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Hey loved it yaarSmile pls continue wit d bachelors party & den shadi too.. continue soonWink

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Part 4

Anandi saw a girl crying. She went up to her and asked," Kya baat hai? Tum ro kyun rahi ho? Koi problem hjai to mujhe batao." The girl looked up she was very pretty and innocent. She says," Maine bahut badi galti kar di. Mujhe fashion designer banna tha par mere bhayya mere hero hain. Main unke jaise bannna chahti thi is liye Arts faculty join kar li bina soche samjhe. Main bhi stupid hoon kuch bhi karne ya kehne se pehle sichti nahi. Jab samjh aaya ki ye mere bas ki baat nahi to sabklo bataya par papa ne kaha mushkil se mat bhaago. Ye corse poora karna padega phir deigning ki traing lena. Ab ye sociology mere liye ohaansi ka fanda hai. Main kya karun? Bhai se bhi fight ki to unko phone karke difficulty solve nahi kar sakti."

Anandi says," Main help kar doon.?" The girls scans her from top to bottom sys," Aap. Lekin aap toh'" She stops. Anandi said," Chalo good work is baar bolne se pehle socha. Main aise dress mein hoon toh kahi tumhe ye toh nahi lagta ki main kisi gaon ki gawaran hoon? Hmm mera pehla lesson tumhare liye jo mujhe bahut pehle kisine sikhaya tha, Kisi ko uske kapdo se nahi balki use uski andar ki kabiliyat se pehchante hain." Anandi saw the girl and understood "sab sar ke upar se chala gaya" She continued, "Never judje a book by its cover. Ab samjhi" The girl was in awe of Anandi.

Anandi sat near the girl on the steps. She asked and solved the girls difficulties. The girl was super impressed by her. She receives a call from her brother. She is miffed ans says, " Mujhe nahi m,ilna hai aapki gaon waali se." Anandi looks at her and asks," Kya hua aise kyun baat ki aise koi acchea ghar ki ladki kisi se bhi baat nahi karti." The girl opens up to her and says main apni baabhi se nahi milna chahti who gaon mein rehti hai. Bhai ne pasand ki aur sab maan gaye. Koi inquiry nahi koi interview nahi. Bhai kitne educated and handsome hain. Won a jaane kaise hogi." She was angry all this time.

Anandi still could not out two and two together. The girl was Saachi. Both of them bonded with their relation unknown to them. Anandi says," Dekhao abhi samjhaya na ki never judge a book by its cover aur tum toh apni bhaabhi se mili bhi nahi. Milo toh sahi. Mujhe dekha tab tumne mere bare mein bhi yahi socha na ki main gaon ki gawaar hoon. (The girl kooked down in shame.) Nahi main tumhe guilty nahi feel kara rahi par ek baar apni bhai ki choice se milo. Tumhare poore parivaar ne use apnanya koi to baat hogi na usme? Us ladki par nahi to apne parivaar par bahrosa karo."

The girl looked up and said," Aapki shaadi ho gayi hai?" "Nahi" Aandi replied. The girl had twinkle in her eyes. She said," Aap mere bhai se milo. Wo bahut handsome hai, intelligent hai, acchi post par hai, accha earn karte hain'" The girls starts givining Anandi her bhai's biodata. Anandi gulps. She is now scared. She tries to tell the girl about her being engaged to be married. The girl tells her," Mere bhai aaye hain aap yahi rehna main unko lekar aati hoon." and rushes off. Anandi is now frantically searching for Shiv. She finds him and hugs him. Shiv is happy but is worried when he sees her scared and asks, "Kya hua Anandijee aap itna darr kyun rahi hain?" Anandi is still clinging to him and says," Chaliye yahan se mujhe darr lag raha ahi main ek pagal ladki se mili. Maine uski sociology ki problem solve kit oh mujhse impress hoke boli mer bhabhi ban jao. Who apne bhai ko bulane gayi hai. Chaliye na chalet hain."

Shiv is now angry and possessively says," Main bhi dekhta hoon kaun hai jko mere saamne aapko propose karta hai uski haddi pasli ek kar doonga." They notice the youngsters staring at them and break the hug. Anandi sees the girl approaching and points Shiv in her direction. Shiv is shocked to see that it is Saachi. When she approaches she sees Shiv and Anandi stand close. She is very happy. She smiles and says," Aap hi meri bhabhi baniyega. Aapki aur bahi ki Jodi bahut beautiful lagti hai." Shiv says," Are u sure. Tum chahti ho ki ye tumhaari bhabhi bane? Theek hai to phir yahi tumhaari bahbhi banegi." Anandi and Saachi are both shocked to hear Shiv. Anandi wonders,"S hiv aise kaise keh sakte hai?" Saachi wonders," bhai to us gaon wali Anandi se shaadi karna chahte hain maan kaise gaye?"

