FFWhile you were sleeping Chap 21B Pg142 31/1 - Page 7

Posted: 11 years ago
Omg...
 
 
really vry vry nyc update..
 
 
i luv 1st para so much... dear itni bhi tarrif mat karo Rathore ki mai behosh ho jaayu..โค๏ธ
 
 
Rathore GF is model..๐Ÿ˜ฒ
 
 
Riya is in vry much love wit her Chief...๐Ÿ˜Š
 
 
Hts of to Ri hw she save Rathore..b๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
 
 
Riya tld nurse tht she is Rathore fin... ๐Ÿ˜Š
 
 
Wht his family's reaction on tht & Arjun... ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
 
 
Plz plz continue asap.
 
 
thx 4 PM.
 
 
 
Posted: 11 years ago
awsome update yaar
continue soon
thanks for pm
Posted: 11 years ago
awesome awesome ...haye mere dil ke to tukade tukade ho gaye riya ke tarah 

this is so heart touching ...but riya she is awesome...her fighting and shooting skilss is  fabulous ... mind-blowing ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜‰

gosh...even i also feel to cry...๐Ÿ˜ญ

but precap is totally confusing type...i hope sab thik ho๐Ÿ˜•




Edited by kaveriw2008 - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
i liked d first part 
amazing start dear 

Rathore has a GF...amazing 

continue soon
Posted: 11 years ago
Tina, I was wondering about the title, for I liked the Sandra Bullock film with the same name. Now I see where you are going to take the story and where the similarity will come in! It will be a nice change from the usual stuff, and will provide an unexpected and fresh angle to the story.

Shyamala Aunty

Originally posted by haruhi26


thanks everyone for the lovely encouragement and comments i got for the character sketch.
Here's the much awaited first chapter, hope everyone likes it๐Ÿ˜ณ

Chapter 1

Posted: 11 years ago
Great update ...
Awww poor rathod is hurt ... Omg riya lied that she is his fianc ... 
But no Arjun :(
But love the storyline 

Posted: 11 years ago
Very interesting start buddy...riya is in love with rathore..and he love some one else...can't wait to read arjun's entry ...about arjun past and more...thanks for the pm..and update soon..if possible...
Posted: 11 years ago
Is she really loves Rathore or is just a crush??
well bothe Arjun-Riya have tough job in hand.
awesome update
Posted: 11 years ago
amazing Tina๐Ÿ‘
i just cant believe k u handle so many things at the same time..๐Ÿ˜‰
bravo girl๐Ÿ‘
you know what makes this story unique? the dadi part๐Ÿ˜†
i have never seen such thing before๐Ÿ˜›
we always get those investigation things going around but you always come up with something hatke๐Ÿ˜‰
awww hopefully rathod gets better soon๐Ÿ˜Š
Riya has a crush on Rathod?๐Ÿ˜ฒ n called him his fiance?
hayye allah yeh kya ho gya
abb mere arjun ka kya hoga๐Ÿ˜†
do update soon dear.. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Posted: 11 years ago
waiting for arjun...
poor rathore...nice update...thanks for the pm

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