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TERA MERA PYAAR SANAM part 5 pg13 21/11

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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 3:19pm | IP Logged

guys its our bade acche completed three hundred episodes congratulations to RAM, SAKSHI and whole team of bade acche lagte hai ...they also won three awards at peoples choice.so har 100 epis ke liye ek...

the thought came to as if how it should be celebrated and here i am with a story which i will end in three four parts hope you all like it...

 
ram and priya fight the case for peehus custody and priya wins the case
in court lawyer shows that the dubai book shop is on priyas name and also she is partner of mr.rajat kapur...
financially she is strong and is been handeling peehu alone for four years now and also peehu need mother at this tender age..
judge gives his verdict that peehu will be with her mother and if priya agrees peehu can stay with ram on weekends ...
priya agrees on that ..she even says ram can meet his daughter or can take her with him whenever he feels like but not for nightover except weekends...
 
everyone is out of court...rajat says to ram
rajat : ram saari batein bhool ja yaar , aur i am throwing a party today so please come yaar, i need my freind back in my life
custody problem khatam ho gaya hai , now priya aur tere difference bhi kam kar lo yaar...
ram doesn't says anything but he agrees that he will be there in the party( peehu ko milne ka ek bahana )
on his way back home he is thinking rajat ne apni dubai book shop priya ke naam kardi aur ab woh use partner bhi bana raha hai...
he reaches homewhen shipra meets him and
shipra: mr.kapoor can i ask you for a favour?
ram:( sarcastingly) haan
shipra: you ask priya to marry rajat as  she wont listen to any of us but even she deserves to be happy ..first she sacrificed it for us and now for you she has done all this .. but my daughter needs a person who will love her and make her happy...its only rajat...please do this for me
 
ram goes to his room and here shipra shows a thumbs up sign to ayesha and mamaji
 
in party
 
everyone is enjoying but not priya..she is standing alone with peehu with some files along with her...
 
rajat finds her alone and goes and asks if she is fine
 
just then ram enters...he watched rajat priya talking to each other and priya giving rajat some files
he remembers the convo with shipra and thinks that priya is giving divorce application file to rajat ...
 
rajat goes from there and  ram goes to peehu
ram: hey baby kaise ho aap?
peehu: mai toh acchi hoon apki aur mama ki beti buri ho sakti hai kya ? papa aap aise sad face kun hai
ram: nahi toh  aap bohot acche ho apko kisne kaha beta ke main sad hoon?
peehu: papa aap hamesha mujhe rockstar bolke hug karte ho kiss lete hi merese lekin aaj apne aisa kuch nahi kiya aur apka face bhi phool gaya hai golu ke tarah...
 
ram: peehu aap jake khelo khush ke saath mai mamase baaat karta hoon ...aur mai sad nahi  hoon rockstar
 
peehu goes
ram: toh priya happy?  mujhe harakar khush toh hogi hi,?...waise tumne bataya nahi ki dubai mein tumhari book shop hai ?,tum mr.rajat kapur ki partner ho ? aur i am sure ab uske saath business share kar rahi ho toh life bhi share karogi ..so when are you both getting married?
 
priya was shell shocked how could he even think of her like this.  he knew it was him she loved ,she gave her happiness to see him happy and today he is saying when she is going to be someone others better half??/she managed to say it in a very terrible voice..
 
priya: raam kya keh rahe hain aap?  kuch pata hai apko ...aap jante hai maine apke siva kisiko kabhi apna nahi mana
ram: haan haan ye lines na jaane kitno ko bol chuki hogi ? tumne socha ye kapoor toh gaya toh kapur with u ke sath hi shaadi karlo...naam bhi wahi fame bhi wahi kuch problem bhi nahi hoga na,kyun hai na ?
 
shipra was listening to them and was very happy she went to update ayesha on this...she was about say it to ayesha when she heard a loud roaring voice...which was trembling at same time but was firm and aggressive also..she turned to fine back it was priya...
 
 
priya: stop it RAAMM for once and for all stop it ...bass ho gaya hai thak gai hoon main ladte ladte raam apni kismat se,apne rishton se , apne pyaar se, apne parivaar se, basss ho gaya nahi seh paungi aur main ram nahi seh paungi ...bitterly crying she stood there..rajat came to her
 
priya: no sir bass ab aap koi help mat karna meri , main aur nahi le sakti help aapki ...
shipra came and started giving her the bhashan behave your self priya you are spoling party chup karo
 
with that priya growled like a tigress
priya: kyun maa kyun chup rahoon? , ye koi aapki kitty party toh hai nahi ,joh kharab ho jayegi aur party kharab hone ki jitni chinta karti ho na aap usase aadhi meri ki hoti kabhi..maa ...(laughs) maaa...
bulaun aapko iss naam se main ya phir mrs.sharma kahoon? ..ohh sorry app to papa ko akele chod ke ayesha ke saath rehte ho na toh aap ko mujhe mrs.ayesha bulana chahiye hai na maa?...
 