Shiv pulled one on both of them. He looked at Anandi and Saachi. He said," Anandijee aapko iske bhai se hi shaadi karni chahiye bahut pyaar karta hai aapse mujhse zyaada kaun jaa n sakta hai ki who aapse kiyna pyar karta ahi." Anandi is mow majorly pissed with Shiv. Shiv then looks at Saachi and says," paaka na tum ise hi apni badi bhabhi banana chahto ho Apne Shiv bhayya ki patni Baad mein palat to nahi jaaogi? Theek hai to yahi banegi tumhaari bhabhi. (Anandi got it that this is his sister Saachi) Theek hai milo apni pasand ki apni bhaabhi se. Apni Anandi bhabhi se. Dekhop tumne hi ise pasand kiya hai apni bhabhi banana ke liye ab palat na mat." Saachi looks down in shame that without knowing Anandi she rejected her but liked her as a stranger in an instant. Anandi and Shiv smiled and hugged her.

Saachi introduced Anandi proudly to all her friends as her Bhabhi. Shiv wanted to leave now as MISSION IMPOSSIBLE was over. Now he wanted to spend time alone with Anandi. But Anandi and her new friend did not wanna part with each other. Shiv was annoyed. He regretted getting Anandi there first. He saw Anandi and Saachi gel well so he said fine. Collector would think of another plan for their day out but would surely do it before getting married. The trio went out for some shopping as Saachi like the color co ordination and accessories that Anandi adorned. They ran into Mahi and Ashi. They were caught sipping juice from the same glass. Anandi wondered," Ek hi din mein nanand aur devraani?! dono se milna ho gaya."

The three girls went on a shopping spree with two coolies at their service. Anandi filled in Saachi with her past so that she would not feel betrayed again. Saachi was really impressed with Anandi looked at Shiv and said," Dekha bhaaya maine apne liye kitni acchi bhabhi dhoondhi hai." Th three of them laugh while MAASH are surprised. They join too on hearing the entire incident. Nahi gave high five to Saachi and said," Maine toh bhai to express train ko bullet train banaya tune to use Jet plane bana diya. Bhabhi seedha bhai ki bahon mein. WOW." AnSh blushed. Anadi said," kisi ko mat batana maine jo kiya." They all laugh at her innocence. They receive a call from the Sr. Shekhars asking them to join for lunch.

All of them reach the restaurant. Daddu and Alok pity Shiv and Mahi as they looked like hi fi coolies. Anandi, Ashi, Mahi and Shiv join the elders for lunch. Saachi on purpose decides to show up later. Everybody sit down then she enters and runs to Anandi and hugs her. She acts all surprised to see her with her family. Meenu asks Saachi," Saachi tum Anandi ko kaise jaanti ho?" Saachi says," CM ye meri friend hai hum net par mile the. Maine jab ise jaana top socha ki ise meri bhabhi banaoongi par aap logo ne to mera dil hi tod diya." She pouts. Everbody tell her that she is her bhabhi. Her wish came true.

She pulled everybody's leg and then revealed the incident how she met her and liked her. Anandi then signs her to do something. Saachi apologizes to her elders for her rude behavior. They all enjoy lunch. Some more shopping the men gave a sorry for themselves look. In the evening they went to the hostel and packed Saachi's stuff. She wanted to go with Shiv and Anandiu in his jeep But Shiv did not want this. He filled the back of his jeep with her luggage and shopping bags. He took his seat and Anandi was sitting next ot him. When Saachi approached them, Shiv said, "housefull." She pouts and sits with her family in the car. MAASH go on the bike. " Mahi apni bike ki laaj rakhna, ride pe ja raha hai highway par traffic hoga, break sambahlkar lagana." Shiv said mischievously.

