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Posted: 23 November 2012 at 12:43am | IP Logged

nice update dear..
i want to read more but i can understand ur problem..
concentrate on your studies first!!

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Part 4:

 

"Hello"

"Yeah! I had came to your home but there was none."

"Ohkay! errmm... m in Divakar's."

"What?? You too??? Errmm... What's the table number?"

"Ohkay!" She started walking to the table number 5.

He was sitting there with his back to her.

She tapped his shoulder and he turned.

 

"YOU?? Oh! m sorry. Actually HE is coming here and I thought HE was seating here"

"Nah! Its okay."

 

******

 

"YOU are meeting him?? How did this miracle happen??"

"Its not a miracle! Umm.. actually he called me and told me to sit here and m here!"

"Don't tell me, you're ready to marry him"

"Uummm...umm...its not like that! I just came to atleast see him."

"Oh shut up! Okay. You are introducing me to him, right?"

"YOU?? Why?"

"Whoaa!!! You were with me all the day in a new city and you forgot THAT Arnav only b'coz of me. To ye haqq to banta hai boss!!"

"Okay! Dekhlenge!"

 

****

 

"Yaar m getting late to the flight. He should be here by now. Why isn't he here?" She was blabbering continuesly.

"Ohhooo!!!! Yaaaddd aaa rahiii haiii teri yaaaddd" He started singing to tease her.

"Oh Shut up please! Okay. We are leaving. I don't wanna meet him"

"Areey aise kaise???"

"Let's go. Please."

"Okay. But atleast inform him we're leaving."

"Umm...yeah right." She took his mobile.

"Tere number ke neeche wala"

"Yeah." She called but it was again Busy.

"Wait a minute. How do you know my number?"

"That's not important. The important thing is 'How can we call someone from his own mobile?' 'Usi number se usi number ko call kaise karte hai?' "

"Aaah! Thats not possible. We will be informed 'the person you're trying to speak is busy.'" She said mimicing the operators.

"Right!"

"Okay. Lets go." She said standing up but suddenly, "Wait. 'we can't call someone from his own number. They tell us its busy.' That means I was calling..."

"FINALLY!!!"

"I was calling YOU??"

He raised one eyebrow. "Yes!"

"That means, you're the same guy for whom I came here?"

"Nope. I'm his watchman. Kya yaar tu bhi!"

"What the??" and she started hitting him.

"Ouch ouch ouch! Its hurting."

"Its better! How could you do this to me?"

"I can do anything! I'm Arnav Singh Raizada afterall!"

"WHATTT??? Tera bhi naam Arnav?? Hey bhagwaan!!! Why all these Arnavs in my life only?" She said dramatically.

"Oh madam! Tell me" he said picking her one earring and bending down on his knee "Will you marry me?"

"YES" he slipped her earring in her finger and she hugged him tight.

 

 

The whole cafe, The Divakar's cafe, filled with a great applause for the newly fell-in-love birds.

 


*** THE END***
 


 

 Sorry for typos. No proofreading.

I know its ugly. I am very very bad in writing, especially English. :|

FINALLY!!! The story ends here. Thanks for being with us. Actually Jyo was in no mood to write anything b'coz of Barun fiasco and so I was. And later, my dad disconnected brodband connection. UnhappyUnhappy So, I had to end the story in 4 parts only. I am really really sorry! I couldn't help but end it.

To all marathi readers log: LOL, you guyz were right. It was story of the most famous Marathi film Mumbai - Pune - Mumbai. I love Swwapnil and Mukta alot and wanetd to do the same with arHi Wink I had planned a different end than the film but I all went in vein. Unhappy

 

 

P.S. New story in Unconditional Love will be posted soon. Wink Just wait and watch! WinkLOLEmbarrassed


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Edited by ii..Shilpa..ii - 26 November 2012 at 2:32am

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