OS- Pehle Raat. - Page 3 | Pyar Ka Dard Hai Meetha Meetha Pyara Pyara

Kashish Malhotra

@xGunjanx

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: sharna2k6

HAHAHA, AWW You are too cute! Thanks for being so biased towards your behna 😆😉 But no seriously, so glad you liked it 😃😳 Ehh.. sometimes uncensored things are more fun, but we'll leave that to the PMs between us 😆 I was actually wanting to write something on their suhag raat haha, since I heard the PaYa wedding, and then I was in the shower last night and I was in a melancholy mood for some reason, and then this just came to me.. I was like I gottta write it haha and wrote it really qquickly, and added the last bit for youu 😳🤗 I knew you'd enjoy it 😉

Ofcourse, I would be biased towards you!😉That's so true, our PMs are more than enough to keep our dirty minds running😳😆No but your not the only sole reason for me liking your OS so much, I really did LOVE it🤗

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Sharna aka Salena

@xMidnightStarx

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Wow!

Sharna, amazing OS!

Ahh, lovely emotions expressed :')

You should defiantly do some PaYa fan fiction, if you get the chance!

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404393

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

very nice. loved it 👏

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Tacker_Holic

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

This was really not rubbish! 😡 👏👏 It was superb,gripping and fantastic! 😳 I loved how you portrayed Pankhuri's confused feelings and the way Adi took off all her jewellery! 😉 Oye Hoye! Pankhu wearing Adi's clothes! 😉 Where did you get this from? 😉 😆 No on a serious note I thought it was superb! 👏 ⭐️ You really are talented make sure you write more when you are free! 😃 Good Luck with exams! 😃 ⭐️

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Sharna

@sharna2k6

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: sajanFan
very nice. loved it 👏

Thank you! 😳😳

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Sharna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: xMidnightStarx
Wow!
Sharna, amazing OS!
Ahh, lovely emotions expressed :')
You should defiantly do some PaYa fan fiction, if you get the chance!

Aww thank you Sharna 😉😃
I dunno about FF's.. I'm not that creative haha. I'm not really a writer, but PaYa's been inspiring me to write some OS's on them 😳

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Sharna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Sonia17
This was really not rubbish! 😡 👏👏 It was superb,gripping and fantastic! 😳 I loved how you portrayed Pankhuri's confused feelings and the way Adi took off all her jewellery! 😉 Oye Hoye! Pankhu wearing Adi's clothes! 😉 Where did you get this from? 😉 😆 No on a serious note I thought it was superb! 👏 ⭐️ You really are talented make sure you write more when you are free! 😃 Good Luck with exams! 😃 ⭐️

I got it from personal experience of course! 😆😉 Only joking.. I got it from the besharam mind of mine 😆😆 Thank you so much for liking it! I'm glad you thought it was so good, it means a lot coming from you, one of the best writers here! I will try to keep writing if I get more sudden inspirations 😳😃 Thank you, and good luck with your studies as awell! 😃

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Tacker_Holic

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

All the athmas have run away! 🤣

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