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Posted: 06 December 2012 at 8:55am | IP Logged
Lovely update niki...
Oh no khanak fell down...so sad...
nice to see shaan taking care of her...
he was eager to say the truth to her but she is not giving him a chance...lolLOL
update next part soon...Big smile

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awesome nikiiiBig smile

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shanak r adorable...

cant wait whn shaan will reveal d truth..

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awsome babe, cant wait for the truth to be reveled amd see khanaks reaction
know tje question is when will the truth be revealed???
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hey friends...hope all r fine...sorry for very very late...as i had lot of works...as this is ss...i am finishing this with this part...it will be long update...hope u like this update...thanks for hitting like button and thanks for telling ur views...thank u guys...

pt  16 



she felt shy...as usall at night he kissed her forehead and went to sleep in sofa...

next day also shaan does same thing before going to office kisses her cheeks and then at kisses her forehead..

next day when she woke up shaan was not there...

she felt sad...she  was now able to walk a little...at evening her heart was eagerly looking at the door...

shaan did not came..she heard that shaan has important office meating so he will come lately...

her heart felt sad...she was sitting in the bed...and looking at the door...

dadi was lying in the other side of the bed and she slept...

khanak could not sleep...she was just looking at the door...

damn why am i not able to sleep...shit why am i looking at doors...

why...why...wat do am i expecting...she closed her eyes...

shaans face appeard ...his smiling face...she opened her eyes...

i...i...she closed her eyes...she saw his smiling winking eyes...

she opened her eyes...she felt her hands r becoming cold...

i am waiting to see him..for his kiss...

i ..love sha...shantanu...s...s...i love him...i love him only...

shaan came opened the door...with his phone he was messaging...

khanak felt a shiver and her heart was happy on seeing him...

khanak eagerly looked up at him..he was busy texting ...

he was near sofa...he was going to sit..he raised his head and saw...

khanak was looking at him..she was sitting and looking at him only...

he saw her for a second r so..her face told something...he walked towards her...

cupped her face..kissed her forehead ..cheeks and then her lips...

he moved quickly away and he walked out of the room...

khanak was sitting there still...later...why he is not coming...

does he not liking it...but he said we can give a try to our marriage na...

shit now i am in dadi..he is thinking i dont...okay tomorrow i should talk to him...

she was lying down and thinking of shaan and she dont know when she slept..

next day morning...khanak woke up and now she is able to walk only little pain...

she was sitting in the hall along with khusbhoo and anjali...

they were watching tv...kids have gone along with their dadis...

shaan was coming from his room and he sat in the opposite side of sofa of khanak...

khanak felt nervous to look at him...suddenly her cell phone beeped...

on seeing it her face lost all colors...it was last week she saved event in her cell..

it was today evening she has to go and meet krish in the temple...when they were

chatting on the wedding night..they have fixed this...she forgot krish enterly..

now her love is shantanu...oh no krish wat to do...

at the exact time there was a song playing...


she raised her eyes and saw shaan..he was also looking at her...

they were looking at eachother...the song was like they r talking to others...

I didn't mean to let you down
You have to believe it
I don't know what went through my mind
But now I can see

That I waited too long
To tell you how much it matters
Just to be right here with you
But I couldn't think of anything better
I should have told you so

Baby open your heart
Won't you give me a second chance
And i'll be here forever
Open your heart
Let me show you how much I care
And I will make you understand
If you open your heart
To love me once again

I'll try to make it up to you
I want you to know
Baby I swear that I'll be true
And never let go
If I waited too long
To tell you how much it matters
Just to be right here with you
But I couldn't think of anything better
I should have told you so

Baby open your heart
Won't you give me a second chance
And i'll be here forever
Open your heart
Let me show you how much I care
And I will make you understand
If you open your heart
To love me once again

We could relive this pain and sorrow
But we better do it in time
Start over here and save tomorrow
I wanna make you mine

Open your heart with a chance
And I'll be here forever
Open your heart and I'll care
And I will make you understand
Oh baby,
If you open your heart
To love me once again

Baby open your heart
Won't you give me a second chance
And I'll be here forever
Open your heart
Let me show you how much I care
And I will make you understand
If you open your heart
To love me once again


khusbhoo : khanak how is ur leg now...

khanak : uhh...its fine now...

khanak : bhabhi...today i want to go to temple...

shaan looked up from his cell phone and looked at her with raised eyebrows...

khusbhoo : u also..i also thought to go to temple...lets all go...

khanak thought wat all..i want to speak with krish na...okay i have  to go...

then ...god will help me...

shaan was thinking wat temple..suddenly..he thought for a minute r so...

then it strucked...a smile appeared on his face...but then it faded..he became worried..

khusbhoo : wat devar jee...wat is troubling you...r u coming to temple...

shaan thought without me...no way...

shaan : i will come ..after office work...now i am going to office...

looked at khanak for a second she also looked at him...then he went out...

evening everyone r getting ready...khanak slowly walked to her room...