Anandi was looking at him." Kuch nahi usiki advice use de raha hoon." Anandi realized the mandir thing and bike ride was Mahi's plan. She looked at Shiv and blushed. They enjoyed their drive back to Jaitsar. It was a magical drive. Shiv dropped her at the haveli. He informs everyone that his sister is here. Anandi was really happy spending time with them. The Singh's invite the Shekhar's for breakfast. Shiv agrees. Anandi goes to leave Shiv till the door. He says," Aap par ek din udhaar raha. Main jald hi koi plan banata hoon." Anandi says," Aaj to din bitaya na saath mein phir se?" Shiv says," Haan par hum akele nahi the. Next time sirf aur sirf hum dono. Aponi nayi saheliyon ko plan ke bare mein mat batana." Anandi agrees and says that she looks forward to it.


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Its getting sweeter sweeter and sweeter dearTongue cant help but to love this OS. Do continue...

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Hey guys batao na should I include Mahi Ashi track 

I am writing a simple SS about Ansh

Cannot make it just steamy and all about night time

Wanna keep it realistic AnSh are not so steamy like other portray them 

They are cute so am portraying them so and using simple language

I want to include pieces about other people too

I don't receive 'like' or msg like others so am not confident to continue

Is my stuff good please need some boost

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Part 5

The wedding day nears. Anandi and Shiv are excited for their impending nuptials. The wedding ceremonies are going to begin soon. Anandi and Shiv continue their work and this amuses all as they think they are so professional with one another. Some of the shopping is done from Jaitsar. Anandi wanted Shiv to choose her wedding outfit. Dsa had strict instructions that Anandi and Shiv can't meet as per riwaaz. She had gone to Jaipur with her in-laws leaving her Collector Sahib alone in Jaitsar. He comes to the haveli Gehan sees his bechaari halat and can't help herself but lkaugh at him. " Kuch dino ki hi toh baat hai kawarsa, Phir to Anandi humesha ke liye aap ke saath hi rahegi." "Taiji aapki laadli beti ko apne hone wale beend ki koi fikar hi n ahi hai. Mujhe ab tak call bhi nahi kiya. Office se maine chutti le rakhi hai aur akele mein ghar kaatne ko daud raha hai." Shiv pouted.

Dsa comes and rubs his hair with love. "Mahri chori ko thaari bahut fikar hai chora jaanti thi ghar par akelo hovego tu isliye dekh tere pasand ka khana subah bana ke gayi hai. Chal jaldi se khano kha le. Phir maahri madad kar de Anandi ke liye maahri taraf se dene jaane wale kapdo aur gehno ko pasand karne mein. Anandi ke liye kai saadi magvaayi hai. Janu hoon main kaise kho gayo tho tu aone janam din par use saadi mein dekh ke. Arre sharmave kai choriyaan sharmaave hai chore nahi."

" Arre masa aap nahi jaanti aaj kal ke chore choriyon ki tarah sharmaave aur haan apni beenddi ya girlfeirnd ke liye wrat bhi rakhe hain." Basant said. Shiv was blushing profusely. Shyaam and Abhishekh come to Shiv's aid. They were ek naav mein sawaar types. All three were kuwarsaa of Dsa. "Tausa aap Shiv ko akela mat samajhiye hum bhi hain uske saath." Abhishekh introdueced himself to Shiv." Main Abhishekh, Dr.Abhishekh Shyam bhaiji ki choti behen Asha ka pati" He emphasized on Dr. as he remembered Anandi asking him to do so whenever he met Shiv. She wanted to c the look on his face but missed it.

Anandi called Shiv. She sent him pics of all the wedding outfits she liked and asked him to choose. He chose it for her as she had to 'sajna for him and only him'. She was very happy with his choice as it was the one she wanted as well. She was amazed at how they had common choices. She had barely known him for 8-9 months and she was now getting married to him. She had begun to fall for him and wanted to say "I Love You" to him. She decided to wait for the wedding night. She would call his name and say "I L U" too. Everone was there for her wedding but she missed her ,other the most. Ira and Meenu asked Shiv to do something about this.

Shiv had secretly contacted Sumitra and asked her about her arrival. " Shiv beta main tumhaari haldi se pehle pahunch jaaoongi. Jaipur se seedhe ghar nikloongi tab tumhe bata doongi." "Masa main aapko lene aa jaaoonga. Shyam bhaji aur Abhishekh bhi aayenge. Hum teeno ka Jaitsar main mann nahi lag raha. Main Dadiji ki rasam ki wajah se aapki laado ko nahi mil pa raha. Sugna jiji aur Asha jine bhaiji par aur Abhiskekh par ban lagaya hai. Shaadi ki tayyarri mein itni busy hain ki apne pati ko shakal bhi nahi dikhati. Kitna mushkil hai koi nahi samajhta. Itna paas hokar itna door.." He said sorry. "Nahi Shiv isse pata chalta hai ki meri do betiyaan kitni khush hai apne apne beend ke saath aur meri teesri beti kitni khush rahegi aopne Collector Sahib ke saath. Ab tak wahi atki hai na? Apna naam kyun nahi leavte us se." "Nahi masa mujhe accha lagta hai Ek dum alag ghar par sab Shiv kehte hain par woe k hi hai jo C S kehti hai."