now priiya was out of control she was just openeing her heart ...
 
kya baat hai na papa saari jindagi dedi in sabko maine lekin afsos koi aisa nahi mila jo bina shart ke mujhe apnata, har kisi ne sharton mein pyaar kiya aur jisne pyaar kiya bina shart ke usase maine muh moda apne behen ke liye... aap na hote papa toh shayad jinda nahi rehti main ...
 
bachpan se leke aaj tak sab cheeje maine pehle kartik ayesha  ko dedi, phir maine khud ke liye socha ...unko khush dekhke khush hoti rahi main...unke school, tutions ,ayesha ke beauty padgents, kartik ka mba aur bohot kuch ...maa ki boutique aur sharma house sab ko apna mana aur sab kiya...
 
yahan tak jab shaadi ki umra ho gayi toh bhi maine pehle ghar ke liye socha... phir shaadi ka khayal hi nikal diya kyunki aap ki bimari ghar ke kharche sab dekhna tha ...
umar bitati gayi na mujhe na wakt ko khayal raha ke main bhi pyaar kar sakti hoon, sapne dekh sakthi hoon,apne jindagi se ummed kar sakti hoon...
phir aaya kartik ka rishta, uski shadi ke liye usne meri shadi ki shart rakhi, aur dhoonda bhi ladka ma ne ...maa app tayar thi na kisi bhi ladke se shaadi karvane ke liye...
natasha aapko bahu chahiye thi..kya kehte the usko aap " meri doll"
 
lekin hui nahi shaadi galat ladka leke aa gaye mr.kapoor mere liye aur phir khud hi ladka ban gaye ...samjhote ki shaadi...
 
lekin yakeen maneeye mr. kapoor jis din se shaadi ki na maine apko hi duniya bana liya ...
apka khana , peena ,tablets,aadatein ,apka gussa,nafrat sab dekha aur inn sabse pyar kar baithi 33 saal ki umra mein pyaar kar baithi...
samjhota kab pyaar ban gaya pata nahi chala ..apke saath gujare woh 6 mahine meri jindagi ke sabse khoobsurat 6 mahine the ram /...
 
aap ke liye ye pyaar kab ibadat ban gaya pata hi nahi chala, aapne mujhpe kabhi bharosa nahi kiya na tabhi jab aapki ma ko maine galat kahan  aur  na abhi jab main khud ek maa banke apke samne mujrim ke katghare mein khadi hoon...
 
aapne ayesha se shadi karli...maine aap ko dubai  me eksath dekha, apke pass ana chaha, lekin ayesha aur aap ki shadi ho gayi dekh ke main peeche hat gayi ek aur sacrifice, kiske liye ayesha ke liye?
 
meri woh behen jise bachpan se maine har cheej di ,jisne mere saath room share kiya,books share ki,  apni jindagi ke utar chadhav share kiye, jisko maine tab maaf kiya jab usne jhooth bolke mujhe 14 saal jail bhej diya..lekin nahi usne mera pati bhi mujhse le liya, use bhi apna hak samajhkar ab mujhse   cheenana chahati hai ye ..kyun sirf paiso ke liye.??/..
 
chiii mujhe behen kehte hue sharm aati hai tumhe..  ( she looks at natasha whose crying)
 
ye ladki jo bigdi hui thi ,aamir bhai ki bigadi behen usne mere pyaar ko samjha aur mujhe har baat mein support kiya... yahan tak apne bhai ko apni sagi maa ki saachhai batane ke liye woh apne maa ke khilaf ho gayi..
 
sab ki jindagi sawarte sawarte thak gayi hoon , thodi si khushi aayi thi peehu ke saath mere jindagi mein; lekin nahi ram aap woh bhi lena chahte hain kya kahan apne main shadi karloon rajat sir se?...
 
apko pata hai jab accident hone ke baad recover karke aayi kapoor mension tho sab mera shraddh mana rahe the, garibo mein khana baat rahe the , mere atma ke shanti ki dua kar rahe the aap aur jab aapko avaj deni chahi maine aapki behen ko suna
 
suna maine ke kaise mere janese aap life mein aage badhenge aur agar main hoti toh aap wahi ruk jaate aage nahi badhte...
6 saal ke rishte ke aage 14 saal ka intejaar ...
 
main wapas laut gayi raam ...nahi dekh sakti thi aapo ek jinda laash ki tarah maine khud ko laash bana lena jyada behetar samjha
 
dubai pohochi iss bacchi ko rajat ke paas chodne wahan behosh hui toh  pata chala ke main maa banane waali hoon ...sab bhool gayi main sabse pehle aapko phoe kiya, ghar pe bataya aap dinner pe bahar gaye hain  aur afsoos mobile  par try kia toh apne uthaya nahi aur jab uthaya toh aap kisi ke earring ki tarref kar rahe the..
 