there she saw in the bed a cover...it was labelled to wife from hubby...

a gift parcel...she opened it ...it was a beautifull gorgeous pink saree...

her favorite color...it was very beautifull...she touched it and holded it ...

a smile appeard on her face...then it lost...

she recalled the chat...they were asking how would they know its her and him...

she told him that she will wear a blue saree...he told he will be in white shirt and blue jeans...

she asked many will be wearing white shirt na..so he told he will have a blue rose

bouqute with him...that they decided a week before...

now her heart...she closed her eyes she thought for a minute r so...

she took the saree that her hubby gifted her and she weard it...

she was looking very beautifull...they all reached the temple...

while walking she was looking all the white shirt with jeans pant with blue flowers...

they were standing and praying...

khanak closed her eyes and she prayed..god i love shantanu...i want him...

but i have hurt anothers feeling..hope he should understand my situation...

she opened her eyes she saw a white shirt with blue flowers but she could

not see his face..he was standing in the corridor of the temple...

and he was searching for someone...khanak felt afraid...
 
he was going backside...khanak saw all others who were engrossed in praying...

so she quietly moved and went back side of the temple...there ...there he was standing...

she could not see his face...on seeing his back she felt something...

do i know him..he is like ...meanwhile she went there...

khanak was standing back of him...

khanak :ummm...krish..(she turned around so that she cannot see him...)

she can feel that he has turned around...

khanak : i will talk first u hear it please...first of all sorry...

khanak : i am not the annaya u were known...everything changed...last week i was married...

everything happened quickly...i know it will really hurt you...i am extremely sorry...

u may think teing knot alone its not enough...first i too thought that...

but he..he..is my everything...i am sorry for hurting you..its better we dont see eachothers face...

i dont want to hurt you...sorry...i want my hubby alone...

shaan : i also want my wife alone... 

khanak turned around and she was shocked..it was shaan standing with blue flowers...

khanak :u...

shaan : s...i am..ur krish and now ur hubby...(winking at her)

khanak : wat...

shaan : baby..i am really sorry...i know u r ananya next day of our marriage itself..

khanak : wat...(shocked and angry is entering her)

vidhya : khanak...khanak...

khanak : uhh...coming...

she was about to turn around...

shaan : khanak...i love u...u like my selections holded her hand  with a smile...

khanak : leave my hand...

shaan : baby please i am sorry...

khanak : leave my hand...

shaan : no...i wont...(smile)

shaan : ahhh...ahhh...hey u...shaan was holding his leg...khanak

has stamped his foot...and she walked towards the shrine...

shaan came to the shrine...he saw khanak who was standing with her mom...

eyes closed...she did not speak r talk with him...she avoided him...

she was with everyone..so shaan did not talked...he was just starring at her...

they all went to home...after dinner...they were sitting in the hall...

shaan was sitting opposite side sofa of khanak and just watching her...

she was cutting the fruit...shaan was having a glass with water...

khusbhoo : dadi..do u want anything...

dadi : no beta..khanak is there na..she is going to stay with me still two more days na...

khanak dropped the plate and shaan dropped the glass...

they both looked at eachother...there was pindrop silence...

everyone r looking at them only...

khanak bend down and took the plates...shaan his glass...

khanak went back to kitchen to wash her hands...

shaan followed her to kitchen...

shaan :uhh...khanak...

khanak turned around and looked at him then turned again to wash her hands..

khanak :umm...(softly)

shaan : r...uhh... r u going to sleep in dadis room...

khanak : i ...dont know know...

shaan : baby...please..please let me explain to u...give me a chance...

khanak kept silent...

shaan : baby please ...i am going up to our room in 5 minutes...

khusbhoo : wat 5 minutes shaan...

shaan : nothing bhabhi...he went quickly went out...

khanak came out she saw shaan was sitting in hall...he looked at her while

talking in cell phone...khanak to saw her...dadi was sitting watching a tv program...

all the kids gone to room,,,,khanak slowly walked...she stopped near the steps...

shaan was looking at her...khanak slowly took her steps to the stairs...

a  smile appeard on shaans lips...khanak was about to slip...

shaan came and holded her sideways keeping his hand on her waist...

they both looked at eachother and they walked to their room...

they entered their room...shaan locked back after entering...

khanak went and sat in the chair that was in the room with her arms folded 

and looked at shaan in angry...

shaan :oops...

shaan came before her and stood before her...

shaan : baby...(he was about to touch her hand...)

khanak moved away her hand...and looked at him angry...

khanak : why u did not say to me...(looking at his eyes...)

shaan : baby i am really sorry..(he kneeled before her...holded her hands)

shaan : i was also shocked when i know that was u..i was happy...

but i was really afraid..after knowing if u did not...(he became sad...)

khanak : shhh...shantanu...holded his face...

khanak : i was little upset..but i am really happy...

shaan :sach...

khanak :ummm...(lowered her face with a smile in her face)

shaan : khanak...

they both looked at eachother very intensely...

shaan and khanak : I LOVE U...they both smiled...

