Joined: 14 June 2012
Hey guys batao na should I include Mahi Ashi track
I am writing a simple SS about Ansh
Cannot make it just steamy and all about night time
Wanna keep it realistic AnSh are not so steamy like other portray them
They are cute so am portraying them so and using simple language
I want to include pieces about other people too
I don't receive 'like' or msg like others so am not confident to continue
Is my stuff good please need some boost
Joined: 20 October 2012
This is even better than the serial itself, i hope they get soem ideas from your story and show some thing similar, that would be fun.
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In the C H MAASH and Saachi decide to pull Shiv's leg. "Daddu kya hum Lucknow se hai?" "Arre ye kya sawaal kar raha hai Mahi. Itna kaam pada hai aur tu time paas karwa raha hai." Meenu scolded him. "Papaji ye dekhiye mehndi par hum Anandi ko ye neg denge. Didi humein accha kiya mehndi piswa ke bhigo di hai warna in sabhi baccho ki dhamaal masti mein na jaane kya hota. Anandi ke haaton mein bahut gehri mehndi rachegi." "Arre ma aap ke abhi se mehndi bhigone se kya hota hai Agar aap bhabhi ke ghar le jakar tab bhi bhigote aur bhabhi ko lagete to bhi rang gehra chadta. Akhir bhaiyya bhabhi se itna pyar karte hain. Kyun bhaiyya kitna pyar karte hain?" He teases Shiv.
"C M aap ise samjha dijiye pitega mujhse. Aur ye dono chipkaliyaan (He pulls Ashi and Saachi ears) ye bhi iske saath milkar mujhe pareshaan kar rahi hain. Teeno kaan lagakear meri aur Anandiji ki baaten sun rahe the. Humaari pvt. baaten sunna theek hai kya?" CM and others could bearly control their laughter. "Bhaiyaa aapka college ka graduation kab hai? Main apne college se chutti lekar attend karoongi." Shiv gave her a confused look. Saachi winks at Ashi. She calls Ashi. Ashi pretends to be Shiv and Saachi pretends to be Anandi. They repeat the convo they over heard. "Bhaiyya aap college ke teenager ki tarah behave kar rahe hain. Kabhi nahi socha tha mere bhaiyya aise bhi honge." "Haan Anandi ne Kadak kadak collector ko 'Lover boy' bana diya hai." Ashi joined in teasing him.
Shiv runs behind MAASH and Saachi to beat them. "Bhaiyya rukiye bhabhi kya sochegi agar aap UNKE devar aur nanand ko marenge. Hum kal mehndi ke liye jayenge tab bhabhi hum jaise masoom baccho ka laal neela peela chehra dekengi toh who aapse naraaz ho gayi toh?" Mahi ne Shiv ki dukhti rag par haath rakh diya. "Kuch bhi ho jaye eo Anandiji ko naraaz nahi kar sakta. Isliye chod raha hoon. Agar unhe pata chala tum log mujhe kaise tang kar rahe ho wo khud tum logon ki class lagayegi." "OOO Kya pyaar hai?" This statement now became the Takia lalam of MAASH and Saachi.
While escaping from Shiv Ashi and Mahi almost fell on each other. He grabbed her waist to prevent her from falling. She jerked off his hand and ran away from there. Mahi is shocked to see her reaction. Something had happened between them in Jaipur when they had gone shopping with AnSh. He remembered they had a moment and in the spur of that moment Mahi odered for one juice and shared it with Ashi using two straws. He did not understand her current reaction. "Did he offend her? Did he do something wrong?" Mahi left and went out into the garden. He was hurt by her behavior.
In the haveli everyone can hear Dsa shout at the top of her lungs giving instructions to all. The preperations for the mehndi ceremony were on. The haveli was decorated like a dulhan. Sumitra and specially Dsa took care ki mehndo ekdum maheen pisi jaye. Dhang se bhigoyi jaaye. " Ri sun lo beenddiyon mehndo accho se bhigona. Kuwarsa he haaton mein mehndi khoob rachni chahiye." Gehna looks at Anandi and says," Masa aap chinta mat kijiye ab Shiv ke haaton mein Anandi ke naam ki mehndi khoob rachegi aur khilegi bhi." Sumitra smiled.
Anandi was roaming in the haveli thinking of Shiv. She was sad thinking that she will have to leave the haveli and her bidaai. She came and sat where the mehndi was being grounded. Shiv got rid of everyone and again locked him up in the room. He did not realize when he got out of his room thinking of her and sat amongst other family members. He called Anandi and realized that she is feeling low.
"Nahi kuch nahi main theek hunn. Aap batiye kaise call kiya? Bachelors night ki info mili aapko? Mujhe batiye main yahan sabko batati hoon."
