FFWhile you were sleeping Chap 21B Pg142 31/1 (Page 7)

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My dear Tina,

I  am completely with you on this one, though it is not clear to me as yet what the crime vs romance mix in it is going  to be. It will be GREAT relief to get away from  several  fixtures in the tele-Arjun, to wit:

- Arjun's being emotionally crippled and thus excessively closed in and khadoos,
- Riya mooning over him all the and getting snubbed twice in each episode,
- Rathore, who is the epitome of the honest, conscientious and conventionally efficient policeman, besides being by far the best looker in the show, being always shortchanged and made to play second fiddle to Arjun.

I am very hopeful that having struck out on such a fresh path, you will also axe the by now acutely irritating Samjhe ya samjhaoon. 

Also, I hope you will make Riya behave more as a confident and independent young woman, and not  like a kid with a schoolgirl crush, now on Rathore and undoubtedly later on Arjun. And please, do let her be an ace shooter for a change!!

Now all that remains is for you to post regularly on this thread. I am amazed at your ability to juggle so many balls all at once, but please try and focus more on this one, and then on the prime ministerial thriller!

All the best for all your ventures.

Shyamala B.Cowsik

My dear Tina,

Thanks a lot for the compliments, but all I take credit for is for having been a sold woman professional all my life. That is why, though I only have the one son, Sasha (Siddhartha) who is now 28 going on 29, and he is very bright and capable, I am always especially happt when I come across young women who do very well at whatever it is that they choose to  take up, and spare no effort to that end. I put you there, and I am sure you will more than live up to my expectations of you.

One small piece of advice, if you will not take it amiss. While there is a lot to be said for impulsive writing, I still feel that it would be worthwhile for you to  plan your stories in advance at least for a few chapters, for that will help you a lot as you proceed, and will also prevent snarl ups down the road. Do give it a thought.

Affectionately,

Shyamala Aunty

nice continue soon

OMG!!!!  mujhe abhi se hi sameer ki gf ke baare me janne ka mann karne laga hai! 

Tina my dear,

I am really proud of you; an electrical engineer is such an impressive line of work, and then, as you have noted, you have been storming a male bastion! Congratulations, and I am sure that very soon, your male colleagues will realise that you are not just as good as the best of them, but better.

Shyamala Aunty.