u'.

Rajat ' acha batao '

Priya ' tells the whole story of ram and sam'.

Rajat  - was very happy to see priya's excitement'.aur muje sam se kab milva rahi ho'.

Priya ' I need a favour from u'will u help me'.

Rajat ' ek taraf dost kehti ho aur dusri taraf fav'yr this not fair'bolo how can I help my dear frnd'

Priya ' rajat I want to buy something unqiue for ram and sam, to give them tomorrow after marriage'.if u r can take off for sometime'.can we go together'.i want to give him surprise'..somthing in jewellery '.

Rajat 'ya sure priya'esa karo tum tyar hoke 1 ghante me paras down mall par milo 'I know some shops there as they are in realtion to me,'they can suggest us something nice'.

Priya  - ya sure'

Rajat ' and listen plz bring sam with u'I want to see him'.how's ur son looks.'ok'.

Priya ' ya sure,'

 

In ram's office

Ram to vik ' I want to buy something unique for priya and sam'..want's to gift her after marriage'.

Vik ' that's a great idea'I think we shall also call mallika na '.vo bhi tuje kitni baar puch chuki h'.jab se australia se lauta h na'tab se tere bare me hi puch rahi'aur tu h ki najar hi nahi aata'

Ram ' acha 'toh use bhi bula le'.paras down mall chalte h'I knew some shops there'.we will find something great there'..

Vik  - ya sure'.(called the'.mallika to come there'she was very excited'she thought ram was coming to meet him')

Ram and vik , priya holding sam and rajat reached the paras down mall'..(approx ) at same time'.but entered from different gates'.

On other side'.

Priya met rajat'.hii'.kaise ho..?

Rajat ' main thik hu'are yeh sam h na'.

Priya ' ha'.she was holding her in her arms'.rajat'.took him in his arms and kissed her forhead'u are sweet like ur muma na'.god bless u '.main apki muma ka best frnd hu'.so'.aapko muma ke sath shopping karna h'? chalo'moved forward towards the shop'.

Ram and vik entered a shop'.

Ram said to vik ' aaj toh priya ka fast h na'.toh muje use aaj bhi kuch dena chahiye na'.

Vik ' ha yr 'chal dekhte h'.

Otherside'.it was around now 2 a clock'.

Priya was looking some unique braclet for ram and nice ring'..she took a nice and unique braclet 'told the sales man to get something engraved on that'then she was not finding a gud ring for him'.she saw something for sam'a chain of gold'.and selected and asked it to pack'she went to other shop'.

Ram to salesman ' show something unique..in diamond and platinum'

Ram was looking the designs'.vik yeh dekh'yeh wala design acha h'pura set h (necklace with ear rings and ring'.) priya par acha lagega'na'vik ..ha..

Ram plz pack this'.and show something in platinum'.also'.

They showed to ram '.suddenly a voice came from back'hi ram'she was none other than mallika'.ram turned'.a smile came on rams face'ram moved forward'she hugged ram very tightly (thinking ram today I will express u my feelings'that I love u really a lot')then..(''.suddenly priya was passing through the shop'.she saw them'.priya was seeing ram's face expressions') ram was telling mallika in her ears malika I m in love with priya'.ram moved his face and said yeh mallika I love priya 'a lot'I m getting marriaged with her tomorrow'.she hugged him more tighly'..(priya for a movement she was not able to believe on her eyes'she trusted ram but from few days they spent a time together so she was not able to digest it'she can see how tigtly they were hugging each other'.she was  fuming with anger'.from inside'thought to call him'from there'.ram saw priya's call'and smiled'.while mallika was very close to her'.said  - hi'kya kar rahi ho...priya controlled herself '.and said'.aap batao kaha ho'.ram thinking to himself'(main ese bolunga ki mall me hut oh sara surprise khrab ho jayega') then said office me hu'kyun kuch kam tha'.bolo'.priya was not able to believe that ram was lying to him'.for taking a girl in his arms he was lying'.she said  - sachi,'.ram said ' ha jaan'.jaruri kam kar raha hu'.

Priya ' a tear dropped from her eye'se took a deep breath and said continue ur work'bye'I think maine apko apke jaruri kam me disturb ni kiya'.sounding strange'with only anger'.cuts the call...

