kunchu IF-Dazzler

Joined: 25 March 2012
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Posted: 30 October 2012 at 11:10am | IP Logged
Hi everyone...
its the first time that I am posting anything on any forum.I am a silent reader of IF...and that too only Arjun..
I m a big fan of the FFs over here...and wish to post one
Maybe its not a great time to again hurt everyone with the loss of our Riya..
still I would like to give a try...
Please do comment...

                                        LIFE GOES ON...


"Life itna complicated kyu hai? Kyu jo apne dil ke itne kareeb hai, itne jaldi bijhad jathi hai? Kyu ??" tears welled in her eyes.. she was so lost in her thoughts that  she didn't hear the doorbell  for the first time. It rang again. She woke up with a start , wiped her face and moved to the door.

The smiling face of the postman was waiting for her. "are kaka.. ap is waqt.its almost 4 pm.?"

"kuch nahi beta..wo apke chitti ke liye poora haftha wait kiya.kabhi itna late nahi hua tha na? par abhi thak nahi batha ne keliya aya tha.." he saw moist in her eyes. Well that was for the first time he saw her this much upset."kya baath hai beta..sub teekh tho hai na??"he asked.

"kuch nahi kaka.." she wipes her tears and gave a smile.he saw that the smile didn't reach the eyes.

"mai teekh hu..aap fikar math kijiye'wo'ab apko wo chitii ka wait nahi karna hoga'ab wo nahi ayegi..kabhi nahi'" she slowly closed the door.kept her head over the door.."ab wo kabhi nahi ayegi'"

She moved to the sofa, sat on the floor and kept her head on it.she couldn't control any more'.tears were flowing from her eyes'"kyu Ri'''you promised me'right??then why?..."

Flash back:

"are yaar'aise math dekho mujhe'rulaneka plan hai kya.? " Riya asked cupping her best friend's face in her hands.

"nahi Ri..sub itne jaldi finish kyu ho gayi?pahle boarding school..phir college..ab training bhi..? now we will have to go in different ways"

"par iske matlab ye tho nahi ki hum bhijad rahi hai'we will be friends for ever'. Aur kaam tho hame alag alag hi karna hogo..u know we can't do anything about it right??"Riya asked her.

"ya..I know..par.."

"par var kuch nahi'ab mujhe suno..hum hur month letter likhenge'how s that??"Ri asked with her trademark dimple smile

"letter kuch zyada nahi hai kya'how about email?"

"tu  nahi sudhronge'. Yaar apne hatho se letter likne mei jo maza ayenge na..wo is stupid email aur sms mei nahi hai'and waiting for the next letter'wo excitement kuch or hi hai'got it? Budhu'"

"ok'I think its great idea' lets do it'par agar sirf hai hello hi hoge tho'mein chod dhungi ha'."

"are nahi Sapna'.sirf hai hello nahi hoga'ye hamari life ke best experience hoga'.dekhna 'you will love it'"riya hugged'"still I'l miss u yaar'."

"me too Ri'."

Flashback ends.

"miss you Ri'."

Edited by kunchu - 16 November 2012 at 4:45am

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Posted: 30 October 2012 at 12:16pm | IP Logged
kunchu IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 1:10am | IP Logged
thanks for going through my silly work...
here goes the second part


Riya and Sapna..friends forever.. after completing triaining Riya was posted in Mumbai in the Research Desk. Or mein Pune, first in Research Desk and after 8 months to the field post. Both were the best in their training period. The earlier letters both shared their experience in the research desks..their day to day works.. both loved their jobs but were too eager for the field jobs.

"….yaar hum field me kab jayega? Its not that I don't like my work…but still…." Riya complained.

The reply was not different."are ha Ri…"

But after 8 months I was placed in the field job .

"……….Ri…Guess what mujhe  field job mil gaye…so excited yaar………dekhna u will also be placed soon….here all going well………good co workers….miss u a lot….."

"……..So happy for u  Sapna. Lets hope my turn come soon……….you take care…. Miss u too……."