Shiv and Sumitra enjoy the saas Damaad convo like always. He keps her updated with all the facts. He told her about the Jagat fiasco too. She had scolded him for trying to give up oin her daughter and her love. She had made him understand that Anandi does not share her feelings but she has them and expresesses in her own way and time. She made him feel like a three year old. She laughed as she saw his face when they SKYPED.

Anandi came back with bags filled with shopping stuff. Shiv turned away when he heard her anklets chun chun sound. The Shekhar's came with her. They saw Shiv there and Anandi quickly put a ghunghat on her face. Dadiji asked Shiv to leave. He pouted and all made fun of him. "Dadiji aap sabke saamne kaise milenge? Kya baat karenge? Mujhe bhi saari cheezen dekhni hai. Please." "Theek hai waise bhi chori thak gayi hogi jaake aaram kar kegi. Tu ruk ja sabke saath hi jaana." Shiv turned and saw Anandi had taken a ghunghat." WOW" her blurted. She ran upto her room as she did not want Dsa to scold him. Saachi and Mahi looked at each other, "Kya Pyaar hai." Anandi stood near her door and caught glimpses of Shiv like he did on the day she went to select jewelry. She remembered his dialogue from the diwaali day. "Kaise guzrenge ye 7000 saal." 7 days remained for the wedding.

Shiv, Shyam and Abhishekh go to Jaipur without letting anyone know. "Humaari haldi waale din aako bahut bada tohfa dene waala hoon bas intezaar kijiye." Shiv told Anandi. Sumitra came a day before haldi and Shiv asked her to stay at C H." Nahi Shiv beta main yahan kaise meri laado ka sasuraal hai." Sumitra hesitated. "Behenji Shiv aur aap Anandi ko surprise dena chahte hain to agar aap Jaisar main kahin aur rahengi to use pata chal jaayega. Aap Shiv ko beta kehti ahi to mere aur Meenu ki tarah aap bhi uski ma hain aur ma ko bte ke ghar mein rehene main kaisi jhijhak." Ira said. Sumitra was happy to see her laado not only get a great life partner but and awesome family too. Sumitra agrees to stay there. They all stay up till late night and she fills them in with many things about Anandi. Shiv wants to see Anandi's childhood pics. "Main wo khatra nahi le sakti meri teacherjee jaise laado meri class laga degi." The Shekhar's can't imagine Anandi like a strict teacher but Shiv nodded a yes. Do chotiwaaliAnandi his smile reaches his eyes when he tries to imagine Anandi as a child.


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Part 6

On the haldi day

Haldi for Shiv comes from Badi Haveli. Ananidi's brother(Shyaam) , her jijusa(Abhishekh) and her mama(Sumitra bro) get the haldi along with their respective wives. Shiv's haldo ceremony is to begin but he is no show. He doesn't want to come out in dhoti and vest in front of all the ladies. "Main nahi ja sakta. Mujhe sharam aa rahi hai. Aap samajhti kyun nahi. Ananadiji aap sabko phone karke samjhaiye na ki main muh par lagwa loonga." Shiv complained to her."Dekhiye chote bacche ki tarah mat kijiye. Aapki haldi ki rasam nahi hogi to mujhe bhi haldi nahi lagegi. Aake sharer se utri haldi hi mujhe lag sakti hai. Uske bbad hi baaki ki rasam ho sakti hai aur Shaadi bhi."

"Aap phone rakhiye na Ananid ji kitni baaten karti hain aap. Pata nahi aaj meri haldi hai sab intezaar kar rahe hain. Aapki wajah se late ho raha hoon." "Haw aap saara ilzaam mujhpar daal rahe hain. Koi sunega to kya sochega. Jaldi Jaldi haldi bhijwaiye main intezaar kar rahi hoon. Haan aur mera surprise wo bhi bhejiye." "Haan mera surprise hi to haldi lekar aayega. Bye." Shiv's haldi rasam is done. Sumitra and All ppl from Singh hse present there take haldi and leave for home.

