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Posted: 07 November 2012 at 4:36pm | IP Logged
Heavenly beautiful update.. The saath pheras scene i have readed earlier also but this time while reading the scene, the feeling was new, the meaning was new and i loved it like never before... The whole update was more than perfect.. Pls continue soon dear , u rock.

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thanks a lot dear...for ur wonderful comments...

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awesome update yaar wjat an update i comety loved in all 7 vachan of RaYa so finally they married... loved it... so cute... so next part is going to be emotional... wowoowowowowwo now going to love it... do update next soon... waiting to read... but i loved it a lot... so thouch spi the hot parts... awesome...

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Hiii….dear frnds wishing u a very happy diwali with lots of happiness ahead….may ur every dream come true…ur all wishes get fulfilled….today I want a small thing from u all….just a small prayer for somebody….u will understand my point after reading my story….

….loved ur all comments a lot…thanks for encouranging me and for writing further…

Note: sorry dear frnds ….for writing this worst part of my story…sach kahu toh hath kap rahe h likhete hue…par kabhi kabhi dil ka dard etna ho jata h ki share kare se hi kam hota h…..i m going to write something based on true story which occurred a month ago…..i want to convey a warm msg to u by writing it in my story…hope u will get my msg….

Precap..

Ram was shocked listening to her – making her comfortable he said main apki di ko sabse jada pyar karunga….

Ram singed priya asking her why she asked him?..priya blinked her eyes…said wait karo…fir btati hu….after some she went…

Part 6.

Flash backs…

Priya - Ram es gudiya ke sath acha ni hua h….eske liye life ka experience acha ni raha…she has seen her mother beaten by her dad….after some time she lost her mother…and his father does'nt want to take care of her…so…she is here….

Ram hum yaha bacho ko vo pyar dene ki koshish karte h jo unhe apne apno se nahi milta….es liye main har week sat ya sun ko yaha aati hu….eh bacho ke sath time spent karne…..muje ek alag sa sukun milta h….esa laga h jaise ab meri life ka aim pura ho raha h….jaise ki mere jine ki bhi ek vajah h….

Ram – looking into her eyes – priya I m so lucky, that u r my life…

Priya – ram  ese main "pyar ka mandir" es liye kehti hu kyunki yaha pyar sache dil se diya jata h….

After some time priya took her to hall….where it was decorated for ram ….she want's to give him a surprise….(she had call yesterday here and told to do all the arrangements….she  told to bring a cake and all the children had prepared a play for him…..and dance presentation which priya used to teach them…)

Ram – yeh sab kya h priya….?

Priya – its for u ram….i wanted to give u surprise…and the love which is hidden here….ram was looking into her eyes…how she managed to surprise him….

Then all the children (30 including 25 girls and 5 boys)..loved priya a lot…and care takers of the orphan age….(including 4 ladies and 2 gents…)

Priya took her near the cake …cake was heart shaped….where on cake "RAYA LOVE LAND" was written on the cake….ram saw the cake and was looking surprisingly to her , then ladies told ram …that she has told them  about him….

Ram – priya sachi….?

Priya- ha ram bcz yeh log meri life ka imp hissa h….janti hu hame hamre parents ko sab kuch phele btana chaiye tha…par muje apko surprise bhi dena tha na….

Ram – smiles at her ans….priya jo bhi tumhari jindagi ka hissa h…aaj se vo sab meri jindagi ka bhi hissa h…so esliye …yeh ab hamari life ka imp hissa h…thik h….

Priya – thanks ram…for understand my feeling…s

Then a cute little kid of 3 yrs came….says…pliya di,…pliya di….jaldi se cake cato na,….hume bhuk lagi h….bahut jor se….