And after 4 months:

"….Sapna… mujhe ETF mein selection mila hai Tongue……..joining next week…."

The next letter was so heavy…..

"…….ETF mein pehla din tha.great experience!!Wink.sunogi tho thum bhi behosh hojayegiEmbarrassed….ETF chief ACP Sameer Rathod..mujhe laga tha ki poore force mein inse khadoos koi nahi hoga…par I was wrong…so wrong…wo bohot hi strict hai..par ok.phir team mein Shree hai,the gadget man.or Chotu…camando hai…naam pe math jaana…bohot bada hai..par so sweet.shree or chotu ek dum superb hai…or aya woShocked….jo saare khadoos insano ke baap hoShocked…ACP Arjun S Rawte…athe hi gadbad ki maine..mujhe kya pathe tha ki wo mere senior hai?mein unhe attack kiya…or wo mujhe…thank god Sameer Sir agaye…warna pehle hi din mere ram nam satya hojatha ….lekkin kadhoos inteligent hai…uske ek dialog hai 'samje ya samjaoo..' film mein hota tho thali marte…seedhe sunne me hava udh jathi hai…."

The letter was almost a case file.but zyada stress logon mein thi…Rathod Sir…Shree..Chotu…Arjun Sir…aise lag raha tha ki mein bhi wahi hoon.

Phir mahine me ek se zyaada letter likhna shuru kardiya hum ne…or uski letter hamesha merese bhaari thi..Riya  se or kya expect kar sakthe the…jithna bolthi thi uthna likhthi thi…

Sapna smilled thinking of pastSmile.silly Ri..she went to her room n opened the drawer.ithne sare letter koi  laila bhi apne majnu ko nahi likhi hogi…Wink

The later months were not different.

"…..yaar ye Arjun Sir bhi mujhe bar bar research desk kyu bhejna chahtha hai…I know mujhe  shooting main problem hai..par…"

Yes…riya's only weakness…well one among them..apart from crying by seeing others crying,non stop chatting,her hygeine, ice creams,teddy bear…etc etc.

But shooting was serious issue.she shot best to the board.but when it comes face to face…well there were reasons…but its high time to get out of it..I know she will one day…

As time passed I came to hear more about the ETF  team.

"…..patha hai..chotu ki one way chakkar hai..wo har Sunday 11.30 ko dept store athe hai..naam patha kuch patha nahi…shree mujhe humesha thang karthe hai yaar…ek din wo pitegi… rathod Sir uthne Khadoos nahi hai…strict hai par dil ke achi hai…"

Then came Arjun Sir…unke upar essays hothe the…

"…… samje ya samjao ko ek din mein batha dungi ki Riya Mukherji  hai konAngry..kya samachtha hai wo apne ap ko?ha kafi inteligent hai..sab chote bade cheeze dikhthe hai..apne theory almost hamesha sahi hote hai…par itna attitude nahi dikhana chahiye…"

A month later:" ………yaar thu sahi thi…unke khadoos hone ka reason hai..unke wife the..unhe kisine mardala…bohot berahmi se…wo bhi sir ke ankhon ke samne…patha nahi wo ye sab kaise she pathe hai…you know its horrible…right? Jab shree ne mujhe ye bathaya….."

The following letter was fully dedicated to him.thab wo na khadoos thi…nahi wo emotionless…

Ye meri Ri ko ho kya rahe hai???

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grad2011 Goldie

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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 1:20am | IP Logged
really nice plzz do update!!
shrutisweety IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 1:34am | IP Logged
hey its nice continue it
Queen.Bee IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 2:16am | IP Logged
please do update!!! riya is dead na ... so sad
Haruhi_Mo IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 2:35am | IP Logged
nice conceptThumbs Up
So sapna will come in the life of all ETF membersSmile
Please continue
DivineDarkness IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 02 March 2012
Posts: 25778

Posted: 31 October 2012 at 2:46am | IP Logged
well written dear... continue soon...

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