Ram -  (sensed that something is strange feeling for priya)'. he suddenly looked up'.saw priya's image turning from backside'holding sam in her arms'he said oh shit'closed his eyes'..controlled himself'.said ab main  gya ,pakka muje mar dalegi'thodi der wait karne ke baad jata hu'..(remember their previous conversation'apko nahi use mar dalungi'.)then left mallika '.meanwhile priya tells rajat'.to go to home ..she has to do puja'both left..she took the he excused him'from there'

.when ram left mallika'she was feeling as she was going to lose ram'.she thought  - ram u r just mine'.tum kisi aur ke nahi ho sakte'.tonight I will make u mine'this is my promise'fir dekhti hu kaun tumhe mujse chinta h'.she smiled call somebody and tells to do some arrangements'.

Ram explained the whole situation to vik'he said tu use samajayega na toh'.jarur samjegi'.achi tu ja'yeh le la'use raat ko dena ok'.then mallika came with fake smile and tells ram'etna sab ho gya 'aur hamari party bi baki h'.kyun vik'.

Vik said ha ram'.mallika said aaj 10 clock dinner tonight and then have some chit and chat only we 3 of us'. ram , vik and me'. after  lot of conving  by mallika..'ram agreed'.all left'

He called priya many times but she didn't picked the call'.he was worried a lot,'. priya was getting ready but her mind as again and again giving the flashes of ram and that girl and the words which ram told her'she was not getting ready whole heartedly'..she was struggling with her blouse hook'.suddenly a voice came '.of sliding the window from outside'she took the deep breath'just going to move away from him'.she felt his hands on her back'.holding the hook'she closed her eyes'a tear dropped '.ram came forward towards the ears..says'."jaan I m sorry"'.priya was moved a little after hearing his words'.she asked ' apko kaise pta main aapse naraz hu'.he said'.es liye kyunki maine apni jaan ki pyar bhari awaz sunnane ko taras raha hu subah se'.na aap phone utha rahe ho'maine apko mall me dekh liya tha'.she gets angry remembering the moment'..plz ram muje apse abhi koi baat ni karni h'.

Ram ' priya meri baat toh suno na'plz'.while locking the hook'.

Priya ' acha ab main apki baat sunu'par kyun''turns towards him'.jab uske gale lag rahe the tab toh bade khush ho rahe the 'ab mere samne bola sa muh bna kar kyun khade h?maine  apke liye fast rakha aur aap'.uske gale lag rahe the'..muje chod kar'.? wiping her tears'.

Ram ' trying to hold her hand 'but she refuses '.he said yr main tumhe maana chahta hu aur tum mujse baat bhi thik se nahi kar rahi ho'.varat toh maine bhi rakha h tumhare liye'. Priya looked into her eyes'.priya was looking into his eyes'.subah se bhukha hu'sirf tumhare liye'aur tum kehti ho main kisi aur ko'.nahi jaan esa kuch ni h'.she feels his love in each word'.priya said ram apne fast kyun rakha'.?...ram ' bcz I love u'yr'I can't live without u'.main chahta hu kit um mera sath har janam me do,'samje'.

Ram ' plz jaan listen to me'.he moves forward'hold her in his arms and tells jaan main vaha tumhare liye kuch lene gya tha'.fir mallika vaha aagyi'actually jab se vapis aayi h'tab se ek baar bhi nahi mili toh jada excited ho gyi so we hugged'main use tumhare bare me hi bta raha tha'.Priya was listening him'.looking into her dark eyes,'ram said'jaan'.i really sorry agar tumhe bura laga'putting his hands on his ears making '.making a cute face'.priya smiled as his actions'she puts his hands around his neck'.looking directly into his eyes'.says'.muje acha ni lga 'apko use hug karte hue dekh kar'yeh sirf mera haq h'samje'apne jab chuth bola toh muje aur bhi gussa aaya'.par I really love u'.agar dobara esa kiya na'toh main use sach me jaan se mar dungi'.samje'.

Ram  -maine chuth kyun bola uski bhi ek wajah h'.phele apni ankhen band karo'.