aage ki baat mujhse suni nahi jaati iss liye maine phone kaat diya aur khud aur peehu ko bhi apse dur kar diya ,taki aap bass khush reh sake aur aap chahate hai main kisi aur ki ho jaun
 
let mi tell you ram .rajat sir mujhe pehle nafrat  karte the, iski wajah maine unhe shadi ke liye nahi kahan tha , unhone ek business proposal rakha ke woh mujhe aur peehu ko apna naam ,paise, ijjat sab denge badle me main cady aur raina ki ma ban jaun ...
 
5 saal pehle bhi mera jawab wohi tha jo aaj hai aur woh NAHI hai ...maine apke yaadoon  ke saath ek middle class single mother banana pasand kiya kyunki main nahi chahati thi peehu ke aage kisi aur ka naam jude ...agar koi use jaane toh ram aur priya ke ansh ke roop mein jaane
 
 
kya fayda ye sab kehke sunke...mai aaj bhi akeli hoon, kal bhi akeli thi aur kal bhi akeli hi rahoongi ..apne kahan na raaam muje wapas jinda pakar aap me kuch mar gaya  yakeen maniye agar peehu saath na hoti na raam toh main sochti hoon ussi din main mar jaati toh accha hota...
 
na apke liye majboori banti main , na apne parivaaar ke liye mathe ki shiken (strech), na kisiki pareshani na kisiki sautan...khair koi baat nahi ab galati sudharungi main
 
she goes to rajat takes the file and shows it to ram ye dekho raam ye divorce ke papers naheen ,maine peehu ki custody aapko de di hai...
 aaj jab apko court ke bahar  behaal dekha, rajat se baat karte hue apka sar jhuka hua dekha toh mujhse raha nahi gaya ...maine khudko aur peehu ko samjhaya ...
 maine usko aapko saup diya ...take aap khush reh sake raam ...
 
she grabbed his collar ...main apse kuch kehna chahti hoon raam ...maine meri saari jindagi mein agar kisiki ibadat ki ho toh woh aap ho raam aur koi nahi...maine sabse pyaar kiya lekin hadd se jyada kisi ko chaha toh woh aap ho...sab ke liye dua ki lekin har saas mein dua banke jise paaya woh sirf aap ho, minnate toh sabke liye ki ; lekin sajda maine sirf aapke liye hi kiye hai maine...
 
 aap apni  gudiya se utna pyaar nahi karte raam, jitna pyaar apki  gudiya aap se karti hai...
 
with that she collapsed on floor and a bottle of poison escaped from her hand rolled down to shipras feet ...
 
 
 
will give next part later ..hope its not boring ...


Edited by snehalparab - 20 November 2012 at 1:13pm

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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 3:35pm | IP Logged
this is soo so so so sooo good. what i hav been wantng from the show for sol long. pls update the next part today itself. eager to read this now. pls. great job and lovely story. i want to see ram feeling sorry for saying that to priya and i want to see shipra and ayesha getting what they deserved. pls continue soon.

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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 3:45pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by macarons

this is soo so so so sooo good. what i hav been wantng from the show for sol long. pls update the next part today itself. eager to read this now. pls. great job and lovely story. i want to see ram feeling sorry for saying that to priya and i want to see shipra and ayesha getting what they deserved. pls continue soon.
 
 
thanks for such warm and lovely comments ...i will update it tomorrow or sure as have to sleep now have office tomorrow LOVE for RAYA wasnt letting me sleep after todays episode ...and thoughts which came i penned down ...thanks for the appreciation and love ...it realllyyy means alot ..highly greatfulll and sorry ...
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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 4:07pm | IP Logged
it was fab yaar i have no word just
Dhamakedar UPDATE.
incredible update

amazing writing ... spell-binding story..

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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 5:08pm | IP Logged
We want to see something like that in the show...keep it up.
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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 5:10pm | IP Logged
Sooo mindblowing update... Each and every word of priya was just so true and painful... In serial priya is bottling up her feelings. But u open that bottle in ur ss and let her emotiones flaw and that touch my heart dear... Hats off to u, kaash cvs ke paash deemag ke saath saath tum jaisa dil bhi hota toh sayad wo humare emotion samaj pate ki balh is not just a show for as it's a part of our life... I just bown down infront of u guys, eagerly and madly waiting for the next.

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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 8:12pm | IP Logged
Take a bow girl. Awesome part. I wish show main hi kuch aisa ho. Pls update soon.
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Hey yr fab. Tha yr. Plz iski ek copy ekta ko bhi bhej do.. takki vo yeh show me bhi dikha sake..update next part soon..

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