"Aandji ji aap topic change mat kijiye chaliye bataiye kya baat hai."
"Bas wo soch rahi thi kuch dino mein Dsa, ma, bapusa, tauji, taiji aur Nandu sab ko chod kar main chali jaaoongi. Inke bina kaise rahoongi?" She sobs a little.
"Oh toh aap is baat se dukhi hain ki aap sabko chod kar mere saath chali aayengi. Main ye toh nahi keh sakta ki main aapki feelings ko samajh sakta hoon par haan samajhne ki koshish karoonga. Theek hai hum ganga ji ko thoda ulta bahate hain." (He tries to make her smile)
"Ji main samjhi nahi? Kya matlab hai aapka?"
"Main aapko bida karake ghar nahi laoonga. Main aakar apne sasuraal mein rahoonga jab tak meri patni mere saath mere ghar nahi aana chahegi."
"Arre kaisi baaten kar rahe hain aap. Aisa nahi ho sakta. Main aisa nahi chahti. Aap ghar jammai banne ki baat kar rahe hain. Dsa na jaane kitne paap khud par chada lengi. Mujhe bhi paap chadega. Aur maine kab kaha ki main aapke saath bida hokar nahi aana chahti. Bas wo toh roz roz in sabko nahi dekhungi isliye thodi ro baithi. Ab bilkul nahi roungi. Theek hai aap apne khurafati dimaag ko aaram dijiye aisi ghar jammai wali baaten mat sochiye.Ab toh main apni bidaai par bhi nahi roungi kya pata aap yahin jam jaye"
Shiv smiled he managed to distract her. Mission successful. " Bas har baar aapko aise hi rne se rok loonga. Aur roz roz kyun nahi mil sakti aap sabse? Hum toh yahin rahenge. Hum roz jayenge sabse milne. Aur haan apni bidaai par rona padega aapko warna sab sochenge kitni besharam hai pati ke ghar jaane ki itni khushi hai ki babul ke ghar se wida hone par ro nahi rahi." He teased her.
"Nahi nahi roz roz nahi aa sakte. Aap is ghar ke dammad hain. Roz roz aane se izzat kam hoti hai aur roz yahan ayenge to yahin khana khayenge Dsa mujhe hi daategi ki main aapka khayaal nahi rahkti isliye aap saas ke haath ka khana khane aate hain. Aap ko accha lagega koi aapki beenddi ko daaten phir chahe wo Dsa hi kyun na ho."
Everyone in the C H and haveli are amazed to see that how lost they are in each other that they are totally oblivious of their surroundings. They came back to their senses when Daddu passed a comment. "Bahi is mahine to C S ki tankhwa phone ka bill bharne mein hi chali jayegi. Kalyaniji ne milne par ban lagaya toh ye dono phone par hi shuru ho jaaten hain. Kitni aur kya baaten karte ho bhai? Humaare zamaane mein kaash mobile phone hote." Everone laughed. Shiv in a jiffy said bye and disconnected the call.
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Part 10 Mehndi in Small Updates
Shiv came and sat with everyone. In the haveli Anandi too joined her family. Shiv wanted to choose the mehndi design for Anandi. He started to flip a mehndi design book. Ashi said," Hey desi boy tumhe kya samajh mein aayega about mehndi. Let Anandi chose her own design. You chose your design." "D Design? No main sirf Anandiji ka naam likhwaoonga. That's it. Main office mein mehndi waale haah lekar nahi ja sakta. Even Anandiji said to put less mehndi. I want something minimal and sober. That is only Anandiji's name."
He chose two beautiful and intricate designs for Anandi for the front and back of her hands. The design was beautiful and would reach her elbows. Mehndi was chosen for her feet too. Everyone appreciated his choice. He was sure that Anandi would choose the same designs as their choices were same. He expressed his worry for her," Ma lekin itni saari mehndi lagwane mein Anandiji thak jayegi. Jab unhe bhook lagaegi tab kya hoga. Aap wahan sab ko bata dijiyega ki unhe time se khana paani sab dete rahe. Wo toh kuch nahi maangegi. Aap nahi jaanti unki aisi choti choti baton ka bahut khayaal rakhna padta hai. Main do baar unke saath Jaipur gaya tha Baar baar poochne par wo ek baar kehti ki bhook lagi hai. Pyaas lagi hai."
"Shiv tum bhi na Anandi apne mayke mein hain wahan use koi takleef nahi hai. Uski ma, taiji dsa sab hain. Hum wahan jakar unhe samjhayenge kaisa lagega? Theek hai ab chote bacche ki tarah moonh mat banao. Hum tumhaari Anandi ka khyal rakhne ke liye keh denge unhe. Ek kaam karo sone se pehle Anandi ko ek aur baar phone toh karoge hi? Tum hi samjha dena use sab kuch." Ira too made fun of her son. Every body enjoyed at Shiv's expense. Shiv called Anandi and they had their cute convo before going to bed. Next day everyone woke up very early at the C H and at the badi haveli.