Sumitra reaches home with Shyaam and party. Shiv ki ab sasuraal mein No Entry hai. Everyone is surprised to see Sumitra. Dsa and Gehna feel releieved. Basant and Bhairon are very happy to see her. Bhairon had tears in his eyes. He almost ran to hug her. Everyone laugh at him but they also understand the pain they had gone through. Anandi is brought down for her haldi rasam. The ladies begin to sing traditional songs and dance. Dsa does 'ghumar'. She takes balaayen of Anandi. One by one all the ladies put haldi to her. Then Sumitra steps forward and puts haldi to Anandi. She thinks she is dreaming. Then she feels Sumitra and realizes that she was actually there. She hugs her mother and is very happy. Her haldi rasam is done.

Anandi has her bath and is brought down for more song and dance. Everyone is very happy. Suddenly a man comes running and gives the shcking news of Shiv being areested and taken to the police station. Basant, Bhairon, Shyamm decide to go to the police staion. Anandi too wants to go But Dsa stops her as er riwaaz she can't meet Shiv. " Dsa unhe meri zarrorat [pad sakti hai hum saath kaam karte hain Pehle hum Sarpacnh aur collector hain baad mein beend beenddi. She is allowed after much persuasion from all.

She reaches the police station. "Aap yahan kyun aayi hain? Aaap ghar jaiye yahan main sab dekh loonga." Shiv scold her with his back turned to her. She has tears in her eyes. She puts her ghunghat and goes to him. "Aap super man hain na par main bhi Lois Lane hoon." Mahi and Saachi almost laugh. She is referring to Superman right now. God they can be so kiddish yet mature. She marched up to the police officer and asked him the details of the arrest. She took the report and read it. It was a railway scam blame on him. She saw the documents of the twi copies sent one hrad and one soft copy print. She recognized the figures of the hard copy which she had seen with Shiv and B S. The soft copies did not match.

She called B S and questioned him. "Madam wo.." B S Roared Shiv. B S roared Anandi louder. B S looked at the Singh's and hesitated. She assured him. He said that he doubted Jagat as he was the only one who had access to the PC and a motive to hurt Shiv. She told him to get the software experts to work. "Sir ne shuru karwa diya hai par inhi par ilzaam hai isliye.." " Main sarpanch hoon abhi C M se baat karti hoon." She called him and asked for help. He was ever ready to help AnSh as they worked hard and fast.

They investigation sped up. The Shekhar's saw the strength Anandi had and her trust in him. The outcome was as AnSh suspected the main culprit was Jagat. Shiv came clean with his amnesia drama too. He also said how he tried to make him fell inadequate as he did not know Anandi well etc. Anandi wa in full mood to again pick up things and thow at him. She lodged two complaints as a fiance and as a sarpanch against Jagat. She wanted him arrested and dragged to Jaitsar in one days time. The cops had to act fast as he tried to frame the Collector. Shiv was proved innocent and was free to go and face music from Anandi foir not telling him about Jagat's misdeeds.

"Who kya kaha tha aapne Mujhe baad mein dekh lenge. Nahi collector Sahib aapko to main dekhoongi aur dikhaoongi." He heard the anger on her voice but more tha that she was hurt. She treid to leave but he held her hand and pulled her in a tight hug. She beat his chest with her tiny fists. "Agar aapko kuch ho jata to main kya karti." Arre mujhe kaise kuch ho sakta hai? Mere paas to SARPANCH, SUPERWOMAN, LOIS LANE, JHANSI KI RAANI all in one hai. Meri Anandijee. Hai na?" He smiled. She could see his smile from her ghunghat. He put his hand under her ghunghat and wiped her tears. A smile appeared on her face.

The Shekhar's and Sigh's came near them. Daddu " Chalo chalo Kalyani devi muddat khatam ho gayi. Ab phir se ban lag gaya hai." They all come to the haveli and fill in all with the details. "Masa ab bas ab main us ladke ko apni zindagi se bedakhal kar doonga. Aapko uske saath rishta rakhna hia to bhool jaiye ki main aapka beta hoon. Maine uise sahi pehchaana par aap ne mujhe har baar majboor kar diya. Dekhiye kaise usne humaare wishwaas ko thaga hai." Bahiron was cleary angry with Kalyani.

"Anandi ke baapu abhi wakil ko bula aur saari karya waahi poori kijiye. Main khabhi us kadkle ka ssay bhi humaare parivaar par nahi chahti. Ab meri laado ki khushiyon ke aade mein use kabhi na aane doongi. Masa agar main yahan hoti to main aapke khilaaf jaakar bhi use is haveli mein ghusne na deti. Ye haveli aapke liye ghar hai par ye mera mandir hai aur us jaise shaitaan ko yahan kabhi na aane doongi main." Sumitra for the first time spoke against Masa.

