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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 8:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Surya.Ravi

Thank you so much :)Smile

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 12:34pm | IP Logged
Hi Ashi first of all ma very sorry for coming late Embarrassed...lovely start ...i like the concept ..plzzz do continue soon n thxs for the pm

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 12:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Priya01

No need to be sorry..you came I am happy :) Yeah i will write soon and thanks a lot for reading it :)

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Posted: 15 November 2012 at 5:27am | IP Logged
Awesome start 

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Posted: 15 November 2012 at 10:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by monikaseth

Thank you so much :) I hope you like the whole SS

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Posted: 27 November 2012 at 2:43am | IP Logged
Here comes the Second part..First of all , I would like to thank everyone for their immense love and support...Enjoy reading :)

"I have never thought of anything like this till now.. I need some time.. I hope my *no* will not spoil our friendship"

"Yes why not'take your time .And this will certainly not spoil our friendship...I promise! "

"Bye "

"Bye take care"

Saksham's pov ,

That night I couldn't sleep' because I was thinking about her. I don't know why  was I thinking about her so much.

Jeevika's pov

Millions of questions are revolving in my mid'

I don't know what will be Saksham's reaction? Will he accept me? He loves me or not...I think I shouldn't have said this! And even if I told him that his answer won't affect our friendship...I know it certainly would!

 

Next morning...

When Jeevika woke up she got a message from Saksham saying that "I love you a lot Jeevika"...

I was so happy'I called him up...We talked for hours and hours...

Soon 2 years passed away...

On Jeevika's birthday 'Saksham calls Jeevika '

"Happy birthday sweetheart"

"Thank you...But where is my gift?"

"What do you want?"

"Will u give me anything I want? "

"Anything which is possible for me "

"Will you marry me? I know it is awkward that I m proposing you but I want the answer"

"No'I can't marry you..."

"You love me don't you?"

"Any doubt sweetheart'I love you more than my life but I can't marry you..."

 "Is'there someone else in your life? "




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Since I am a new member to this Forum, kindly bear with me. I am just 15 and I have just started writing. I would really like if you give me a chance and comment on my stories.

I would be waiting for your comments :) Please leave some!

- Aashi



Edited by ...Aashi... - 27 November 2012 at 2:46am

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Posted: 27 November 2012 at 6:56am | IP Logged
loved the update but he change his mind again thanks for the pm



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Posted: 27 November 2012 at 10:34am | IP Logged
Nice update,dear..
Don't tell me he has changed his mind..
Continue soon and thanks for the pm..

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