She obeyes him'rams moves back'takes outs the diamond necklace from his pocket of coat'.puts it around her neck and says and lock its'she feels something around her neck'.moves closer to her ears'said vase toh yeh main tumhe raat ko dena chahta tha par tumhe apne se jada der naraz nahi dekh sakta'.es liye abhi de raha hu'.she opened her eyes'.touched the necklace'.said ram yeh kyun??????

Ram ' pehle mirror se samne chalo'.fir dekhta hu'he hold her hands took near the mirror'.priya was standing'.in front 'ram at back'she saw in mirror'.it was diamond necklace'just simple and elegant'.adding to her beauty'.a lot'.she said ram its so'.beautiful'ram said 'I know jaan but not more than u'.ese lene hi gya'tha'priya 'ram main yeh ahi ni le sakti'.i mean'.ram'puts his finger on her lips and says'.priya its ur first kaurva chauth gift'.u did fast for my na'now I shall also give something to u'so'its for our love'jaan'.ese yahi rehne do'ab yeh jada acha lag raha h'.he handed over the ear rings and ring .. also'both were lost in the moment'.suddenly sam cried'.ram took sam and said ' priya tum tyar ho jao'.i will make him feed'abhi tum puja kar lo'

Ram took sam's feeder and started feeding him'looking priya'she was looking utmost beautiful '.he was lost in her beauty '.his thought broke when sam touched his hands'.with his legs.,,,he saw sam's was now playing'tooking him into his arms went with priya for puja'.all kapoors and sharma's were in the hall'all were shocked '.all said together ' "ram tum yaha'kaha se ander aaye'humne toh tumhe ander aate dekha ni'.."looking ram there'.he smiled shly'.priya was to shly smiling'

All did the puja'then ram and priya went to room back'.priya takes tea for ram and herself'.and water'.both enjoys the tea' playing with sam'.both were sitting'in each others arms'.talking to each other'enjoying jokes and playing with sam'..talking to him'.he was enjoying with his papa and muma'.then there was knock'on the door'shipra said priya chand nikal aaya h'chal'aa jata beta'.

Ram took sam and priya took puja thali and went upstairs'.ram and priya both were alone on terrace'she saw the moon through the chalni'.and then saw ram'.ram was smiling he said "aaj mera chand bahut khubsurat lag raha h"'.priya blushed 'and smiled'.priya said "aap bhi chand ko dek lo"'.ram said "vahi toh dekh raha hu jaan'.."..priya bits her lip slowly and looked his eyes seeing her with lots of love'.then ram gave water to drink with his hands'and priya also did the same for ram'.looking into each other eyes'.then both ate together the piece of barfi'.and kissed each other'.priya said ram neeche chalte h'sam ko thand na lag jaye'.

Both went in the room'.both ate their dinner together'till then sam slept'.ram took priya from the chair to the bed'she palced her hands around his neck'placed her on the bed'.looking her passionately'..ram bend on her'kissed her softly'touched her back'it was deep neck and slowly moved his hands around her waist'.giving her log of sentations'she was losing herself in him'.he kissed her face'.then down'.then her neck'.then going more deep'she wrapped her arms around him more tighly to give him full access'both were breathing fast'.ram was giving sentation on her legs with his'.she was loosing in'him'..want's more and more'.then ram removed the necklace'his all accessories'kissed his arms'his cheeks'his lips'passiontaley'both were lost in their kiss'.for long time'her hands in ram's hairs'.and his hands on her back'.ram was almost on her top'..

Then suddenly ram's phone rang'..both came back to their senses'.

Ram saw it was vik call'..call ended'as he was breathing very fast..he waited for sometime'to end the call'.priya hold him firmly asking him "kiska call h"'jaruri h kya"'..ram saw the time it was 9.45'..he rememeber about the party'he slams his head'.with his left hand'..said'priya I forgot'to tell u'I have to go for a party 'but I donot want'.priya smiled as his answer.'..kyun?...ram 'tumhe chodke jane ka mann nahi kar raha h'.priya said ' mann toh mera bhi nahi h apko bhejne ka but frnds are also imp na'so u go'.kal se toh hum hamesha ke liye ek ho jayenge na'..fir '. Ram smiled and kissed her forhead'.thanks jaan for understanding me

Priya - asking him'kya aap drink karte ho'?