All laughed …and ram took him in his arms and hold priya ..and blow the candle…and  took a knife and all the three cuts the cake….ram firstly feed rahul…and then priya….priya also feed rahul…and then ram…then cuts the cake in pieces…then serves to all…..ram was looking a new priya in her…her love for everybody…..her caring nature for small children…then all the children came and insisted to ram for playing with him…he also went …and started playing with children…then …

Priya was looking ram from distance and watching his gestures towards children….he was enjoying every moment….he was behaving like a kid for palying them…they were playing "hide and seek"….nobody can say he is most famous business tycoon who was playing with the kids like a kid…." He was making puppy faces while loosing so that kids become happy….he was loosing bcz he wanted he kids to win every in chance…".priya saw his expressions , his excitement…his loving, caring nature…when a child fell down while playing…he picked up…made her cheer…kissed her….

After some time….they made ram to sit….in hall ….and 

ram asked priya….muje unke sath kelna…h..made a puppy face…

priya – just wait there is surprise for u…

ram came back to reality when he heard crying of the baby with some familiar voice…. small hands touched him….calling him papa…..and started crying…"papa ….muje apke kuch acha ni lag raha tha…"ram asked bansi kaka- esne kuch khaya.bansi kaka – nahi sir, subah priya mam ne baba ko ek roti aur dud khila kar suladiya tha…fir mam ki tabiyat kharab ho gyi thi….

he said - papa..muma kaha h…..plz muma ko bulao na…muje unke hath se khana khana h….."…ram smiled him….took him from bansi kaka and her aaya (pushpa) was holding him……..he again said…"papa apko pta h na muje muma aur apke bina kuch acha ni lagta….ghar par na dadi thi…na dadu…na chahu….kisi ne apke sam ka wait ni kiya….

…ram wiped his tears…said…."I m sorry beta"…muma ki tabiyat khrab ho gyi thi…toh ….acha don't't cry….he kissed him …hugged him near his heart..…made him sit on his lap…maine apko kaha tha  na….papa apke kelne ke liye choti si behan laayenge…..aur  bhai bhi…bas muma use hi lene gyi h…acha papa sach me bahi aur behan aaenge…?

Ram – ha sam….u r brave son of papa na….bolo….(sameer son of ram and priya ….of  1year 11 months…loves his papa and muma very much….for him ram and priya are the world….as ram was in office bansi kaka took his care after priya was admitted in hospital….he started crying a lot as nobody was  at home not his dadi…not chahu…not dadu..…etc…so bansi kaka bought him to the hospital…nobody didn't took sameer to hospital as this was not safe for him…)

Sameer – nodded his head in yes….ram took his feeder and started feeding ….he slept in his arms….ram kissed him…said kaka aap jaye…yeh mere pass hi rahega…mera bhi mann nahi lag raha tha….then neha said ram ese main le lu…..

Ram – nahi….yeh uth jeyga,…ese pta chal jata h ki yeh meri bahon nahi h toh….fr se royega….

kk- took the feeder from ram and said bansi…tum jao…hum sab h yaha….

Bansi kaka left….

Ram started thinking again…..

Flash back….

 then all the kids did the arrangements of play and dancing….there was nice play…and all children performed a dance …..ram was loving the each and every moment…suddenly he heard a cry of little baby …..ram looked worried …started looking here and there….and asked priya ….yeh kaun ro raha h….kya yaha aur koi bacha bhi h?

priya -  ha ram…maine apko btana chahti thi but…aap ko khush dekh kar himmat ni hui….

Ram – kya matlab …main kuch samjha ni….

When child started more crying…he went in the room..saw the child crying bitterly…he lost for moment,…he can't understand ….  What is situation and why baby was crying so…much…he could not take this more,…took the child in his arms…and hugged the baby with losts of love…priya came inside and saw him carrying the baby "ram yeh toh apke pass aate hi chup ho gya…"

Ram – said slowly…yeh dekho  yeh meri dil ki awaz se chup ho gya….priya vase yeh etna chota h…es ki maa ..kaha h…aur yeh yaha kaise ?

Priya – said ram muje apse kuch share karna h…

Ram – priya ese dekho…kitna masum sa h…kaise ese koi chod sakta h,…this feeling is really hurting me….kaise koi apne jigar ke tukde ko apnea lag kar sakta h?..kaise priya….plz me…kya kehna h….?

