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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 5:57am | IP Logged
awsome yar what an os yar tohrai idea humai dai do takai hamari bih ss ka kuch ho jai itna acha os hai and yeh do cont it

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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 6:50am | IP Logged
Heyy, Shruti... First of all my earnest apologies for so late comment...! Sorry dear... The OS was awesome... Rathore n Arjun good frndss wow! N I wz thinking Rathore waking up and yawning and his sleepy voice is a sight to see...! Uff! M blushing... Waiting for next part... Keep writing n take care...-Shuchi!

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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 6:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by arshilover345

awsome yar what an os yar tohrai idea humai dai do takai hamari bih ss ka kuch ho jai itna acha os hai and yeh do cont it
yeh kaunsi bhasa hai jii???

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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 6:53am | IP Logged
The precap... I will cry now! I hope Rhea is not with her bf!!! Plzz plzz... The precap seemed a cliff hanger...! Anxiety killing me...!

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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 6:55am | IP Logged
lovely start dearSmile
Enjoyed the relation between Arjun and Rathore a lotLOL
N arjun taking him along to go to propose to Riya, hayeEmbarrassed
Please continue

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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 6:56am | IP Logged
Love it...

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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 7:15am | IP Logged
very nice dearBig smile i loved ur writing!
precap was interesting...plzz continue soon!

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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 7:17am | IP Logged
hey guyz here i am updating next part
actualy i was writing os but now iam writing ss


CHAPTER-2

Rathod-chalo waise bhi utgaye hai to fresh up ho jate hai

Arjun-haan sameer

IN RIYAS HOUSE

it was 8.30 but still she was sleeping,suddenly her phone rings and she sees it was shree's phone,she pick up the phone

Riya-haan shree bolo,itani subha kuyn call kiya?

Shree-kahan subha ri,its already 8.30,waise bi aaj hum free hai to gumane ke liye bahar chale

Riya-haan,waise bura idea nahi hai

Shree-than i will come at 10, be ready ,aur chotu ko bhi saath lavunga

Riya-haan,ab phone rakho,muje freshup hona hai

shree cuts the call and riya freshenup

In meanwhile shree calls chotu and tells the plan

At 9.30 chotu comes to shree's house, they were ready to go suddenly bell rings , shree opened the door

Shree(shocked)-rohan ,tum yaahan, kya kar raho yaar?vo bi itani saalo ke baad

Rohan-haan yaar vo tumse aur riya se milne aaya hu

(shree,rohan and riya were studing in same school and they were very close frnds.shree and riya continued their studies in mumbai only, while rohan went to londen for higher studies .after that riya and shree tried to contact so many , but he changed the phone number and email adress)

Rohan-yaar itani saalo ke bad,mein aaya hoon, andar nahi bulavoge

Shree-haan yaar,andar aavo

Rohan-kaiso ho?aur riya kaha hai?kya kar raha ho tum dono?

Shree-main aur riya ekhi office main kaam kar rahe hai,aur vo aapne ghar main hai

Rohan-vo koun hai?(pointing towords chotu)

Shree-vo chotu hai, hamare saath kaam karte hai aur hamara best frnd bi hai,haan chotu ye rohan hai hamara school ka frnd hai

Rohan-aap log kaam kya karte hai?

Shree-hum etf main kaam karte ha

Rohan(little bit tensed)-haan,riya se milne chale

Shree-haan,chalo hum bhi uske ghar ja rahe the

Rohan-kuyn?

Shree-hum aaj gumane ka plan banaya hai

Rohan-chalo,main bhi join karta hoon

Shree locked the house and 3 off them leave to riyas house

IN ARJUN'S HOUSE

Arjun thinking in his mind
(riya mere jeevan me aane ke bad,kitna badal gaya hai.Roshni ke jaane ke baad,mane jeena hi chod diya tha ,mere zindagi ka ekhi maskat tha shikander ko pakadna,par sikander ke pakadne ke baad, muje realise hua ki riya mere zindagi hai ,aur vo muje jeena sikaya hai,main usse itne dino se usse door raha hoo,sirf iss liye ki vo bhi roshni ki tarah,nahi nahi aaysa nahi hoga,aaj main realise kar chuka hoon ki riya mare zindagi hai,isilye main usse aaj propose karke,shaadi ke liye puchluga)

suddenly rathod cals arjun

arjun come back from his toughts

Arjun-haan sameer bolo

Rathod-kya soch raha hai

Arjun-kuch nahi, bass roshni ke chale jaane ke baad,riya roshni baan ke mere zindagi maan aayi hai,

Rothod-riya ne tumari zindagi badal diya hai

Arjun-ab jale riya ke ghar

arjun and rathod locks the house and leave to riya's house

meanwhile riya is already ready to go out and she is wearing white suit ,she is looking so geogeourg(beatiful),than she heres the door bell, she goes to open the door
When she opend the door she is shocked to see rohan

Riya-rohan,tum yahaan?

Rohan-tum se milne aaya hoon

Shree-andar aane do na

Riya-aavo na

3 off them went inside and sit on sofa

riya goes to kitchen and bring water ,gives it to them

Riya-tum itne saal kaha tha,kya karha tha,main aur shree tumhe contact karne ki bohot koshis ki hain

Rohan-haan,mein londen padne gaya tha,main aapna number change kiiya tha

rohan comer near riya and hugs her and tells her mai tumhe bohut miss kiya hai

meanwhile arjun and rathod reaches riyas house and they sees shrees car

Arjun-shree yahan kya kar raha hai?

Rathod-chalo,chal ke dhakate hai

they parked the car and goes near the door, but door was open
arjun is shocked to see riya and rohan hugging
shree sees them and tels arjun sir and rathod sir aap yahaan?

Rathod-haan,vo hum riya se baat karne aaye the

riya breaks the hug and tell them to come inside and tells to sit and i wil bring coffee for u all and she goes to kitchen and after 10min she brings coffee to all of then and she gives coffee to shree,chotu,rohan and rathod ,and she goes near arjun and gives chai for him

Riya-sir aap log yahan?

Arjun-vo main tumse kuch kahana chata hu

Before arjun could say rathod phone rings, he excuses them and talks in phone ,and after 10 min he comes tell every one we have a new case


precap-rohan angry and

arjun and riya fights

shree and rathod and chotu are shocked

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