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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: ostitto

tum to kaha tha nxt update aj karogi. leken keu nehi kiya??? :(





hey dear main update kiya na chapter -12,
how is it
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chap 12 par chuki hu. :(




main next chapter lik rahi ho,
tomorrw morning
i wil update
sry for the late
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thanks
samiya dear,
i wil update as soon as possible
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hey here i am back with next update
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CHAPTER-13



In room,
Chotu and anil went outside to have their breakfast

outside,
arjun- kya rathod tum jante ho sandhya ko

Rathod was lost in his taughts,
he remembers all the sweet moments with sandhya,their first mitting

Arjun again says same thing little bit loudly,arjun could see all the emotions on rathods face

Rathod came out from his taughts and says leave me alone for some time and goes from their

Arjun is shocked and he turns towards rohan and asks kya tum rathod aur sandhya ke baare mian kuch jante ho

Rohan- nahi sir

Arjun-tumse ye sab kisne karvaya hai,? sach batavo

Rohan-main sach bol raha hoo sir,main kabi nahi milla hoo,bus ussne sab kuch phone pe bathaya hai,aur vo har bar phone number change kar raha hai sir.

Rohan sees riya's face and says,
sir vo ye sab kuch riya ko pane ke liye kar raha hai sir,aur ye bi bataya hai ki riya ke garib jo bi boys frnds hai us sab ko mar dalta hoo,he comes near riya and holds her hand and says riya plz mari sandhya ko bacha lo

Meanwhile rathod reaches his room and he has tears in his eyes,he goes to sofa and sits and close his eyes,suddenly sandhya's face flashes,he opens his eyes and drinaks water and goes to balcony and stands their and remember theis first meeting .

-------------------@-FLASHBACK-@--------

few days back,
It was night and raining ,
arjun,shree,chotu and riya left to their house,but rathod stayed in office for some inportant work to finish,after he finishes his work,he was going to his house in suv,but suddendly he stops the car and opens window

On the other side of road a girl wearing blue and white combination dress with silver border and she was twinkling like fairy,she was looking so gorgeous,she was playing with small children in rain,running here and their with them,jumping with them

Rathod was lost in her beauty,he opens the door,slowly comes towards her and drag her towards him,she hits his cheast,he was lost in her eyes,he keeps one hand on her wrist and pulls hes closer,she was stuggling to free,but he tighted the girp,slowly he moves his faces towards her face and he touchs her rosy lips with his hands,and he was abt to kiss her,but rathod heard a horn sound,they didnt notice that they were standing in middle of the road,rathod pushes her and goes from their.

She is thinking ye koun hai,bada batamiz adami hai aur isse ladaki ke saat behave karna bi nahi aata,mujhe usse sabak sikana hoga,aur usse mujhe sorry bolna hoga,and she goes from their.

Rathod in suv thinking mujhe kya ho gaya tha aur main kya kar raha tha uss ladaki ke saat,vo kya soch rahi hogi mara baare main,mujhe usse sorry bolna chahiye,par kaise

meanwhile rathod reaches house,he park the suv and go to his room and change,while changing his eyes feel on pitty silver chain and diamond pendent which was stuck in his shirt button,he picks it and goes to bed and starts thinking zaror ye uss ladaki ka hoga,he slowly goes to sleep

Next morning arjun comes and wakes him with bed coffee,rathod gets up with a little smile on his face,arjun asks him kya huva smile kuyn kar raha ho,mara face kuch laga hai kya

Rathod-kuch nahi

Arjun-to chalo ready ho javo office chala hai ki nahi

Rathod-tum javo main aaj late aavunga,mujhe kuch kaam hai

Arjun nodds and leaves from their and he fastly freshen up and goes to office

Rathod also freshen up,and lock the door and sits in suv,while going he sees flowes shop,he stops the suv and goes to flower shop,he takes yellow color flower for her,but suddendly he sees her going moll,he follow her,but she gets angry and irritated,

She comes near him and starts talking continuesly without giving him a chance

Girl-aap koun hai,aur mujhe follow kuyn kar rahe hai,aap ko kya chahiye,kal raat bi aapne(she stops) and look at him.

He was smiling to her,she gets more angry and says

aap ko ladaki ke saat kaise pash aate hai pata nahi kya,aur kya kar rahe hai,mai police main commplant kar dungi.

He gets angry,he pushes her to the wall,he stands infrount of her,she tryies moves but he kept both the hands on the wal,so she is middle of his hands,he slowly come close her ear,seeing him close,she closes her eyes,and he wispers in her ear and says

HAPPY BIRTHBIRTH DAY MISS SANDHYA MEHETA

she opens her eyes in surpise,and she looks into his eyes and asks
aap ko kaise pata chala ki...

he smiles and says jab tum moll ke ander aarahi thi,to tumhare identity card gir gaya tha,aur main usse dek liya tha,aur ek aur tum police ko complaint kar dogi na,usska koi zarurat nahi hai,kuyn ki main police officer hoo,main etf main kaam karta hoo,aur main etf ka chief hoo.