Ram was holding the baby..he was touching his face..with small hands…ram was feeling a new feeling..he has never picked such a small child….

Priya- ram jo maine kehne ja rahi hu…vo ho sakta h apko bahut dard de…par yeh sab sach h…

Ram was looking blankly to him….

Priya – (based on true facts….going to write ahead…)…ram es bache ki ma bhi ek bachi hi h….

Ram – yeh priya tum kya keh rahi ho?...how's it possible….then priya hold his hand took him to another room….where a girl of just 13 yrs was lying…on the  bed …

Yes ram she is her  mother….can think how…?

Ram – he was not in state to answer her….

Priya- priya saw him…and took…the boy from his arms….put him in the cradle, he  slept…then priya and ram came out….priya said ram yeh sach h….plz meri taraf dekhiye…she was in tears …not able to speak…but then said….she was raped ram… tears stared following through her eyes ….she was….ram yes she…was….raped by a 35 yrs old man….she holded ram tighly ….

…ram looked like he was like stone….ram pta h…she was continuously raped for 9 months….ram …I was feeling helpless when I meet her…she is just a child ….just 13 yrs….how…kaun hua….started crying bitterly in his arms…ram hugged her…let her pain to be released….ram said plz tell me everything….

Priya told she meet her in her hospital….when dr aditya was looking her case…(gyanecologist.) dr aditya came to discuss her case as she was a girl he preffered me to handle her….i was shocked to …when I come to know about her….her grandmother told me that his uncle use to rape her after school till regular 9 moths…when I asked her about her mother…she said….she is admitted in hospital as she has lost his husband 2yrs back in not in state to look after her….her grandmother told why they didn't come to know about her….as she was not feeling well…she told…..that some she vomits but we thought it is due to indigestion …we noticed her when her stomach took shape then they….took her examined her….girl told her dadi that she was in fear , she was told by the uncle he will kill her ….if she tell anything to anybody….

Priya – ram she came to me when she was in her 8 month..she is just a child ram…I can't see her pain….then last month she gave birth to that boy….she is fully depressed…..i can't see her…cried a lot…..then I went her home bought her here….so that she can spend time with these children….

Ram – where is that man now?

Priya  -in jail….she was crying a lot….

Ram – priya I promise u …he will get the worst punishment of his life….he has runined a life of child ….

Priya- ram plz us ensan ko ese saza mile jis se use yeh ehsas ho usne kya kiya h….

Ram – priya esa hi hoga….priya if u don't mind kuch magu tumse…?

Priya – hanji ram , priya after we r getting married I want to adopt this boy….kyun ki main us bachi ko ese ni dekh sakta…..jab tak yeh bacha yaha rahega she can never become normal….es bachi ke sath jo hua h,..main use sahi toh nahi kar sakta par use ek nayi jindagi dena chahta hu….priya agar main ese adopt karu toh tum kya mera sath dogi…..?

Priya – ram aapne mere mann ki baat kehdi,..par kya hamare ghar wale manege?

Ram – vo tum muje par chod do,,,,I will handle…them….vo hame jaur samjenge…..

Ram –priya muje es ke case ki sari details chaiye….i will appoint the best lawyer and best doctor for her to take care…so that she becomes normal asap….

Priya –thanks ram,….u r such an angel in my life…

Ram – u r 2 priya,….ram calls his lawyer,,,,and tell him to meet him tomorrow…

Priya's phone rang….hanji papa….

Sudhir – priya hum sab do dino ke liye teri nani ke pass ja rahe h….vo amar ji ki family bhi hamare sath ja rahi ….h ….toh tu dyan rakhana ghar ka….

Here ram's cell rang….same thing is told to him by kk….

Both looked each other….

Ram – priya aab toh main tumhare sath hi ghar chaulnga tumhare….

Priya-  ram aap na jada naughty ho rahe h…this is wrong….aapko apne ghar jana chaiye…

Ram – are dr priya ram kapoor …aap shayad bhul gyi h….hamne phere liye h…aaj hi…us hisab se toh first night banti h na….