shaans cell rang...he stood up and got...khanak also got up...

she felt really shy...she was about to go to her room...shaan holded her hand...

khanak looked at him in blushing...shaan switched off his phone and kept in the chair..

shaan pulled her with a tug and hugged her...she hugged him back...

shaan cupped her face and kissed her forehead...

khanak closed her eyes...her hands on his shoulder...

shaan : khanak...(kissed her closed eyes)

khanak : ummm...

shaan : sometimes u smiled to u itself na..why...

khanak  thought for a second...she remebered...a smile appeard on her face...

khanak : i wont tell u...

shaan : come on baby tell me...(kissing her cheeks...his hands r in her waist)

khanak : ummm..hmmm...uhhh...(his hands slowly moving upwards from waist)

shaan : please baby...(kissing her nose)

khanak  pushed him a little and was about to run away...but shaan holded her tight...

shaan looked at her with intese...

khanak : u guesses wat ever i thought so i thought u r in a pandit and predicting things...

shaan : wat...pandit...ummm...now i can predict some...

he whispered something in her ears...khanak blushed a lot...

shaan : he can show in action also...

with that he sealed her lips with his...they kissed eachother very passionately...

their hands started to undo their cloths of eachother...

The silence of the room was broken by a sudden clap of thunder outside.

Slowly, gray clouds in the sky spread their skirts open,wider and

wider, and soft rain began to fall. It started quietly and gently,

caressing the warm air erotically, licking at the sides of buildings,

sucking at the soft grass, kissing all the dark corners of the night.

It was a hot rain, wanton and sensuous, sliding down slowly, slowly,

until the tempo began to increase and it changed to a driving, pounding

storm, fierce and demanding, an orgiastic beat in a steady, savage

rhythm, plunging down harder and harder, moving faster and faster until

it finally exploded in a burst of thunder. Suddenly, as quickly as it

had started, it was over...


later...


khanak : shantanu...

shaan :ummm...

they both were hugging and sleeping...

khanak : i am hungry...wat is the time...

shaan saw the clock on the wall...it showed 6...

shaan : i am also hungry...i think no one will be down...we have to make

khanak : first i will go and fresh...

shaan : i too will come...(smile)

khanak : no shantanu...i am alone going...(glaring at him)

shaan : baby i have my tool kits there ...shall i bring that...

khanak :ahh...shantanu look there...

shaan turned in that direction...khanak took chance to get in to bathroom...

but shaan was too fast he grabbed her and carried her in his arms and they went 

inside the washroom...they came all dressed and they saw clock it showed 9 o clock...

khanak : why it is dark still...

shaan : last night it rained na baby it might be still rainy...

shaan holded her waist and they both came down...khanak was removing his

hand from her waiste...and glaring at him...

tanvi was sitting along with other kids and elders...

shaan : hey goodmorning kiddies...

tanvi : its goodnight chachu...

shaan and khanak looked at eachother confused...

they saw elders were smiling and they walked to dinning table...

shanak looked at the calender which was showing next day date...

khanak : oh shit...we ..we...

shaan : ha..ha...we..no problem ...

khanak : wat no problem...no..i wont come to dinning table...(she blushed...)

shaan : ummm..okay we will go upstairs and continue our work...

khanak : shantanu...

khusbhoo : khanak...

khanak : s bhabhi...(looking little embarrased)

khusbhoo was standing with a tray with foods...and she smiled at her...

shaan was ruffling his hair...

khanak : thanks bhabhi...(blushing)

khusbhoo : honeymoon tickets r arranged...atleast tomorrow morning come soon

whispered in khanaks ear..khanak blushed a lot...

khanak walked upstairs...shaan followed her back to the room...

khanak placed the tray in table and shaan came and hugged her from back...

khanak : shh...its all because of u...(blushing)

shaan : first lets eat...

they both started to eat the food ...

khanak came from washroom..saw shaan was lying in bed...

khanak came and layed beside him...shaan was about to hugg her...

khanak : shantanu...no...i want to sleep..atleast tomorrow i have to getup early

shaan : i will make help u get up early...(stroking her legs)

khanak :wat...u...because of u only...

shaan : wat..me...no ...

khanak : u only fourth ..

shaan : hey u on third time u made a move...

khanak : shhh...shantanu...

shaan : come on no one will say anything as we r newly wedded couples...

shaan hugged her tightly...

shaan : khanak...(kissed her eyes and his hands started to undo her dress)

khanak :ummm...(holding his neck and kissing his cheeks)

shaan : whispered something in his ear

khanak :chiii...no...no shantanu...

shaan : khanak...khanak...please...

khanak : no.u...uhhh...sh...ouch...

khanak:wat r u doing...

shaan:shhh...wait...umm...

khanak:uhh...no..shh...u...

they both entered their  beautifull world...




hope u guys liked this ending...thank you guys so much for liking my simple story and simple way of writing thank u so much guys...if i get anyidea i will write another one...thank u so much friends...

regards
nikita...

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