The leagal formalities were done against Jagat/Jagaya/Jagdish. He was no more a Singh. He could not use their name. Anandi was leagally adopted by Bhairon with Khajaan's consent. She was noe in every term Kumaari. Anandi Bhairon Singh. The Shekhar's left with happy hearts. The Singh's were finally at peace and rid of the black sheep of the family.

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Part 7

Anandi and Shiv's wedding ceremonies will now go on smoothly as all tensions are gone. HAPPY DAYS ARE HERE AGAIN.

Anandi and Shiv's wedding preperations are in full swing. The haldi ceremony was disrupted but no more. Bahiron and Sumitra made it very clear to everyone, "Humaari laado ki shadi ki rasamon mein ab kisi ki wajah se koi khalal nahi padegi. Sirf uski khushi ke liye prathna hogi naki kisi gair ke liye koi aassoon. They looked speacially at Dsa. She too nodded in assurance. The next few days were going to be filled with happiness.

Anandi was too tired from the haldi ceremony and the ordeal they all went through because of Jagat. She was sent to her room. The remaining elders sat in the hall for planning of the mehndi ceremony. The Shekhar's reached home. "Shiv aaj Anandi ka humne alag hi roop dekha. Wo itna gussa bhi ho sakti hai? Shiv smiled," Daddu main unhe teekhi mirchi yunhi nahi kehta. Jab hum pehle mile the humme bahut takraar hoti thi."

Shiv and Anandi are both in their respective rooms thinking about their impending marriage. The base of their relatin was the deep mutual trust they had. Shiv's calls Anandi.


"Ji collector sahib."

"Thank you aapne mujhpar trust kiya."

"Aap meri jagah hote toh aap bhi yahi karte na?"

"Wasie kaisa laga mera surprise?"

"Surprise? Kaisa surprise? Jail yatra ka?"

"Nahi aapko pata nahi chala?"


"Main kal Shyaam Bhaiji aur Abhishekh ke saath Jaipiur gaya tha aapka surprise lane."

"Main samjhi nahi mujhe toh koi surprise nahi mila."

"Arre baba aap kitni nasamajh hain? Haan waise na samajh hai n aap. Meri feelsings ko humesha EHSAAN samjha."

"Sorry maine aapko kai baar galat samjha aur kabhi theek se sorry bhi nahi bola.Kaan pakadkar sorry bol rahi hoon."

"Anandiji Mera ek kaam karengi? Please sorry kehte hue apna ek photo mujhe bhejiye na."

"Kyun? Sabko dikhane ki sarpanch ne collector ko sorry bola?"

"Nahi aap phir se mujh.." He understood she was pulling his leg.

"Wo jab aap mujhe ddatne ke baad apni galti samajhkar sorry bolti hain tab aap bahut cute lagti hain. Kisi billi ke chote se bacche ki tarah Bahut bahut cute."

She clicks her pic and sends it to him. He kisses that pic. This will do till she is ready he thought.

"Masa hi mera surprise hai Anandiji. Hum teeno kal unhe lene Jairpur gaye the. Who raat ko yahin hum sab ke saath ruki thi. Aapke bare mein kai baaten batai. Ek aur request hai mujhe aapki ek aur photo chahiye Wo masa ne bataya aap bachpan mein do chotiyaan leti thi. Wo photo mere liye aapki taraf se shaadi ka tohfa hoga. Aaj taka apse kuch nahi maanga please dijiye na."

"Aap mujhe Emotional blackmail kar rahe hain? Ma ke bare mein kyun nahi bataya? Mujhe ma se ek din door rakha." She pouted. He could not see but smiled as he had seen her pout before.

"Sorry wo plan sirf mera nahi Shyaam bhaiji aur abhishekh ka bhi tha. Ma bhi aapko haldi ke din par ye khushi dena chahti thi."

"Theek hai maine aapko maaf kiya."

"Bhai wo haldi to aapki ho gayi, kal mehndi hogi, phir sangeet, phir shaadi. Lekin in sab ke beech shaadi ke pehle ki ek bahut important rasam to aap bhool hi gaye."

