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Finally updating Chapter 2, I hope you all like it and I'm sorry if I don't make any sense Embarrassed
 

Nivren FF Aadha Ishq Chapter 2:

Nivedita had hugged all her friends and Classmates and said bye to everyone, today was her last day at University. She was off to return home and start looking for a job.

She was heading home to meet her Parent's and her Younger Brother Yash and her sister Sana, she just couldn't wait to meet them after 9 whole months, she had a chance of meeting them in between but was too busy with her studies. She couldn't wait to catch up with what she missed out with them.

She was walking down the route with her luggage; she had finally found the bus stop. She was standing there waiting for the bus and there weren't much people around, it was taking ages for the bus to come, Nivedita was getting bored and took out her phone, and looked at the time, it had been around half an hour since she was waiting.

Nivedita was very bored and said "Why isn't the bus here yet?" just then a small boy walked up to her, he was selling flowers and asked Nivedita to buy some. Nivedita was going to refuse then the flowers had caught her eyes and she decided to buy some, she then asked the boy if he knew when the bus was going to come. The boy replied to her saying "Didi, today there is a bus strike, so no bus is going to come today"

Nivedita was disappointed, she had to go home any how. So she started walking ahead. On the way she got a phone call, she looked at the screen and was really happy when she saw the name. It was her sister Sana, she picked it up and said "Hello Sana, Kya Baath hai today you called me instead of me calling you". Sana laughed and replied "Didi, what can I do, I am just soo happy that your coming home today after a long time" Nivedita said "If I can make it home by today that is" in an irritated voice. Sana was confused and asked Nivedita what happened, Nivedita told her about the bus strike and all, then Sana said "Didi, when Sana is here then no need to fear, I'm on my way to pick you up". Nivedita was really happy and told her where she is.

Nivedita had finally reached home with Sana and went straight inside to meet her family. First she saw her mum in the kitchen, she was going to run into the kitchen and hug her, but got a different idea, she tiptoed into the kitchen and hugged her mum from behind. Her mum got shocked and quickly turned around to see Nivedita; she was soo happy and started crying. Nivedita was confused; she asked her mum "Ma, why are you crying? Are you cutting Onions or something?" And she looks down to see her mum cooking with Carrots and not Onions. She picked up one of the carrots to see if it made her cry, Nivedita's mum playfully slaps her on the head and Nivedita started smiling. Nivedita's mum says to her "Nivi dear, these are tears of joy, I am just soo happy that you came back finally". Nivedita hugs her mum and said "Well now that I'm here, you don't need to cry at all, no tears of sorrow or tears of joy so don't be senti ma". Nivedita's mum says to her "Ok dear, now go freshen up and meet the others, they are all eagerly waiting for you"

At Viren's house the kids where watching TV while Viren was busy drafting out an advert for a babysitter/nanny, he couldn't think of what to write, he looked at the kids who were happily watching their favourite cartoon and smiling, he instantly got an idea and what to write and finally finished the advert, he kept it safely and went and joined the kids and watched along with them.

 
 
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soo cute... wanna know what verin write ..plzz update soon :))

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Nice continue soon plz.

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sorry for replying late.but it was really gr8 update.u updated after such a long time!btw,thx for pm and cont soonSmile

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Lovely chapter continue soon =)

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Originally posted by mystery-lover

soo cute... wanna know what verin write ..plzz update soon :))
 
 
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Originally posted by nivrenZS

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