Ram ' ha kabhi-2'.agar tum kahogi toh nahi karunga'

Priya ' actually muje pasand nahi h'fir bhi agar apko pasand h toh u can go for it but jada ni only 1 or 2'.ok'

Ram ' nhi priya agar meri jaan ko pasand ni h toh main nahi karunga'thik h'.

'.then he called vik and told that he is coming'..

Both softly kissed each other then ram left'he gave viks number to priya '.saying agar jarurat pade toh es par kar sakti ho'agar mera phone na lage'thik h'.i will come back here,,,,ok'

Ram went to hotel were vik and mallika were waiting for him'.vik asked for drink..he refushed telling that priya does not like it so he will not do it from today'.

Vik smiled how ram has changed a lot'.he was happy from inside'but mallika was not happy 'but showing that she was happy'she wants something else from ram'asked for juice...and said'ram kaunsa juice loge'.ram said apple'.she ordered apple juice and vik and mallika ordered orange juice'.she had give the heavy tip to waiter to mix the some sleeping pills in ram's drink'.

After drinks came'..all were enjoying their drinks'but ram felt heavy after drinking'.some how he managed to sit there,..but he was uneasy'after sometime vik left as neha had called him'.now mallika was free to do anything'.ram could not open his eyes'.she took ram hand's on her shoulders as ram felt like sleeping'she took him to the room she had booked for them'.with the help of waiter'.she gave the tip again 'waiter left the room'.ram was feeling uneasy'he could sensesomthing wrong gowing around him'.she pulled ram on bed'room was fully decorated'she came near ram'make him feels her breath'.ram was not in his senses,'his mind was thinking that she was priya'.she kissed him on his face'moving to his neck'.she started opening the buttons of his shirt'.kissing him on his chest'as soon she came near her'.ram could sense somewhere it was not the same smell that priya had'.she was not priya..he suddenly said "tum meri priya nahi ho'.plz don't do this'I m only belongs to priya'he loudly said'priya'plz kaha ho tum'.come to me'I need u'".in his uncousiness state'..but she didn't stopped'she kissed him more and more'.

Priya was sleeping but something was going in her mind'she suddenly woke up saying ram'.she was sweating like hell'.she was also uneasy'.she was breathing so hard'.she could sense that something is wrong with ram'.she has to go'she called ram but his mobile was switch off'

She then immediately call vik'.vik ' hello kaun'

Priya ' sorry vikram main priya bol rahi hu'.ram kaha h'.muje bahut garbrahat ho rahi h,'tell me'

Vik ' priya hum toh kab kea a gyae'I m sure vo ghar par hoga,,,

Priya ' nahi vik vo thik nahi jaha bhi h..muje feeling ho rahi h'vo thik nahi..h'.unka cell bhi band h'.vo yaha aane wale the party ke baad'will u take me to the hotel'.plz

Vik ' ya sure'.aap tayar ho jaye,'I will take u'.just coming in 15 mins'

Priya got ready in suit and took all necessary things of sam in a bag'.wrapped sam in wollen cloth'and took sam in her arms and went outside'.closing the door slowly'.

Vik came and priya said plz jaldi chalo'.

Meanwhile mallika 'took all his and her clothes covered  under the bedsheet'.ram was resiting him but she didn't stopped'.as ram was not in state to resist more'she was kissing him on his chest'

Then priya and vik entered,..the hotel'vik took her to table they were sititng'she was ram's cell'.she took'said to vik'ram yahi h..plz do something'vik inquired the reception  about that'.then he asked about'mallika'yes ,,,there was room booked by her name'he can't believe 'but he took the room number'both went'she knocked the door'.their was sign board of "don't disturb us"'know she was fuming with the anger,'.she was out of her control she slamed the door very hard'vik sensed  her anger'.he took the sam from her hands'.then mallika was disturbed from this, she wrapped the bedsheet around her'.came opend the door a little'.priya moved her hand to the door'.opened it properly'she was not able belive on her eyes ..in what condition the girl was standing in front of her'.she heard ram's voice'.calling priya'priya'.plz come'.i  Only love priya'don't do this'plz'priya'.. slapped very hard on her face'.fingers were visible'on her face'said ' "toh tum unki dost ho'.bolo 'yeh dosti nibhan rahi thi tum'."