Priya gave him a sherni looks…..ram aab bhi na…chalo ghar chale

Ram – acha etni jaldi h….first night ki?

Priya – ram main apko chodungi ni….ap sach me bahut biggad rahe h….

Before coming , both went to meet that boy….ram named him sameer…..tooks him in his arms and kissed him…s.aid beta within few days u will be with ur  muma and papa….i promised I will  took u from here….as soon as possible….

Both came home priya's home….priya gave leave to his kaka…then after he left….ram entered and went to her room…..

Ram was very tired he get straight to the bed….and in sometime he slept…he was again sleeping with a mouth open….priya came to her room…she saw him sleeping like this….she smiled….and said….ram aap na …bahut sweet ho….she opened his shoes….covered him with duvet….she went to kitchen to prepare dinner for them…..as much of things were prepared…she just checked them….she then decorated her room with candles….for their 2nd candle light dinner…..she ordered kufi from market,….placed it in fridge,….she finally checked the room….then went for  for…freshen up….

After some time she came in bathroom robe….with wet hairs….her curves were visible from her robe…..she was looking hot,….she went near ram….kissed his forehead….said…."ram khana tyar h uth jaye,…."

Ram rubbed his eyes…..saw her in this way…looked deeply in his eyes…..he was lost,,she was looking so,,,beautiful…..her smell was so….gud….priya was looking into his deep eyes…..she was not in state to say something as his hand went on her waist…..he was holding her….tighly….he said – are tum toh sach me tyar ho gyi….ab main control kaise karu…..priya was blushing…from his statement….

Ram took his hands from waist to up wards….started touching her b** from backside….priya was loosing control but somewhere she gathered some strength and  said ram plz abhi ni…..ram said ok….took her in his arms….kissed her cheeks gently….he wants her to get normal….so he said muje bahut jor se bhuk lagi h….

Priya –  kab se keh rahi hu khana tyar h…I have something for u…something very special….

Ram –acha …jaldi se lao….ram saw room decorated with candles…he said priya tumne yeh sab kiya….priya said –hanji…for our  2nd candle light dinner….ab chale…made him sit…on the chair…and brought aloo paratha's for him…serves him the food….she also sits and starts eating…

Ram – go excited and said tumhe kaise pta chala muje yeh pasand h….

Priay –aaj subah jaise aap kha rahe the na bacho ki tarah main tab hi samaj gyi thi,…

Ram – are  meri wife toh badi samajdar h…

Priya –ram muje lagta h hum ab ghar me baat kar leni chaiye…

Ram – ha….sachi kahu toh priya muje es waqt na sameer ki bahut yaad aa rahi h…I want him with me…ab mujse ni hoga….

Priya…acha g beta mil gya toh biwi ko bhul gya..etni jaldi….

Ram – ni priya agar tum na hoti to muje vo bhi na milta….han priya 2 din baad sab aa jaye fir main sab se keh kar jald se jald shadi ki baat karunga…aur date bhi jadli fix kar lunga….

Priya –hanji ram sameer ko jada din waha rakhana thik ni h….bahut chota h and abhi toh milk bhi thik se nahi pita…muje use jald se jald ghar lana h….

Ram blinked his eyes in yes,….and said..priya pta h maine uska naam sameer kyun rakha,……?

Priya – kyunki wo hamari jindagi me sameer ki thandi hawa ki tarah rahega,…

Ram – ha priya,…main sari khushiya dunga….priya tum use sambhal logi  na,,,,I means jab hamare bache honge toh ….?

Priya- aaj toh aapne yeh keh diya …aaj ke baad kabhi mat kehna ki sameer hamare se alag hoga ya hum…use  se alag,…samje….vo hamara bada  beta keh  layega….

Ram gave her a flying kiss….at her ans….said…I m really lucky to have u….

Priya – I m also very lucky to hav u….jaan….

Ram said priya main tumhare liye ek gift laya tha…vase toh vo first night ke liye laya tha,…vo tum rakh lo…jab hamari first night hogi na tum use phehna…ok…muje tumhe us me dekhana h…..