Sandhya-kya aap...

Rathod-ye ligiye
he gives flowers to her and move back.

She took relief and said thank u,
aap aaj raat ko star hotel ko aayiye,main aap ko party dungi,
aap ka naam kya hai

Rathod-sammer rathod

Sandhya talks to herself wow kitna acha naam hai

but rathod listens it and smiles at her and says aap ka number digiye aur raat ko milte hai,

they both exchange the number,and goes to their work,

At night sandhya was already in hotel,rathod came little bit late,they goes to their table and sit,sameer brought gift to her,he gives it,she opens it,it was beatiful white colour and designer saree,she says thanks to him.

Rathod asks her aap akeli rehati hai,she says haa mera bahiya londen main rehate hai.

Their dinner goes well and he drops her to her house and he also goes to his,and quickly changes and thinks pata nahi uss ladaki main kya hai,mujhe vo pasand anelagi hai,and he goes to sleep.

Here in sandhya's house she also thinks pata nahi kab milanga,and goes to sleep.

---------@---FLASHBACK ENDS-----@--

Suddenly rathod phone rings from private number,he picks up the call,

PHONE-sa...sa...sa...sameer,

Rathod- sandhya tum,kaha ho,kaise ho,aur tum aise kuyn bol rahi ho,

Sandhya-main tumhare gur pe hoo,aur mujhe kisi ne kidnap kiya hai, aur main tumse milna chahati hoo,

suddendly cal disconnects,

Rathod-hello ,helo, he tries to cal her,but it was swiched off,

So he decides to go to mumbai,he packs the bag and leave to airport without informing anybody,he takes filght and land in mumbai,he takes taxi and fastly he goes to his house,
he gets out from taxi and pay him, and go inside the compound and wat he saw was made him shock


In delhi
Arjun and other team members come to room and sees rathod is not their,so arjun calls him,

Rathod- haa arjun kya hai jaldi bolo,

Arjun-kaha ho tum,

Rathod- main mumbai aya hoo,aur tum log jaldi aajana ,main ghar main hoo,by saying this he cuts the call,

Arjun says to his team hum abi mumbai jayenga,aur ye chotu aur anil kaha hai,anil aur rohan bi hamare saat chal rahe hai,shree chotu ko phone karo aur jaldi ,shree cals chotu and informs and aftersome time chotu also reachs their,shree and chotu pack their bag fastly

Meanwhile arjun and riya were packing their bags,riya asks arjun sir main aap kuch baat karna chahati hoo,

Arjun gets angry and hold her shoulder tightly and say ab tumhe kya baat karni hai,tum kya samagiti ho apne aapko,mujhe patana zarori nahi samagi.

Riya's eyes is filled with tears

suddenly they heard a knock on door,arjun pushes her and opens the door and shree and others were standing

Riya fastly wips her tears ,

Arjun- ab hamhe chala chayiye

they all leave to airport,




PRECAP

ariya's function,and
rathod confess his feeling to sandhya,




THIS PART I WANT TO DEDICAT TO

m.v.kohli007 and prava55663
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks for dedicating it for me dear...

*EDITED..

Loved the update...

Loved SAndy's filmy entry...

Rathore lost in her ...Love at first sight..πŸ˜†

Police ko complain karegi Sandy...Aww...

cont soon...

Waiting for the proposal..

Edited by prava55663 - 11 years ago
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love story of sameer wow 😳 love at first sight 😳 ek baar dekh ke hi hosh kho baitha..kya baat hai πŸ˜‰ waiting for the proposal part πŸ˜›

but more than that I want to know what Rathod had seen when entering his home that left him shock 😲

now Arjun is giving attitude not bad πŸ˜‰ waiting for Ariya's function

update soon Shruti 😊

Edited by -sree13- - 11 years ago
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WOw shruti dear ..mast part 

Sandhya's entry : kitni mast thi😊

Rathore lost his control in d very first meeting ...AWWW


Precap is interesting ..very interesting 

Ariya function ...

luking fwd to t ...

Update soon



Edited by tani23 - 11 years ago
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loved it!!! sameer-sandhya nice jodi..
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Thx for dedicating dear .
 
Loved ths part ..
 
Damn Arjun is so angry on her..
 
Love Sandhya's entry , she is exactly like me , playing in d rain , kiski ko baat karne ka mauka hi nahi detiπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† bechra Rathod πŸ˜†πŸ˜† 
 
 
Waiting for nxt
 
Ariya function.😊 
 
Rathod propopses Sandhya😊 
 
 
intersting things happens in nxt part..
 
 
Bt why he shock , wht he see????