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nice story liked. 
continue soon.
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Sorry for the late update.
Its Diwali coming soon. Busy with the preparations. So, please forgive me for the short updates. I don't get much time to write and you guyz sit up on my neck to update faster. LOL
Happy Diwali advance!
Here you go with part 2:
Happy reading :)

Part Two:

"What The" Both said simultaneously and looked at each other in shock.
"Oyyeee...eeehhh" the gang cheered up making both of them blush.

"Shut up guyz!"

"I...I just came here to ask this address" she handed him a chit. He took it and read "36-24-36... What's this??"

"Ooppss! Sorry" she turned the chit and gave it to him.

"Hmm... go straight, then take left, then take right from the second lane...walk 15 feets then you'll get it." He looked at the taxi behimd her over her shoulder and said "Oh! You've came in taxi?? Then go left, and then right and go to the third bunglow there"

She gave him a WHY.I.CAME.TO.HIM look and left saying "It's ok! I'll manage!"

"Strange!" He muttered.


"Hey Shrads, yeah Khushi here.. Haa yaar! Battery low hai... Obviously mobile ki! Will you please stop cracking poor jokes. I am on coin box... Yeah,tell mumma that I came here in Mumbai. Yeah... Haa yaar!! She wants me to get married with some guy... No, I dunno his name..hahaha... yeah! Mana karne aayi hu to naam janke kya fayda? Yeah...ghar pe koi nahi hai..that bloody secutiry guard is not allowing me to go there.. Huh! Yeah! Sham ki flight hai... Yeah yaar!! I'll have to spend the wole day here...Ohk chal bbye...seeya"

"Bhaiyya, what's the bill??"

"7 Rs." She handed him a note of Rs. 10.

"madam, Chillar do na.."

"Bhaiyya, me Chillar de du?" came a husky, teasing voice.

Both changed their gazes and they stood on HIM.

"Uff..not again!"

"Areey Bhaiyya you??" asked the shopkeeper.

"What are YOU doing here??" she asked in anger.

"Oh Hello! Its my're outsider here... Its my area...I can do whatever I want... I don't want your advises on it." he repleid fuming 'coz of her ignorance and big fat ego.

"Aaahh!! Your city! Ohk! Do whatever you want! Take this bhaiyya" he gave the coins of Rs. 5 and Rs. 2 and went in huff.

"What the?? How arrogant!" he said.

"Let it be na bhaiyya.. Tell me why are you here?"

"Give me a cork ball please"


He saw her standing on the footpath waiting for something..or someone. It was 1 O'clock. He went away towards there so-called Cricket pitch.


She was standing there waiting for an auto. Ofcourse! She din't wantto hire a taxi to go to Mc.D

"Do you want a lift??" She heard the same voice which she heard in that shop few minutes ago.

He was there seating on his bike with a smirk on his face.

"Uff! These cheap guys!" She made a fake smile saying "No thanx!"

"I just came here to say Sorry.. I am sorry..I shouldn't have said you so."

"Its ok!"

"You want to go somewhere and you need an auto for it, don't you?"

She looked at him shocked!

"Come, I'll drop you wherever you want"

"WHAT?? Are you sure??"


"Are you sure, you're not flirting with me?"

"What the! Its 1 o'clock and you're standing in this much of Dhoop. I just came if you need my help. And By the way, you won't get any auto now. Its a time for their break."

Bas Mc.D tak ki hi to baat hai! Jaa uske saath Khushi! You've no-one here..

And what if he will try to harm me?

Don't you know you're the great Khushi Gupta with black belt in carrrate?? I'll beat him upto death.

"Ohk! Please drop me to McDonalds"


hope you guys like it :)
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note: ADD WhatsMyName for the PMs... But please don't send a request if you wish to remain silent. It may seem rude, but PMing people is a lot of problem, especially so, when you do not comment. Please don't expect a PM from me of the updates.

Originally posted by WhatsMyName

Guyz, I am still a newbie so can't send PM's with links of the updates...Ouch
So, check your scrapbooks...
You'll get the links Embarrassed

Edited by ii..Shilpa..ii - 10 November 2012 at 2:46am

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