Shiv gets distracted by Mahi's sudden entry. He tries to hide the fact from him that he is speaking with Anandi. He tries to get rid of him but no way he is not gonna go. He looked very confused. "Kaunsi rasam? Saaro rasmein to tumne gina di. Baki agar kuch hai to mujhe nahi pata. Ma ya C M se pooch lo."

Anandi is about to disconnect the call as she did not want to hear the pvt. convo of two brothers. She would later talk with Shiv or SMS him. But she did not when she heard the convo ahead. "Arre bahi aap bhi na Ma aur badi ma ko batane waali rasam nahi hai ye. Daddau theek hai par bade papa ko nahi pata chalna chahiye.Maine sab setting kar di hai."

"Mahi kya bak bak kar raha hai jaana mujhe Anandi ji se baat karni hai." Shiv got annoyed."Bhai aap bhi na humesha ke liye bhabhi ki baahon mein kaid hone hi wale hain Apni aazaadi ki akhri raat to enjoy kar lijiye. BACHELOR'S PARTY ka plan banate hain."

Shiv gulped,"Bilkul nahi koi BACHELOR'S NIGHT nahi hogi. Aur haan main jis kaid mein jakda jaane waala hoon wo kaid nahi umar kaid mujhe manzoor hai kyunki mera jailor bahut pyaara hai."

"Bhai bhabhi ko pata nahi chalega. Main sab plan banta hoon. Shyam bahiyya, Abhishekh, aapke aur mere saare friends honge. Aur haan aapke fav doc Lal Singh bhi honge."  He leaves.

"Anandiji?" Shiv softly asks like a small kid asking permission from teacher to enter the class.


"Wo main nahi wo stupid Mahi. Main nahi jaaoonga I promise."

"Nahi aapko jaana hoga. KHUD ENJOY KARNE KE LIYE NAHI. Par Sugna jiji, Asha, aur Meeta(L S wife) ke liye jasoos banker. Kyunki main to un sab ko bachelors night ke bare mein bata doongi. Mujhe aappar poora bharosa hai. Par wo log un par itna bharosa karti hain par bahut jalkukdi bhi hain."

"Accha aap jal kukdi nahi hain? Toh us din jab maine mazaak mein kaha tha ki mujhe Saachi ke dikhaye kuch ladki ke pics pasand aaye. To tab Aapka munh gubbaare ki tarah phool gaya tha. Bahut cute lag rahi thi aap bilkul kisi chote bacchi ki tarah."

"Accha chaliye good night Dsa ne mujhe jaagte dekha ko daant padegi."

"Good night. Sweet dreams."

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Part 8

Shiv goes to bed dreaming of Anandi. Anandi dreamt of her Suryabadal dream. This time she got on the horse with him and he rode off into sunset with her. Sumitra and Gehna came up to check on her. She had to go to bed early as per Dsa's instructions. She was sleeping with a sweet smile on her face. They had never seen such a sweet smile on her face. They put a kajal teeka behind her ear. They prayed to kanhaji pic in her room to akways keep her happy with Shiv and her saasrawaala.

They see Anandi's smile reach her eyes and she takes a cushion and hugs it tightly. She was subconsciously hugging Shiv. "Na jaane kab ye ladki samjhegi ki use Shiv se pyaar ho gaya hai. Ab tak use apna sabse accha dost hi maanti hai." Sumitra said with a little worry as she was getting married in a few days and she was not ready for the husband wife relation with Shiv. "Jiji aap kyun chinta kar rahi hain sab theek hoga. Shiv samajhdaar hai. Wo is par koi dabaav nahi dalega aap nishchint rahiye. Use dheere dheere ehsaas ho raha hia ki Shiv ke liye uske mann mein dosti se zyaada kuch hai. Shiv ke saath rehne lagegi to uska ehsaas aur mazboot hoga. Wo saamne se hi Shiv se pyaar ka izhaar karegi aur apne kadam bhi aage badhayegi. Hum samjhayenge to khud se nahi balki humaari baat maan kar aage badhegi jo ki uske aur Shiv ke rishtey ka apmaan hoga. Jiji humne dekha hai unka rishta bahut mazboot aur gehra hai. Mann ka sambandh hai jo waqt aane par tann ka bhi ban jayega. Shiv uska pehla pehla pyaar hai use khud samjhne dete hain." They kiss her forehead and leave.

