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The SAMRAT's LOVE... : New FF... (Page 4)

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 12:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by chand1234

nice part!Big smile


thank you...Smile
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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 12:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sapphirose176

ROFLhehe chandu ka popat ho gaya! duru to aisa mauka chodnese rahi.

a very nice update yaar!Clap feelings have been expressed very beautifully. i could literally imagine the scene.
now waitng for the wedding!!!!Dancing

continue soon...Thumbs Up


thank u so much...i'm trying my best to make it correct 4 visualizing...and abt durdhara...hehe...do read d following updates...
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PART THREE

Duru – veer…..she lowered her eyes then looked upto him and said firmly…HAMARA VIVAH HOGA….!!

Listening this from his princess, chandragupt became little confused as he thought that like any other girl in her position , even she'd deny the marriage due to her father's death…but she proved him wrong…

Chandu – yeh….tum kya keh rahi ho…?

Dhuru – hun veer…acharya ke ichha anusaar 2 din baad tumse vivah karne ke liye taiyar hai hum…har ek karya sadaiv hamare manstithi ya sandarbh par aadharit nahi hoti hai…yeh tum se achha aur kaun jaan sakta hai…hey na..? she paused a sec & smiled at him…then she continued… chandragupt , hum tumhare har karya , har sukh dukh , har anand, har vijay , jeevan ke har ek stithi main sath nibhaneka nirnay tabhi leliya tha jab hume hamare prem ka ehsaas hua…aur aaj , jab voh sandharb aaya hai humare nirnay ko nibhaneka…tab hum kaise inkaar kare..? aur rahi baat hamare pita sri ke mrithyu ki…hun…hum dukhi hai…parantu, hume yeh bhi gyaat hai ki yeh hona hi tha…!! In beete 3 dino me humne apne aapko sambhal liya hai chandragupt…ab hum Nanda vansh ke rajkumari nahi hai…hum aane wale Maurya vansh ke Maharani banne jaa rahe hai…aur iske liye hum poorn man se taiyaar hai…!!

Dhurdhara said all these in a one go…all the while she was talking chandu was gazing her with all love and listening her words carefully…even after she finished , he kept looking at her with just a cute smile on his face…on the other hand dhuru was waiting for his reply…so, she touched his shoulder & shaked him a bit…

Dhuru – veer….kya hua…? Aise kyun dekh rahe ho…? Kuch toh bolo…! Now, instead of answering her he just captured herself in his warm embrace…Dhuru  was'nt expecting this & was bewildered for a sec…but as soon as she was close to his heart she understood his reaction so in turn she also hugged him…chandu broke his silence now…

Chandu – dhurdhara….main bohat prasanna hu…kyunki mujhe aur magadh ko itni buddhiman aur samajhdar Maharani mil rahi hai…

Dhuru – ah hun….. both were closing their eyes and lost in each others embrace…while a voice known to them interrupted in between… " Samrat Chandragupta aur Maharani Dhurdhara ki jai ho…!! " they heard and suddenly moved  apart…both lowered their eyes in embarrassment…but chandu hesitatingly started to speak…

Chandu – Aaa….achaarya voh…aap… it was acharya chanakya who entered there…as usual he had a stern face…

Chanakya – hun…abhi aapka vivah nahi hua hai maharaj…. he taunted…

Again they both were embarrassed…dhurdhara turned her face aside in shame…but to their astonishment Acharya smiled at them…in fact laughed a bit…

Chanakya –aap dono aise kyun ho gaye..?  haha….kyun…? main parihaas nai kar sakta…?  Now it was turn of chandu and dhuru to be surprised…they had seen him smiling for the first time in their life…both were dumbstruck…

Chandu – acharya…aap….? Aur parihaas…?

Chanakya – hun….main aaj bohat santhust hun…Maa bharti ka kalyan hua hai aur aap dono ka vivah….oh…Maharani Dhurdhara,  yahan aayiye… dhuru hesitatingly moved further…chanakya touched her head with affection and continued…aapse main aur bhi santhust hu…mujhe pata tha ki aap aisi stithi main bhi aapke purush ke sath nahi chodengi…aapki soch nirmal aur pavithra hai…Akhand Bharath ke maharani aise hi hona chahiye…he paused and looked at chandu…he just smiled a bit…and dhuru was shy… then both touched chanakya's feet & got blessings…

Chanakya – aayushmaan bhava…dheerga sumangali bhava… he blessed them wholeheartedly and left the place…

Now, again chandu & dhuru were alone…dhuru started her talk again…

Dhuru – veer….tumhare acharya hanste bhi hai…?she taunted him with a sarcastic smile…for which chandu also replied sarcastically…

Chandu – hun…kyun nai…? Voh bhi maanav hai…

Dhuru – achha….voh bhi maanav hai…? Hume pata nai tha…hahaha….she broke out laughing….seeing her even chandu started to laugh….like this they spent some quality time with each other , talking and laughing. Chandragupt left to his room after some time…he had never been so happier before…and so dhurdhara was…both slept on their respective beds thinking of the brand NEW life which was waiting for them to start….

end of this part...

thanks for reading...hope u all enjoyed...please do post ur comments and ur advices are welcome..Smile i've tried to depict the small moments also...let me knw if u r not interested in them...Smile


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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 1:39am | IP Logged
awsome tha dude!! kabhi socha na tha ki acharya hasenge!! aur vo bhi romantic batonko leke.
loved the update. continue ur way of writing. it is emotional and suits the chandu-dhara relationship.
continue soon!Wink

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 4:33am | IP Logged
so cute scene..and omg chanakya is joking??? ascharya...i wish i could ever see that avtar of chanakya in show too..but beautiful part dear..do continue

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 7:29am | IP Logged
awesome part dearSmileTongue chandu-dhara conver. mujhe 17th march ka episode yaad dila diyaCry
aur acharya!!!!!!!!!! really the man beyond imaginationConfused

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 10:25am | IP Logged
atiii uttam.hum bhi aacharya ke santushti wales parihaas se atyant santushti hue.jab aacharya parihaas kar rahe the tab humaare mukh par bhi muskaan aap gayi this.about hum chandu aur dhara ke vivah ke liye aur pratiksha nahin kar sakte.

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fab part!Big smile

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