Mallika ' ram sirf mera h'.samjhi'aur main ram ko yaha nhi lekar aayi'ram muje laye the'.

as soon she said that priya again slapped her '.hard'.and said "agar apni gande muh se unka naam liya na'.toh I can't really tell u what I will do with u'.samjhi'ram aur tumhare sath'.sach me tum shayad ram ko janti nahi ho'.sun nahi sakti ki vo kiska naam le rahe h'..dekho behoshi me bhi unhe sirf priya chahiye'.priya unki dhankan h samjhi'.vo nashe me bhi kuch esa soch nahi sakte karna toh bahut dur ki baat h'.manti hu ki hamari abhi shadi nahi hui fir bhi janti hu ram kya kar sakte h aur kya nahi'jo ensan mere sath sari raat rukte h'.fir bhi unhone apni limit kabhi cross nahi ki'.unpar ungli uthe hue sharam nahi aayi tumhe'"

mean while vik entered 'his closed his eyes and left from there'

mallika was looking down'.

Priya ' sharam aa rahi h muje kehte hue ki ram tumhe apna dost mante h'.shi'. jao apne kapde pehno aur daff ho jao hamashe ke liye'.main ram ko kuch nahi bataungi'just get lost from here'.i said just leave'. '"only priya's voice was in the room''

Aftersometime'she left'priya called vik inside'.she was crying'vik comforted her'saying'plz priya muje acha laga ki tum ram par etna trust karti ho..plz mat roh'jo hua vo bhul jao'ek bura sapna samaj kar '

Priya ' vik how could she thought ki ram uske sath'..????? ram sach me bahut sidhe h..vik'muje toh ek pal ke liye bhi yakin nahi ho rha ki unke sath koi esa karne ki bhi soch sakta h'she went near ram'.ram was sweating like hell'.moved her fingers in his hairs'wiped his sweat'.'trying to feel that she is there'.ram was repeating the same words'.she said'ram main aa gayi huu'.ur priya is with u'.ram''.she thanked god'kuch hua nahi'nahi toh ram apne aap ko kabhi maaf ni kar pate'.then vik said'..priya ab main chalta hu'tum es lekar subah aa jana'ok'.kal court jana h na'.smiled'.priya ha'vik sure'thanks for helping aagar aaj aap na hote toh na jane kya ho jata'vik  - no need of thanks'.yeh mera dost h'.es ke main kuch bhi kar sakta hu'.u take car'.close the door'.

She closed the door'.came near'ram'adjusted sam in the same duvet in which near ram'feeling sam in ram's warmth'.she kissed ram's forhead'.and smiled'.moved his head in arms'saying ram don't worry I m with u'.nothing will happen'.then after some time'ram opened eyes'then'she said'ram I m with u'love u lot ..kissed him softly'.ram said priya maine kuch ni kiya'.plz trust me'muje kuch yaad ni h'.i only love u'.plz muje chod ke mat jana'.priya 'kissed him again and said'no ram'ese ni kehte'kal hamari shadi h na'so don't'say like this'.i only love u'.then ram slept in her arms'.she also slept'.

To be continued''

Ram and priya 's marriage'.

And'    their first night...                            

Ques for my all viewers : plz reply if possible'.

Question : agar aap hote to aap kya karte us circumstances me??????'.mere story me utmost trust dikhane ki koshish ki h maine''.i want to convey a msg of trust'love'to u all'.thanks for reading my story'..do comments'I really wait for them'.they means a lot to me'.



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can u pmed me the page no of part 5,6 and 7.. I have read till part 4 but missed these 3 so want to read them before i read this part..

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Nic.. Update... Ya i also trust the person jisse mai pyar krti hu..

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very nice update,.. loved it.


 in this case as he keep on saying her name will soon get a point he is out of senses  she is molesting him . i will trust him. . 

what if   ram  has equally involved , her trust  was shattered , he agree that he even committed the crime equally ? can u take this possibly positive. i bet no women cant ...   it  taunts the women   mentally  so much they cant even express, cant  hide. it  will create a stage where  they doubt their husbands. 


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part 14
awsome update dear... pe pe perfect 1.. continue soon..

part 15
too gud.. a perfect  1 based on trust. i dnt knw wt i wud ve done...


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