Next morning Anandi gets up with a strange feeling. She looks at the wind chime and moves her feet to hear the chun chun sound. She looks at the photo frame Shiv gave her and a huge smile appears on her face. She freshens up and picks up an ornate box. She lies on down on her bed on her stomach. She opens the box and looks at the two bunches of dried roses. She removes his notes which accompanied the bunches. She read them and re reads them. A smile appears on her face. The wind chime plays as the wind sways through it. She looked at it and all the things which were from Shiv to her. She thought,"Collector sahib kitne khush naseeb hain mujhe har pal ghire rakha hai aur main unhe dekh bhi nahi pati. Unki ye cheezen untak meri har khabar pahunchaati hai."

Her cell phone rings. "Hello Collector sahib. Aap kaise hain? Aapko theek se need aayi? Aapne nashta kiya? Aap kya kar rahe hain? Kal mehndi ki rasam hai ghar par mehndi peesi ja rahi hogi na? Aap Mahi devarjee se kahiyega ki wo yahan aaye aur saari recording kare phir aap kuch miss nahi karenege. Arre aapko bhi to ma aakar mehndi ka shagun lageyegi na? Aap apne haaton mein mera naam likhwayenge? Lekin thodi kam mehndi lagwaiyega. Wo shaadi ke turant baad Railway Ministry se log aayenge project ke bare emin meeting ke liye. Kya sochenge wo? Nahi kam mehndi hi lagwayiega." She did not see the caller ID. Toofan mail non stop chalti rahi jab tak baat poori nahi hui.

She heard a loud burst of laughter from the other side. Ashima had called her and she was on speaker phone. Shiv was getting a continous engage tone on her phone. He came out hearing the laughter and was angry. He growled," Main Anandiji se baat kar nahi pa raha na jaane kisse lambi chaudi baten kar rahi hai? Ma aapne unhe phone lagaya tha kya? Aap bhi na pehla call mera lagna chahiye par nahi mujhe ek hi jawab milta hai 'aap kataar mein hain kripya line par rahiye.' Aap log has kyun rahe hain?"

"Arre Rajdhaani express Ashi ne teri toofan mail ko phone kiya par wo tera call hai samjhkar kabse bole ja rahi hai. Tu usse baat karna chahta hai aur wo tujhse. Ye le baat kar warna din bhar munh chadha kar ghumega ki C S ko Anandiji se baat nahi karne mili." Daddu made fun of him and all laughed out loud. They all always made fun of the "C S and Anandiji" sambodhan of each other. Shiv disconnects Ashi's ine and goes in to talk from his phone. "OOO pvt baaten between C S and his Anandiji." Saachi , AShi and Mahi hoot.

Shiv and Anandi talk for quite sone time on the phone. They lock the door and do so. Theyu have a long sweet talk. Then came the time to disconnect the call. Outside Shiv's door MAASH and Saachi have glued their ears to his door. Shiv and Anandi are hainvg their cute convo

Shiv "Pehle aap."

Anandi " Nahi pehle aap."

 Shiv "Nahi aap bolana."

Anandi "Nahi main kaise kar sakti hoon aap kijiye"

Shiv "Dekhiye main aapse bada hoon. Aapke sanskaar yahi kehte hain na ki badon ki baat manni chiye. To main keh raha hoon ki pehle aap karengi. Bas final."

Aanndi "Aap mujhpar bade hone ki dhauns jama rahe hain? Main Daddu se complaint karoongi."

Shiv "Main bhi dadiji se complaint karoonga."

Shiv hears a loud roar of laughter outside his room. As he opens the door the three run and hide among the elders of the house. He and Anandi disconnect the call at the same time. Anandi hears a knock on her door, " Kya kar rahi thi Anandi? Hmmm ye kya hai?" Sugna asked as she picked up one of Shiv's love notes. "Kuch nahi jiji kuch nahi hai." "Arre kuch kaise nahi? Tere C S ki arzi hai. Kabhi unki arzi par gaur kiya hai tune." She teases Anandi. "Arre jiji bechaare Shiv jijusa ke love letter/prem patra ko arzi ka naam kyun de rahi hain aap." Aasha too joins in teasing her. Anandi can't stop from profusely blushing. "Jiji, Asha aisi koi baat nbahi hum bas best friends hain." "Accha main bhi to teri best friend hoon mera nam sunkar kitni baa raise sharmayi hai? Bolna bol." Asha tickles her. Anandi runs down and hides her face in Sumitra's lap. She complaints,"Ma dekhiye na jiji aur Asha kaisi baaten kar rahi hain." Sumitra gives them a thumbs up but to make Anandi hear scolds the girls.

Edited by chahat11 - 18 November 2012 at 11:07am

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