Priya was blushing and feeling shy,…she took the plates and cleaned the table as she was crossing the table…..ram holds her hand…..made him sit on his lap….moved very closer to her ears and said…..shall we dance….she nodded his head….in yes…..ram put the song…."saibo g".

Ram hold her near from the waist….his one hand in her hand….her one hand on his chest….both were looking deep into each others eyes….both were feeling each other breath….there lips were only few far away,….both were having same feeling….then ram covered the distance….kissed her…gently….she wanted more….and more…she then extended her hand in his hairs to give him more sentations…he hold her tightly…both started kissing passionately….. his hands were moving on her back….her hands were moving in his hairs to give him more access……ram while kissing her….took slowly the bed but didn't left her lips….ram placed her gently and broke the kiss….both were breathing fast…..ram started giving sentation with his fingers on her face…slowly…he was touching her nose..then…lips…then went to the neck….then near her cleavage…she stopped his hand….looking deep into his eyes….ram placed a kiss on her neck…she was shivering….he gave many wet kisses on her neck…shoulders…..she was losing ….with his kissing…then ram gave kisses on cheeks…on his nose and said –jaan ankhen kholo na…I want to see ur feelings in ur eyes….plz open  them…..she obeyed him…..ram saw a lot of love and priya saw her…she moved forward and kissed him softly on his lips….. priya said- maine kuch dekhana tha…bhul gyi..abhi lati hu,…

She bought two  kulfi's…she came on the bed….ram was sitting on bed end…ram asked yeh kya h…….

Priya –ram this my fav kulfi….i loved it…

Ram – acha toh ab yeh jada tasty hogi but jis tarah se main ese khana chahta hu….

Priya was looking him surprisingly….

Ram –came forwards…took the kulfi..and took one bite and came near priya …and told her from eyes while looking to her lips…she comes near him ….both were looking each other….she puts her lips on his and taste the kulfi and smile – "kaulfi toh aur bhi tasty ho gyi….jaan"…ram was smiling – maine kaha tha na…ab se hum kulfi ese hi khaya karenge…this my fav sweet dish samje ji…"…both finised the kulfi hugging each other in their arms and enjoying number of kisses….and some were more and more passionate…and both took the duvet slept in each other's arms…

 

To be  continued …

Priya saw ram hugging malika…..she was fuming in anger….

 

Note – sorry frnds for hurting u….but this was the true story of girl of 13 yrs …the day I read that news I was not able to control my feeling and my pain…so I decided to write here…..plz pray for her so that she gets normal…and vo khud ek bacchi h…par jo hua uske sath uska dard toh hum mehsus bhi ni kar sakte…sirf andaza laga sakte h…….jo us bache par biti vo use pta h….es liye agar hum sab mil kar uske liye pray kare toh sayad god use thodi himmat de jindagi jine ki….."

Thanks for ur patience…and comments….

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 3:14am | IP Logged

i really hope that girl gets normal her story is so painful 
u r so sweet srishti 
update was too good 

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 3:17am | IP Logged
awesome update shristi... it thouched my heart truly... yes this kind of cases happens in India n the bad thing is that it happens most with kids... u have wrote this sameer thing in show so well... loved that RaYa addopted him by this 2 life will be scured to be ruin... awesome update even RaYa's romance were also too Gud... u have nailed it so well...awesome update yaar with havey heart... do connt soon... witing for next part...

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 3:23am | IP Logged
I dont know how i felt ..I just couldnt believe my eyes while reading ..It was so diSgusting to her an adult man doing such kind of thing to A kid ..Goddd she is just a kid and how come he Angry Angry
You brought this topic so well and that girl kid get well soon and she will be in my prayers now onwards ...God surely will help her ...

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There are so many disgusting people, and have heard many such cases, these people should given the worsest punishment,, they shud be made realised that what sin they have done... Hope that girl recovers from this trauma, my prayers are with that girl...

And rest the update was superb and Ram and Priyas reaction to that girls story superbbb...Loved it... Thank you for sharing the incident...

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