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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 7:49pm | IP Logged
hey is it a story of marathi film mumbai-pune-mumbai???
but any ways its nice Smile

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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 11:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by aaw1505

hey is it a story of marathi film mumbai-pune-mumbai???
but any ways its nice Smile

Yeah!! Tongue

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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 11:10pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Farwa_Ibrahim

Hey i tried liking dont know whats wrong with it. Anyways awesome update. Hey Shilpa the thing is i use mob so if u can send me hyperlinks in msg then i'll be able to comment early otherwise will comment as soon as i came from laptop i hope u understand

Sure!!! will do it from next part! Smile

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 1:02am | IP Logged
Black belt in karate lol aw loved it :)

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nice :))

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 4:24am | IP Logged
lol
dt was cute..:D
kitta ladte h dono..EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
bike pe liftWinkWink
ehem ehem..:D
loved it..:)
wts gonna b in d nxt chptr?
sum more argmnts n fyts..:D ryt?

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Part 3:



"Errmm... Can I make a call from your mobile? Actually..."

"Yeah sure! I know the battery of your mobile is down"

"How do you know?"

"Aeivvy!"

She dailed the number of the guy to whom, she had came to Mumbai for the marriage proposal.

"Uff! Busy!"
She handed him the mobile.

"What's your problem? Why have came here from Delhi??"

"Actually I came here to meet a guy. My mom wants me to marry him."

"Then marry!"

"Thats not so easy. I don't even know him properly! You know what? I even don't know his name!"

"WHATTT???"

"Yeah! I came here for him and he isn't here!" She said annoyed.

"To reject him, right?"

"How do you know??"

"I listened to you when you were on phone at that shop"

"What?? You were trying to listen me Chhup-chhupke?"

"What's chhup-chhupke in it? You're still speaking that loud that everyone in the cafe can hear it well!" She kept quiet.


******


"By the way, do u have bf?"

"Errm... actually NO. I had one. Arnav. But we broke up two months ago." He was shocked how easily she was saying all this
.

"Oh! So, you're refusing this guy just b'coz You can't forget Arnav??"

"Actually yeah."

"So, Aaj ek baar bhi Arnav ki yaad aayi??"

"No. Thank you."

"What for?"

"For the whole day. I really enjoyed your company. And you're the whole reason for me to forget Arnav."

"Oh! then You're welcomed" He said grinning sheepishly.

"By the way, why don't you charge the battery in charging unit?"

"Oh yeah! I will go and charge." she stood up and went.


*************



"Hello"

"Yeah! I had came to your home but there was none."

"Ohkay! errmm... m in Divakar's."

"What?? You too??? Errmm... What's the table number?"

"Ohkay!" She started walking to the table number 5.

That guy was sitting there with his back to her.

She tapped his shoulder and he turned.


Note:

Heyya guyz, I am in a great trouble. My dad disconnected the brodband 'coz of my overuse. But I'll have to complete my all 3 stories. So, I am ending the story most probably in the next part as I don't have time to be on IF. I wanted to wriote more...but... SighCry

Thanks for reading.

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Edited by ii..Shilpa..ii - 18 November 2012 at 9:01am

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 9:16am | IP Logged
very nice!:)

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