It was Anandi and Shiv's mehndi. Everyone at the C H get dressed to go to the haveli. Shiv came out of his room. He sat with the men. "Ye auratein itna time lagati hain tayyar hone mein." Mahi cribbed and complained. Ira and Meenu were looking stunning. "Wow Ira tum toh apni bahu ko complex dogi. Kitni sundar lag rahi ho. Mujhe humaari mehndi ka din yaad aa gaya. Us din bhi to tumne green rand ka hi ghaghra choli pehna than na?" As Alok complmented Ira Meenu nudged her," Kya baat hai didi bhaiyya ko toh aaj bhi sab detail mein yaad hai." Ira blushed like a new bride," Aap bhi na kahin bhi shuru ho jaate hain. Papaji hain aur bacche bhi ab bade ho gaye hain. Apni umar ka toh lihaaz kijiye." She scolded Alok in a mock anger voice.
"Papa aap ne ma ki mehndi ki rasam kaise dekhi? Mujhe toh laga tha ki dulha nahi jata dulhan ke ghar rasamon ke liye." Saanchi asked. Alok cleared his throat," Arre main nahi gaya tha wo toh ma ne mujhe bataya tha. Haan mein nahi gaya tha bilkul nahi gaya tha." "Accha papa toh nani ne kya aapke bhoot ke kaan kheenche the? Aura 1oo uthak baithak karwaye the?Bhai humne to humaare pyaare daddu se yahi kahani suni hai." Shiv said confidently. "Papaji aap bhi na Army ki kahaani sunate sunate bachho ko jhooti kahani bhi sunane lage. Ira ki ma ne sirf mere kaan kheeche the. Miane kahan uthak baithak kiye the?" "Alok tu bhi na budhu ka budhu hi rahega. Humaara jawaan ab pehle wala seedha sadha nahi raha wo teri taang kheech raha hai." Daadu too made fun of Alok. "Kyun papa kaisa laga. Aap log aajkal jab mauka milta hai meri khichai karte hain. To maine bhi hone wwale sasurji ki taang khench li."
Mahi was not paying attention to what wah happening around him. He was lost in Ashi's beauty. She had worn a beautiful fish cut saree with a long sleeve blouse. She was looking stunning in her Indian avatar. Everybody complimented her and said she would be a very beautiful Indian bride. She looked at Mahi when no one was looking. A tear trickled down her cheek. She wiped it off as Mahi's eye returned on her from his ma and badi ma. He did not get her behavior. She was acting weird around him with every passing moment.
Shiv got up and began checking every thing. "C S apne jille ki progress ki tayyaari par double check karna humaari tayyari par nahi. Sab kuch theek se liya hai teri Anandiji ke liye." C M shook her head as she remembered the day Anandi was coming for lunch for the first time and he had checked the preparations. They made fun of him but he was in a serious mood. "Nahi choti ma wo main chahta hoon ki Anandi ji ke liye sab kuch properly ho koi kami na reh jaaye. Jab wo choti thi tab apni gudiya ki shaadi karwayi thi unhone tabhi se apne liye kuch sapne sanjoye the jo kabhi poore nahi hue. Ab main har wo sapne poora karna chahta hoon. Unhone mera saath apnakar mere jeevan ka sabse bada sapna poora kiya hai ab main unki har choti badi kwaahish ko poora karne mein jutna chahta hoon."
All his elders see how deep his love is for Anandi and they also know that she deserves every bit of happiness that comes her way. They bless him and promise him that they will do everything in their power to make Anandi happy and assist him in his goal. Mahi has tears in his eyes. "Bhaiyya aap kitne lucky hain na ki aapke jeevan mein aapko apne sacche pyaar ka saath mil raha hai. Kya sabko apna pyaar milta hai? Kaisa lagta hai jab humaara pyaar sweekar kiya jaata hai?" He looked at Ashi from the corner of his eyes. "Oye tu itna senti mat ho aur footage mat kha. Abhi mera chance hai saara imp mujhe milne de. Teri baari aayegi tab tujhe pointers doonga. Abhi bada guru banta firta hai par tab main aur Anandiji hi teri help karenge." Shiv did see his seriousness but did not make anything of it.
His family leaves to go to the haveli for the mehndi rasam. They instruct Shiv to eat something. After the initial shagun rasam they will come back with Sumitra and ladies to put shagun ki mehndi to him. He held back Mahi and told him to take video recordings properly. He also told them not to tease Anandi too much. She still considered him as her best friend. The Shekhar's finally leave after hearing all of Shiv's instructions.Will update next part if liked and receive msg
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